How to write a composition according to dad's characteristics

1. Write a composition about your father's characteristics. You can decide your own characteristics. Kneel down and look at your father. He seems to be always so tall. Looking at my father, his shoulders always look so safe; Looking at my father, his face always seems so kind; Looking at my father ... I don't know since when, it has become a habit for me to look up at my father.

This kind of parallelism sentence should not be used at the beginning of writing a family composition, but can be written directly from the bottom.

When I was a child, I was my father's sidekick. I was very active at that time, and I couldn't be idle for a moment. I only know playing with my father, holding his wide and warm hand tightly, feeling the warmth of his palm, and unwilling to let go. Two round eyes looked at his father's back from time to time. Although my father is not very tall and straight, even a little stout, he is tall and straight, full of confidence and strength. Looking up at my father's back, I feel full of security now. I feel that even if the sky falls, my father can carry it for me. I felt my confidence doubled and even my head was lifted unconsciously.

The calendar at home was torn off page by page and replaced with one after another. I have full confidence in my father. After several years of madness, I gradually left my father's side and made a number of friends of my own. Naturally, my friend replaced my father. I spent my time with my friend bit by bit, but I forgot my father.

Looking up, I found my father. I learned to be like a child, but suddenly I found that my father was not what he used to be-he was old! At that time, my father's body, which has always been tall and straight in my memory, has long been slightly hunched over by the burden of life, and his back, which has always been full of confidence, has also been smoothed over by trivial matters in life, making him look slightly hunched over. When he passed me, he reminded me of the fallen leaves in the autumn wind. When I took my father's hand again, was it still the hand I knew and missed? Those are a pair of hands that make me completely strange. The shocking blue veins on my hand beat my heart, and the thick cocoon on my palm shook my soul.

Yes, I am growing up and my father is getting old. My eyes are moist and my nose is sour. My father bought me everything with his love, his health and everything today, but he never complained. We had some rebellions in adolescence, which made the two generations have more generation gaps and hardly had time to talk to him. But my father is working hard for us silently, and his back is a little lonely. Maybe he didn't expect anything. Seeing my growth, he was comforted by his inexpressibility. This is his happiest thing. As a daughter, how much have I done for my father? Even if I talk to him, I always say I have no time.

Looking up at my father again, I know that my father's devotion and love to me are worth looking up to and returning with my life. In my heart, my father's figure has a height that no one can surpass.

Father, my heart will always be high.

General comment: This essay about my father is very emotional and true, and the writing is very smooth, but it is empty and difficult to impress people. I suggest this classmate read Zhu Ziqing's back again and see how Zhu Ziqing wrote about his father through the details of his father sending him to the train. The biggest problem with this composition is the lack of examples and details. Writing a character's composition, without examples and details, is basically a failure, even if the text is no matter how good. In addition, from the structural point of view, this composition basically conforms to the format of the exam-oriented composition. At the beginning, there are three juxtaposed sentences, the topic is located, the middle is written in detail, and finally the topic is concerned. It is ok to cope with the exam in this way, but if you look at the requirements of prose creation, it seems deliberate, artificial and unnatural, which runs counter to the affectionate and memorable tone in the composition.

2. Please help me with the composition describing my father's personality. The biggest feature of dad is that he is always in a hurry.

It was sunny last Saturday afternoon. My mother and I are carrying hoes to go upstairs and hoe the ground. When going out to pay, my mother said to my father, "Remember to take the bucket to pour the vegetables later." At this time, the father who just woke up stretched himself and nodded in agreement.

In the vegetable field, my mother hoes the ground and I pick up stones. As time goes by, the sun has only half a face left. But there's no sign of dad At this moment, I suddenly heard a beep and went majestically. It turned out that my mother broke the handle of the hoe. Mother told me to go home and get another hoe. I rushed home, opened the door and saw two buckets with a pole on them. Looking up, I saw my father crossing his legs and sitting in front of the computer playing chess with relish. I said to my father with a hoe, "Dad, it's getting dark. Don't go!" " Dad turned around, smiled a little naughtily and replied, "well, wait a little longer." I picked up my hoe and went downstairs, thinking, "What a freak! Everything is ready. Why don't you come down? "In the vegetable field, I reported my father's situation to my mother. Mother said angrily, "This man has no idea of time at all. "

After a while, the sun has completely set. I saw my father walking slowly with one hand in his pocket and the other hand holding the pole, looking around. The two barrels on the pole swung rhythmically.

When mom saw dad coming, she immediately complained, "What time is it? What a ghost. " Dad thought so, smiled and said, "What's the hurry? Just now, the sun was so bright that it was dry after being drenched all over the floor. Now, the water is coming. " I saw my father scooping up a ladle of water, watering the vegetables and watering the vegetable fields … slowly. When the last ray of sunshine in the sunset disappeared, dad put down the bucket, rested on his hips in one hand and held a water ladle in the other, pointing to the vegetable field and saying, "All right. You see, this dish won't be basked in the sun, but it can absorb water all night, can't it? " I thought to myself: Hehe, Dad is slow, but it makes sense.

Dad's unhurried is not a bad thing. Like today, how many people are busy for fame, money and high officials, and finally get one disease or another. It is better to live a carefree life like my father.

My father is a driver, and I seldom see him every day. I know, dad is busy for us again.

Speaking of my father, one of his greatest characteristics is his eyes. When father laughed, his eyes narrowed into a crack. Therefore, whenever our father laughs, we say to our father, "Father, can your eyes still see us?" He laughed heartily when he said this.

