The way of speaking in novels

She looked up at the stranger and opened her mouth wide enough to put an egg in. "..."

After listening to his words, xx widened his eyes angrily, and his long hair hanging at his waist stood in the air, braving a fire behind him!

Eyes flashing with stars, grabbing his arm and shaking, coquetry way: "..."

Do you want that mood? Such as surprise, pity, etc. I won't know what to write until you make it clear, otherwise it will be too much and I don't know which one you want ~