High school composition 1000 words: dad's electric car.

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Word count: 1000 word composition

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This composition is about 1000 words in Grade Two. The title is "Dad's Electric Car". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Dad's electric car I remember when I was in elementary school, my father bought an electric car that people liked at first sight. That day, it was a crisp autumn afternoon, and I stretched myself comfortably on the balcony. Suddenly, my eyes flashed the shadow of my father riding an electric car. I was excited and curious when I saw it. I opened the door and strode down the stairs in three steps. It's incredible. I saw my father holding a string of colorful keys, shining in the sun, shining on the wall like a rainbow, and the sun shining on my father's face, which was particularly kind and brought me a warm feeling. Father's electric car is light brown, with two wheels and a stable shelf standing on the ground, which is particularly energetic. I ran to my father's car and sat down. My father followed me on the electric car. I was still amazed at that time!

I stared at my father with sober eyes for a long time. My father smiled and said, "Oh!

Got it!

You're so smart. "He said, and touched my head and held the handle of the electric car with his hand. When he turned around, the electric car began to run smoothly and drove very fast. I'm not used to the wind whistling in my ear. I have an unnatural feeling of dizziness, but I will get over it after a while. Over time, the electric car carries out the same task every day: take me to school in the morning (my father rides), and when I get into school, it runs around with my father and installs broadband for people. This life continues to this day, but my curiosity and excitement have disappeared, my father's electric car has become old, and the glory of the past has completely disappeared. People won't have any admiration when they see it. In the evening, my father took me out for dinner. Of course, the electric car was under my feet. At the hotel, there is only one compartment left in the electric car. The electric car made a cry of discontent. After dinner, my father and I rode an electric car back. The electric car was slow all the way, but my father rode patiently. I said to my father, "Dad, let's change the electric car! "

Dad said, "No, I just like this electric car. It has been with me the longest, and I have feelings for it. Just like a person, sweeping the floor with a broom every day. The broom is almost worn out, and he still uses it to sweep the floor and has feelings for it. " Finally home, the electric car seems to have feelings for dad and insists on going home. This is a miracle!

From then on, I never asked my father to change the electric car, and I lived a temporary monotonous life with the electric car. Teacher's comment: The article is full of affection, describing my father's electric car, and also showing my father's love for me and my affectionate expression to my father. "When I first went to primary school, my father bought an electric car that people liked at first sight" is very natural and vivid, and echoes below. It's all done well. "As time goes by, electric cars are performing the same task every day." "Electric cars are getting older and older, and the glory of the past has completely disappeared. People will not feel love when they see them." "The electric car is slow all the way, but my father is still riding patiently." Many description languages express deep feelings. On the surface, it describes the battery car from new to old, but that feeling is getting stronger and stronger, which deeply infected me. The article is true and touching, the language expression is smooth and natural, and it has a very strong appeal. "Dad takes me out for dinner at night" is a typo, which means "Take me" (China Xuele Special Teacher: Rodina) 2008-11-911:13: 00.