The first volume of grade five 13 class

Lesson 13 of the first volume of the fifth grade of People's Education Publishing House "Enlightenment from Fishing".

Text:

That year, I just turned 1 1 years old. One day, as usual, my father and I went fishing on an island in Lake New Hampshire.

This is the night before the bass fishing open day. My father and I put the bait separately, then raised the fishing rod and threw the fishing line out. Colorful ripples splashed on the lake under the sunset glow. After a while, the moon rose and the lake turned silver.

After a long time, the fishing rod suddenly shook violently. A big guy must have taken the bait. I put it away carefully and manipulated it skillfully. Maybe the fish tried to get rid of my hook and kept jumping and wagging its tail. The lake makes a "snapping" sound from time to time, splashing a lot of water. I waited until the fish was exhausted from the struggle and quickly pulled it ashore. Ah, such a big fish! I have never seen it before. Or bass. My father and I proudly admired this beautiful big bass and watched the gills swaying gently in the silver moonlight.

Father struck a match and looked at his watch. It's afternoon 10, and there are still two hours before the bass catch. My father stared at the bass for a long time, and then turned to me, "Son, you have to put it back in the lake."

"dad! Why? " I asked eagerly.

"You will catch other fish." Father said quietly.

"But I won't catch such a big fish." I argued loudly and even cried.

I looked up and looked around again. It is quiet everywhere. In the bright moonlight, I can't see the shadow of others. I turned my begging eyes to my father again.

Although no one saw us, let alone knew when I caught this bass, I clearly knew from my father's unquestionable voice that his words were not negotiable. I slowly took the hook off the bass lip and reluctantly put it back in the lake. The bass swung vigorously and disappeared into the lake in an instant.

In a blink of an eye, 34 years later, this depressed child has become a famous architect in new york. I have never caught a fish as big as that night 34 years ago. However, in the course of my life, I have met an attractive "fish" similar to that bass more than once. When I am faced with moral choices again and again, I will remember what my father once warned me: morality is just a simple question of right and wrong, but it is difficult to practice. If people receive such strict education as putting the caught big bass back into the lake, they will gain the courage and strength of moral practice.

That moonlit night 34 years ago left a permanent memory and lifelong inspiration in my mind.

Textbook description

[solve the problem]

This article is a narrative work. This paper tells the indelible influence of going fishing with my father when I was 1 1 years old.

[structural analysis]

By recalling that "I" went bass fishing with my father when I was 1 1 years old, it shows that honesty and trustworthiness and obeying the law are moral principles that people should grasp when facing various temptations. The full text *** 1 1 natural paragraph can be divided into two parts according to the content.

The first part (paragraph 1 ~ 10) recalls that I went fishing with my father when I was 1 1 years old.

The first floor (1~3) When I was 1 1 years old, "I" went fishing with my father the night before the bass fishing open day, and I caught a big bass.

On the second floor (paragraph 4 ~ 10), it was written that my father asked me to release fish, and I was puzzled and depressed.

The second part (1 1 paragraph) describes the far-reaching influence of fishing on my life.

[Semantic understanding]

"Ah, what a big fish! I have never seen it before. Or bass. My father and I proudly admired this beautiful big bass and watched the gills swing gently in the silver moonlight. "

This passage describes the feeling of "I" after catching a big fish: triumphant. For a child who just turned 1 1, I waited for a long time and finally caught a beautiful fish. And this fish is very big, the biggest I have never seen, and it is really a bass known for its fierceness! Of course, that sense of accomplishment is self-evident, and that kind of pride is pride, pride and happiness from the heart. "Perch" has a flat side, the upper part is blue-gray and the lower part is gray-white, with black spots on the back and dorsal fin, a large mouth and a prominent jaw. Sexual cruelty, eating fish and shrimp. Living offshore, spawning in the estuary in late autumn.

"My father stared at the bass for a long time, and then turned to me:' Son, you have to put it back in the lake.' "

My father stared at the perch for a long time, suggesting that my father was thinking and struggling. There are three reasons for my father's hesitation: first, I caught a big fish excitedly when I was only 1 1 years old, and my father didn't want to ruin my success; Second, the father was reluctant to let the rare big fish go; Third, my father is thinking about how to tell me that I must put the fish back.

"I asked eagerly ..." "I argued loudly and even cried."

These two sentences vividly show "I"' s incomprehension and resistance to my father asking "I" to put the fish back. On the one hand, "I" was anxious to lose the big fish that I finally caught, on the other hand, I was angry because my father insisted on releasing "I", and even forgot to argue loudly and began to cry. Words such as "anxiety", "argument" and "crying out loud" vividly express children's psychology.

"I looked up and looked around, and it was quiet everywhere. In the bright moonlight, I can't see the shadow of others and ships. I once again turned my begging eyes to my father. "

This is my last straw-no one has seen us, no one knows that I caught a big fish two hours before the fishing day, and we can take it away unnoticed. So "I" begged my father with my eyes with my last luck. It is conceivable that a boy of 1 1 years old, with tears streaming down his face, begged his father piteously, and was very compassionate, even a man with a heart of stone would be soft-hearted.

"My father kept a calm face, didn't look at me, and didn't talk again."

Although "I" begged, my father never had a word of comfort or explanation. He looked cold and expressed his firm attitude with silence: the fish must be put back! There is no room for discussion. It can be seen from this sentence that my father is a very principled person and will never tolerate and be vague in front of principled issues.

"Although no one saw us, let alone knew when I caught this bass, I knew clearly from my father's unquestionable voice ... I reluctantly put it back in the lake."

This passage shows my helplessness: my excuses, crying and begging are useless, and I have no choice but to let go. "Slowly" and "reluctantly" reflect my extreme reluctance and helplessness.

"My mood changed from euphoria to helplessness, and finally I was really depressed."

From euphoria to helplessness to extreme depression, it is a process of emotional change accompanied by catching a big fish until I let it go. This process must be unforgettable for a child who just turned 1 1. "frustrated", frustrated, disappointed. "Extremely depressed", disappointed and depressed to the extreme.

"I have never caught a fish as big as it was 34 years ago. However, in the course of my life, I have met an attractive' fish' similar to that perch more than once. When I face moral choices again and again, I always think of that moonlit night 34 years ago. "

The two "fish" before and after this passage have different meanings. "I have never caught a fish as big as it was 34 years ago" is a statement of fact. The "fish" here refers to the big bass 34 years ago. However, "I met a fish similar to that kind of perch in the lure fish more than once, which extended the meaning of' fish'." The "fish" in this sentence refers to material (such as money, etc. ) or spiritual temptation. If my father had allowed me to take the big fish without anyone seeing or knowing it that night 34 years ago, I would probably put moral principles in the second place and even ignore them for my own self-interest in the long years to come. But it is precisely because of that night 34 years ago that my father taught me with his irrefutable principle: no matter what happens, even if no one knows, I must abide by the law and be honest and trustworthy, so that I can resist all kinds of temptations in the process of growing up and regulate my behavior with moral standards in the choice between self-interest and morality. It can be seen that in the process of a child's growth, a little thing will leave an indelible mark on his growth. How important it is to adhere to moral principles in children's education! The last paragraph of the article expounds in concise language the important influence of the "fishing incident" that night 34 years ago on my life, and points out the center and theme.

[Writing characteristics]

1. Describe first, then discuss, with concise structure and distinct levels.

2. Vividly describe the process of children's emotional changes in easy-to-understand language, which is authentic.

3. Ordinary story, profound truth, thought-provoking.