A changed composition

In study, work or life, everyone will inevitably come into contact with composition. Composition is the transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from compressed, concise and understandable language. , to transform into an external language form that is developed, has a standardized grammatical structure, and can be understood by others. In order to make it easier and more convenient for you to write essays, here are the changed essays I have collected for everyone. They are for reference only. You are welcome to read them. Changed composition 1

I suddenly smelled a strong floral fragrance. Taking a closer look, wow, Chongqing has changed and changed again! I suddenly became excited and happy.

I lowered my head slightly and saw that the flower bed was densely packed with flowers of various colors. A bunch of colorful flowers including red, rudbeckia, rainbow chrysanthemum and petunia are gathered together to form many patterns, and some even form slogans. There are tall yellow jujube trees planted on both sides of the road, arranged neatly, leading to the end of the road, as if a huge ceremonial team is welcoming you. I remember that two months ago, there were only a few dead tree trunks here. But now, the changes are so drastic, I can’t believe it.

In the past, this road was very narrow and full of potholes, and no one had ever cleaned up the mud and garbage on the ground. It's better now, the road is wide and smooth. The cement road in the middle has six lanes at least. The sidewalks on both sides are several meters wide at their narrowest, and the floor tiles are all newly laid and shiny. There are people cleaning the road at all times, so the ground is quite clean. Isn't it very comfortable to walk on this road?

Looking at the buildings nearby, those dilapidated old houses have disappeared. I saw tall buildings rising from the ground. Each building has a unique shape. Each building is wearing a brightly colored coat. Each building exudes the atmosphere of a modern metropolis.

The most beautiful thing here is probably the night scene. The whole road was brightly illuminated by street lights, like a long golden dragon. There is a ground lamp under every tree beside the road, illuminating the road with lush green. In front of the flower beds on the roadside, on lampposts, and on the walls, there are colorful decorative lights on in many places. Some are like small suns, and some are like flowers. A little further away, the newly built Binjiang Road and Chongqing On the Aoda Bridge, the colorful lights are flashing, the roads are criss-crossing, and the various colors blend together to form a dream-like picture.

I found out, I found that Chongqing has become beautiful, it is taking on a new look... Changed Composition 2

One day, I was returning home On the road, I suddenly heard a man in strange clothes shouting: "Strange candies, two for 5 cents!" I thought to myself, what are strange candies and are they delicious? Being known as the King of Delicious Food, my mouth watered more and more as I thought about it, so I took out 5 cents from my pocket and bought two. After buying it, I devoured one, ah! It was so sweet that I almost lost my teeth, but then I ate another one, "Ah!" I yelled, the taste was simply incomparable!

The next day, I got up and brushed my teeth. I found that the toothbrush was as big as a wooden stick. I thought it was strange. Even breakfast seemed to be much more than usual. After finally finishing the mountain of breakfast, I went to school. Walking on the road, I was surprised to find that flowers, plants and trees grew very fast. I was stunned, ah! I became smaller. Gradually, I can no longer distinguish between east, west and north. I don’t know how long it took, but I saw many strange creatures. I was as big as a bacteria! Suddenly a gust of wind came and blew me to the school. I didn't dare to enter the classroom for fear of being accidentally stepped on by someone!

At noon, my stomach growled, so I went to the canteen and took a grain of rice from the rice bucket, which stretched me half to death. After eating, I went to the playground again. Oops! In the afternoon, my classmates had physical education classes, and there was no way to hide in the playground, so I made up my mind to head to the classroom. I moved forward at the speed of one step every half hour. When I won the long march, my classmates had already finished school one after another, which almost made me angry to death.

I was about to go home, and suddenly I thought, how should I go home? But just when I was wondering, God seemed to help me, and there was another gust of wind, which blew me to the door of my house, faster than Superman. Since my home lives on the third floor, there are 60 steps, so I moved forward at the speed of one step every half hour. I arrived home before dawn tomorrow, and I was so tired that I fell asleep.

