Expressive language descriptive writing

1. Please describe your favorite teacher in vivid language

Voila! With shiny black hair, thin eyebrows, piercing eyes, high bridge of nose, and rose-red lips, this is our Chinese teacher - Teacher XX.

As soon as you see this delicate face, you know she must be a kind teacher. Of course, let me tell you about it.

After every class, the students would walk to the podium and surround the teacher to chat with her. Funny things, sad things, hobbies, things you usually do.

Teachers and students talk about everything. It is easy for students to get close to her. She always likes to chat and laugh with Teacher XX. The teacher is also very happy because she wants to know more about her classmates.

This is the amiable and approachable side of Teacher XX. One time, many people in the class failed to turn in their homework.

Teacher XX picked up the ruler and gave each of them a piece of "Jie Ruler Braised Pork". From then on, the students handed in their homework, and the teacher smiled knowingly. This is the strict side of Teacher Yu.

In fact, I know very clearly in my heart that no matter whether Teacher XX is gentle or rough to us, there is only one reason, and that is our learning. Teacher XX is like a bright light, illuminating our way forward. 2. Please describe your favorite teacher in vivid language

Voila! With shiny black hair, thin eyebrows, bright eyes, high bridge of nose, and rose-red lips, this is our Chinese teacher - Teacher XX.

As soon as you see this delicate face, you will know that she must be a kind teacher. Of course, let me tell you about it. After every class, the students would come to the podium and surround the teacher to chat with her. Funny things, sad things, hobbies, things you usually do. . Teachers and students talk about everything. It is easy for students to get close to her. She always likes to chat and laugh with Teacher XX. The teacher is also very happy because she wants to know more about her classmates. This is the amiable and approachable side of Teacher XX.

Once, many people in the class did not turn in their homework. Teacher XX picked up the ruler and gave each of them a portion of "Jie Ruler Braised Pork". From then on, the students handed in their homework, and the teacher smiled knowingly. This is the strict side of Teacher Yu. In fact, I know very clearly in my heart that no matter whether Teacher XX is gentle or rough to us, there is only one reason, and that is our learning. Teacher XX is like a bright light, illuminating our way forward. 3. Regarding the vivid and expressive language description of mother

"Mother" is an ordinary and great word. I think everyone will be familiar with this word, but few people are familiar with it. To repay this person who taught me a lot about life, few people recall everything they learned from their mother... On that hot summer day fourteen years ago, I came into this world, and my mother looked at me with gentle eyes. Looking at me, I know that my mother endured the pain of surgery to give birth to my little life, and I can enjoy the beauty of nature.

When I was two years old, my mother began to teach me how to speak and walk. When I fell, I thought my mother would come to help me, but she stood there and looked at me with encouraging eyes. I really hated my mother a little bit at that time. I felt that she no longer loved me and didn’t care about me. Although I wanted to cry, I held it back and stood up with my own strength... When I was ten years old, my mother began to cultivate my ability. Every day at noon, my mother would stand next to me and watch me wash the dishes. Sometimes she would ask me some things about school, and I would be happy to tell her about them, because my mother could laugh and be sad with me. , just like two good friends together, talking about everything. In this way, I learned labor and understanding from my mother. I am fourteen years old and am now in eighth grade. Sometimes I don’t want to communicate with my mother. Although my mother will still stay with me when washing dishes, I always respond to my mother’s words with “Yeah.” /p>

Oh." Just like that, the house was no longer filled with laughter, but with the suppressed breathing of my mother and I.

My mother also knew me very well. She never said a word to me, but I didn't take it seriously. I didn't know how to understand my mother's good intentions. Until one day, my mother suggested taking me to the bathhouse to take a bath. I was surprised. , it’s not like there is no water heater at home. When I was taking a shower, I saw the scar on my mother's belly. I couldn't help but be shocked. Is this my first home? Is this where I came from? I touched my mother's belly and asked, "Fourteen years ago, it must have hurt..." "It didn't hurt. I was the happiest then." I looked at my mother's tearful eyes but with a hint of smile. When I fell down, I realized that I was wrong. I was so stupid. My mother didn't help me when I fell because she wanted me to learn to be strong.

Self-reliance, my mother is my mother after all, she is the dearest person in my life... Therefore, we must learn to thank our mother, even in the little things in life, we can slightly change our A little thought, just like this, will make the mother feel a little relieved. Mother, an ordinary and great person in my life, is also the person I am most grateful for in my life. 4. Regarding the vivid and expressive language description of mother

"Mother" is an ordinary and great word. I think everyone will be familiar with this word, but few people are familiar with it. To repay this person who taught me a lot about life, few people recall everything they learned from their mother...