Relatively speaking, my father is more liberal. Although he doesn't read much, he knows a lot. Father often teaches us to love our family, and brothers and sisters should unite, so that everyone can help us when we have difficulties in the future. Father attaches great importance to family relations. He often tells us that affection is priceless, even more important than life. Especially the sentence he wrote himself, "There is no absolute thing in the world, only family is the most important." Father's education made us deeply touched.

Father can understand our thoughts and trust us. I still remember when I was a child, our children went to our neighbor's house to play. Then the neighbor's money disappeared. They all think I took it, but my father doesn't think so. My father came up to me and asked me kindly, "Xiaoyu, did you take the neighbor's money?" I replied, "I didn't." My dad didn't ask me again, so he went over to his neighbor and said, "My child didn't take your money, please look again." My father's profound understanding of righteousness has benefited me a lot.

Father is very caring. My father always donates 1000 yuan to the disaster area. Actually, my family is not rich. My father is very happy. He said to us: "This is our compatriot in China. We need help when we are in trouble." Not only that, my father took out money to donate in the last earthquake in Japan. Father's behavior made us start saving money and donating money.

In fact, what moved us most was the sentence that my father posted in front of the stage, "Even if people all over the world look down on your child, parents should appreciate him with tears!" Hug him! Praise him! Always be proud of the life you created! "Father takes this sentence very seriously, and we are all influenced by his emotions. We understand that father is for us and father is making money for us. In short, everything my father did was for us.

Therefore, I want to say to my father, "We will study hard when we grow up and repay your kindness."

I love my father.

3. Features of Dad [Features of Dad] Features of Dad Text: Features of Dad Xu Zhiyu, Class 3 (5), No.2 Experimental Primary School, Wuxue City, Hubei Province My father is very tall, with black curly hair, small eyes and a high nose. He is handsome and has the characteristics of his father. My father has a gentle temper and always smiles at people. His colleagues and my neighbors all say that I have a good-natured father. I think so too. My father seldom scolds me. The first thing he does when he comes home from work every day is to ask me with a smile how my homework is, the composition "Characteristics of Dad" in the third grade of primary school. When he sees that my homework is correct, he will squint with laughter. When I find mistakes in my homework, he will take me aside and patiently explain them to me until I finally understand. Only when I made the same mistake again and again because of carelessness will my father seriously criticize me. When I am free, my father always plays games and badminton with me like a good friend, which makes me feel very happy. This is my father, a loving, caring and good-natured father. Instructor: submitted by Mei: April 2, 2005122:13: 36.

4. Composition topic: "My father's characteristics" My father is tall, with dark curly hair, small eyes and a high nose.

He is very handsome.

Dad has a gentle temper and always smiles at people. His colleagues and my neighbors are both.

Said I had a good-natured father. I think so, too. Dad seldom scolds me and comes home from work every day.

The first thing is to ask me with a smile how my homework is going. When he saw that all my homework was correct, his eyes

You will laugh in a line; When he finds that there is something wrong with my homework, he will patiently take me aside.

Explain it to me until I finally understand. Only when I make the same mistake again and again because of carelessness.

When I am wrong, my father will pull his face down and criticize me seriously. When I am free, my father will always be like a good father.

My friends play games and badminton with me like that, which makes me feel very happy.

This is my father, a loving, caring and good-natured father. How much I like him!

5. Composition of dad's personality characteristics: dad's personality.

In my childhood memory, my father was always regarded as a joke by us. I didn't call him dad, I just told him to laugh.

My father likes to forget his distress and pain with smiles and songs. He is very calm and always likes to meet the challenges of life with smiles and songs. His only hobby is listening to music. When riding a bike, MP3 is always there.

Once my father accidentally cut his hand when he was doing something, and he had several stitches in the hospital. When he came back, his mother said she was still laughing, but kept silent. Her mother scolded him, and he was still singing Xiao Shenyang's Beautiful Beauty as if nothing had happened. Well, I have to admire his strength. With a few stitches in his hand, he felt as if nothing had happened and he was still in the mood to sing. I think he is crazy.

On another occasion, their boss called for the goods and said that they would be needed in a few days. Dad also giggled and said humorously, "Manager Zhang, didn't you say it was not urgent? So I didn't go. " I laughed twice, and one of them was anxious. My mother whispered, "Be serious, your brain is broken by the door, and you still laugh. That's money! " But dad still smiled and said, "Manager Zhang, I'll get it done tomorrow. Hang up! " Then he hung up.

My father didn't read many books and didn't understand the philosophy of life, but he could never be discouraged by the hardships of life, never bow to difficulties and always smile at the storms of life.

6. How to describe my father's character My father is an excellent senior engineer. He has a round face and a pair of nearsighted glasses on his high nose. I look a lot like him. The way we are together is like a mold. My father goes out early and comes back late every day. He works very hard. He likes smoking, drinking coke and playing computer games, but I think smoking is bad for his father, because it will affect his health. As for playing computer games, when he plays computer games, it's as if he got into the computer and forgot everything. However, there is one thing worth learning. Sometimes he gets off work late and can't catch up with the stock market class, so he will ask his mother to help him record it. After returning home, he will go to class and study stocks. I admire my father's family-oriented and studious spirit. He often says that the world is changing and making progress every day. We should keep learning advanced things to keep up with the times. My mother also taught me to learn from my father's studious spirit. In fact, everyone has advantages and disadvantages, but our parents love us selflessly. Whenever I ask my father for advice about something I don't understand in my study, he always takes pains to help me solve it. If I still don't understand, my father will patiently explain it to me again and again until I understand it. Finally, my father's efforts brought me good grades one after another. When I behave well, my father always tells me not to be proud and to keep working hard. What he often says is-"Praise for two minutes, don't be proud!" I know everyone's father is different, but my father is always the most perfect in my heart.