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20 1 1 an effective method to improve the composition score of the college entrance examination: effective repetition.

To repeat yourself effectively, we must deal with the relationship between "change" and "unchanging". Generally speaking, an exam composition often changes from the perspective of materials, the style of language, the focus of the topic, the details of the content, the pace and so on. What remains unchanged in an examination room composition is often the good writing style, expression skills, speaking areas and core materials of writing.

Only by making full use of its "invariance" and thinking about its "change" attentively can a college entrance examination composition be efficient in a short time and hopefully get high marks. In the face of the topic, everything is changing. If you don't know how to repeat yourself effectively, it's easy to lose sight of one thing and fail to cope with it, leading to writing failure and passing the ideal score.

Repeating yourself effectively is the opposite of repeating yourself rigidly. Flexible handling of the relationship between "change" and "invariability" produces effective repetition of oneself. Repeating yourself effectively is neither speculation nor plagiarism. It is based on students' serious and persistent writing practice, especially their serious writing and accumulation in the third year of high school. An excellent candidate should accurately judge and determine the specific contents of "change" and "unchanged" according to specific topics in a short time on the spot. This judgment is fluent and accurate, so that you can repeat yourself effectively. Some students write similar content regardless of the specific writing requirements, and it is very dangerous and rigid to repeat themselves, which must be eliminated in the writing consciousness of preparing for the exam.

20 10 "down-to-earth look at the stars" was written in Beijing, and my student Sun Xinye got high marks with Dunhuang composition.

Look at the stars in a down-to-earth way

Sun xinye

The strong wind in the desert moves the sand dunes in the cave round and round. Those who were once infatuated with Dunhuang are gone, but we can still see their attentive eyes from the mottled but gorgeous murals, the caves carved from sand and the thick piles of files. At that time, we didn't forget to look up at the starry sky with our feet, and the soul on the ground sparkled.

A group of people, who were not rich, spent all their money and dug a humble cave in Dunhuang thousands of miles away. At that time, it was in the Wei and Jin Dynasties, when politics was dark and society was in turmoil. People came here not far from Wan Li to practice hard, in order to be blessed by Buddha's light and feel at ease. The starry sky in Dunhuang is clear and bright, reflecting their unconscious desire and piety. It is clear and pure, which makes people doubt it. However, it is hard to work every day. If you want to become a Buddha, it is futile to look up at the stars. Only down-to-earth can make the pilgrimage heart close to the sky. "Ding-ding, Ding-ding" is not only the sculpture of the people under the scorching sun, but also the call for the liberation of Buddha and soul from the bottom of my heart. They believe that one cave after another will be opened in a down-to-earth manner, and their dream of looking up at the starry sky will come true one day, not asking about harvest but about cultivation.

Hundreds of years later, in the Tang Dynasty, a group of young painters learned about the Mogao Grottoes from Master. They yearned for the Mogao Grottoes. They are willing to spend their whole lives looking up at the starry sky, looking up at and approaching the serene and noble Buddha. In the cave, they painted year after year, but they couldn't see the distant sky, so they looked up next to the cave wall and drew beautiful flying and heaven in their hearts. However, they don't forget their initial pursuit of the starry sky. Their upward gaze is to quietly and sincerely pray for the ascension of the soul. They are down-to-earth and repeat monotonous and boring work, but the people in that pen are more and more beautiful, their expressions are more and more secure, and their eyes are more and more ethereal. So he knows that looking up at the starry sky is just a gesture, expressing the unswerving pursuit of lofty spirit, and what people have to do is to practice hard every day. Only in this way can we touch the stars one day.

A thousand years have passed, and the lush aquatic plants have turned into deserts, but the overflow colors in the painter's works are still there. So those of us who are bound by the secular world are taken to the clouds at first sight. The starry sky seen there is still bright. How many literati in China today buried their heads in Dunhuang for the noble soul and starry sky they saw, and continued to write the glory of their predecessors! They are looking up at the starry sky from a thousand-year-old perspective, but they are down-to-earth, earnestly and pragmatically sorting out numerous classics and restoring historical sites. In the near future, they will also see the most gorgeous and scorching starlight.

Listen, how many people are still turning over the chanting drums, chanting in their hearts, and doing down-to-earth asceticism, hiding the beauty of the starry sky in their hearts and never forgetting it. Looking up at the stars is the guide of asceticism; Down-to-earth is the support of all ideals. Between pitches, you get the noblest Zen in the world.

For Dunhuang, the clever new field is prepared first. She effectively generated the "unchanged" before the exam, and in the examination room, faced with the specific requirements of the examination paper, she solved the "changed" flexibly and tactfully, so she succeeded in one fell swoop.

20 1 1 an effective way to improve the composition score of the college entrance examination: do what you can.