I wrote this composition after I got home. Because I was too young, it took half an hour to press a key. I wrote this composition for half a year! Changed composition 3

Changed, changed, my hometown has changed! I almost couldn't find my home! As soon as the gray-haired aunt entered the door of the house, she smiled and said to her father.

Auntie, you haven’t been home for fifteen years. Of course, I feel that my hometown has changed a lot. I feel that the development and change of our hometown has been much slower than that of the city in the past few years. Dad let my aunt into the house and asked her to sit down.

The road in my hometown has changed. In the past, wasn’t there a dirt road in front of our house? It’s hard to walk when it rains. Every time you walk, the mud will stick to your clothes, but what can you do? Unless you don't go out. When did dirt roads turn into wide asphalt roads? I took a look just now. Even the alleys are paved with floor tiles, and there are drainage ditches under the brick paths. Isn’t this a big enough change? My aunt asked my father with a smile.

Maybe it’s because we didn’t leave the village and we didn’t realize it. Once you tell me, it has indeed changed. Dad said as he handed my aunt a cup of tea.

Also, the environment in my hometown has changed. In the past, our village was full of short adobe houses, and there were many cesspits along the streets. When it rained heavily, the rainwater filled the cesspits, and the feces inside floated to the streets. Not only did it stink, but it was also very unpleasant. It's dangerous. People often fall into cesspools while walking at night. My aunt said while covering her nose.

Auntie, who fell into the cesspool? Come and listen. I couldn't help but asked curiously.

Your aunt and I fell in. Fortunately, there was no rain inside at the time. My aunt said with a smile.

I tried hard to imagine what our village looked like as described by my aunt, and then I ran out of the house and looked around to see what our village looked like: the houses were spacious and bright, the green trees grew like guards; the streets were clean and smooth. , not a single scrap of paper or waste could be found.

Looking at these, I couldn’t help but say in my heart: It has changed, my hometown has changed, it has become beautiful! Changed Composition 4

During the National Day holiday, our family went to Louta’s hometown to visit grandma. I was so happy that I jumped three feet high.

We took a car to grandma’s house, and I walked to the car. Looking out the window, the winding mountain road turned into a wide and flat road. Opening the car door, the original few low thatched huts turned into a luxurious villa, shining brightly in the sun. When I walked to the door, grandma saw me and hugged me into her arms with a smile on her face. Her dry and rough hands became white and soft. I was lying in my grandma's arms, and I could vividly remember the scene of grandma cooking: there was a black and gray earthen stove in the kitchen, tightly leaning against the wall, and bottles of oil, salt, vinegar, etc. were arranged on the stove on the left. , the bottle is greasy and dark. Grandma was flipping the pot with a shovel in one hand, and she had to add a few handfuls of firewood to the stove with the other hand. When the firewood started to smoke, I couldn't stand it, so I ran out quickly. .

At this time, I smelled a strong fragrance, which pulled me back from my memories. I couldn't wait to walk into the kitchen, wow! The kitchen became brighter, the walls were snow-white, and a stainless steel gas stove was inlaid on the granite stove. A shiny casserole and a pressure cooker were placed on the stove. The drawer under the stove was opened, and clean bowls and dishes were placed neatly.

"Children, beware of oil spills." From the outside The grandma who walked in told me that she heard the vegetables squeaking in the casserole and quickly closed the valve of the gas tank, and the light blue flame disappeared.

After a while, our whole family was eating clean and delicious meals cooked on the gas stove. I felt very happy and said, "My hometown has become beautiful, and grandma has become beautiful too." This annoyed everyone. Laughed. Changed composition 5

A few days ago, my parents took me back to my hometown.

In the car, I heard from my parents that a few years ago, the village was full of dirty and ugly bungalows, and the roads were piled with bricks, tiles and domestic garbage. The road surface at that time was made of land, and whenever someone walked on it, the road would become dusty; if the wind blew, it would pick up the garbage on the roadside, making it difficult for people to open their eyes; let alone rainy days, the road would be full of mud, and it would be difficult to wear shoes. I could only walk home in a skip and a jump. Every household uses coal fires. If you are not careful, you will be poisoned by gas and the walls will be darkened.

