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Finishing the Chinese test sites for the senior high school entrance examination: The relevant requirements for modifying the test sites and teaching materials by experts are: discriminating and judging the right or wrong sentences; Modify the sick sentences from the aspects of incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure; Correct the words and phrases with obvious mistakes in the exercise; Find out the sick sentences in the paragraph and modify them; Use symbols to modify sentences with speech disorders. The principle of modifying sick sentences is to change fluency and correctness, not to modify language and not to change the original intention of sentences. The questions are mainly multiple-choice questions. Correctly grasping the sentence structure and understanding the types of common sick sentences and their modification methods are the basic coping strategies. When reviewing, we should pay special attention to four aspects of language diseases: incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure. There are language errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs, please correct them. ① A new pattern of mass cultural activities of "singing red songs, reading classics, telling stories and spreading proverbs" is taking shape in our city, and creating and sending red short messages has become a common practice. ② Bayu culture and Hongyan culture are the origins of creating red short messages, and the purpose of encouraging Chongqing people to create is to stimulate Chongqing people's recognition of their own culture. ③ By sending red short messages, we can further improve the quality of Chongqing citizens while developing and inheriting culture. (l) First, the redundant word _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ should be deleted. (2) If the second place is not properly matched, it should be changed to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. (3) If the composition in the third place is incomplete, add _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ at the end of the sentence. (4) The fourth word order is improper and should be adjusted to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. A: (1) Delete "situation" or "mode" first (only "mode" can be deleted). (2) Secondly, the word "source" should be changed to "source". (3) Third, we should add "activities of" at the end of the sentence. (4) Fourth, the position of "development" and "inheritance" should be changed. Perspective: this is a test to modify the sick sentences in the paragraph. There are four underlined sentences in the whole paragraph, and the proposer lists four common reasons at the end of the paragraph, which candidates can modify separately. Because the reasons are listed in the test questions, the review difficulty is reduced to some extent. Therefore, to solve this problem, candidates only need to modify one by one according to the reasons. Analysis of Common Mistakes One of the following sentences without swearing is () A. Maoming in midsummer is a harvest season. B. Cultivating students' thinking ability is an important criterion to measure the success of a class. By studying the "Fire Safety, Caring for Life-A Letter to Parents" issued by the school, all our parents have been educated. D During May Day this year, there were too few trash cans in some scenic spots in our city, which led to tourists littering. In this regard, we believe that the scenic spot management department is not without responsibility. Answer: b analysis: this is a multiple-choice question, which requires candidates to choose a topic without speech barriers. The proposition sets up language barriers from three aspects and requires candidates to analyze them. Sentence a is not collocated properly. "Maoming" is not a "season" but should be changed to "Maoming's midsummer (season) is the harvest season". Sentence C is incomplete and has no subject, so "pass" or "make" should be removed. If sentence D is incorrect, we should remove "not" or change "not without" to "not without". If the examinee doesn't know the reason of the ill sentence, he may lose points because of the wrong choice. Improve the ability to practice my senior high school entrance examination 1. In the following sentences, there is no language defect () A. Students are full of confidence in whether they can get good grades. As soon as he walked into the playground, he felt a warm atmosphere and a happy smile. C thoroughly implement the central decision-making spirit and accelerate the construction of the economic zone on the west side of the Taiwan Straits. D. the information on the internet is not only rich, but also convenient and fast to find. (Fuzhou, Fujian Province, 2009) 2. In the following sentences, the correct choice is () A. Through thirty years of reform and opening up, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes. B according to Xinhua news agency on June 13, the number of patients with influenza a (H 1N 1) in China decreased by 1.2 times. C. food safety has become a major issue related to the national economy and people's livelihood. D. Affected by the financial crisis, about 20,000 to 30,000 large and small factories closed down in Guangdong alone. (2009 Hechi City, Guangxi Province, senior high school