Every time you write a composition, you should ask students to do their best to show their highest level to their classmates and teachers. We should try our best to analyze and grasp the theme of the article, occupy and use materials, design and arrange the structure of the article, and consider and control the writing language ... In the process of students doing their best to complete the composition, some inherent shortcomings in the composition will gradually be eliminated naturally, instead of relying solely on the teacher's "criticism" and "speech". Scrawled coping and muddling along are hotbeds of literary diseases. Writing is different from ordinary homework. "Completion" does not mean "realization". There is a big difference between writing and writing.

It is of course very important to design the topic of teachers' composition training, plan the training plan reasonably and carefully correct students' compositions. But in the face of the topic, it is more important for each student to fully mobilize his personal creation. Many important ideas, methods, principles and skills in writing are actually deeply realized in the process of students' all-out and full mobilization. In high school writing training, in order to make students "do what they can", teachers can appropriately extend the writing cycle of some composition training. Writing is a kind of ability that can be cultivated in practice. What students get and gain when they work hard at creation is often what teachers often have little effect on. Teachers can ask students to write a "postscript" after each composition. "Writing Postscript" mainly states the state of my efforts for literature, the highlights of my desire for this composition, and the scores I expect.

"Expectation" is the engine of "try your best"; One reason why many students' writing status has been sleeping for a long time is that they have no "expectation". The competition of composition in the college entrance examination is actually a contest of the quantity and quality of the "best state" of composition at ordinary times; Usually the composition is effective and of high quality, and the college entrance examination composition will stand out. In 2009, Hubei volume "Standing at the Gate of Huanghuagang Cemetery" attracted attention.

On March 29th (19 1 1 April 27th), an uprising broke out in Guangzhou. One hundred and twenty insurgents broke into the governor's office in Guangzhou with guns, and Zhang, the governor of Guangdong and Guangxi, fled when he heard the news. However, because the insurgents were outnumbered and surrounded by hundreds of Qing troops, the insurgents suffered heavy casualties. Pan Dawei, a revolutionary, pitied him and collected the remains of martyrs. Among them, 72 people were buried in Huanghuagang at the foot of Baiyun Mountain. Ninety-seven years later, in the twelfth lunar month, it will snow heavily. I stayed in Guangzhou and went to the tomb of the seventy-two martyrs in Huanghuagang. Stop at its door, all the feelings come together, write a poem and say

Gunfire shook the five cities, and the hero waved his sword fearlessly. Taking Yuquan as the country's death, why is it famous in the world?

A sad song fell from the sky, and the strong man stopped singing Xiao Shui. Seeing the mountains and rivers have smoke, the martyrs' souls sink into the spring.

Life can be geometric for a hundred years, and the grass is basked in the sun. White clouds are full of souls and yellow flowers are everywhere, which is worrying.

The rebels have covered the blue soil, leaving behind the spirit of history books. Huanghuagang was covered with a pile of soil and all the weeds were buried.

This article has been spoken for a period of time and received rave reviews, mainly due to two points. First, the form and language of this poem are not easy for ordinary people. The word "hui" in the text means "just in time", and the words used in classical Chinese are accurate. The "stagnation" in "I am trapped in Guangzhou" also accurately expresses the author's helplessness in wanting to leave and not wanting to be rented away by heavy snow. The use of the word "hysteresis" is quite skillful. The word "He" in "Mixed Feelings" describes the author's complex mood standing in front of Huanghuagang's grave, and all kinds of feelings come to mind together, which is concise. In this paper, we can see the author's reference and personalized transformation of classic ancient poems, which are manifested in such words as "carrying Yuquan to the death of the country", "a sad song falling from the sky" and "what is the cloud full of soul". This is especially good. Some of our classmates also want to write classical Chinese, but they are just showing off because of their poor accumulation or unsatisfactory words; Or the content is old and lifeless. Far from this article. Second, the unique and distinctive content of the article has also attracted the attention of the whole world. Facing the "Huanghuagang Martyrs' Tomb", this article has deep feelings, grand realm and far-reaching vision. These two aspects must be polished by the author; If the young author doesn't try his best, he can't and dare not be in the examination room.

20 10 down-to-earth look at the stars written in Beijing, my student Yangliuqing got a high score with an article "Huashan pine".

I witnessed the pursuit of ideals by young Chinese. A burst of excitement caused by the starry sky was injected into his blood and precipitated into every heartbeat, supporting his every step towards the starry sky. He is the closest person to the land, and the land is the support for him to realize his ideal. He witnessed his tenacity and bitterness step by step. He is the closest person to the sky. The sky entered his eyes and his heart. He always holds his head high and bears witness to his bitterness and tenacity. Closest to the sky, closest to the ground, he stands all over the world.

One heart, looking up at the starry sky, and one foot firmly stepping on the earth, life has never been so stretched.

