Fourth-grade children write compositions and check their mobile phones.

1. According to parents who play mobile phones and ignore their children's writing, children criticize their parents' faults in their writing, and more than one-fifth of the "slots" are playing mobile phones. Yesterday, the Chu Cai composition contest entered the first day of grading, and the judges found that in the eyes of children, the "low-headed family" among adults became the primary problem.

Judge Gong, who reviewed the composition of sixth-grade students, told reporters that one of the sixth-grade composition questions was "bad habits of adults". In more than 100 papers he corrected yesterday morning, more than 20% of the children said in unison: adults love playing mobile phones too much.

In the child's description, adults can't live without mobile phones: dad watches news and plays online games, mom Taobao, and even grandparents can play Tetris on their mobile phones. Usually, my mother has to dictate her homework, and she has to wait until the content on her mobile phone is finished before she reluctantly puts it down and perfunctory herself with her homework. A few people, from grandparents to parents to aunts, have found happiness in the mobile phone world.

Another classmate wrote more interestingly: Dad was playing with his mobile phone while walking, and as a result, he fell into a pit on the side of the road, which also attracted interviews from media reporters. "Such a plot may be fictional, but the reality that adults are addicted to mobile phones is real." He said.

In the evaluation of the fifth grade composition, the judges also found the children's obsession with mobile phones from the two topics of "looking for family" and "universal pill" (science fiction). A student wrote that on New Year's Eve, the family didn't watch the Spring Festival Gala, but only cared about the mobile phone, but as a result, they ignored communication and their affection cooled down.

The judge appealed to adults to educate their children, often only asking them to get good grades, and not indulging in computer networks and mobile phones, ignoring the influence of their actions on their children. Education needs words and deeds, not just indulging children.

2. The second volume of Grade Four wrote a composition about loving mobile phones. "Every time, I am strong in the loneliness of wandering. Every time, even if I get hurt, I don't cry. I know I always have a pair of invisible wings. Take me flying and fly over despair. " Every time I skip and hum Angela Zhang's song Invisible Wings with my schoolbag on my back, my heart will be full of happiness and confidence. My good friends Mu Xing and He Beibei both got full marks. My mother scolded me severely when she found out, saying that I had lost her face because I had been studying English outside since the first grade, but they didn't. In those days, I was depressed. I didn't take the initiative to talk in class and didn't play with my classmates after class. I always feel that others are laughing at me: haha, you have been making up your English outside. I didn't do as well as others in the exam-Miss Wang seems to have read my mind. One day in Chinese class, Teacher Wang suddenly asked, "Which one of you can sing invisible wings?" As soon as Mr. Wang finished asking, several students sang loudly, and I was fascinated by the beautiful rotation.

I read an article saying that you are willing to invest 400,000 yuan to buy a traditional mobile phone to eradicate a middle school student's addiction to smart phones.

Your son's eyesight has also declined due to excessive use of smart phones, and his eyesight has improved after replacing traditional mobile phones. You think replacing traditional mobile phones is the best way to save students who are addicted to smart phones.

Your concern for the new generation of the motherland is really admirable, but I always think that this method is too arbitrary and cannot fundamentally cure the mobile phone disease. There is a joke: the furthest distance in the world is when I am in front of you and you look down at your mobile phone. "

This joke fully embodies the harm brought by smart phones. The diversification of functions and the enrichment of content are all disadvantages that bring problems.

Cell phone disease is a common problem of most people, and a large part of them are actually students at school. I am also a middle school student, and I can fully understand this feeling.

I can't live without my mobile phone. I also secretly watch my mobile phone and play games in class. A series of high-tech products such as novels, games, Weibo and QQ are eroding our normal life and health all the time.

Playing with things is a kind of realism. For a time, I was fascinated by the short story. Whether it was the exaggeration of fantasy or the ecstasy of crossing, I couldn't extricate myself.

Watch it in the morning, watch it at night, watch it after class and watch it in class. So I don't attend class, I can't keep up with the teacher's rhythm, and my homework depends on copying.

The degree of myopia in the eyes is deepened, and the spine and neck are sore. Disaster has finally arrived.