entrance examination questions) 3. One of the following sentences is () A. Seeing graduation photo in front of me, Xiao Xin can't help but think of the three years when everyone played together and studied at the same table. B in the face of influenza epidemic, governments at all levels take timely preventive measures to ensure the safety of people's lives. C being able to choose the right destination after graduation is a sign of a person's maturity. No matter how perfect the wings are, birds will never fly in the blue sky without the help of air. (Liuzhou City, Guangxi Province, 2009) 4. There is a language defect in each of the following two sentences. Please modify them in the way you like and keep the original intention. (1) China ancient Qigong has been used in competitive sports, which can adjust the athletes' nervousness before the competition. (2) Sincerity is not only as real as bread in life and truth in thought, but also breeds nobility and simplicity. (Examination questions of Fuxin City, Liaoning Province in 2009) 5. Modify the following sentences. (1) We should carry forward and inherit the perseverance and pioneering spirit of Emperor Yan of Shennong. (2) Paying attention to reading in and out of class is the key to learning Chinese well. 6. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraphs, please find out and correct them. In July this year, a total solar eclipse will occur in the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River in China. The total solar eclipse lasted for more than two hours. (3) The astronomical spectacle of total solar eclipse will have a certain impact on the natural environment and social life. To this end, Jiangsu is carrying out a series of popular science publicity activities for the total solar eclipse. During the May Day holiday, we will go for an outing together. Green fields, green willows, colorful wildflowers and other plants deeply attracted us. We ran and danced, and laughter spread far and far ... This outing brought us closer to nature and increased the fun of life. Modify the sentence: (Qingdao, Shandong Province in 2009) 8. There are two underlined sentences in the following paragraph, so please correct them one by one. The word order can be adjusted, words can be added, deleted or replaced, but the meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed. (1) Yanhe River is not only the sea route of Huai 'an, but also the main waterway of northern Jiangsu. In recent years, Huai 'an has accelerated the construction of Yanhe waterway regulation project and opened a high-speed waterway connecting Huai 'an and Lianyungang. (2) With the official navigation of Yanhe waterway, it will greatly promote the regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta. Revision ①: (1) Revision: (2) Revision: (1) Revision: (2) Revision. China is a country with a cultural tradition of 5,000 years, and the Chinese nation has been a "harmonious" nation since ancient times. (2) It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is concentrated in one sentence. ③ It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture. (1) Please choose one of the three words given in the first sentence and write it on the line below. (2) The second sentence lacks punctuation. Please write the punctuated sentences on the horizontal line below. (3) The third sentence has language defects. Please write the revised sentence on the line below. (2009 Senior High School Entrance Examination in Shaanxi Province) (2009 Senior High School Entrance Examination in Xianning City, Hubei Province) II Special Simulation Training 1. In the following sentences, the meaning is clear: () A. She made toys that two children like from waste. B: I'll persuade the teacher to go with you this time, so that you can play better. Towards a prosperous and prosperous hometown. Scientists in China have made many achievements by using the scientific data detected by Chang 'e-1 satellite orbiting the moon. 2. In the following sentences, what is not wrong is () A. Through dragon boat races and dumplings, Qu Yuan's spirit of "loyalty, patriotism and perseverance" can be passed on. B. What a beneficial influence my first teacher has had on my exposure to and love for literature! C. the vitality of literary works lies in whether it can provide readers with rich, novel and high-quality spiritual food. D. Now that medicine is developed, it may not be possible to transplant memory. 3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not wrong is (). 4. The following sentences are wrong, please correct them. (1) Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses were unearthed in Lintong, east of Xi, more than two thousand years ago. Correction: (2) In order to prevent such air leakage accidents from happening again, we have strengthened safety education and management. Correction: (3) Since June 1 2008, the sale, use and production of ultra-thin shopping bags with a thickness of less than 0.025mm are prohibited nationwide. Correction: 5. Please point out the mistakes in the following advertising words. (1) Everything becomes smaller except its function. (Copier advertisement) (2) Moisturizing day cream is especially suitable for any skin. Below is a short message from a student to his teacher. There is something wrong with this letter. Please