She likes writing very much at ordinary times. Every time she writes an article, she goes all out. In senior three, she got rid of many factors that are not conducive to scoring and actively prepared for the success of the college entrance examination.

20 1 1 an effective way to improve the composition score of the college entrance examination: exploration and deepening.

Writing always goes hand in hand with "learning and exploring". Many "writers" in literary circles are often experts in a certain field. Lao She specializes in Old Beijing, Jin Yong specializes in Martial Arts, February River specializes in Qing Di, and Yang Zhijun specializes in Tibetan Mastiff ... The composition is not only improved in the direct process of writing.

In the process of composition training in senior high school, teachers should carefully design training questions. These topics should be close to the development trend of college entrance examination composition, vivid social life, daily life and high school students' cognitive ability; At the same time, we should also pay attention to keeping these topics in a certain depth and breadth, and keeping these topics in a certain cultural content and thinking content. A good composition topic actually opens up a rich and broad field of inquiry for students. Through the exploration and research on this topic, students can widely accumulate writing materials, ponder related expressions, deepen their understanding of writing content, enrich their emotions and improve their thinking. In this process, students can often extract their own "gold", form personalized language, reserve personalized materials and form personalized performances. Promoting students to explore and deepen around certain topics is to prepare pieces of "gold" for the composition in the examination room. Once "gold" is refined, it will not be limited to one component. The extraction of "gold" needs time, resources and teachers' guidance and teaching, so it is impossible to make it quickly in the examination room. "Gold" is refined in peacetime and "light" shines on the field, which is a very important rule for preparing for the college entrance examination composition. If "gold" is well refined, the words will be colorful. In 2009, Jiangsu volume Taste Fashion had such a composition fragment.

"A generation is not as good as a generation!" The old lady of nine catties muttered angrily, unconsciously glanced at the couple who forgot to kiss on the small wooden chair on the right, and then withdrew her eyes like a crime.

It is easy to see the flashing slogan on the street-"lovers street, clothes, fashion, shout out if you have love!" "Yi was surprised and hurried to the exit, muttering," What fashion did you try? "? We didn't know what the bride looked like until the veil was lifted! It's really worse every generation! "

Obviously, the little author likes reading Lu Xun and is familiar with the "nine-catty old lady". Encourage and guide students to explore and go deep around the topics related to composition, then the "old lady of nine pounds" will "stay" in the hearts of students more truly and deeply. Once the "gold" is extracted, the "nine-catty old lady" in Jiangsu can "taste fashion", so why can't the "nine-catty old lady" in Hubei stand on tiptoe? Students will definitely have more personalized and wonderful creative presentations.

20 10 Looking at the Stars Down-to-Earth was written in Beijing. My student Wu Jingjian got full marks because of his extensive exposition and broad vision. At the beginning, he explained the relationship between "looking up at the stars" and "down-to-earth" in three words.

If looking up at the starry sky is the infinite scene of capitalism that Li Dazhao inherited from Lenin, then down-to-earth is the first shot from Nanchang City.

If looking up at the starry sky is Mao Zedong's grandiloquence in the face of the world on the rostrum of * * * *, then down-to-earth is the bright lights of Huairentang's first night.

If looking up at the starry sky is the grand blueprint of reform and opening up outlined by Deng Xiaoping at the Third Plenary Session of the Eleventh Central Committee, then down-to-earth is the opening of the first individual restaurant in Beijing.

Then, the fourth character in his whole article is introduced, and he is asked to help explain the relationship between "looking at the stars" and "down-to-earth" in more detail.

Dr. Sun Yat-sen loves to look up at the stars, but he is also down-to-earth.

Looking up at the starry sky, his eyes are unusually sharp. Through the fog of the Qing dynasty, he pointed to the four Chinese characters flashing in the night sky-democracy and ... but Dr. Sun Yat-sen was definitely not a revolutionary visionary. Although his left hand holds the banner of the revolution and his right hand outlines the blueprint of the revolution, his feet are also measuring the development track of the revolution step by step.

After drinking the wine, the box was still open, and the fifth person appeared.

Mr. Liang Shuming is good at looking up at the stars, but he is also down-to-earth.

Looking up at the starry sky, like an adult, he seems to be connected with those Confucian Taishan Beidou, stretching out his arms to the sky and opening up a new universe of Confucianism. However, Mr. Liang Shuming is definitely different from ordinary pedants. He is full of sage books, but he doesn't want to plow and do a job once. He put his foot into the ground, where he looked for a way to "nourish his spirit and level the ground". Down-to-earth, he set off the first rural reform in modern China-Zouping Experiment.

The content of the article is detailed, and the examples are just right, which gives people a shocking force. The author also showed his solid foundation in the article. Wu Jingjian is usually an excellent student, who likes reading and has the spirit of exploration and research. His excellent performance in the examination room is closely related to his usual efforts.

