The Content, Structure and Function of the First Paragraph of Persimmon Red on the Tree

Huang Hailong, Wen Yi

That day, he passed by the street and saw an old man selling persimmons. The basket of red and round persimmons looks very attractive. He suddenly fell in love with eating persimmons. He felt as if he hadn't eaten persimmon for many years. I don't know if the persimmon is far away from him, or if he forgot.

He bought a few catties of persimmons and couldn't wait to pick up one and taste it, but he couldn't taste the sweet and refreshing taste of the past. He took a bite of persimmon and turned over in his hand. He can't see any difference from the persimmons in the past. "Why can't you taste that?"

He remembered that the persimmon produced by the old persimmon tree in front of his house was delicious, crisp, sweet and refreshing, and the taste was still lingering. He especially remembers that when the autumn wind blows, all the persimmons in the trees are ripe, one by one in the autumn sunshine, among the sparse and mottled branches and leaves. Like red lanterns covered with trees, the whole yard has become a painting, which is particularly warm and festive.

The old persimmon tree is in front of the kitchen window, which was planted by grandpa. Persimmon trees are tall and leafy, covering the courtyard like Lv Yun, exposing the blue roof. He and the children next door often play under the tree, catch goats, hide and seek, and plant lotus seeds. Sometimes he lies on the tree and feels that the bark is as deep as grandpa's wrinkles, and the tree seems as warm as grandpa's hands.

He has liked the taste of persimmon since he ate it. When the oil-green branches of the tree produced countless persimmon flowers, he began to guard the persimmon tree and began to play hide-and-seek with his grandfather. When the persimmon on the tree grows to the size of an egg, he can't wait to taste it. While grandpa was asleep, he and some friends found a long bamboo pole, and several people stabbed it in the tree, and all the fruit branches fell off, which also alarmed grandpa in the house. Grandpa picked up the broken branches and bruised olives on the ground and said sadly, "These monkeys are still young. How can they eat?" "You are so old, and you are still a stingy grandfather." A group of children shouted. "Don't believe it, you all try." Grandpa waved to the monkey children not far away. Looking at these children who were twisted by raw persimmons, Grandpa smiled and shook his beard.

When persimmon is ripe, neighbors love to visit his house, look at this old persimmon tree and praise it. At this time, grandpa smiled and wrinkled his face, as if he had drunk a little rice wine. Persimmons can finally get off the tree. Mom moved out of the room, and dad climbed up carefully with the basket and picked it one by one. The persimmon red of that tree was put into baskets and bamboo baskets, condensed into clouds of strong and burning colors, as if it had gathered all autumn. When picking persimmons, neighbors came to help, and the children cheered around the persimmon tree. On this day, the yard was as hot as a holiday.

Grandpa went door to door and put the picked persimmons in a small basket and distributed them to neighbors. As a result, the whole village lane is filled with the fragrance of persimmons. At that time, he didn't understand why grandpa gave his persimmon to others. Grandpa scraped his nose and said, "Have you eaten Grandpa's pheasant and Uncle Bao's August melon?" He nodded in confusion. "The alley is a big house," grandpa said, touching his head.

Later, he went to school; Later, he went to school in other places and left home. Every year when the persimmon is ripe, his mother always asks someone to bring him a bag of persimmon, which will remind him of the taste of his hometown. After the roommate tasted it, he said that his persimmon was very sweet and crisp, and he really wanted to see his persimmon tree with him.

That autumn, he was particularly homesick and missed the persimmon red of that tree. He took the student's backpack and went straight home. When I got home, I saw my grandfather sitting under the persimmon tree, with scattered and mottled branches and leaves in the background, which was persimmon red of a tree; Mother feeds the chickens at the door of the utility room. The moment I suddenly saw his figure, my grandfather's and mother's eyes seemed to be full of joy. Looking at him is as warm as the sunshine falling in front of the door, and he feels his heart is as fluffy as the clouds in the sky.

After several job moves, his temples have turned gray. At that time, grandpa was old and gone; My parents are old and gone. He suddenly felt that he hadn't been back for a long time and seemed to have forgotten the mountain corner house. Seeing the old man selling persimmons in the street, he suddenly wanted to go home and see the old persimmon tree after eating a mouthful of persimmons.

I haven't been back for years. In front of him, moss climbed up the wall and the wind and rain mottled the panes. Time is branded on the high wall, and the blue roof is rough and messy. The closed door is no longer as open as before, and the sun pours out. He saw persimmon trees red and lonely in the sunset, and some persimmons fell into the grass nest, broken and scattered all over the floor. He stood in front of the door, took out his wallet, stood there for an instant, but lost the key to his hometown.

1. What is the function of "one persimmon red"?

In his memory, what did he write about "persimmon tree"?

3. Taste the language

Persimmon trees are red and lonely in the sunset. (from the perspective of words)

(2) He especially remembers that when the autumn wind blows, persimmon trees are ripe, one by one in the autumn sunshine, among the sparse and mottled branches and leaves. Like red lanterns covered with trees, the whole yard has become a painting, which is particularly warm and festive. (from the perspective of rhetoric)

4. This article is described from the perspective of "He" from beginning to end. Please talk about the benefits of using this person to write according to your reading comprehension.

Please make a brief analysis and evaluation of the first paragraph of the article.

Reference answer

1. On the one hand, One Tree Persimmon Red is the writing object of this article, and a series of memories in this article are all around One Tree Persimmon Red; On the other hand, One Tree Persimmon Red bears many feelings of "him", such as grandparents, neighbors, childhood and so on.

2. Play with the children next door under the persimmon tree; When the stars are bright, they have dinner under the tree; "Steal" persimmons with friends; Neighborhood helps pick persimmons; Grandpa sends persimmons to his neighbors; After leaving home, my mother asked someone to bring persimmons; I missed persimmon red that autumn and went back to my hometown to see my grandparents.

3.( 1) "Loneliness" means being alone. Here is a description of a persimmon mangrove tree that has lost its former excitement, desolation and desolation, expressing his deep thoughts and sentimental feelings.

(2) Using figurative rhetoric, the ripe persimmon on the tree is compared to a red lantern, and the whole courtyard is compared to a painting, which gives people a feeling of fullness, warmth and celebration and expresses his love for happiness.

"He" belongs to the third person. As a bystander, he passed through the persimmon in front of him and then reached the persimmon red in his memory. He is objective and calm, and recalls from the perspective of "him". The narrative has a sense of jumping and layering, and the emotion is more sincere.

5. From the content, it describes the chaotic and lonely state of "a persimmon mangrove" in the present reality, and renders the guilt and sadness of "him"; Structurally, "I lost the key to my hometown" echoes the opening "I don't know if the persimmon is far away from me or I forgot it", which makes the article have a structure and sublimates emotions. In writing, it is in sharp contrast with the lively celebration of "a persimmon turns red into a tree" in memory, highlighting the theme of "homesickness and homesickness"; In language, personification and metaphor are used to express the sadness that "he" has not returned to his hometown for a long time.