How to write the beginning of a character essay

Composition title: "My Father".

1. Direct opening method

My father is short, slightly hunched, and walks with a hunchback, like a lame...

This is the most common opening method used by students, and it is also the simplest one. This kind of straight-forward beginning often makes the article seem dull. Here are four fresh ways to start.

2. Start with a classic sentence

1. Start with a poem.

"Don't wait any longer and your head will turn gray." My father is over forty and has a gray head, but he is still very ordinary...

2. Start with a common saying.

There is a saying in China that "three mallets cannot make a fart." My father is a man who doesn't like to talk...

You can also start with couplets and idioms etc.

3. Beginning of appearance description:

Example 1: "My Favorite Friend"

I have a good friend who is inseparable. She has a pair of thin and long willow eyebrows on her chubby little face, and a pair of big watery eyes under her eyebrows. There is a eloquent cherry mouth under the exquisite and delicate nose. All in all, it's a cute little face. Do you know who she is? Let me tell you, she is my good partner - Zeng Yushu.

Example 2: "My Favorite Person"

My favorite person - mother. My mother is tall, has fair skin, is slim but not thin, plump but not fat, has thick curved eyebrows, and big bright eyes, which always reveal the light of wisdom. This is my mother. How about she be beautiful?

1. Appearance description + characteristics starting with:

Example 1: "My Grandma"

My grandma is a middle school teacher. She has a pair of piercing eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her slightly fat body is always busy. Grandma is an extremely serious and responsible person, and I admire her very much.

Example 2: "My Dad"

My dad is tall and thin, with a pair of particularly round eyes under his thick eyebrows, which often sparkle with wisdom and alertness. He has a charming demeanor and sometimes makes people feel a bit witty and humorous. He was only in his early forties, and for some reason, very little of his black hair had fallen out. What I respect and admire the most is his hard-working spirit.

Example 3: "The Lovely Gardener—My Teacher"

She has a pair of bright eyes and a mouth that can impart millions of knowledge to us. She always has a motherly smile on her face. who is she? She is our class teacher-Teacher Liu.

Example 4: "Little Musician"

My little friend, Zhang Mengyao, has a pair of big, watery eyes and neat, white teeth. He is very cute. Let me tell you, she is also recognized by her classmates as a "little musician"!

Example 5: "My Grandpa"

My grandpa is in his sixties, with a midday build, a thin face, and a high nose. Although his temples are gray, he is Looks quite energetic. There is always a smile on his face. My cousin and I like to be naughty with him, and he also likes to tease us. I nicknamed him "Old Naughty Boy".

2. Sound description + character characteristics Beginning:

Example 1: "My Good Partner"

Before I reached her house, I heard a sound There was a clear, melodious and melodious reading voice. No need to guess, I knew it was her - my good friend, a good partner who studies hard.

3. Beginning of describing character characteristics:

Example 1: "My Partner"

I have a good friend, she is the Chinese learning committee member of my class , told her to be serious and responsible for her work, never sloppy, and complete the tasks assigned by the teacher meticulously. The most special thing is that she takes good care of collective property.

Example 2: "Grandma after she became the general manager"

People call my grandma a strong woman. Although she has seen half a century of it, her body is still strong. After she became the general manager of the self-selected shopping mall, a few more crow's feet appeared on her forehead, a lot of silver threads were added to her black hair, and her usually bright eyes were often covered with bloodshot eyes.

And those asking for help and giving gifts were like running water, rushing towards my door one after another and towards my exhausted grandma.

4. Direct narrative beginning:

Example 1: "Mom, you did something wrong"

I was sitting at the dinner table, and soybean soup splashed on me All in one. I cried sadly.

Example 2: "My Mother"

After school, I walked quickly on the way home because my stomach kept singing "Empty City Strategy". I happily walked and thought: At this moment, maybe my mother is making something delicious for me! Thinking, thinking, I seemed to smell the tempting aroma of the food, and I couldn't help but speed up my pace.

5. Beginning with various sounds

1. Begin with singing.

"Smile, honey, you smile sweetly, as if flowers are blooming in the spring breeze." It was almost eleven o'clock in the night, and my father was still in front of the computer, using his tone-deaf voice to write online Singing, I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't fall asleep. I was so upset. There is a Chinese language test tomorrow...

2. Start with a sound.

"Pi Da, Pi Da." The dull and lazy footsteps sounded in the silent stairs late at night. It must be that my father is back from playing mahjong. Maybe he lost miserably again this time...