20 1 1 an effective way to improve the composition score of the college entrance examination: internalized accumulation.

From "measuring myself and others", I entered the writing state. From the "initial completion" of writing to the "tireless revision", this is a process of gradually deepening and perfecting writing through continuous exploration and research on special topics, including both language, content and writing skills. This process is often repeated several times, so it is also a dynamic reciprocating process. In such a dynamic reciprocating process, students are required to constantly internalize and accumulate "improved content"; Especially for the final content, try to "eat" it as completely as possible. This internalization accumulation mainly aims at three aspects.

① Knowledge understanding and accumulation of related topics;

② Language expression support of related topics;

(3) the skills of communication and docking between related topics and the topic expression required by the composition;

We usually grasp this process in writing training, often not dynamic but static, often not reciprocating but single-fingered; Our students even ignore the internalized accumulation in this process, which is one of the main reasons why our writing training is inefficient.

Writing is not only a process of completion, but also a process of continuous learning and growth, so writing is better than writing. Writing can't be repeated, because every time you face a brand-new topic, each topic has different expression needs; Writing can be repeated, whether it is the core writing skills or the core writing content. Lu Xun repeats essays, Shen Congwen repeats Xiangxi essays, Bing Xin repeats love essays ... great writers, so do our students. Internalized accumulation is the premise and capital of "repetition".

My student Lin Yuan is such an excellent candidate. He knows the beauty of internalization. At the beginning of senior three, he once wrote an article "Encountering Difficulties".

I like tea. She is like a gentle and profound confidant, who confides in me from time to time. For me who love tea, tea tasting is the enjoyment of rich taste and the washing of restless mind.

In today's fast-paced society, cola and coffee are definitely the drinks with the largest audience. Cold, stimulating and sweet carbonated soft drinks are students' favorite; Rich and charming coffee is the darling of white-collar workers. And tea seems to be forgotten by many people. So, I met the dilemma between tea with far-reaching artistic conception and fast-paced cola coffee. On the one hand, elegant and pure tea brings me spiritual washing again and again, but the process of tea tasting is a long wait. Now it is difficult for me to spare a lot of time to drink tea quietly. On the other hand, coke and coffee have met my needs in a short time, and drinking coke and coffee seems to be a necessary condition for being a modern person.

In my opinion, choosing tea or cola coffee is a question of cultural identity. In this predicament, we should not lose our tradition, but try our best to carry it forward. In the face of difficulties, my attitude is not to exclude foreign western culture represented by cola, but to pay enough attention to our own culture and make it carry forward.

Nowadays, I occasionally drink a coke, but in my heart, the status of tea is irreplaceable. (abridged)

"Tea" and "coffee" are both "hostile" and "identical", which is a pair of contradictory unity. It will be interesting to think about some problems along this line. For example, a deeper exploration of the unity of opposites between the Yellow River and the Yangtze River, Beijing and Shanghai, oil painting and Chinese painting, Saibei and Jiangnan, Dongcheng and Xicheng, Chinese medicine and western medicine, chopsticks and knives and forks, Tang poetry and Song poetry, Li Bai and Du Fu, Liu Zongyuan and Liu Yuxi, advance and retreat, and monks and Taoism will open up our minds and increase the materials for writing at once.

On the basis of this "internalized accumulation", in the 20 10 college entrance examination, Lin Yuan mused and turned his mind. He wrote.

Students in Peking University like to look up at the starry sky. They gathered at the unnamed lake, accompanied by dancing wicker, breeze blowing on their faces and sparkling waves, quietly intoxicated in the starry night sky. Looking up at the starry sky, they saw the richness and elegance of Peking University, the lofty sentiments of "pointing out the country" and "giving up who I am", and the detached spirit, smart thinking and vast thoughts. There is also a half-open canvas bag on the shore, which is really touching.

Youyou Peking University is rich and elegant!

Tsinghua students are famous for their down-to-earth and self-improvement. "Half modern China was built by students in Tsinghua" is the greatest praise for students in Tsinghua. It is the characteristics of Tsinghua students' hard work, diligence and courage to practice that hold up the banner of Tsinghua.

Wei Qinghua, thick and burning!

Peking University students looking up at the starry sky and Tsinghua students who are down-to-earth are representatives of talents in China. They have similarities and complementarities. Peking University people won Tsinghua people, with more agility and agility, but less freedom and elegance. However, whether it is Peking University students looking up at the starry sky or Tsinghua people who is down-to-earth, they are full of scholars' great love and responsibility for the world. Between pitching and pitching, it is a feeling and a commitment to everyone in the world.

The spirit represented by Tsinghua and Peking University will eventually converge, injecting blood and bringing hope to the Chinese nation.

This book, with full marks in the examination room, is outstanding and eye-catching.