"We're home!" Dad shouted, interrupting my thoughts. When I got off the car, wow! I couldn't believe the sight in front of me. Every household had built a two-story red building, and the road turned into a flat cement road, with tall poplar trees planted in neat rows on the roadside. I saw that there are solar water heaters on the small buildings. I guess science has entered my hometown. Sure enough, when I walked into the living room of my brother's house, the first thing that caught my eye was a TV, a water dispenser and a refrigerator. I went to look for him in his house and found that there was a computer in the house with a computer mounted on the wall. Air conditioning! At this time, my brother came out and said to me with a smile: "Did you know? The village has changed a lot in the past few years! The road in front of the door was built by the government after the country implemented the village-to-village project. We use these High-end electrical appliances are all at rural prices!”

Why has my hometown become more beautiful? It’s because the motherland has become stronger! Yes, that’s the saying “A strong country will make the people rich”! Why has life in my hometown become more convenient? It is technology that has entered the countryside! All these changes make me love my hometown even more! Changed composition 6

My hometown is Pangcun Town, Yibin District, Luoyang City. Over the years, family members have often said: "The changes in my hometown are so great!" Today at lunch, my grandfather said this again. I curiously asked: "What changes have happened in our hometown?"

My mother said: "The roads in my hometown have become wider, and transportation is more convenient than before. In the past, there was only one cement road out of our village, and the others were dirt roads. When it rains, the roads are muddy and difficult to walk. In recent years, the village has Several new cement roads have been built, which are spacious and clean! In 20xx, the newly built Yanluo Expressway in the north of our village was opened. Whether we go to Yanshi or Luoyang, it only takes 30 minutes. Is it convenient? ?” I nodded repeatedly after hearing this: “Convenient, convenient, so convenient!”

Dad continued: “In recent years, there have been more and more wealthy people in the village, and many families have bought cars. It will be more convenient to get in and out. However, we won’t buy it now. When our three-story house is completed, we will buy a car to take you on trips. "By the way, my three-story house is under construction. Well, in a few days, we will be able to say goodbye to the small bungalow and live in a small western-style building. Dad will also take us to travel. I am very happy.

My sister said with a smile: "Our school has changed a lot! Last year our school built a new three-story teaching building and two new basketball courts." The pavement has been hardened, flowers and plants have been planted, and the campus environment has been greened. We no longer have to worry about studying in a dangerous building. This is the best thing!" I said over my sister's words.

Mom and Dad laughed: "Don't you understand the changes in your hometown? Why?" I bowed my head in embarrassment. Changed composition 7

"She has changed, she has changed." I said it repeatedly.

Today, I came to this store again. "

That day, which happened to be Sunday, I went to this store to buy pencil lead. As soon as I entered the door, I saw a salesperson with the number "0143" on her chest chatting with another salesperson. I walked up Said before: "Auntie, I buy pencil lead. "Unexpectedly, she continued to talk to the salesperson as if she hadn't heard anything. "Auntie! Aunt! "I shouted several times before she slowly raised her head and asked coldly: "What are you doing? Don't you see I'm busy? "I was so angry that I really wanted to buy it elsewhere, but because it was Sunday and only this store was open, I had to swallow my anger and said: "I'll buy No. 05 pencil lead. "She didn't even look at it. She rummaged around in the pencil lead box for a while, muttering in her mouth, and threw a box to me. I handed over the money. When I looked carefully, I saw it was No. 07. I said hurriedly: " Auntie, you made a mistake, this is No. 07. "She didn't agree and glared at me. I had no choice but to withdraw with the No. 07 pencil lead. I looked back at the five gold-plated characters "Customer is God", and they seemed to have dimmed... ..

"Children, children. "A crisp cry pulled me back from the long river of memory. "Huh? "What did you buy?" "There was a kind and clear voice. "I, I buy a pencil case. She asked again: "What style do you want?" Come and take your pick. "I happily walked over and picked it up. This one is not good-looking; that one is not durable. After picking and choosing, I finally picked a pencil box that is both beautiful and practical.