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You can also use dialogue, the sound of the piano, the sound of the wind, the sound of thunder, etc. Anything that can make a sound can be used as the beginning.

6. Start by thinking of one thing and thinking of another thing. (Associative opening method)

Every time I come back from school and see a dilapidated permanent bicycle parked downstairs, I think of my father. He used this bicycle to send me to kindergarten...

7. Start with the result. (Flashback method)

Our whole family was having dinner, and my dad was watching TV while eating. He suddenly stood up and shouted like crazy: "I won, I won." It turned out that he won 5 million in the lottery. The whole family danced, laughed, and cried. Everyone was so happy that they didn't know where to put their hands and feet. My father’s fascination with lottery tickets started ten years ago...

These 5 types of methods can be derived from many methods. If you use these methods well, the beginning of the composition will become easier. If you can catch people, you can write vividly and colorfully.

Typical beginning

Beginning:

1. Flashback general starting style. Let’s first explain the outcome of the matter and then start with the full story.

Example 1: Thank God, Bodhisattva bless you! This scary big wolfdog was finally taken away from the campus by its owner. The students let out a long sigh, and their hanging hearts fell back to their original place like a stone. "The Scary Big Wolf Dog"

Example 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of the school's "Civilized Little Master" this time was actually Feng Guangze, and the school's principal Qian gave him the award. "Whoosh, whoosh, whoosh!" A burst of thunderous applause suddenly erupted from the audience. This troublemaker has changed so much! "I didn't expect it"

2. Suspense. Ask questions and whet the reader's appetite.

Example: Who is she? That clothes, that handsome little face, look so familiar. "My Cousin"

3. Lyric starting point. Start using scenes to express emotions, and then summarize the full text.

Example: Childhood is like a river, full of joy under the rising sun. In the crisp autumn season, it was really fun to catch crickets on the beach. "Interesting Stories on the Seaside"

4. Always start in portrait style. Write the general sentence first, and then describe the character's appearance.

Example: My brother is so cute. A pair of big, watery eyes are embedded in the round little face, and two small dimples are revealed when he smiles. "My Brother"

5. The general starting point for the portrait. First write a description of the character's appearance, and then come up with a sentence to guide the whole text.

Example: Open the photo album, she is in the photo: short black hair, red mouth, eyebrows like willow leaves, smiling mischievously. She is the innocent, cute and serious Li Xiaohong. "My Classmates"

6. The general starting point of the sound. Start by writing "singing, laughter, wind and rain..." to lay out the situation, and then summarize the full text.

Example 1: "Only mothers are good in the world, and a mother's child is like a treasure." Whenever I listen to this song, my mother's shadow appears in front of my eyes. "Unforgettable Mom"

7. Compare the general starting point. Compare many things with one person or thing to highlight one of them.

Example: I have forgotten most of the past events in my childhood. There is only one thing that is carved with a knife and I will never forget it.

"An Unforgettable Thing"

8. Get straight to the point. Explain people and things straightforwardly.

Example: It was Saturday again. I braved the severe cold and returned home to meet my elderly grandfather. "Grandpa's Crutches"

Endings of Narratives Writing about People

There are many endings for writing narratives about people, here are just a few examples.

1. Summary ending

At the end of the article, summarize the performance and character of the character.

For example, the ending of "My Role Model": This is Wang Xiaoping, the role model for me to learn from. He is so diligent and helpful, and now he has become an idol in the hearts of his classmates!

2. Praise-style ending

At the end, use praising sentences to praise the character's character and highlight and point out the center.

For example: The end of the article "My Teacher":

This is how Teacher Wang loves her students and is loyal to the noble cause of education. She preaches and teaches diligently and painstakingly. Solving doubts, selflessly devoting everything you have, and worthy of the glorious title of "Excellent Teacher"!

3. Lyrical ending

At the end, regret your praise, praise, and admiration for the character.

For example: The end of the article "My Teacher": Ah, dear Teacher Wang, you are like this, like a loving mother, caring for us meticulously; like a hard-working gardener, You have nurtured us and grown up without any regrets; your loyalty and perseverance to your career have deeply moved each of us. We are proud to have such a good teacher like you!

4. Argumentative ending

Use argumentative sentences to explain your views and opinions on the characters you are writing about, and to strengthen the center of the article.