In that hot summer fourteen years ago, I came into this world. , and my mother looked at me with gentle eyes. I knew that it was my mother who endured the pain of surgery to give birth to my little life, and I could also enjoy the beauty of nature.

When I was two years old, my mother began to teach me how to speak and walk. When I fell, I thought my mother would come to help me, but she stood there and looked at me with encouraging eyes. I really hated my mother a little at that time. I felt that she no longer loved me and didn't care about me. Although I wanted to cry, I held it back and stood up with my own strength...

When I was ten years old , my mother began to cultivate my ability to work. Every day at noon, my mother would stand next to me and watch me wash the dishes. Sometimes she would ask me some things about school, and I would be happy to tell her, because, mother Being able to laugh and be sad together with me is like two good friends being together and talking about anything. In this way, I learned labor and understanding from my mother.

I am fourteen years old. I am now in the eighth grade. Sometimes I don’t want to communicate with my mother. Although my mother will still stay with me when washing dishes, I still don’t care about my mother’s words. , always dealing with "um. oh. ah". In this way, the house was no longer filled with laughter, but with the suppressed breathing of my mother and me.

My mother also knew me very well. She never said a word to me, but I didn’t take it seriously. I didn’t know how to understand my mother’s good intentions. Until one day, my mother suggested taking me to the bathhouse to take a bath. I was surprised. , it’s not like there is no water heater at home. When I was taking a shower, I saw the scar on my mother's belly. I couldn't help but be shocked. Is this my first home? Is this where I came from? I touched my mother's belly and asked, "Fourteen years ago, it must have hurt..." "It didn't hurt. I was the happiest then." I looked at my mother's tearful eyes but with a hint of smile. When I fell down, I realized that I was wrong. I was so stupid. My mother didn't help me when I fell because she wanted me to learn to be strong. Self-reliance, my mother is my mother after all, she is the dearest person in my life...

Therefore, we must learn to thank our mother, even in the little things in life, we can slightly change our A little thought, just like this, will make the mother feel a little relieved.

Mother, an ordinary and great person in my life, is also the person most worthy of gratitude in my life. 5. Expressive sentences describing characters

1. Lingling is less than two years old. Chubby.

On the rosy little face, there is a pair of watery glasses. The pigtails are sticking up to the sky, and the pink hairband is bouncing on the head, like two flying colorful butterflies.

What is particularly cute is her clever little mouth.

2. It seems that Teacher Du is in his 30s. He wears a pair of black wide-rimmed glasses on his serious rectangular face. His two small eyes are shining brightly behind the lenses; the corners of his mouth are always tightly closed. I don't like to talk much at ordinary times.

In my memory, it seems that he only wears a pair of blue clothes that are not old and new, and his sleeves always like to be rolled up. Whenever get out of class was over, he would put the book under his arm and put the remaining half of chalk in his pocket. He lowered his head, like the footprints when he found it, slowly, step by step. Walked towards his office.

However, in class, he seemed to become another person. He spoke non-stop when he lectured, and his voice was extremely loud when he read the text. Sometimes his face would glow red with excitement, and he would step forward to the podium and wave his arms... all the students' attention was attracted to him. , looking at him with wide eyes.

3. This old man’s eyebrows and beard are all gray. But his face was still purple and he looked full of energy.

He was wearing a brand new blue cotton jacket and trousers, with a snow-white towel wrapped around his head. The old man squatted on the ground, smoking a dry cigarette happily.

4. On his thin, tanned face, there is a pair of slightly sunken, large, double-lidded eyes; his eyebrows are thin and slanted; his black and yellow hair is tied into two short sections with strips of calico. Braids; clothes are very old; there is a pin in the hole in the right trouser leg; I go barefoot in spring, summer and autumn, only when I go up the mountain to grab firewood, I wear a pair of shoes for fear of puncturing my feet, but I take them off when I get down the mountain. . 5. This is a young man in his thirties.

Wearing a military cotton coat and high leather boots. Tall, with a square face and very burly appearance.

There is a black mole on the chin, and the eyes shine brightly in the dark, making people feel rough and shrewd. 6. Li Yun is a smart and naughty child.

On his chubby face, there is a pair of big naughty eyes. The eyelids are flickering. As long as those two big black gem-like eyes are turned, the evil ideas will come. On his dark face, whether it is the bulging cheeks, the thin lips, or the slightly raised tip of the nose, they all make you feel funny and cute.

7. This old man wore a broken straw hat on his head, and the hair exposed outside the brim was already gray. There is a gray-but-yellow coat draped over his shoulders.

The whole back was black and shiny, as if it had been coated with a layer of oil. The lower trouser legs were rolled up past the knees, and the hairy calves were covered with countless knots, large and small, connected by high bulging blood vessels.

There are no shoes on the feet, and the old leather on the soles is probably as thick as a finger... There is a dry cigarette pouch on the waist, and the cigarette pouch is hung on the waist, swinging on both sides like a pendulum. 8. On New Year's Eve, her son and grandson came to her. The wrinkles on her face were stretched out, like blooming chrysanthemum petals, and every wrinkle was filled with smiles.

One day, her wife fell ill. The bead-like wrinkles on her face deepened, and the knots formed by her two eyebrows locked together. She looked at the portrait of her wife, her lips trembling slightly, and there were strings of tears flowing in the wrinkles like knife carvings.

Attached is "How to Write a Good Description of a Character's Appearance". The description of a character's appearance is an important part of character description. A good description of a character's appearance can often make the character come alive and leave a deep impression on the reader. The appearance of a character mainly includes the person's appearance, posture, clothing, expression, demeanor, etc.

The description of a person's appearance is also called portrait description, which is to accurately, vividly and vividly describe the appearance and characteristics of the character, and convey the spirit through the description of appearance, revealing the character's ideological quality, spiritual outlook and personality to the readers. Character traits. How can you write a good description of a character’s appearance? We might as well start from the following three aspects.

1. Appearance description must be "accurate". Accuracy means accurately describing the character's appearance, so that the character's image will be real and credible.

A person's appearance is often affected by factors such as his or her identity, occupation, age, upbringing, habits, life experience, family environment, physical condition and other factors. People in different professions often have different appearances.

For example, dancers have thicker legs and slender limbs; weightlifters tend to be stronger; fishermen have darker skin and their toes are spread out like cattail fans from walking on boats for a long time. People's appearance is also obviously different depending on their age. Children are innocent and cute, young people are energetic, middle-aged people are mature and steady, and old people are deaf and dazzled.

These all reflect the natural laws of his life. Of course, people have different habits and often show different characteristics.

For example, smokers seem to be missing front teeth and smell of tobacco from time to time; non-smokers have white teeth. People's different upbringings can often be seen from their appearance. Educated people have a sitting posture and a standing posture; an educated person speaks in a formal and clear manner; an uneducated person staggers around while sitting and standing. Speaking rudely and unorganized... We must carefully observe all these and describe them with accurate language, so that the image of the character can be accurately described.

2. The description of appearance should be "accurate". Essence means carefully selecting the characters' appearance and characteristics, and concentrating the description with pen and ink to make the characters' images accurate and vivid.

There are no people with exactly the same appearance in the world. According to the needs of expression, we must carefully select the unique characteristics from the characters’ appearance and focus on the description. The others can be omitted or passed over in one stroke to make the characters more vivid. The appearance is more precise and distinct. Sometimes, based on the actual situation of the material at hand, or for the need of a certain expression, we can focus the appearance description on a certain part of the character.

For example, my grandfather’s hands were hard and cracked with many holes. Although they were ugly, they were a testament to his hard work. He helped me knit toys and showed his dexterity. Writing like this often makes the hard-working and clever grandpa come to life on the page.

We carefully select the distinctive appearance of the characters and describe them accurately, which often creates new ideas. 3. The description of appearance should be “deep”.

Depth means that the description of the character's appearance should reflect the character's spiritual quality and write the depth of the character. When describing a character's appearance, we must focus on selecting the appearance features that best reflect the character's ideological quality, mental outlook, personality traits, temperament and emotions, so as to make the character image more vivid, more touching, and achieve a state of divine resemblance.

Of course, we still do. 6. Are there any articles about exquisite language?

It is always appropriate to wear heavy makeup and light makeup

——Let wonderful language decorate the spring of articles

How about in the examination room? To make your composition stand out, language plays a crucial role. Because no matter how good the ideas and concepts are, they need to be presented to everyone in vivid, lively and expressive language. The vivid and lively language makes people enjoy the beauty of reading it, like drinking sweet rain, with fragrance in their cheeks and mouth full of fragrance. Confucius said: "Emotions need to be believed, and words need to be skillful." "Skillful" means that the language must be vivid, lively, and vivid. How to add beautiful color to students’ composition language? Here are several methods of polishing language for reference.

1. Enrichment of language expressions

Most of the students’ compositions, especially articles about people and events, use narrative forms. Such an article reads as ordinary as drinking boiled water. The reason is that it lacks a sense of image and has a single way of expression. If you appropriately use delicate, vivid and expressive descriptions in your articles, it will make the written images "alive".

2. Use figures of speech to enhance appeal

Clever use of figures of speech can turn plain language into novelty, turn obsolescence into novelty, and add bright color to articles. Metaphor is the use of association to present the thing written in other things with similar characteristics to give people a distinct impression. Personification is to give the written thing a kind of human thoughts and feelings, making it personified, humane, and giving people a sense of intimacy. Parallelism can enhance the momentum and reasoning of the article, and can also bring beauty to people. The comprehensive use of metaphors, personification, parallelism and other figures of speech makes the description of the composition concrete, vivid and vivid, thus enhancing the appeal of the language.

3. Confess the true feelings frankly

"What touches people's hearts is nothing but love." Only deep true feelings can touch the readers' heartstrings and arouse their thoughts. This reminds students to understand life with their heart and learn to integrate emotions into literature. You should open your heart calmly and talk about your feelings. Language must be rich in emotion, so that readers can taste the beauty of the article and understand the emotion of the article along with your language.

4. Make clever use of ancient poetry to diversify language styles

Chinese civilization has a long history, and ancient poetry is broad and profound. There are many attractive and inspiring sentences, lyrical and metaphorical sentences, which can guide students to expand or use them according to their own ideas, which has the wonderful effect of defeating more with less and enhancing their foundation. It can also be the finishing touch and reveal the theme of the article. Such as "Look up at the bright moon, bow your head and miss your hometown", "Where is the hometown at dusk, on the Yanbo River, it makes people sad", "Where can the hometown books be reached, the returning geese fall by the bridge" and other eternal lines express people's homesickness. Complex feelings.

"If you want to compare the West Lake to the West, it is always better to wear heavy makeup and light makeup." To make the language of the composition flourish, it requires students' daily accumulation and self-creation. Give students a free space and let them write. I believe that the language of children's compositions will become "beautiful". 7. Lively and expressive language of about 5 to 10 words

This afternoon the teacher told us that the teacher from Zhumadian Experimental Primary School was going to send his class to the countryside and asked us to be his temporary students.

We lined up neatly and arrived at the multimedia classroom of No. 1 Middle School. When I walked into the classroom, there were many teachers sitting behind me. What a spectacular scene! I was extremely excited. The class started, and the teacher briefly introduced himself. Listening to the teacher’s sweet words, I felt very cordial and my nervousness disappeared. First the teacher asked us how many hours are there in a day? My classmates and I all rushed to raise our hands. The teacher called on me and asked me to answer. I gave the answer very completely. The teacher praised me kindly. Next, the teacher asked us a lot of questions, and my classmates and I were very active in thinking and answering them.

Time flies, and a class ends in the blink of an eye without knowing it. This class not only allowed me to experience the teacher’s good teaching style, but also taught me a lot and made me understand Only by listening carefully in class can I learn more knowledge. I will study harder in the future and grow up to be a pillar of the country. 8. Lively and expressive language

1. The people in this mountain have their own clever ideas, so you don’t have to worry about it

2. Being stupid is not your problem, but being scary is your problem

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3. It’s not that I don’t know, but that the world is changing rapidly

4. Money is not the problem, the problem is money

5. Money is precious, but love is even more valuable High, if there is freedom, both can be thrown

6. The blood can flow, the head can be thrown, and the hair cannot be messed up.

7. If you don’t have freedom, you would rather die

8. Just be stable

9. This is not a problem

10. Do it I don't have much time to do this. Let's go and do my homework.

Ancient examples:

Luoyang paper is expensive, an ancient Chinese idiom, originally referring to the paper in Luoyang, the capital of the Western Jin Dynasty. Because everyone rushed to copy Zuo Si's work "Sandu Fu", the supply exceeded demand for a while. Scarce and expensive. The works of Hou Yu are valued by the world. They are popular and widely circulated. From the "Book of Jin·Zuo Si Zhuan": "Therefore, wealthy and noble families competed to pass down the writing, and Luoyang was very expensive for it.

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Lively words:

The writing is wonderful, the writing is beautiful, the writing is beautiful, the writing is brilliant, the words are written in one go, the words are pearly and hearty

The writing is excellent, vivid and lifelike, lifelike and lifelike. Quick and witty

Erudite, talented, talented, rich in knowledge, concise and concise, flawless and to the point

Far-sighted, insightful, correct in words, strict in speaking, outstanding, superb, transfigured into a rainbow

Majestic, majestic, swallowing mountains and rivers, overwhelming mountains and seas, turbulent waves, thunderous waves, thunderous and thrilling

Sweeping thousands of armies in a shocking and earth-shattering way, finding every opportunity to exploit every opportunity, the writing is perfect and flawless

The dragons and phoenixes are dancing incomparably