I'm really afraid that my aunt will call me "picky"! But unexpectedly, instead of blaming me, she said kindly: "Have you decided?" "Yes." I nodded and handed over the money. "Hey, this is change. You are welcome to come next time." I nodded happily. When I walked out of the store, I couldn't help but look back, but the five gilded characters "Customer is God" were shining in the golden sunlight.

She has changed. It was the civilized and polite spring breeze that blew the wind chimes of her heart and made her change... Changed composition 8

On Sunday, my mother watched The weather was nice, so he asked me to take me to Luopu Park. When I mentioned Luopu Park, I felt like vomiting when I thought of the polluted environment. My mother saw my sad face and pulled me and said, "Let's go! It's not what it used to be there. If you don't believe me, let's go and have a look!" "Just let's go, I really don't believe he will become beautiful!" I don't believe it. Said convincingly.

On the way, I remembered a scene a few years ago. The river in Luopu Park was filled with dirty and smelly sewage. Before I even reached the river, an unpleasant smell would hit my nose. It made me cough. There are pieces of white garbage floating on the river. There are even a few poor little fish floating on the water. Mosquitoes and flies were flying everywhere by the river, and no one wanted to take a step closer. When I think of that scene, I feel uncomfortable and distressed.

When I got there, my eyes suddenly lit up: the river water was so clear that people were almost reflected, fish were swimming freely in the water, cute little bees, and beautiful butterflies were dancing among the flowers. . Not far from the shore, every once in a while, there will be a kind old man fishing leisurely. The children were running around on the lawn, playing various games, and their happy laughter could be heard from time to time in the park. Uncles and aunts exercised where there were fitness equipment. On the beach, children in groups of three and five are digging tunnels and building castles... They are building their own palaces and weaving moving fairy tales with their own little hands. Some older brothers and older sisters were practicing target shooting at the shooting range. As the balloon exploded with a bang, bursts of cheers erupted from the crowd. The older brothers and older sisters on the river who dared to challenge themselves put on life jackets and followed The motorboat "swooshed" and sailed into the distance, with waves splashing on the water.

Wow! It turns out that Luopu Park has become so beautiful! Run into the embrace of nature. I believe that with everyone’s joint efforts, Luopu Park will become more and more beautiful and become a good place for everyone to relax.

Today. , my parents and I were walking and came to Honggou Road. Wow! It’s so beautiful, with blue sky, green grass, tall buildings, and wide streets. I was deeply attracted by this charming scenery.

Looking back, this road is really a garbage road. The road is very narrow and bumpy. In addition to garbage, there are illegal buildings on both sides of the road. When summer comes, flies are everywhere, and the sky is full of dust. It turns into a "swamp" when it rains. It's full of dirt on sunny days and mud on rainy days.

Now, Honggou Road has changed a lot! The garbage is gone! The illegal buildings have been demolished, and the sidewalks on both sides are paved with red and green tiles, which are clean and tidy. The asphalt road in the middle looks wide and flat. There is no dust on sunny days and no muddy roads on rainy days. The buildings were demolished, and the walls on both sides were put on yellow clothes and red hats, which made them look particularly energetic. There were penguin-shaped fruit bins every few meters on the sidewalk, which were so cute, like a guard of honor to welcome guests. < /p>

"Suddenly like a spring breeze coming overnight," today's Honggou Road suddenly sprouted patches of new green, full of verdant green, and appeared full of vitality. The green shrubs under the wall were in a wavy shape, which added a bit more. Poetic. There are more than a dozen huge flower beds on both sides of the road, with white chrysanthemums, rose-colored cockscombs, and red strings of red flowers. They are really colorful and colorful. Bees and butterflies also come to join in the fun, and they dance gracefully. , making this beautiful street even more charming. When night falls, lotus lanterns stand on the roadside one after another, emitting a faint white light. The plants in the flower beds do not lag behind, as if they are competing with the lotus lanterns. Like, colorful under the light.