The final exam was a complete failure, and a series of problems such as spinal diseases appeared one after another. Who is to blame? Is it the fault of playing mobile phone? The kind teacher and I had a long talk.

It's nothing more than a smartphone debate caused by my declining grades. She said: successful people are not the best in intelligence, nor the hardest, but the most able to control themselves. "

Then she said,' I like reading novels, too. "Show me your mobile phone."

But I have never missed your class. It's not to stop you from playing with your mobile phone, but to let you use it correctly. "

I'm still reading novels, but I don't read them anymore. I have listened carefully, finished my homework and reviewed carefully. Finally, take time to read novels.

Now the research has stabilized. I don't think using a smart phone can kill a boatman with one pole. We should guide and communicate correctly.

4. In the fourth grade, when children write a composition, they often react that they can't write, don't know what to write, and seek knowledge. "A good exercise theme comes from the gestation of life and the love of life.

However, many students suffer from not knowing what to write, and think that writing is very difficult, because they are poor in observation and analysis, not good at understanding and capturing the most essential examples in life, not knowing how to express them, and turning a blind eye to many things around them. You can enroll your child in a bubble composition class in New Oriental and learn some writing methods.

In fact, in teaching, students must be guided to carefully observe the things around them, the people around them, the things around them and their feelings, so that students can understand that there are articles everywhere in life. As long as they pay attention to life, observe carefully, take notes diligently and be good at accumulating, there will be endless materials, and maybe a good original article will be at your fingertips.

5. I am a mobile phone fan. The composition is 400 words. What kind of fan am I in fourth grade?

I don't know what I am. Maybe I'm a music fan, maybe I'm a computer fan, maybe I'm a painting fan, maybe I'm a paper-cutting fan, maybe I'm a sports fan, maybe I'm a reading fan, maybe I'm an amateur. ...

It is true that I am a music fan. I like both classical and popular, Chinese and foreign. Moreover, I am a guzheng student, and I have never been idle when practicing the piano: I have "Liangzhu" for practicing my fingers and "Liuyang River" for practicing my basic skills. I have practiced fingering and music, and I have the best of both worlds. Usually, I also like listening to music. I like listening to light music and often indulge in it.

Speaking of computers, I can talk about Kan Kan. I like watching news, playing games, chatting, sending pictures, making slides and doing anything I want. When the time comes, you need to check the information, and it will only take a few seconds anytime and anywhere.

Yes, I'm a painting fan. There are many places in my room where my masterpieces are hidden. A few lines and a circle can be a flower and a fish in my imagination. In my room, my most satisfying painting is my recently finished work. I named it "Pig Ange". A lovely little pig (my little pig) is on a lovely cloud. How pure it is, it represents love and peace in my heart. This painting has been highly praised by my family, which makes me a little complacent.

I am a sports fan. I like skipping rope, ball games and other sports. When I am free, I will go to the park to exercise with my neighbors, breathe the fresh air in the park, and exercise is particularly refreshing.

Speaking of books, I have read almost all over the world. I have watched The Romance of The Three Kingdoms The Journey to the West more than several times. Jane Eyre, The Merchant of Venice and The Count of Monte Cristo are also my favorites. My favorite is the recently bought Complete Works of Lu Xun, which contains several famous novels and essays by Lu Xun, such as Kong Yiji, The True Story of Ah Q, Blessing, From Baicaoyuan to San Tan Yin Yue and so on. I can tell the content of each article and feel Lu Xun's feelings.

What am I? I like everything.

What kind of fan am I?

There is a versatile boy in our family. He has many hobbies. Let me tell you about it.

Christine; Fan Fan

He is a die-hard Go lover! Li Changgao is his idol, Chang Hao is his ideal, Weiqi Tiandi is his favorite book, and Weiqi is his favorite activity.

Once, his mother was telling him math, but he didn't listen at all. Go came to his mind, and then he fell into thinking: Li Changgao was the chess king of 200 1, and Kobayashi was the chess saint of 2002 ... At this moment, his mother asked him to answer a question. He thought for a moment and suddenly blurted out, "Nie Weiping!" The result can be imagined-a violent K.

Four-wheel drive fan

"Xiao Xiang, get me a battery!"

"Mao Kaiwen, help me install the motor!"

