Poetry, please tell me how to write it.

1 What you want to express is a kind of melancholy, decadence, and loss of interest, but it fails to draw readers into your discourse atmosphere. I suggest you choose other images to expand and extend according to this emotion.

As a "poem", it needs to be judged from several aspects: first, the architectural beauty (that is, the formal beauty, that is, the overall structure of the poem, including the arrangement of long and short sentences, etc. ); Second, the beauty of language (that is, the harmony of melody and proper rhyme, etc.). ); Third, artistic beauty (that is, poetry can bring people a feeling of going deep into the soul, which can be sad or decadent, but it must give people a direct touch).

Suggestions for this poem: pay attention to the harmony of sound and rhyme, pay attention to the in-depth expression of emotions, and pay attention to the arrangement of long and short sentences

I wish you a better poem!