Honggou Road has changed, it really has changed! Looking at the scene in front of me, who would have the heart to throw leftover peels and peeled candy wrappers everywhere!

Let us take good care of the environment we rely on for survival! I thought: Recreating clear water and blue sky is no longer a distant dream. Changed Composition 10

Based on my own observations, I discovered a big "secret": Mom has changed!

Change 1: Mom has become more generous.

This is a huge happy event. Originally, Dad was very... Let’s get back to the subject! That time I asked my mother for money to buy a dictionary. I was fully prepared to let her nag me and stimulate my ears. However, what I never expected was that my mother got it for 50 yuan. I thought she had taken it by mistake, so I said, "Mom, this is 50 yuan..." Before I could finish, my mother said Said: "What's the matter? It's not enough?" He stretched out his hand to take it out, "Enough, enough, enough..."

My true quotation: I don't know why, my mother became so generous today. This is It took me several lifetimes to enjoy such treatment. I am so happy, even better than the "good times"! One word: cool!

Change 2: Mom has become stupid

I don’t know why, my mother’s intelligence has deteriorated. In the past, as long as I didn't know how to do it, I would just go to my mother. Once I got there, I would be able to figure out the question clearly in less than 3 minutes, but what about now? "Mom, how do you solve this question?" "Ask your dad." "My dad is not at home." "Let me see, this... well, I don't know how to do this either. Ask the teacher tomorrow!" ”

My true quotes: Alas, it’s so unlucky. It’s not just me, my mother is also unlucky! Tell me, why did my mother's intelligence deteriorate so early? Isn't this too irritating? Yes, let’s solve this problem first!

Change three: Mom has become fat

"Mom, you need to lose weight!" "I know! But there is no time! Let's talk about it when we make time." Hum hum hum , I don’t have time, as our teacher said, ‘Time is like water in a sponge…’ [It seems that this is not what our teacher said], but I still don’t want to do activities! Huh? Who is this and why is he so thin? I ran

to ask my mother: "Who is in this photo?" "Me." Oh? Mom, it’s impossible! Why are you so fat now? Mom also said that when you grow up, your body will be out of shape, ugh.

My true quotes: Oh, no, my body will be out of shape when I grow up. It’s too scary!

Change 4:...

What? There’s more! Mom, you have changed so much. Changed Composition 11

The blackness disappeared, replaced by bright colors, accompanying people's peaceful lives.

This is no longer people’s fantasy, it has become a reality. The environment around my grandpa's house has changed. It has become clean, comfortable and pleasant, and green.

When I was a child, every time I went to my grandpa’s house, I had to go through three difficulties - crossing a narrow bridge with dark, turbid river water below, accompanied by garbage and stench; crossing a dirty The dirty path is mixed with the cries of vendors, the vegetable leaves on the ground, and the fishy smell that permeates the air; we have to go around a garbage mountain, and the garbage on the ground is stinky, stinky, stinky! Only through them can you get to grandpa's house. Despite this, my grandpa’s house is like a golden treasure house in my memory, with countless novelties.

In recent years, I went to my grandpa’s house again and found that it has changed, changed, everything has changed - the small bridge no longer exists, replaced by a wide, white bridge There are still some residents fishing above, and the river below has become so blue and clear. A few light colors mixed together form a beautiful and peaceful picture.

And the road where vendors originally gathered has returned to the hands of the people. The road was widened, and tall trees were planted on both sides. They were lush and green, and birds were chirping on the branches. It made people feel relaxed and happy, and no longer disgusted.

And that mountain of garbage has also become history. A vegetable market rises from the ground. The clean environment is unmatched before. The vendors were still shouting, but they sounded much more friendly and no longer so hateful. It made me feel that everything had changed, changed, everything had changed!

When I came to my grandpa’s house, I felt very happy.