"coming."

"I see"

"Hey, this car is loaded. Why can't you drive Brother Xiao? Can you help me?"

"stupid! There is no gear on your motor. God, I don't have a gear. Go to Xiao Xu (the owner of the toy store, as we all call him) and buy one. "

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After a day's work, he can finally go home. On his way home, he took out what he had spent the whole day assembling.

The "inner senses" galloped on the landslide. It's so fast that it's no trouble to rush to the landslide.

In the evening, he put the "inner sense" on the bed and covered him with a quilt (actually a handkerchief).

He is also a fan of technology, history and detective. ...

If he is asked to fill in his hobbies, he really doesn't know what to fill in. Oh, great! I forgot to tell you that he is a son!

6. Chinese composition exercise 4 in the second volume of the fourth grade. My mother's mobile phone is sick. My mother often plays with her mobile phone.

My mother who loves playing mobile phones writes 450 words.

Every time I am sent to school, my mother always plays with her mobile phone for a while, eating and sleeping while playing, and no one listens.

So I made up my mind to help my mother get rid of this bad habit. I found a free time and told my mother what I thought.

Mother suddenly showed an unhappy expression. Mother pulled a face and said, "If so, what if there is something important?" I explained, "Put your mobile phone aside while eating and sleeping, and you can hear the news?" I can't explain, alas! What should we do?

I began to observe my mother. When eating, I touch my mother's mobile phone as soon as she plays with it. When I went to bed at night, my mother happened to be holding a mobile phone, so I asked her to tell me stories and ask questions. This not only improved my thinking ability and understanding ability, but also made my mother get rid of this bad habit.

Under my watch these days, my mother's bad habits began to get rid of slowly.

I don't play often, but I can play a little. I started monitoring again. A month later, I saw the effect. My mother stopped playing with her mobile phone and slept enough. Mom used to say that she couldn't sleep well, just playing with her mobile phone.

Mom stopped playing with her mobile phone, and our family was very happy.

4 Computer Storm Guo Foreword: My family recently bought a new computer, which caused a storm. Chapter 1 Having a computer at home Today is neither a reward nor a holiday, but an ordinary Monday, but I am very excited because my family is going to have a new friend-a computer.

After school in the evening, my father and I went to the computer shop agreed by my mother in advance to get the computer. When I got home, my father led my master to the living room, and I followed him in. The master and my father are installing computers. I'm so excited that I finally have a computer. Chapter 2 I am addicted to games. Since I bought a computer at home, I seldom go to my neighbor's house, because I used to go there to play games and look for information online. Now that I have a computer at home, why go to him? However, during my visit to his home, I found computer games very interesting, so I borrowed computer games from my cousin to prepare for a copy operation.

I really don't know. I was shocked when I put on handcuffs-computer games are much more interesting than I expected, so I'm looking forward to Friday, because I can have a good meal on Friday night. My mother read my mind and was very angry. She said angrily, "I regret buying you a computer. I bought it for you to study, but you used it to play games. " My heart ached when I heard this, but I thought that if I acted very sad, my mother would push her luck, so I pretended not to care, which was self-defeating. My mother was even angrier when she saw me like this, and found me adding fuel to the fire. My mother really wants to give her computer a call. When I saw it, my heart suddenly hung up. No, I really can't. I quickly ran to catch up: "I have to change, I have to change ... please don't give the computer to others."

"Must be changed, must be changed, must be changed!" My head is like a chicken pecking rice. "Well, just this once," I took a long breath-the computer was finally saved.

The proverb of installing broadband in the third chapter says: "Clothes make the man, and horses depend on the saddle." Buying a computer is boring, and I can't surf the Internet. It is best to install broadband internet access, so my father called the post office. An acquaintance of my father works in the post office. The man said that he would install it on Monday. My mind is full of countless question marks, but there is only one question, "What day is it today? When will the broadband installer come? " Of course, you should also ask questions. Better find mom and dad. Dad had to cover his ears as soon as he got home. Mother prepared transparent glue to seal my mouth, but it didn't work. I still asked about Monday, and no one was installing broadband on Monday. Dad said it was because the broadband installer was in a hurry and would come tomorrow.

Tuesday is the same, and Wednesday is the same. I was furious and thought I was Guo Daxia. I was cheated to such an extent that I sighed! Tomorrow and the day after tomorrow, so many tomorrows, but I have no choice but to wait helplessly for him. Another day passed, and it was Thursday. Just when I had no hope for it, there was a great news that the broadband had been installed! The man finally tore up his letter.

It's really "intentional flowers don't bloom, unintentional willows become shadows"! I am secretly happy. The fourth chapter resisted the temptation to install broadband, only to find that the online world is so magical-there is no information, you can click it, and you can talk to your friends with a few clicks. Some important news should be told to people far away, and a few clicks can ensure that there are no mistakes ... The benefits of computers are so many that they are really attractive, but the most deadly games are like demons, inciting people's floating hearts. Only by resisting temptation can computers really play a role. Frog Storm Leo opens the photo album, and you will see a picture of a little boy smiling and full of tears.

There is an unforgettable story in it. I remember that afternoon, I was doing my homework, and my mother came back from shopping, holding a bunch of frogs and saying with a smile, "There are good dishes today."

What did I say? My mother said, "It's a frog!" Mother is going to clean the frog. I stepped forward and stopped her: "Frogs are good for amphibians. Please leave these poor little things alone. Mom said angrily and funny, "forget it?" No way, unless you want my five dollars back, isn't my five dollars just waiting for water? "Seeing my mother's indifference, I angrily thought of the lovely frogs and the tragic fate waiting for them.

I rushed up, picked up the rope tied to the frog and ran. No matter what mom shouts behind.

I didn't even listen I ran to the pond in one breath. Little frog is free. They held their heads high and croaked as if thanking me. On the way home, I seem to feel that pedestrians are looking at me with approval. I seem to feel that the sunshine today is brighter than usual.

But when I got home, I started to get scared. I guess there will be a scolding waiting for me. It seems that there are many angry mothers in front, and that kind of scolding is really scary. To my surprise, I was shocked when I walked into the house. The table is full of delicious food, and my parents are sitting at the table.

When they saw me coming in, they sang in unison: "Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you ..." The song made me suddenly realize that my mother stood up and said: "I promised my good boy that I would never buy frogs again and give them to my lovely children as birthday gifts." I rushed up, hugged my mother's neck and smiled, and the tears that I had been holding in my eyes just now burst out.

At this time, I only heard a click, and this unforgettable scene was left in the album ... Xin Yuan, who had a false alarm, "Don't change classes, just don't change classes, wow! -""don't change classes, die without changing classes. I am so angry! " "Don't you want to change shifts?" "oh, my god! Come and judge! " Some students huddled together and burst into tears; Some students have a runny nose and tears; Some kept crying like Lacrimosa; Some headlines cry.

8. How to help fourth-grade children write a composition 1? Read Chinese textbooks carefully and read extracurricular books extensively.

Reading is the basis of writing. Turn other people's things into your own things, internalize the external language into your own language, and then you can export it later.

Spend some time reading the text every day, reading with expression, memorizing paragraphs and wonderful sentences. Read it a hundred times and your meaning will show.

This is the truth that "you can recite poems even if you are familiar with 300 Tang poems". Read all kinds of books and develop good reading habits.

Excerpt good chapters and paragraphs. It is necessary to read China's classic American literature purposefully and systematically.

Second, choose the right writing materials to write articles. Choosing suitable writing materials is the basis of practice. (1) center is contained in concrete material and serves the performance center.

Therefore, the selection of materials must be closely around the center and obey the needs of the center. (2) Choose authentic materials, which should be authentic, reliable and reasonable.

In our usual practice, we should choose subjects that we are familiar with or understand, and it is best to choose realistic materials that we have experienced, heard and seen personally. Only these real materials can express inner feelings, and the articles written can be convincing, inspiring, fascinating and inspiring.

(3) Select typical materials. Choosing typical materials means choosing the materials that are most representative, can best reflect the essence and can best explain the problem, and those that can best highlight people's ideological quality and clearly reflect the spiritual outlook of things.

(4) Select novel materials. Novel material refers to fresh, lively, unique, refreshing and rewarding material.

So try to choose materials that others have never written or rarely written. Life is not a lack of novelty, but a lack of discovery.

Therefore, we should observe patiently at ordinary times and pay attention to finding and looking for novel materials in our lives. Only in this way can the article be closer to life and more contemporary, and the purpose of seeking beauty with literature and refining people with literature can be achieved. Third, carefully organize the writing materials.

(1) parallel method. In other words, the center of performance is to interrupt the continuity of time and disrupt the position of space. It revolves around the center, connecting related life fragments or events in series, selecting several identical or similar materials according to the nature of things, arranging the materials side by side, and showing the center from different angles in a meticulous and sketchy way.

(2) Contrast method. That is, the use of mutually opposing materials, or the use of different aspects of the same thing to compare, so as to show the truth, goodness, evil, beauty and ugliness of people and things, so that the image of people and things is distinct and prominent.

(3) Progressive method. That is, around one thing, taking the development process of the thing itself and the passage of time as clues, arrange the materials step by step.

This method is very common in our homework. (4) Detailed methods.

That is to say, when expressing a center, there are ways to organize the materials in detail for several similar materials. This method can highlight the key points and make them clear.

Organizing composition materials, no matter which method is adopted, should serve the performance center, meet the needs of different articles and genres, and arrange the materials in the articles reasonably. Fourth, write the article concretely and vividly.

Concrete and vivid is one of the basic requirements of exercises and the key to writing a good article. This article infected readers with concrete and vivid images.

(1) Use the total score method. (2) Use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and parallelism to make the article concrete and vivid.

(3) Write the article vividly with examples. (4) Write the article concretely and vividly by descriptive method.

(5) Make the article concrete and vivid through comparison. (6) Use the method of data explanation to make the article concrete and vivid.

In addition to the methods mentioned above, in order to make the article concrete and vivid, we should also pay more attention to observing the things around us. Only by careful observation can we show the observed scenery concretely and vividly. Fifth, express your true feelings.

(1) Choose the material that you feel most deeply. In practice, according to the requirements of the topic, it is easy to express the true feelings by choosing the materials that feel the deepest.

(2) express true feelings with concrete things. Without concrete things, the article has no true feelings.

True feelings are generally expressed through narration, description and discussion of specific things. (3) Words are used to make sentences accurately and realistically.

The article is based on emotional people, and this "feeling" refers to true feelings. To make the thoughts and feelings of the article true, words and sentences should be more accurate, true and appropriate.

Sixth, write the beginning and end of the article. (1) Write a good beginning As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". An appropriate and novel beginning can not only make you write flowers, but also increase your literary talent and attract readers.

(1) confessed four elements from the beginning. That is, simply explain the time, place, people and events at the beginning.

② Cut to the chase. That is, the article does not beat around the bush at the beginning, but directly puts out the people, things or things to be described and introduces them into the text.

Directly express the author's point of view, point out the center, and guide the full text. (3) Description of the scene at the beginning.

That is to say, at the beginning of the article, people, events and scenes are described first, and the atmosphere is rendered, giving readers an immersive feeling and paving the way for setting off characters and touching scenes. (4) Ask questions at the beginning.

That is, at the beginning of the article, asking questions makes people think, thus attracting readers' attention and interest. ⑤ Flashback method.

That is, at the beginning of the article, write the result of the matter first, and then write the reason and process of the matter, so as to create suspense and enhance the attraction of the article. 6. The starting method of expressing feelings.

That is, express the author's personal feelings and thoughts and feelings at the beginning of the article. ⑦ Reveal the central opening method.

Some articles summarize the full text at the beginning and directly point out the center of the article. ⑧ Introduce the background opening method.

According to the content of the article, in addition to introducing the time and place of the incident, it also introduces the form and related situation before the incident. The outline is always changing. If you read more, Syaraku will be fine.

(2) How to write the end of the article ① Natural ending method. That is, the end of the article is the result of things. When the story is finished, the article is over.

(2) Point ending method. This is a common way to end.

Attention should be paid to: how to summarize the full text, how to refine the central idea of the article, and avoid repeating the basic content or the beginning of the article. ③ problem ending method.

That is, at the end, ask questions in the form of questions (rhetorical questions or rhetorical questions). This ending.