For example: The article "The Selfless Dedication Man" ends with: This is my teacher, a selfless dedication person. Doesn't she have any relatives or children? Doesn't she know how hard it is to work hard? Doesn't she need to enjoy a more comfortable life? No, she understands everything. However, she regards loyalty to education as her first life and selfless dedication as her greatest happiness. How could we not love and admire such a teacher?

5. Ending with a question at the end of the article

This type of ending, like the summary ending, is the most common and easiest method to master. It mainly writes the "question eye" in the title or related topics at the end.

For example: The end of the article "A Person Worth Learning from": This is Wang Xiaogang, a person worth learning from. His humility, his honesty, and his enthusiasm for treating others have all set an example for me to move forward, which I admire endlessly.

Above, the teacher gave guidance from the beginning and end of the two types of genres: note taking and writing about people. These are only for students to learn and learn from. More still needs to be further tried and explored by you in the future composition training process. Here, the teacher only plays a role as a guide.

Classic ending

1. Summarize the anaphora. This is the most commonly used type of ending. The end of the chapter summarizes the entire text, points out the center, and corresponds to the topic and the beginning.

Example 1: Please! Wolf dog owners must take good care of this scary big wolf dog. It was really scary. To this day, I am often woken up by this scary big wolf dog in my sleep... "The scary big wolf dog"

Example 2: I really didn't expect it! Yesterday's troublemaker, today's Feng Guangze won the honorary title of the school's "Civilized Little Master". Isn't this warm applause a sincere compliment to him? "Unexpectedly"

Example 3: Colorful childhood is full of fun, just like a string of wind chimes leaving crisp sounds. To this day, catching crickets on the beach is still so tempting and makes me have endless aftertaste... "Interesting Stories from the Seaside"

2. Insightful style. Write down the inspiration you get by writing about people and events.

Example: The teacher smiled so happily. I have realized that the best gift a student can give to a teacher is to keep working hard and making progress! "A Gift"

3. Natural style. End with the natural outcome of the matter.

Example: I learned to ride a bicycle, and I felt like eating honey. "I Learned to Ride a Bicycle"

4. Lyrical style. Express your feelings in a lyrical way.

Example: Ah! The teacher is the selfless candle, burning himself and illuminating us;

Ah! Teachers are ordinary bridges, sending off batch after batch of students without any complaints. "Teacher's Praise"

5. Memory type. Write down what you don’t want to forget about people or things, and keep them in your heart forever.

Example: This incident seems like it happened yesterday. My concern and love for my parents are unforgettable. Parents who are far away from home, please take good care of me. Your child will not let you down. "Parents' Love"

6. Associative style. Make associations from the people and things you write about, and write down your thoughts.

Example: Seeing this, I seem to see the old man’s pure heart, and the new wind of a harmonious society blowing across the land of the motherland. "An Old Man Repairing Umbrellas"

How to start a narrative composition

1. Scene rendering opening

1. "Bell--Bell--Bell" "The bell rang, and the students swarmed out of the classroom and went to the office to get their math test papers.

2. The exam is here again. When the teachers of each subject announced the date of the exam, a melancholy mood appeared on the faces of the students.

3. Late at night, I was awakened again by my father’s old and hoarse dry cough. I glanced at the window with half-open sleepy eyes. According to my intuition, it was probably around 3 a.m. I vaguely heard my parents talking.

2. The beginning of the practical wish

1. Seeing that the desk calendar on the table was torn down to the last one, the New Year’s Day that I have been looking forward to for a long time is coming. .

2. Once, I said to my mother: "I am not young anymore, I should be allowed to learn more housework." My mother agreed to my request and let me learn to wash rice in the evening. I am so happy that I can interact with water.

3. Prompt thematic opening

1. Life is like a movie with twists and turns, and wonderful little shots make up a colorful life. I love life, and I also love that little lens, which enables me to be educated and enlightened. Now, whenever I encounter a setback, I will think of that unforgettable little shot in my life.

2. Babies who are babbling always learn to walk for the first time; after all, I have many firsts when I enter my teenage years.

3. In the early morning, a harmonious symphony sounded at home as usual.

4. Beginning with foreshadowing

1. As soon as the bell rings, the teacher takes away the bottom paper. After checking numbers with my classmates, I made a mistake in a calculation question and a fill-in-the-blank question. Suddenly, I was like an eggplant beaten by frost - wilted.

2. Self-study class - making havoc in heaven. This is our time to show off our skills! "Bell——" The bell of the self-study class rang, and the students were all in high spirits. Because, I can finally get rid of the teacher's stern gaze.

