Composition on the return of Macao

1. Macao’s return

December 20, 1999, was a grand and special day for all Chinese people. Macau, which has been occupied for more than four centuries, has finally returned to the embrace of the great motherland in a peaceful manner. Macau has returned!

Tens of millions of citizens gathered in the square. Among the crowd were bent old men and women, and young men holding wreaths and bouquets. There are also some little girls shaking colorful balloons in their hands. A child was so excited that he couldn't help but take off the red hat on his head and throw it into the sky. With his left hand, he pointed at the flag of the People's Republic of China and the flag of the Macao Special Administrative Region flying in the air. Next to the little boy, there was an admirable soldier and several young pioneers. They stood solemnly under the national flag, staring at the two fluttering flags and raising their right hands in salute. It can be seen from their every move how excited and excited they were at that time.

Not only them, but also the doves in the sky became excited. Dozens of pigeons flew above people's heads. The bright sunshine shines on them, just like the calm sea, splashing a little bit of waves. It is these thin and smooth lines that make people feel that the scene at this time is an unforgettable and majestic beauty flowing.

Look! There is also a yellow strip on the left with three balloons pulled up into the sky, which reads: Celebrate the return of Macau. These big characters are not only more conspicuous in people's minds, but also very powerful. From a distance, I saw several buildings with such large notes hanging on them. The entire Macau was filled with an atmosphere of joy and excitement for the return.

People's wish for Macao's return has been realized, but Taiwan has not yet been restored. So now, we must learn cultural professional knowledge well, master the various abilities needed by the times, and do our part for the return and construction of Taiwan, the motherland, in the future.

2. Composition to commemorate the return of Macao: The distance between hearts

I have never been able to forget a passage written by Mr. Lao She in "My Mother". "People, even if they live to be seventy or eighty years old, can still be a little childish if they have a mother. Without a loving mother, they are like flowers in a vase. Although they still have color and fragrance, they have lost their roots."

Yes Yes, when Macau left its Chinese motherland and was colonized by Portugal, although the city was still bright, bustling and noisy. But I think it is lonely. Because I left my mother, because I lost my roots. So, those superficial glitz are also in vain. It does not belong to Macau itself. In such a place with a long history, it should have a profound cultural heritage. After the layers of dazzling and false halo have faded, Macao is presented to us as a simple and honest image. We are moved by it and proud of it.

"I am not afraid of the ends of the earth. How could you be on my voyage day and night and I be in your sight." Macau finally returned to the embrace of Mother China. On this special day of December 20, 1999 days. Nine years have passed in the blink of an eye. Along the way, mother and son have always been connected heart to heart and have never been separated.

Extended Reading

Composition is the "half of the country" that determines the performance of the Chinese language test, so the success or failure of the composition often determines the success or failure of the entire Chinese language test. So how to get high scores in exam composition? I think the following points must be paid attention to.

1. Questions and ideas. All examination essays must review the questions. The reason is that candidates must compete fairly in the same environment. Reviewing the questions means comprehensively and accurately reading and understanding all the content presented in the test questions, reading out the intention of the question writer, clearly reviewing the various restrictions of the questions, and clarifying what I want to write, how to write, and to what extent. Really achieve a comprehensive understanding, a deep grasp, and write the composition according to the requirements without bias or omission. The college entrance examination essay evaluation clearly stipulates that the final score of any paper with problematic questions will generally not exceed the lowest score of the second category paper. It can be seen that the accuracy of the review is a key factor in the success or failure of the essay.

No matter what method you use to start and end, you must start with the title at the beginning and point out the main idea at the end. In order to give a good impression to the marking teacher, be sure not to erase the beginning and end of the paper. There is a saying: a good start is half the battle. However, some candidates make the mistake of "slowly entering the questions": some copy all the material in large sections; some expand the original simple material; some start with the material, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, and talk about it slowly. The beginning is loose and takes up a lot of space, but the content that should be said later is "unable to be recalled". Some of it is just passed by in one stroke and hastily withdrawn. The proportion is seriously imbalanced, making it difficult for the teacher to measure the actual writing level. The ancients paid attention to "crested head", "pork belly" and "leopard tail" when writing articles, which makes sense. However, some candidates fail to finish their compositions in time, or end it with one sentence, or add a series of ellipses. In this way, even if you carve out the "crested head" and enlarge the "pig belly", you will fail because there is no "leopard tail". Its good articles will not get high marks. When the marking teacher evaluates the quality of an article, he first looks at it as a whole. Therefore, what candidates submit to the teacher should be a complete essay anyway.

5. Language and word count test composition language must be standardized and accurate, with personality and vitality. Don’t mix white words; don’t use dialects and vocabulary that others can’t understand; use less long sentences and more short sentences; you can introduce some new vocabulary of the times, quote famous aphorisms, quote lyrics of popular popular songs, and quote oral folk songs, but the orientation must be certain Be positive and really let the language shine. Logically speaking, an article is a tool for expressing expressions. If it has words, it will be long, and if it does not, it will be short. There seems to be no limit on the number of words. However, examination composition, as a special form of composition, generally has a specified number of words in order to achieve a certain examination purpose and take into account factors such as examination time. We must follow the rules. If there is a minimum word limit, you must write a sufficient number or slightly more than 50-100 words. If the number of words is insufficient, although the scoring standards stipulate that if there are insufficient words, 1 point will be deducted for every 50 words missing. However, the actual situation is that insufficient words are often considered to be a weak article, and it is difficult to improve the score. If there is a maximum word limit, do not exceed it. Otherwise, it will give people a bloated feeling. Besides, the composition will be long and take a lot of time to write, but it will take less time to answer the previous questions, which will definitely be affected. If there is no maximum word limit, it is usually limited to the composition paper, that is, the text must be written within the grid of the composition paper. Don't be too sentimental and go beyond the composition grid to avoid being thankless for your efforts.

6. Writing and paper writing. In the scoring standards for college entrance examination essays in recent years, writing accounts for a considerable proportion. Generally speaking, it is not required to write well, but it is required to write neatly and legibly, with clear strokes and no cursive writing. Punctuation marks must also be written in a standardized manner, especially the format must be correct. Periods, commas, question marks, exclamation marks, pauses, and semicolons should not appear at the beginning of a line; quotation marks, brackets, and the first half of a book title should not appear at the end of a line. These symbols can be used at the end of a line. Squeeze one word at the end; quotation marks, brackets, and the last half of the book title do not appear at the beginning of the line. You can squeeze these symbols at the end of the previous line. Ellipses and dashes occupy two spaces and cannot be separated. If they cannot be written, they will be squeezed into the end of the line. As for the composition paper, just like a person's appearance, the impression it gives is important, especially for college entrance examination compositions. Whether the paper is clean or not directly affects the psychology and emotions of the marking teacher. Neat writing and clean paper make people feel comfortable. If you look at the joy in your heart first, the result can be imagined.

7. Checking and revising exam essay questions are the same as other test questions. After completing them, you need to check them carefully to see if there are any typos or typos, if there are any sentences that are not smooth, and if there is any content that needs to be adjusted. When the review finds typos or misused words, they must be corrected. Segments that should be deleted must be deleted, and segments that should be added must be added. The changes must be clear and neat so that people can understand them at a glance. The neatness of the roll surface cannot be affected by modifications.