Articles about travel or travel notes.

The so-called "visit notes" refer to articles that record field observations (work achievements, business facilities, places of interest, etc.). ).

It is different from travel notes. It focuses on "visiting" and takes architecture as the main description object. Travel notes, on the other hand, focus on "traveling" and take landscapes as the main description object. The following may be combined with the article "Visiting Liujiaxia Hydropower Station" to specifically talk about the routine writing of the visit.

First, the opening point, briefly introduce the time, place and participants of the visit.

"Last summer vacation, I went to Yongjing County, Gansu Province to see my father. On the second day there, my father took me to visit Liujiaxia Hydropower Station. " In the first paragraph of the article, there are only two sentences, only a few words, but the visit time (last summer vacation), the visit place (Liujiaxia Hydropower Station in Yongjing County, Gansu Province) and the participants ("me" and dad) are clearly stated. The language is concise and the meaning is clear.

Two, the full text should be described in the order of visit.

Generally speaking, the article * * * has six natural paragraphs, which can be divided into three parts, that is, the first natural paragraph is divided into paragraphs independently, the second to fifth natural paragraphs are merged into the second paragraph, and the sixth natural paragraph can be divided into paragraphs independently. That is to say, in the order of visiting, talk about "going to visit" first, then "visiting later" and finally "leaving".

From a local point of view, the second to fifth paragraphs describe the specific process of my visit with my father. According to the order of visiting (or the order of location transfer), these four natural sections introduce the characteristics and functions of river dam, artificial lake, spillway and garage to readers in detail.

Third, generally write a paragraph in one place.

The second to fifth paragraphs of the text are merged into the second paragraph of the article, which shows the readers the detailed process of "I" and my father visiting Liujiaxia Hydropower Station. According to the order of location transfer, "I" visited the dam, artificial lake, spillway and motor room in turn. With a little attention, it is easy to find that the author used a natural text independently when introducing a place. Four natural paragraphs, just introduced four places. What are the advantages of writing a paragraph in such a place? Obviously, it strengthens the organization of the article and makes the meaning to be expressed more clear.

Fourth, pay attention to the relationship between paragraphs and use transitional sentences skillfully.

In order to make the article coherent, it is usually advocated to write a paragraph in one place. However, in order to make the article more unified and seamless, when writing, we must pay due attention to the relationship between paragraphs, and skillfully use some turning sentences at the beginning or end of paragraphs to play the role of connecting the preceding with the following, enhance the cohesion within the article, and give people a complete enjoyment of beauty. A good article should be a perfect work of art, for example, in the third, fourth and fifth paragraphs of this article, the switch has these words: "We got off the bus and boarded the dam." "I was staring at the high-voltage transmission line that extended into the distance, and my father said,' Look, the spillway is open!' """We got off the dam by elevator from the top of the dam and entered the motor room, the heart of the hydropower station." Although there is not much pen and ink, it is enough for readers to have a clear overall impression of visiting Liujiaxia Hydropower Station, that is, write "on the car" first, then "on the dam", then "spillway" and finally "motor room".

Five, to grasp the characteristics, don't forget to see, listen and think more.

Everything in the world has its own characteristics, and nothing is exactly the same. Only by grasping these differences enough to distinguish us from other things and observing things can we write a true and accurate article. For example, when writing about the dam, "I was sitting in the car and saw a silver-gray dam in the distance, embedded in the middle of a narrow and steep mountain wall." "This dam is as high as 40 stories." Although there are only two sentences, the "grandeur" of the dam has been vividly remembered. For example, when writing an artificial lake, "standing at the top of the dam, there is a huge artificial lake in front of you." The green lake reflects the blue sky and white clouds, which is clearer. " Just a few words, but the "huge, green and clear" of the artificial lake is also clear and abnormal.

How can we grasp the characteristics of things? Bottom line: Don't forget to see, listen and think. Everything in the world is very rich, and every single thing has many attributes and characteristics. It is impossible to have a detailed and comprehensive understanding of things just by looking at them with your eyes. When necessary, it is obviously necessary to see, touch, listen, even smell and taste specific things in order to obtain as much information as possible, and then conduct analysis and research, so as to obtain an objective and fair understanding. For example, when the author introduces the characteristics and functions of each place in detail, he adopts the method of "watching and listening". From what I can see, readers know the characteristics of things; From what I heard (that is, what my father said), readers understand the role of everything. This is true of every part.

Six, after the visit, the details should be appropriate.

When you travel to a place, there may be many impressive "scenic spots", but don't write down what you see and record it as a running account. Visits, like other genres of articles, have a clear center or theme. Anything related to the theme is the main content, so write it in detail. On the contrary, it is secondary content and should be omitted. The article "Visiting Liujiaxia Hydropower Station" is intended to reflect the great achievements of socialist construction in the motherland. The characteristics and functions of river dam, artificial lake, spillway and garage can just reflect this point, so it has become the main content of the article and the object of detailed writing. As for how to drive, how to climb the dam, how to get into the motor room and how to get out of the motor room, these are irrelevant contents, so the author only involves them.

Seven, after the visit to express feelings, point out the topic.

"We walked out of the motor room and reluctantly left Liujiaxia Hydropower Station." The end of a sentence means endless. Why are you "reluctant to go"? When you think about it carefully, you can't help thinking. The center of the article is suddenly enlightened under one thought.