3. Just after the general cleaning, some "evil ghost" threw a ball of waste paper in the corridor of the fourth grade.

5. Scene-based opening

1. The campus is cool in early winter. The class was so quiet. The students were different from usual. They all had long faces and sat silently in the classroom, waiting for the farewell party to begin.

2. The fireball-like sun moxibustion roasted the earth, the trees were roasted to the point of drooping, and the road was almost melted by the sun. I invited some classmates to play football in the square under the scorching sun.

3. "Happy birthday to you, I wish you..." A touching song came from the classroom of Class 4 (6), which was our birthday congratulations to classmate XX.

The scorching sun in April and July is scorching. From the big trees in front of our village, shouts of "Cicada, cicada..." were heard, and a lively concert was playing. How I want to catch a few cicadas!

5. "Rumble" followed by a dull thunder, thousands of raindrops as big as soybeans jumped, rotated, soared, and fell from the clouds.

6. One rainy afternoon, my mother asked me to go to the street to buy groceries, and I left with an umbrella. Along the way, the branches were blown by the wind and swayed. I walked carefully on the muddy road. The umbrella was blown by the wind and couldn't hold it. The rain kept hitting me, and the lower part of my pants was soaked.

The classic beginning of narrative composition:

1. There are many things in my mind, many of which have been blurred by the running water of time, but there is one thing that makes me I will never forget it

2. In my memory, there is one ironic thing, that is the first time I made spicy and sour fish.

3. As I grew up, there was one thing that I will never forget.

4. In the long river of my memory, there are happy things and sad things, but the most unforgettable thing is what happened on the bus.

5. I have experienced many things, but the most unforgettable thing is the incident that I rolled over after studying in physical education class. When I was in the third grade, something happened that has always been deeply imprinted on me. It is unforgettable in my mind

6. Last summer, I did something wrong. This thing is unforgettable to me, and I feel sad when I think about it.

The ending of narrative narrative

1. Natural ending.

This kind of ending is very easy. After the story is narrated and the results are revealed, the article ends. This is the natural ending.

For example: The ending of "Visiting Bijia Mountain": The sun was setting in the west, and we were a little tired, so we took a bus together and headed home with the joy of visiting Bijia Mountain...

2. Summary ending

After narrating things, summarize what you have gained. You often use complex sentences with a progressive relationship to express your own gains or feelings.

For example: The ending of "Remember an Interesting Eggshell Experiment": This eggshell experiment is so interesting! Not only did I develop my hands-on skills, but I also learned about the principle of "concentration and dispersion of force." It was a huge gain! So I love experiments like this!

3. Heuristic ending (also called "clear reason")

This kind of ending is to write down the enlightenment and clear truth obtained after passing something, and it plays a role. Point out the role of the center.

For example: The ending of "A Little Thing": It has been a long time, but I will never forget it. Although the thing is small, it inspired me a lot, because it made me understand a truth, that is: no matter what people have done wrong, as long as they realize that they are wrong and dare to admit it and correct it, they will definitely With a new beginning, there will be progress.

4. Interrogative ending (also called "rhetorical question")

When the matter is over, the author deliberately ends with a question or rhetorical question in order to emphasize the truth or revelation he understands. It not only expresses one's wishes, but also stimulates readers' thinking and plays a role in strengthening the center.

For example: The ending of "True Friendship": We finally reconciled, and through this incident, we understood that treating each other with sincerity, tolerance and understanding are the basis of friendship. Friends, do you think this is the case?

The last sentence can also be said like this: "Friend, don't you think so?"

5. Fantasy ending

This kind of ending belongs to imagination, sustenance type. That is to say, instead of writing directly about the result of something, and this result may not be the same situation, we use the method of "dreaming" to express the intention or result. This kind of fantasy is very interesting and makes people think.

For example: The end of the article "Looking for Mom": That night, the boy had a sweet dream. He dreamed that the little girl had found her mother and was nestling in her arms and acting coquettishly! The little bird has also flown back to its little nest and is singing happily with its mother bird!

6. Ending with an introduction to a song

There are beginnings of "introduction to a song" and endings of "an introduction to a song". According to the content and center of the matter, choose an appropriate famous saying or one or two lyrics as the end of the article, which has the function of spurring, guiding and motivating.

