In what order did the article write the lunar trajectory? What kind of psychological changes have I had in the process of looking for the moon?

Thinking: Read through the text and talk about when, where and by whom the article was written. What is the point of this article?

Clear:

Time: Mid-Autumn Night (1 paragraph)

Venue: Zhongtangli (1 section), Yard (section 5), Outside the Yard (section 28)

Person: Grandma, me and my sister-in-law.

Things: Looking for the Moon-Looking for the Moon-Talking about the Moon

Focus of the article: Looking for the moon

Thinking: In the order of "looking at the moon-looking for the moon-talking about the moon", the article writes the trajectory of the moon movement. Read through the text and know that the author wrote about finding the moon in detail. So, where do the children go to find the moon? What has been happening to the moon? What changes have taken place in the children's mood during the search for the moon? Read the text carefully again and find out the answer.

Clear:

Place, trace, mood

White in the mirror-semicircle-climbing-full profit-loss-all gone (third paragraph) disappointment (third paragraph)

The courtyard is white, jade and silver (para. 100). 5), envy and hate with laurel and Chang 'e, quarreling endlessly (paragraph 12). 22).

The moon in the glass belongs to everyone. 26), everyone has it in January, and the moon enters the heart (para. 26). 24 "Let's all look at the cup, which is really full of a little moon", "Everyone drinks it, and the moon is in everyone's heart")

This river is everywhere (para. 10). 30), and it is getting more and more strange everywhere (para. 30). 27).

In the eyes of my brother and sister (para. 10). 30), there are so many eyes in the pupil (paragraph 30). I am satisfied (paragraph 30). 36)

Looking for the moon:

Looking for the moon in the house → looking at the moon in the mirror → looking at the moon in the yard → drinking the moon in a cup → looking for the moon in the river → looking at the moon with your eyes → discussing the moon on the beach.

Thinking: The author writes about the moon, why should he write about mirrors, yards, cups, rivers and eyes? Why not look up at the moon in the sky? What techniques does the author use here? What are the advantages of writing like this?

Clear:

Turn virtual into real. If you write the trajectory of the moon, you are afraid to write it in space. The author cleverly avoided this point. The moon in the mirror, the courtyard, the cup, the river, the eye, the moon in the mirror, the courtyard, the wine glass, the river, the eye, the ethereal moon, the moonlight moon and the moon shadow moon all show the real moon trace, and also write the ups and downs of children's mood.

Thinking: At the beginning of the article, children are "dissatisfied with everything" (paragraph 1 "Our children feel fresh about everything and are often dissatisfied with everything"), and at the end, we all feel satisfied (paragraph 36). Why?

Clear:

Discontent-in the eyes of children, everything in the world is so fresh and fun, and they are full of curiosity about any phenomenon that happens. Children have countless reasons in their hearts and always want to get to the bottom of it, so they are always "dissatisfied".

Satisfaction-children are satisfied in the process of finding the moon. The process of finding the moon makes children understand that the beautiful moon belongs to us and everyone.

Thinking: In the process of searching for the moon, children are bathed in the bright moonlight, enjoying the beautiful moonlight and feeling great satisfaction. Are they just looking for the moon?

Clear:

No. Children pursue all good things. "The moon is good" ("good" is a beautiful thing). The moon is beautiful and pure, giving people beautiful enjoyment. Therefore, it is a symbol of good things. The process of finding the moon is the process of children's pursuit of beauty and beautiful things.

Thinking: Why is the title of the article "Moon Marks"?

Clear:

"Moon trace" means "marks and traces of the moon". Lunar track can be understood as the trajectory of the moon, and it can also be understood as the trajectory of children's psychological changes. The process of discovering the moon is actually the process of discovering beauty.

Thinking: What did you get from studying this article?

Clear:

The moon is beautiful, and so is the sky. The boundless sky symbolizes all the beautiful things in the world. Each of us can find beauty in life, and the pursuit of beauty should be the motto of life, which is true for each of us.

Thinking: What is the significant difference between this article and traditional poems about the moon in terms of thoughts and feelings?

