Sentences describing the actions of small animals

The docile lamb, the crowing rooster, the puppy that can look after the house, the clever and lively little white rabbit, the singing bird, the pigeon that can bring news... So, how to be truthful? How about describing them? First you have to get familiar with them and observe them carefully. Only by observing carefully can we describe it concretely. When observing, you can generally look at the appearance characteristics, activities, living habits and other aspects in order. When writing, you should describe the results of your observations in a selective, focused, and orderly manner. Specifically, when describing small animals, you should pay attention to the following two points:

1. Describe the appearance and activities

To describe a small animal, you must first describe its appearance, and Look carefully at its head, tail, coat color, limbs, shape, characteristics, and color. For example, the following paragraph about a puppy:

1 "On Sunday, I came back from my grandma's house. On the bus, I saw an older sister carrying a cute little black dog in a purple bag. Xiaohei The dog has a pair of fur-like triangular ears on its head, hanging down softly, and its two round black eyes keep looking around. The little furry ball. His mouth was tightly closed and he didn't say a word. He looked like a good child who didn't make any noise! ??

I really like this little black dog lying in the bag. ”

This exercise was written by a primary school student who is only in the first grade. Although the article is short, it describes it comprehensively: time, place, appearance of the animal described, and my own feelings about it. All metaphors and modifiers are very vivid and appropriate.

2 Then look at its living habits, how the small animal eats, plays, and sleeps. Observe these in detail and describe them in detail. For example:

Little goose

"Oh, the little goose has hatched! The little goose has hatched!" I clapped my hands and shouted happily, I love the little goose the most. .

These newly hatched goslings were all wet and their coat color was not very good-looking, but their red feet piqued my interest.

The next day, I let these little guys out to feed. Their fur has dried and is golden and soft. Although their feet are still soft and they can't stand up, they are all very lively. When they put them down, they flop on the ground as if they are wrestling. How funny!

When the little goose sleeps, its little neck shortens, and its head looks like it is covered with velvet. They wake up easily. If there are gentle footsteps, they will open their eyes and look. If there is no sound, they will go back to sleep.

More than ten days later, as soon as I opened the cover of the goose cage, they were about to rush out. One gosling stood on top of another and jumped out! Their fur began to turn white and their feet became less soft. All of a sudden, they ran to my feet to ask for something to eat. I put some rice on the plate first, holding two large vegetable leaves in my hands. They were sipping the rice with their mouths, but their eyes were staring at my vegetable leaves. Vegetable leaves seemed to be more delicious than rice. A little goose simply jumped up and sipped, then fell down! Made me laugh out loud.

These little guys are very humane. As soon as I get home, they run around at my feet and are very affectionate. I often talk to them, and sometimes they even answer! So, I regard the little goose as my friend.

The article vividly shows the gosling's hatching, eating, sleeping and temperament. The language is lively, clearly organized, the description is lifelike, and full of childishness. The emotions between the little author and the gosling are contained in the lines.

3 To describe the appearance of small animals, focus on static description, and to describe the activities of small animals, focus on dynamic description. By observing and describing in an orderly and hierarchical manner from static to dynamic, small animals can be written clearly, meticulously and touchingly.

Please read the following composition:

Monkey

I like monkeys the most, they are probably the smartest among animals. When we came to them, a monkey stared at us with bright eyes.

Its appearance is very strange: a small nose is concave inward, a small raised mouth makes a "squeaking" sound, and the hair on its body is not only shiny but also black and yellow. The little ears are erect, and the two little paws scratch the scalp from time to time, making strange looks and making people laugh. I took out a piece of bread and threw it to it. Unexpectedly, it didn't take it. It just tested it with its paws, then retracted it, and looked at me with its eyes. After a while, it grabbed the bread and ate it hungrily. After eating, it looked at me with pleading eyes and stretched out its paws to ask me for food, so I threw another piece of candy to it. It quickly peeled off the candy wrapper, put it in its mouth and started chewing. After reading this excerpt, the cute image of the little monkey will be vividly displayed in front of us. Therefore, such a touching effect is produced by the author's careful observation and careful description from both static aspects - appearance and dynamic aspects - life habits.

