Writing essays and speech comments

1. How to comment on primary school students’ speech compositions

In order to welcome the Fourth National Sports Conference, create a good atmosphere in the whole school that “everyone is a host and everyone represents New Hefei” Atmosphere. According to the overall deployment of Hefei City's "Welcoming the Four-Body Problems, Let's Come Together" activity and the "Implementation Plan of the Municipal Education Bureau's "Welcome the Four-Body Problems" Activity, our school is now carrying out publicity, education, training, speech contests, and knowledge on civilized etiquette and the Four-Body Problems. The essay competition and other activities are arranged as follows. 1. Civilized etiquette knowledge and four-experience knowledge training should be based on the theme of "Being a good host and making you satisfied in Luzhou", using special classes, flag-raising ceremonies, team meetings, class meetings, and 3-5 civilized viewings for the whole school. and other civilized etiquette knowledge training and theme education, focusing on strengthening the training of teachers, students and parents on the four experiences, civilized etiquette, civic ethics, urban traffic regulations, Mandarin, Anhui province conditions, Hefei city conditions, etc., and effectively make the "Hui style" Harmony, Vibrant China", the four theme slogans of the experience, "Let's come together" anthem, and posters have entered schools and families. Use campus websites, shop windows, slogans, radio stations and other forms to vigorously promote and create an atmosphere, quickly setting off a publicity and education craze. At the same time, it is necessary to carry out in-depth activities of "little hands holding big hands - welcoming the four bodies happily", organize students to take home the knowledge of the four bodies (overview of the four bodies, anthem, theme slogans, mascot pictures, promotional brochures, etc.), and strive to form A good situation in which schools, students, and parents all participate together. 2. Essay Writing Contest for Primary and Secondary School Students 1. Participants: Students in Grade 07, Grade 06, Grade 05 and Grade 04 in the first and second paragraphs. 2. Essay writing requirements: The theme of the writing competition is “Welcoming the four bodies, let’s all participate together”. There is no restriction on genre. Articles must be written by students themselves and cannot plagiarize other people’s works. The tutor should provide careful guidance, write concise comments and recommendations at the end of the article, and sign his name. Articles must have a clear theme, correct viewpoints, substantial content, and a prominent center. The composition for primary school students should not exceed 800 words, and the composition for middle school students should not exceed 1,500 words. All compositions must be written on manuscript paper, and the handwriting must be clear and neat. It is best to use typed manuscripts when submitting. The author should sign under the title of the article and indicate the name of his class. 3. Competition format: This essay competition is divided into primary school students and middle school students. Each class of the primary school student group and the middle school student group will recommend two essays to submit to the Political and Education Office, and the school will make unified awards. The school will recommend 1-3 excellent essays to the Publicity and Education Office of the Municipal Education Bureau for evaluation. 4. Commendation and awards: The school will select the first, second and third place prizes and issue certificates. The Municipal Education Bureau will issue certificates to the winning students and instructors. 4. Speech Contest for Middle School Students 1. Participants: Second-level students. 2. Time: April 8, 2010. Two students from each class (one male and one male) will participate in the school speech contest. The school will select two outstanding contestants to submit to the Publicity and Education Office of the Municipal Education Bureau. 3. Competition requirements: Contestants must use the theme of "Welcoming the Four Bodies, Let's Participate Together" and use vivid language and touching examples to show the spirit of young people in the new century who love their motherland, love their hometown, and work hard to make progress. The theme should be clear and the content should be practical, and the content should be avoided. The speech must be written by oneself. When contestants give speeches, their language must be in line with age characteristics, use Mandarin, speak clearly, express fluently, be full of energy, and have a natural demeanor. They must bring their own performance clothes, which must be generous and appropriate and consistent with their identity. The competition will be conducted without accompaniment and auxiliary equipment; the competition time for speech contestants shall not exceed 5 minutes. 5. Work Requirements Please organize each class carefully and carry out activities according to the prescribed time and requirements to ensure the participation and actual effects of the activities. We strive to allow all students in the school to be inspired, exercised and educated from the activities, and everyone understands the four experiences. Everyone comes and participates. March 23, 2010 2. Evaluation of the speech composition

Dear teacher, dear students Hello everyone! My name is Li Jingjing, and I am a student from animation class Q1242. Some people say that college is a textbook of life. Now I am lucky enough to read this book.

The university shows us a different world. It is the university that gave me a different experience in life. First of all, I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help, as well as my family and friends for their encouragement and care.

Receiving a scholarship represents more than just an honor. I believe it will inspire us to continue to study hard and make progress. This year I have become a junior student. Three-quarters of my four years of college life have passed in the blink of an eye, and during the past two years of study, I have always maintained that determination. With a positive attitude, we always hold ourselves to high standards and properly handle the relationship between our studies and work, striving to achieve all-round development.

Although I hold different positions and identities in school, class, and team, I always adhere to my unique "high standards" for a better and more promising future. My current study and work are in good condition. Although I run around inside and outside campus every day, I feel that I am living a very solid and fulfilling life. When I see the fruits of my labor, I feel excited and satisfied. Enjoyed it a lot.

The past two years of college life have also made me deeply realize that college is a place full of competition. Here I know what "one mountain is higher than the other" ", I realized what it means to "sail against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat", and understood the true meaning of "diligence can make up for one's weakness, one's hard work, one's gain". Living in college for nearly three years has made me understand that the most important thing during college is not only the accumulation of knowledge, but also the growth as a person.

The concentrated expression of growth is to determine one's own pursuits and ideals through observation, thinking and exploration, and at the same time cultivate and acquire the qualities and abilities to transform such ideals into reality. After three years of study and life, I feel that I have not wasted my time, and I can honestly say that I am worthy of myself.