Clear:

Traditional poems about the moon often use the moon's circle to compare the ups and downs of the human world, express parting feelings and look forward to reunion. Therefore, the themes often written are: the wife misses her husband, inviting people to miss her, the wanderer misses his hometown, the family misses their loved ones, the separation of thoughts and feelings and so on. Because the sun is the sun and the moon is cloudy, poems about the moon generally lack masculinity, and even if they are bold and unrestrained, they are inevitably sad.

Difference:

First, the job is not to leave people to enjoy the moon, but to enjoy the moon on the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, where brothers and sisters get together and enjoy it under the guidance of their elders.

Second, the work is warm, harmonious, warm, pursuing and upward, not sad and sad.

Third, the work consciously combines the appreciation of the moon with the growth of children. With the process of searching for the moon, children's cognition is developing and their hearts are sublimating.

Supplement:

The first part: (from "our children" to "go find the moon quickly") Writing about the moon comes and goes in a hurry.

The second part: (from "we all ran out of the door" to "it's there if you want") write the process of finding the moon.

Part III: (From "We Sit on the Beach" to "Sweet Sleep for a while") Write about the moon on the beach.

Thinking: The article is full of childlike innocence, not only in the matter of "looking for the moon", but also in the expression of language. Please read the article carefully and find out the language that you think is the most childlike.

(1) Beautiful, vivid and vivid words;

(2) Vivid rhetoric: metaphor, personification, etc.

(3) full of profound philosophy.

Clear:

The moon in the mirror:

"When we were watching, there was a moon in the bamboo curtain, which sneaked in and appeared on the mirror in front of the window." (para. 100). 3)

-"leisurely" vividly shows the softness and elegance of the moon. Liu vividly depicts the naughty and lovely moon by personification.

"It turns out that the moon has legs. Climb the bamboo curtain grid, first the white road, then the semicircle, and gradually climb higher and complete on the mirror. " (para. 100). 3)

-"Long Legs" and "Climbing" use anthropomorphic techniques to write the naughty and lovely moon vividly. "Gradually" and "Slowly" vividly wrote the beauty of the morphological changes of the moon, which gradually rose, changed from deficit to surplus, and then disappeared.

"The moon is still crawling on the bamboo curtain, but the moon is slowly losing. In the end, there was no trace at all, leaving only an empty mirror and a disappointment. " (para. 100). 3)

-Describe the dynamic process of the moon from surplus to deficit and finally disappear, and write how children look at the moon carefully. An "emptiness" and a "disappointment" show the child's mentality after the moon disappears.

Stay in hospital for one month:

"It is in the yard, but it is no longer a complete circle. The white light in the yard is jade silver, and the light is not so bright. " (para. 100). 5)

-"Jade Jade, Silver and Silver" connects moonlight with "jade" and "silver", which conforms to children's visual psychological feelings, has both image and color, and writes the beauty of moonlight color and the whiteness of moonlight.

"In the middle of the yard is the thick osmanthus tree with sparse branches and leaves. Osmanthus fragrans has not blossomed yet, but it has many bones. " (para. 100). 5)

-"Thick" describes the strength of osmanthus trees, "sparse" describes sparse branches and leaves, and "numerous" describes many flowers. The use of overlapping words is full of childlike interest and charm, which sets off the hazy beauty of moonlight.

"I can see clearly what's inside." (Paragraph 5) ..... "We all looked at each other, and suddenly, there seemed to be a breath curling up behind us, adding a faint itchy feeling to our hair tips; It seems that we are already on the moon, and that laurel is obviously the one behind us. " (Paragraph 10)

See what's inside, look at each other, suddenly there seems to be a breath all over the body, there is a faint itchy feeling. It seems that you are in the middle of the month and Gui is Tinggui. The children were on the scene, and the communication between the moon and the world entered an unparalleled realm. "Curly" and "Slightly Itching" wrote about children's wonderful experiences.

"Is there a beautiful third sister?" "As beautiful as Third Sister." Third sister was happy: "Ah, ah! The moon is mine! " (Paragraph 107- 109). 18 to 2 1)

Dialogue description not only shows children's unique naive, lively and lovely nature, but also reflects people's love and yearning for beautiful things.