For example, at the end of the article "Cherish the minutes and seconds of time": Only by cherishing the minutes and seconds of time can we not waste our time and do what we should do. This is after experiencing this. Give me the greatest inspiration. Friends, "Don't wait too long, or you will end up with a gray head!"

How to end an essay

1. End with a topic

Indicate the theme at the end of the article.

Examples of paragraphs:

It has been several years since the incident, and the majestic green mountains that stretch for thousands of miles and the rolling streams that have been running for tens of thousands of years are still in my memory. But it will last forever, because there live a group of people who are closest to nature and have noble qualities and firm beliefs. When I was growing up, they were like dazzling stars, guiding me on the path of life. (Zhang Hui "Star")

2. Show the future

Aim to predict or unfold a bright future at the end of the article.

Examples of passages:

As we walked out of the school gate, the melodious sound of the electronic piano floated behind us, and the children sang in childish voices: "Our hometown, in the field of hope... ..."Yes, Lixiang, this is a promising land. I raised my head and looked at the transport trucks rushing back and forth on the village road, and an unprecedented passion surged in my chest: "Fly hard, Lixiang, fly towards a better tomorrow!" (Zhou Hongyan's " Enjoy seeing the new changes in Lixiang")

3. Stop abruptly

It refers to the intention to stop suddenly at the end of the article in order to achieve a straightforward, crisp expression.

Examples of paragraphs:

He arrived at school. The teacher was surprised that this top student did not come to report. Suddenly I saw a student wearing blue homespun clothes standing at the door.

"Come in!" the teacher said.

He silently put down the basket, took out fifty yuan and put it on the red cloth.

The teacher opened the red cloth in surprise——

Ah! ? A basket of raw eggs!

The teacher took his report card and looked at the dozens of yuan and a basket of eggs -

Shocked and speechless! (Guo Hao "Untitled")

4. Unexpected

Refers to the method of ending with unreasonable language, behavior, and scenes.

Examples of paragraphs:

In the bookstore manager’s office, Mr. Fang slapped a check of 20,000 yuan on the desk and said to the lady who received him: "Will you come with me?" Can we make a big business?"

The lady said, "Of course I do. But we don't have any big business here, just books. You can choose whatever you want."

Mr. Fang threw the check in front of the lady and said, "I'm too lazy to choose. Please leave it to you. I'll pick up the goods at two o'clock in the afternoon."

The lady stared at the wealthy man in front of her in surprise. Don't know how to cope. When Mr. Fang was about to turn around and leave, she woke up and asked: "What do you want?"

"As long as it's a book, as long as it's famous." Mr. Fang didn't look back. explain.

At two o'clock in the afternoon, we drove to the bookstore. The lady returned the check to Mr. Fang and said, "I'm sorry, our manager doesn't want to accept this business."

Mr. Fang was stunned again. He roared: "Where is your manager? Let him come out to see me."

"No need." The lady smiled, "Our manager knows who you are after seeing the check. He wants me I must tell you: There is no useless book that can be shelved in the bookstore. Every book has a soul, a special liking, and will eventually belong to its place." (Xu Shengao, "I Want to Ask for a Book." 》)

5. Anaphora to the beginning

Refers to the method of ending with words that echo the beginning.

Examples of paragraphs:

Taking the flowers, I watched you go away in the light rain. Suddenly I remembered that I hadn’t paid for this sprig of milkvetch, so I hurriedly called you loudly. You turned around, smiled and said loudly: "That flower is for you, big brother. Come in quickly, the rain is getting heavy."

I stood for a long time, watching you go away - a A small bamboo basket, a small flower umbrella, and a pair of small feet. Sell ??flowers, sell flowers... (Cheng Yahong's "Red Flowers and Grasses")

The beginning of the article is like this:

I dreamed of you, red flowers and grasses, I dreamed of you You are a flower girl from a water town in the south of the Yangtze River. A small flower umbrella, a small bamboo basket, and a hawking cry that was wet by the light rain...

6. Full of philosophy

Refers to using philosophical language as the conclusion of the article. method.

Examples of paragraphs: For example, the text "Take one step, take another step"

7. Quote ending

It refers to using famous aphorisms or proverbs as the conclusion of the article. method.

Examples of paragraphs:

Finally, I leave you with Douglas’s motto as a reminder:

“If you can’t make it big, , then you make a path; if you can’t be the sun, then make a star.” (Zhao Junfeng’s “Be Your Best Self”)

In addition, some methods at the beginning can also be used at the end. Such as lyricism, scene description, metaphor and other methods.