I have worked hard and fought hard, so I am very happy. 1. In terms of study, I have always been the first in the class in academic performance and comprehensive evaluation since my freshman year. I also won the school’s first-class scholarship twice, the National Inspirational Scholarship, and the “School-Level Outstanding College Student” He has won the honorary title twice, the honorary title of "Outstanding Student Cadre at the School Level", the honorary title of Outstanding League Cadre, and the Outstanding League Member, etc., and actively participated in professional competitions.

I have always adhered to that belief in learning. I always keep in mind that learning is the first priority for students. The achievements gained through my own sweat are glorious and worthy of my deep appreciation.

I know that I still have many shortcomings, many aspects need to be improved, and there is still a lot to work hard on, and I will work harder and keep improving. I need to be a good person. Act as a role model and serve as a pioneer and role model. 2. In terms of overall quality, I served as the league secretary of the class. In my sophomore year, I served as the deputy director of the practice department in the Student Union of the School of Art. I was the head of the Youth Volunteer Association of the School of Art, the head of the debate team of the School of Art, and the women’s basketball team of the School of Art. Team member, he was a member of the national flag guard team of our school's top ten organizations, a registered volunteer in China, and a member of the college student entrepreneurial team "Mabang Cultural Creativity Co., Ltd." Since submitting an application to the party in October 2012, he has become a reserve today Party member, and serves as organizational committee member of the third party branch of the Art College, etc.

Participated in various types of large-scale activities in the school and achieved some good results, and many activities were published in Chutian Daily, Jingshi.com, Chaoyang.com Tangxun Lake Magazine, school newspaper, school Broadcast stations and other platforms have reports of a certain length. I think the "comprehensiveness" of comprehensive quality is reflected in many aspects.

At work, do your job conscientiously and diligently. If you have any questions that you don’t understand, ask the teachers and classmates around you for advice and learn with an open mind. Take serving your classmates wholeheartedly as your work and study purpose, and complete every task seriously with a sincere, optimistic and optimistic work attitude.

And carefully cultivate the next candidate person in charge. I want to use my performance to infect everyone around me. Of course, I must also continue to learn and make progress from stronger role models.

As a college student, I volunteered to join the ranks of young volunteers and became a glorious "China Registered Youth Volunteer". I also participated in many charity activities and had many achievements. Nice response. This not only allows our love to be conveyed, but also increases the feelings between our members and shortens the distance between us.

In my life and work, I have always maintained an optimistic heart. While strictly demanding myself, I also constantly encourage and help the students around me. I have always been self-reliant in my life. Due to family financial reasons, my father went to work in Inner Mongolia when I was very young and could only go home once a year. Therefore, I would use my spare time to do whatever I could from an early age. I help my mother take care of the family and take care of my younger brother. Maybe it is because of this that I have developed an independent character. As long as I think I can do it, I must do it, even though it will be very difficult.

Now I think it was a good experience. 3. In terms of social practice: In terms of social practice, I think I have really improved a lot. I participated in social practice twice during college.

I use my summer vacation every year to intern at a cultural company in Beijing and to train with the Air Force Missile Force in Wuhan to strengthen myself. These experiences are unforgettable and very meaningful to me. I also have my own views on social practice.

Social practice can be regarded as "society" and "practice" separately, and this is also an opportunity for us to get in touch with social platforms through social practice. I have strengthened myself and repaid the society. There are social practices in the form of teams and social practices in the individual form. When I see everyone’s achievements, I think everyone is strong.

I gave up my bookishness and showed myself to be mature and steady in society, and I also gained a lot from social practice. On the other hand, starting a business has always been my dream, especially combining my major with entrepreneurship.

Today, my idea was finally realized initially in "Mabang Cultural and Creative Co., Ltd." This is also true for college students to start their own businesses. 3. How to evaluate the speech

Original publisher: Enlightenment of Bodhi under the Bodhi Tree

Comments on the speech (for reference) First of all, I am honored to study and communicate with you all. Speech is an art. In terms of content, the speaker is required to focus on the theme, conduct in-depth analysis, arouse the audience's thinking and excitement, and use his or her talent and wisdom to convince people. In terms of form, the speaker is required to express appropriately, be fully engaged, and move people with emotion. And you must design your own image, dress appropriately and appropriately, gestures and expressions must be coordinated and natural, and even your eyes must be sincere and sincere to communicate with the audience. Based on today's contestants' speeches, the speeches generally have the following characteristics: First, the theme is prominent. The students who participated in the speech all performed the theme of "accelerating scientific development", focusing on the key points and making every detail clear. Second, the content is exciting. The contestants’ speeches were rich in content, typical examples, vivid and touching, praising the news and propaganda workers fighting on the front line. Third, the language is fluent. In today's speech, most of the contestants basically achieved a loud voice, full of emotion, cadence and grace, making the speech contagious and attractive. I personally think that players with No. and No. 1 perform better in the above aspects. Of course, today's speech also has some shortcomings. Individual contestants were not sufficiently prepared, lacked individuality in the content of their speeches, and did not leave a deep impression on others. Some contestants were slightly nervous, which affected the quality of their speeches. There are also contestants who are not familiar with the content of the speech, which makes the speech not smooth enough. In short, this speech contest was a successful one. The contestants showed their spirit and style. Here, I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to every contestant who actively signed up, prepared hard, took the stage enthusiastically, and dared to perform! Warm congratulations to the award-winning contestants who will be commended for their outstanding performance and outstanding achievements! 4. A collection of essay comments on friendship

[Comments on imaginary essays] Comments on imaginary essays 24. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. Comments on imaginary essays.

Failure is inevitable for people, but it is even more valuable to have the courage to face failure. I believe that gold will always shine.

I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer. 25. It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works.

Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting.