What a bad sentence~~~~

1. Suzhou, Hangzhou, Dalian and Kunming are tourist attractions in the south of the Yangtze River in my country.

Change: Suzhou. Hangzhou is a tourist destination in the south of the Yangtze River in my country.

2. I went to plant trees last week.

Change: I went to plant trees last week.

3. Today, all the third-grade class 1 students watched a movie.

Change: Today, all the students in Class 1 of Grade 3 watched a movie.

4. The one with the best homework and the best grades in my class is Xiaohong.

Change: The person with the best grades in my class is Xiaohong.

5. There is a little clay monkey on my desk.

Change: There is a little clay monkey on my desk.

6. This is an interesting book of fairy tales.

Modification: This is an interesting fairy tale book.

7. The students are cleaning the classroom enthusiastically.

Change: The students are cleaning the classroom in full swing.

8. After reading "Prometheus", I couldn't calm down for a long time.

Change: After reading "Prometheus", my mood could not be calm for a long time.

9. I often recall past events.

Change: I often recall things from the past.

10. It rained all morning this morning.

Change: It rained all morning today.

Mock test questions (answer time: 20 minutes)

1. Although Xiao Ming sincerely accepted the criticism and resolutely corrected his mistakes.

2. With the help of the teacher, the shortcomings were corrected.

3. On the day of "June 1", I came to school with relaxed steps and excitement.

4. During class, we must pay attention and listen to the teacher carefully.

5. We must develop a good idea of ??not spitting.

6. my country has the largest population in the world.

7. Natural science is of great interest to me.

8. It rained all day early this morning.

9. The students cherish their time very much and consciously respect discipline.

10. Wang Xiaoying has been rated as one of the “Three Good” students for three consecutive years.

Answers to the test questions

1. Although Xiao Ming sincerely accepted the criticism and resolutely corrected his mistakes.

Xiao Ming not only accepted the criticism sincerely, but also resolutely corrected his mistakes.

2. With the help of the teacher, the shortcomings were corrected.

With the help of the teacher, I corrected my shortcomings.

3. On the day of "June 1st", I came to school with relaxed steps and excitement.

On the day of "June 1", I came to school with relaxed steps and excitement.

4. During class, we must pay attention and listen to the teacher carefully.

In class, we must listen to the teacher attentively.

Or During class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.

5. We must develop a good idea of ??not spitting.

We must develop a good habit of not spitting.

6. my country has the largest population in the world.

Our country has one of the largest populations in the world.

7. Natural science is of great interest to me.

I am very interested in natural science.

8. It rained all day early this morning.

It rained all day today. Or This morning, it rained for a while.

9. The students cherish their time very much and consciously respect discipline.

Students cherish time very much and consciously abide by discipline.

10. Wang Xiaoying has been rated as one of the “Three Good” students for three consecutive years.

Wang Xiaoying has been rated as a "Three Good" student for three consecutive years.