When describing the appearance, the composition first uses the sentence "very strange appearance" to summarize the overall impression, and then describes its concave nose, protruding mouth, and dark and transparent eyes in order. Yellow fur and little paws that are constantly scratching. After reading this, we will definitely fall in love with the little monkey. Then he changed his mind and wrote about the scene of a little monkey eating bread. The author threw a piece of bread to it. The little monkey "didn't take it" at first. He just "tested" it with his paws and looked at me with his eyes. Finally, he "wolfed it down and ate it." Such a step-by-step description is detailed and detailed. It was so specific that it produced a touching effect and truly showed the cuteness of the little monkey to people.

We use an outline to express the idea of ????this composition: Monkey: 1. Appearance: 1. General - strange appearance; 2. Specific - nose, small mouth, color, ears; 2. , Living habits: Grabbing bread.

Read the original text and the outline to better understand the idea and writing sequence of this article. From this we can learn methods of observation and layout.

2. Write your love into the composition

The composition is to use my hands to write my heart. Write your own emotions. We love small animals, and when describing them, we should also integrate our favorite emotions into the words with our pen. Let readers feel our love as soon as they read the text.

There are also many ways to express feelings: sometimes describe the appearance and appearance of small animals in detail, and integrate your own emotions into them; sometimes use concise sentences to express feelings directly; sometimes, put These two methods are used interchangeably. The writing style is flexible and eclectic.

Please read the following composition:

Frogs Prey

I like frogs very much. In summer, I often go to the pond to watch frogs.

Frogs like to hide in the grass and occasionally chirp. The time when they sing loudest is after heavy rain. Whenever one barks at this time, the one next to it will also bark. Dozens or even hundreds of frogs cackle non-stop, and the sound can be transmitted several miles away. It is like a majestic symphony!

Frogs have fat bodies, and some are as long as seven or eight centimeters. They are dressed in yellow-green or dark green clothes, with their snow-white bellies exposed. Their heads are broad and flat, like a triangle. It has a pair of big round eyes on its head, a big mouth and a small nose.

Frogs love to eat small insects, so it is interesting to observe their hunting movements. One day, I squatted quietly behind the big tree on the edge of the pond and observed carefully. A frog squatted on the ground, its mouth open and its face raised, waiting for something. Suddenly, a small insect flew over, and the frog suddenly jumped up, hooked its tongue, and fell to the ground again. The bug disappeared, and the frog returned to its original appearance, waiting patiently.

Frogs are really good at catching insects. I heard the farmer uncle say: If you count, a frog can kill at least 10,000 pests in a year.

It is really our good friend!

This composition is about "Frogs Prey". The writing method is slightly different from the previous article "Monkey": this composition uses the sentence "I like frogs very much" to summarize the center of the whole article, and then He wrote about the frog's cry, appearance, and the scene of catching insects in turn. The context is clear and the paragraphs are distinct.

So, how does the author of this essay express his feelings?

At the beginning of the article, the sentence "I love frogs very much" directly expresses the author's feelings and expresses his love. Then the word "often" is used to go to the pond to see frogs, which shows the author's deep "like" for frogs. When hearing the frog's cry, the author felt that the cry was like "a majestic symphony!" There were not many sentences, but the frog's cry was loud and beautiful, from which we also felt the author's love for the frog's cry. How deep the frog's feelings are! Why does the author have such deep feelings for frogs? Because frogs can catch at least "10,000 pests" in a year, this is the reason why the author loves frogs. Finally, the author said with emotion: "Frog" is really our good friend. The ending is powerful and the emotions expressed are true.

"Although there are rules to follow in writing, there is no fixed method." There is no one way to write about a small animal. Only by mastering a basic writing method and using it flexibly can you truly and vividly describe your favorite animals.

When describing a small animal, you should also pay attention to:

1. To highlight the key points. Describing a small animal is the same as writing about other contents. It cannot cover everything and go on and on like a "running account". You must highlight the key points. Some can focus on the appearance of the animals, and some can focus on the habits of the animals. No matter how you write, you must grasp the typical examples, highlight the key points, and describe them in detail.

2. Describe in detail. When describing any kind of small animal, you must describe it carefully and portray it carefully. Whether you are writing about appearance or living habits, you cannot write about it in a few strokes and summarize it. Especially when describing the living habits of small animals, attention should be paid to the accurate use of verbs to reproduce the scenes of small animals' activities and give people the feeling of "the things are as if they are in front of you".

3. Be organized. Describing a small animal is the same as writing other compositions. It cannot be one sentence or one stroke, and it lacks organization. Before you write, think about what to say first, what to say next, and what to say next. How do sentences connect to each other, and how do layers relate to each other? How to start, how to end, and how to put the whole article together. Only after thinking about these things before writing can the article be clear and organized.

Beautiful sentences

The rabbit's ears are big and long. As long as it hears a slight sound, it will stand up with a "swish" and turn around dexterously, looking for the sound. The place didn't return to normal until the sound disappeared.

When the little white rabbits were full, they ran around on the sand in groups of three, rolling like little snowballs.

The little tabby cat has a round head with a pair of pointed little ears, and its big green eyes are as wide as two small green lights.

The big ears of the kitten "Mimi" stand erect all day long. Whenever there is a sound, it will immediately turn there, just like a radar with special properties.

The whole body of this tabby cat is white with black spots. From a distance, it looks like a ball of snow-white cotton with a few drops of ink.

The kitten has a herringbone mouth under its nose, with 6 white beards on both sides, which are often fanned one after another, looking very impressive. A cat's whiskers are very hard, like steel needles, and the energy goes out the size of the hole.

The little black cat’s long tail is like a small whip, swaying from side to side.

The kitten has a pair of bright and flexible big eyes, and the black pupils can change: in the morning, they look like date stones; at noon, they become thin lines; at night, they turn into two green light bulbs, round. Slippery and sparkling.

When the little cat gets up in the morning, he first stretches his body, then sits up, licks a little saliva on the tip of his tongue with his two front paws, washes his face like a human, and then licks it with his tongue. own fur until there is a little shine.

The puppy's golden fur was shiny, as if it had just been oiled.

This innocent and cute poodle has a small black tail that swings like a rolling ball.

The little black dog has a shiny black fur, as shiny and smooth as black satin; its snow-white paws are like four plum blossoms; and its pouting little tail is always leisurely. Swinging constantly.

The black dog neither roared nor barked, like a distinguished warrior, majestic and experienced. He squatted there motionless, spreading the long velvet-like hair on his chest.

A dog's bark is not as feeble as a cat's meow, nor is it as terrifying as a tiger's cry, but full of energy, making it sound majestic and crisp.

This big fat pig has a round butt and a big belly. Because it is too rich in fat, it has to walk slowly, like a grand master.

When the pig was eating, its ears flapped like a big fan, its head bounced, and its eyes stared at the food closely.

After the pig finished eating, it walked to the pen obediently, lay down lazily, and hummed from time to time, looking very satisfied. This horse has black and red fur all over its body. It is red and translucent, and is smooth and oily, as if it had just jumped out of an oil tank.

This bay-red horse has a long mane that is spread out. When it runs, its four hooves seem not to touch the ground.

Every part of this tall horse is well matched, and every muscle shows strength. It makes people feel so soft and toned at first glance.

In an instant, "Qianli Snow" smoothly rose into the air, flew across the deep ditch as if gliding, landed gently on the other side, and continued running forward.

The little donkey is so lovable, with black eyes rolling around and laughing like a little deer.

"Quack, quack, quack..." The sound of the donkey's hooves was even and monotonous, like the weight of the clock on the wall swinging. The mule raised its head, and the red tassel on the leather halter looked like a bright red cockscomb in the autumn rain.

These cows are white and black, as if they are wearing floral cotton-padded jackets.

The two eyes of this cow are as big as copper bells, and the two curved horns are green and translucent, especially the yellow hair, which is as bright as silk.

The black bull is violent and vicious, with eyes as big as ping-pong balls, red as flames, and two sharp horns on its head, as sharp as sharp blades.

The snow-white sheep are scattered on the green grassland, like flowers, like clouds, and like holy hada.

The sheep wandering on the grassland are like piles of rolling silver.

The blizzard became more and more fierce, causing the sheep to roll like cotton balls.

One peak of camel, slowly moving in the lonely smoke of the desert, like a small boat sailing in the sea, riding the wind and facing the waves. The camel's eyelashes are double. When the wind blows the sand, the double eyelashes act like guards, blocking the sand from blowing into the eyes.

The beak of the sunbird is very peculiar, like an awl, pointed, long, and slightly curved.

The sun came out and shone on the yellow feathers of the bird, making its whole body golden, just like the golden-winged bird in mythology. When we arrived in the forest, the chirping of birds seemed to be playing an endless movement, and even the slightly trembling leaves seemed to be singing.

The goldfinches sang, jumped, and sometimes fluttered, like a group of tireless children, adding more interest to this quiet villa.

The birds in this forest come in all colors and tones. Look, there are sopranos, altos, rough voices, thin voices, singers of all genres and tones, holding a singing competition here.

The peacock’s small head seems to be studded with several emerald flowers. The unfolded color screen is like a huge feather fan, with black rings, black, green and yellow, like countless big eyes. .

I saw a peacock shaking its tail. The beautiful tail was like a colorful fan in the hands of a fairy. It slowly spread out and sprinkled on it like translucent pearls. It was very beautiful. .

The peacock flies like a beautiful green cloud, floating over the top of the mountain.

I saw that the long feathers trailing behind the peacock's tail straightened up and formed a circle, like a large colorful umbrella or a round piece of colored satin.

When the peacock opens its tail, it looks like a blue gauze palace fan, and the eye spots on its tail feathers reflect light, like countless small mirrors.

There are surprisingly many peacocks there, on the roadside and in the fields, in groups of three and five, like beauties dragging their long emerald skirts, wandering around without avoiding people at all.

The swans paddled the lake water with their pink feet, and there were circles of sparkling ripples on the lake. From a distance, they looked like white sailboats swinging in the water. , and like the white clouds in the sky reflected on the water.

The white swan paddled the green lake hard with its red flippers, its body swaying like a model boat.

The swan's white porcelain-smooth feathers are without a trace of impurities, just like a thick ball of ink splashed on it, and it will all roll down without even a speck of stain on it.

A pair of snow-white swans float on the water like two huge white lotuses.

On the lake, when the swan stretches out its broad wings and beats the water with its wings, it is like a boat with leaves and sails. On the wide lake, groups of white swans wandered leisurely, like white catkins drifting in the wind.

The lake surface is calm, the water is clear to the bottom, the mountains and water blend into one, and the whiteness makes you feel like you are in a fairyland, and you never want to leave.

Sometimes the swan straightens its neck and raises its head, looking like a general; sometimes it bends its neck and lowers its head, looking as elegant as a fairy.

When the white crane spreads its beautiful wings and dances gracefully, its slender legs and elegant dance look like an outstanding "ballet master".

The red-crowned cranes flying in the sky were like reed flowers that bloomed early, and landed softly and slowly in the swamp area.

The crane is a natural dancer. Their heads are bright red, their necks are slender, their feathers are white, and their legs are slender. They are really beautiful in shape, handsome in manner, and elegant in expression.

The red-crowned crane has a bright red crown on its snow-white head, like a platinum crown with a dazzling ruby ??embedded in it.

When the crane stands, it always raises its body high, stretches its neck and looks around, and often stands for a long time. Therefore, people often use "Crane" and "Crane" to describe the graceful posture of looking around in drama and dance.

When cranes fly long distances, they often form a "V" shape or a "Y" shape. Looking from a distance, Piao Piao Ran shows an elegant and unrestrained style.

A group of wild ducks are dark on the water. Their brilliant feathers look like clusters of garlands floating in the afterglow of the setting sun.

These wild ducks all have golden-green heads, bright eyes, and a circle of gray-white feathers around their necks, as if each wild duck is wearing a string of pearl collars.

The wild duck floats leisurely, sometimes falling to the bottom of the water, and sometimes standing on the top of the waves, like a child playing on a swing.

There are a few wild ducks swimming on the lake in the distance, like small radio-controlled warships, so heroic and majestic.

The colorful pheasant, with its chest puffed out, stepped out of the grass nest like a proud general.

The feathers on the golden rooster's body are brightly colored and shiny, like wearing a luxurious dress.

The golden rooster stands in the sun with its wings spread out, just like a phoenix rising to the sun, its whole body is golden and golden, and it is extremely beautiful.

The golden rooster has a well-proportioned body, strong feet, a yellow crown on its head, a golden "collar" on its neck, and golden shawls on its shoulders.

The male mandarin duck has gorgeous feathers, with a brown back, a white belly, a crest on its head, and long white eyebrow lines behind its eyes, as if it had just put on makeup.

In the reed pond, mandarin ducks often stretch their necks long and spread their wings to beat the water.

Pairs of colorful mandarin ducks played, chased, and swam side by side in the water. From time to time they made a low and soft cry of "coo, coo, coo, coo," as if they were lovers whispering.

The body structure of a wild goose is very much like a boat, with a pair of webbed feet like two oars. The flat mouth has a jagged notch, which is convenient for cutting off the young leaves and young stems of plants and for feeding on the roots and seeds of aquatic plants.

A group of wild geese flew southward with a "cuckoo, quack, quack" sound, sometimes forming a "human" character, and sometimes forming a "one" character. The rows of wild geese spread their wings and fly south like a victorious marching team, echoing each other and moving forward.

A group of geese flapped their wings in the glow and flew leisurely from the grass. They lined up in the word "one" and flew into the sky, like warriors on an expedition, shouting and singing, their voices full of belief in victory.

The flock of wild geese formed a neat herringbone shape, flying forward with the same goal. They shouted loudly in the sky, as if solemnly announcing: Their team is neat, their goal is is clear.

The feathers on the kingfisher's head are like an olive turban, embroidered with emerald green patterns, the feathers on its back are like a light green spring coat, and the feathers on its belly are like an auburn shirt.

A kingfisher suddenly flew out from among the willow trees, flew across the water and went to another bush. Its beautiful feathers took away everyone’s attention

Teaching preparation:

1. Students observe small animals before class. 2. The teacher searches for information about animals.

Teaching key points: guide students to grasp the characteristics of animals when writing. 1. Play the "Animal World" video and introduce new lessons.

1. Question: Are the animals in the animal world interesting? What animals are there and what do they look like?

Summary: The students have introduced so many small animals in the video. Now let’s talk about the animals we saw before class.

2. Make a request to speak. Just talk about whatever animal you like, and grasp the characteristics of the animal and speak smoothly and coherently.

3. Students combine voluntarily and practice speaking in groups. Students who like the same kind of small animals voluntarily form groups and talk about what small animals they like and their appearance. Each group recommends members to talk about their favorite small animals. ① Talk about the appearance of animals. For example, what are the characteristics of eyes and ears?

2. Examples lead the way and guide writing. Click on the courseware: ① Squirrel is a beautiful little animal. Its exquisite little face is embedded with a pair of sparkling little eyes. He has gray-brown fur that is as smooth as if it had been oiled. A big fluffy tail is always tilted upward, looking particularly beautiful. (Note: First, always write about the beautiful appearance of the squirrel, and then write down the beautiful appearance in the order of head, body, and tail.) ② A body of jet-black feathers, smooth and beautiful, a pair of handsome and brisk wings, and a pair of scissor-like tails , made up such a lively and cute little swallow. (Note: The dotted words make the appearance of the little swallow vivid.)

It’s a little more, please read it patiently, I believe it will be helpful to you

Reference: ~~大Part of myself