The moon in the cup:

"We all look at the glass. If so, there is a small full moon floating inside. Holding it still and moving your hand will make you tremble crisply, which makes people look pitiful. " (para. 100). 24)

Gone with the Wind vividly describes the lightness of the moon. "Small" and "fragile" make "us" feel that the moon in our eyes is so pitiful.

"Everyone drinks it, and the moon is in people's hearts." (para. 100). 24)

-Virtual writing, the author's expression is subtle and unique. The moon can't really be in everyone's heart. It has a deeper meaning: expressing people's desire to pursue a better ideal.

"I agree with them. As grandma said: it belongs to us and everyone. " (para. 100). 35)

This sentence is full of philosophy, which shows that everyone has the right to pursue beauty and everyone can realize a beautiful ideal.

Supplement:

Eyes on the moon:

"Oh, there are so many moons: you can have them if you want." (para. 100). 30)

-"Oh" has the meaning of surprise, revealing surprise. "It" means "eyes".

Thinking: What does the moon look like in children's eyes?

Clear:

"I"-"Isn't the moon in the sky our seal?" (para. 100). 35)

Brother-"The moon is what I want." (para. 100). 33)

Sister-"The moon is really good." (para. 100). 34)

These three statements have their own characteristics:

The answers of my younger brother and sister are full of affection, praise and longing. Naive language is simple and sincere.

"Isn't the moon our seal in the sky?" A full moon sets off the boundless sky like a small seal on a book. Since the moon belongs to each of us, so does the boundless sky. ) Poetic answer, using figurative rhetoric, the sky is a paper moon, and the image is appropriate, which shows that the sky is our work, the sky is our wealth, we are the masters of the sky, we own the sky, and we own the universe.

Thinking: Grandma's words in the article caused the transformation of the trace of searching for the moon. What role does the image of "grandma" play in the article?

Clear:

"The moon is coming in!" (para. 100). 2)

"It's gone, it's in a hurry; Go out and look for the moon. " (para. 100). 4)

"The moon belongs to everyone. It hasn't left yet. Go find it again. " (para. 100). 26)

"Grandma" is the key figure in the article. On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, she told the children beautiful legends. She guided the children to appreciate and look for the moon, and finally gave them the greatest psychological satisfaction, thus revealing the main idea of the article. Therefore, "Grandma" is a talented educator, focusing on guiding children to pay attention to the outside world and explore nature. Without the image of "grandma", there would be no children's search and discussion about the moon, and there would be no children's spiritual sublimation.

Thinking: The language of this article is full of life and beauty. Can you talk about your own views?

Clear:

Jia Pingwa's prose is famous for its simplicity, sincere feelings and unpretentious language use.

① The use of Hua Er Yin.

There are more than 20 articles, which make the language of the articles colloquial and dialectal and friendly and natural to read.

② The extensive use of overlapping words.

The article * * * uses more than ten overlapping words and writing methods, which shows the characteristics of moonlight everywhere and is catchy to read. For example, "leisurely" makes people feel that flowers are blooming under the moon, and a beautiful girl is walking slowly with light steps, which is very elegant. "Jade-jade, silver-silver": bright as jade, brilliant as silver. These two nouns are used as adjectives and metaphors. "Curly hair": describes the fragrance of flowers, turning the intangible into tangible, as if you can see the fragrance of flowers in the air. "Sparse": the branches and leaves are not very lush, and the silver moonlight penetrates through the cracks in the branches and leaves, hazy, quiet and soft. "Crispy ground": both "broken" in shape and "soft" in touch. The moon shadow rippling in the glass is written as if it can be touched and felt.

Thinking: On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, a group of children are looking for the moon. It can be said that they are not only looking for the moon, but also looking for beautiful women! What do you feel after reading the whole article?

Clear:

1, you must always be childlike in your life to find beauty from ordinary things.

2. Love childlike innocence, encourage and guide children to discover beauty like grandma in the article.

As the French sculptor Rodin said, life is not short of beauty, but of eyes for discovery, so we should be a conscientious person.

The article grasps the child's vision and touch to write. The imagination is strange and vivid. Such superb creativity needs a childlike innocence. The article has a strong flavor of children's life, and traces of the moon movement and children's psychological changes are written.