After the final graduation thesis was submitted, the teacher disagreed. Can it be modified?

Material modification is usually carried out in two steps:

The first step is to check whether the material itself is true, credible and accurate. If you find any doubts and inconsistencies, you must make them clear and understand them. If you quote classic writers, it is best to check the original text as much as possible, delete or rewrite all wrong, inaccurate and inconsistent materials, and ensure that the paper is based on a solid and reliable foundation.

The second step is to add, delete and adjust the materials according to the requirements of the central argument and sub-arguments.

To expand the data and modify the structure, we should focus on the following three aspects:

First, whether the level is clear and the thinking is smooth. Generally, we can first look at the thinking and level of the article from the relationship between the headline and the subtitle. If the paper has no subtitle, it must be judged from the content.

Second, whether the structure is complete. The paper should have a complete structure. A paper should have three parts: introduction, theory and conclusion, which are in harmony, that is, a fascinating beginning, materials and analysis, and a clear and powerful ending. At the same time, we should also examine whether the key points and details of each part are appropriate.

Third, whether the structure is tight. A paper must be an argument and an argument, and there is strict logic between big arguments and small arguments. In order to make the structure rigorous and harmonious, we should also seriously consider and modify the transition and quotation of all parts of the full text, the cohesion of the structure and the coherence of the tone.

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