help me correct it. Carnation in May, without the elegance and holiness of peony and the reputation of lotus, just silently exudes a refreshing fragrance, just like your love. (1) The word "elegance and holiness" fails to capture the characteristics of peony. Please replace it with an idiom. (2) There is something wrong with the underlined sentence, please correct it. 7. The following is a passage from a junior high school student's exercise. There is an error in the underlined part. Please correct it as required. However, who has seen the real essence now? In the Arabian Peninsula in West Asia, there is a lot of gunfire; On the Loess Plateau in China, the Yellow River water rolling eastward is mixed with thousands of sediments and heading for the Bohai Sea; In the Amazon plain of Latin America, tens of thousands of trees fell peacefully under the chainsaw ... who saw nature crying? (1)A matching is incorrect, please correct it. (2) The language in place B is not concise, please delete redundant words. (3) There is a word in C that is not used properly. Please replace it with the right word. 8. The following four slogans were collected by students in the street during comprehensive learning activities. One of them swears. Please find out and correct it. A. The milk of culture nurtures the new seedlings on campus, and the spring water of art moistens the flowers of the motherland. B. The standard language is the through train of the information superhighway. C. Warmly congratulate Qixing Restaurant on winning the title of "China Famous Hunan Cuisine Store". Let the ideal and kite Qi Fei, let the hope be with the spring. 9. There are errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs, please correct them. Daya Bay in winter is a season of blooming flowers and beautiful scenery. It was born in the spring after 30 years of reform and opening up, and it embodies the hard work of several generations of nuclear power people. At this time, Daya Bay nuclear power base is full of vitality everywhere. (1)(2) 10. The following paragraphs are wrong, please correct them as required. The Journey to the West is shooting a new version of the TV series, and I'm a little worried. (2) There are several versions of The Journey to the West, some of which can only be regarded as science fiction films or even romance films. I am really worried that I will make a common fault this time, but I just regard the classic works as science fiction again. (3) I've seen a lot of new TV dramas with classic themes. They often have a foolish understanding of the original works and pursue modernity excessively, but they have dispelled the cultural charm and value of the original works and lost the profundity of the cultural connotation of the famous works. (1) The first sentence is out of order, so it should be changed to: (2) The second sentence is mixed, so it should be changed to: (3) The third sentence is not properly matched with the verb and the object, so it should be changed to: Reference answer: 1. Elaboration of the senior high school entrance examination questions, 1. D2. C3. a4 .( 1) will 5.( 1) Swap "carry-over" and "inheritance". (2) Delete "whether". 6.② Delete "multiple" or "left and right"; ④ Delete "series" or move "series" after "publicity"; 7. Green fields, green willows and colorful wild flowers deeply attracted us. 8.① Salt River is not only the sea route of Huai 'an, but also the trunk route of northern Jiangsu. (2) (Delete "He Sui") The official navigation of Yanhe Waterway will greatly promote the regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta. 9.( 1) Advocating (2) It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is embodied in a word "harmony". (3) It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture. 10. After three years of junior high school life, (plus "we") have some initial life experiences, which can arouse many beautiful memories in our hearts and inspire us to constantly improve ourselves and know ourselves (transposition). What is particularly unforgettable is the inculcation of those old teachers. (1) You can insert "we" before "three years" or "already"; (2) You can delete "older" or "old". (2) Special simulation training 1. D2. B3. B4 .( 1) "More than 2,000 years ago" should be placed before "cultural relics". (2) Delete "none". (3) It should be changed to "production". (65438+) Changed "relaxed and happy" to "refreshed". 7.( 1) The smoke of gunfire is everywhere. (2) Delete "scroll". (3) Change "calm" to "miserable", "sad" or "helpless". 8. Warmly congratulate Qixing Restaurant on winning the title of "Famous Hunan Cuisine Store in China". 9.( 1) In winter, Daya Bay is full of birds and flowers, with beautiful scenery. (or: Daya Bay in winter is a place full of flowers and beautiful scenery. ) (2) It was born in the spring of reform and opening up, and after 30 years of wind and rain, it embodies the painstaking efforts of several generations of nuclear power people. 10.( 1) "TV series The Journey to the West is being filmed" was changed to "new TV series The Journey to the West is being filmed". (2) "Only classic works" was changed to "Only classic works were re-sci-fi". (3) "But the cultural charm and value of the original work were eliminated" was changed to "But the cultural charm and value of the original work were lost".