Green has already been reflected in people's hearts, and people's quality has also been greatly improved - no one is littering, no longer spitting, no one is dumping garbage into the river... Green has long been reflected in people's hearts, and with it Paint a new scene with the bright colors around you!

The environment in my hometown has changed, becoming intoxicating and poetic; the people in my hometown have changed, becoming approachable and respectable; my hometown has changed, becoming better and greener, it’s really Changed, changed, everything changed! Changed Composition 12

Franz Kafka is a famous Austrian novelist. In the autumn of 1923, Kafka was walking alone on the streets of Berlin. Severe lung disease forced him to stagger forward. At this time, he saw a little girl sitting on the street crying. When I asked about it, I found out that the little girl was not yet 5 years old and was so sad because she lost her beloved doll. Kafka wanted to buy a new one for her, but he searched his pockets and couldn't find a penny, so he comforted him and said, "Your doll has gone on a trip and will be back soon." The little girl asked doubtfully. : "How do you know?" Kafka replied with a smile: "I happened to meet it yesterday. It asked me to bring you a letter, but I left the letter at home and won't give it to you until tomorrow."

The next day, Kafka took the handwritten letter and read it to the little girl word for word. In the letter, the doll said that she was tired of staying at home, so she decided to go out for a walk. She also said that because she was nostalgic for the outside world, she might not come back in the near future, but she would often send letters... Hearing this, the little girl smiled happily. .

After that, Kafka would often bring letters to the little girl and tell her about the scenery along the way in the voice of a rag doll, and the little girl also gained a lot of knowledge. After half a year of this, Kafka's condition deteriorated and he would die soon. So, he forced himself to go to the store and bought a small rag doll and gave it to the little girl: "After traveling for a long time, its figure has become a lot thinner, and it is what it is now..." The little girl exclaimed in surprise, She held the rag doll in her arms distressedly.

As she grew older, the little girl realized that the old man who helped her was the writer Kafka. One day, when she picked up the doll, she suddenly found a note stuffed in the gap behind it: "Forgive me for choosing this thinner doll. Actually, I want to tell you that everything you love will leave you. But it will eventually come back to her in another form." The little girl burst into tears. She finally understood that the thinned rag doll was the beauty carefully designed by Kafka when he was dying. "lie". Changed Composition 13

War says goodbye to us, and everyone has heard the footsteps of the 21st century. In the blink of an eye, people flew to the 30th century. In the 30th century, people no longer live in shabby thatched houses or tall villas, but in computer-controlled houses. You can live in a computer house as big or small as you want, and it's all controlled by the computer.

There are various warehouses in the computer residence, where unnecessary furniture, daily necessities, etc. are placed. The computer will be notified when needed. When you get home, the computer will prepare fragrant meals and warm bath water for you, making it as comfortable as you want. Cars in the 30th century are no longer small motorcycles or sleek cars. It is a flying car that travels through the universe. It can also fly around in the sky. It is a driverless car.

With it, traffic accidents will never happen again, and traffic policemen will not have to go to work. With the Feitian Car, you can eat and sleep on the car. In this way, you will never have to worry about having a place to go to the toilet. Moreover, don’t think that you can’t eat, drink and have fun in such a small car. In fact, it looks like a small car. It looks like a house when you get in. It's hard to imagine that such a small car can hold so many things. The world in the 30th century is no longer a world filled with the smoke of war. It is no longer a bird trapped in a cage. It is a world where you can do whatever you want. It is very free and you can play freely. If parents are strict If you take care of your children, you will be punished. A free world is a world that does not need to be managed by anyone. It does not mean that no one cares about thieves, but that there will be no more thieves in the 30th century.

Because technology is very advanced and can meet people's various needs, no one will be a thief anymore. The world in the 30th century is no longer restricted by hell. Human beings not only live on the earth, but can also live on Mars and Jupiter.

Living on Mars or Jupiter, you can talk to the stars every night, sit on the moon and look down at the earth, how beautiful it is!

Let us look forward to the arrival of the 30th century, let us create more miracles, and let us realize our wishes as soon as possible.