Mother wrote a composition in the fourth grade.

In ordinary daily life, composition is the most familiar thing for everyone. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, composition can be divided into propositional composition and non-propositional composition. So have you ever studied composition? The following is my mother's composition in grade four for reference only. Let's have a look.

Mom's fourth grade composition 1 In my life, the person who has the most profound influence on me is my mother. She is of medium height, with short black hair, reddish face and big bright eyes like a magnifying glass, and seems to be able to see through your inner thoughts at a glance.

My mother taught me to be honest from an early age and not to covet the petty advantages of others. Not long ago, I encountered such a thing, which impressed me deeply and touched me a lot.

At noon that day, I came home from cram school, and the burning sun was burning me. As I walked, I kept fanning the cool air with advertising paper, but the sweat kept rolling down my face like a broken bead, and a drop of sweat rolled into my eyes, which stung me to go home quickly.

As soon as I got home, I found my mother shopping downstairs. I ran to her and said, "Mom! Today, the sun is as hot as a stove, and people will get sunburned. I want to buy a popsicle to eat. " My mother grabbed my hand and said, "Come on, girl, I'll take you to buy a popsicle."

Three steps and two steps, we went to the place where popsicles were sold. I picked up the popsicle. My mother took out a 100 bill from her purse and handed it to the aunt who sold popsicles. After my aunt found the money, my mother and I left without counting. When I got home, I sat in the yard enjoying the cool while eating an old popsicle. It's beautiful to ask my mother to open the door-beautiful. My mother counted the money back again, cocked her head and said to me, "Hey! Isn't that right? A * * * is 7 yuan, how can I get 95 yuan back? " Hearing this, I said happily, "This is great! The popsicle seller was confused and called 2 yuan. Mom, can you give me two yuan? " My mother glared at me and said angrily, "We should return the extra two yuan, and we should not covet other people's things to take advantage." . Moreover, it is not easy for people to earn that money in 30-40 degrees weather. "After that, my mother braved the scorching sun to give the two yuan to the aunt who sold popsicles.

When I sleep at night, I lie in bed, tossing and turning, but I can't sleep. I always think of what happened during the day, and I suddenly understand a truth in my heart: to be honest, honesty should start from small things, not because of a little immediate benefit, honesty is the most important thing.

This is my most admired mother, an honest and kind mother. You are my mirror and I love you.

Dear mom, you get up so early every morning, cook for me, send me to school, take me home every night, and take the time to prepare delicious dinner for me. While washing dishes and clothes, you urged me to finish my homework carefully. You never think about what you should eat, play and wear, but think about what you should do for me all day. You have maintained everything for me with your efforts.

However, once my Chinese performance was not satisfactory. Half of the students in our class are above 90, but I only got 69. I don't think you should open all my hips this time.

As soon as I got home, I showed you my Chinese paper, but you whispered to me, "Never mind, I will do better in the next exam." But when I was about to fall asleep at night, I heard your voice tossing and turning in bed. I think you must be very sad. You must be wondering, why did Chenxi do so badly in the exam this time?

The next morning, you said to me easily, "Take out your Chinese paper and tell me where you are wrong?" There turned out to be a big problem I didn't do. I said to my mother, "Because it is easier than the following question, I will do the following question first, but I have been doing it since then, and I forgot." You jokingly said to me, "It's generous of you to give away such a good piece of land." I can't help laughing, but I think I must check it next time, and I will never be so careless. There are many questions that I haven't read carefully. I went on talking, but you still listened carefully.

You didn't open my hips, and you didn't even blame me. Instead, you treat me with a funny attitude that I failed the Chinese exam. I know, you want me not to be sad and discouraged, and strive for good grades in the future. Your heart must be extremely uncomfortable, but you can't show me the enthusiasm that affects my study.

Dear mother, I know that your kindness to me is endless. Dad has been unable to take care of me because he goes to work all the year round without taking a vacation. You always say you want to be a loving mother to strict father. When I do something wrong, you just look at me slightly, and I am afraid when I see your stern eyes. In fact, you are not kind and beautiful. You will be gray-haired before you are forty, but in my heart you are a great, kind and beautiful mother!

Mother's fourth-grade writer composition 3 Mother's birthday is also Christmas. That morning, I got up early, got up, flipped through the calendar, looked intently again, and just wanted to say, "Oh, it's Christmas, great!" " "I swallowed this sentence in one breath. Because when I think of Christmas, I think of my mother's birthday. "Mom must. ...

Mom's birthday is also Christmas.

That morning, I got up early, got up, flipped through the calendar, looked intently again, and just wanted to say, "Oh, it's Christmas, great!" " "I swallowed this sentence in one breath. Because when I think of Christmas, I think of my mother's birthday. "My mother will definitely surprise me. I'd better pretend not to know anything. "I was thinking, while eating breakfast, waiting for my mother to come out of the room.

"Zhi-"Mom finally came out. Seeing her, I can't help but be disappointed: there is nothing special about her from head to toe, let alone the atmosphere of her birthday! "Hey, what's the matter?" I muttered and walked to school with my schoolbag on my back.

At the end of school in the afternoon, I suddenly thought: will mom put on gorgeous clothes and pick me up after school? Thought of here, I'm a little sit still. Finally, I waited until after school. When I saw my mother, I opened my eyes wide, but what I saw was that my mother's clothes were still very ordinary. How can I celebrate my birthday like this! But I am not discouraged. Maybe at night, there will be surprises.

However, while eating, I glanced at the table and was completely disappointed: the food on the table was as usual, but the whole family still enjoyed it.

I finally couldn't help it: "Today is my mother's birthday, have you forgotten?"

"Ah, today is my birthday?" "What, today is her birthday?" What attracted me was a little question mark from the whole family.

Seeing this situation, I quickly took the gift that I quietly prepared for my mother from my room a few days ago to my mother. "Happy birthday, Mom!" ""thank you, you are so sensible! " Mother took the gift and smiled happily.

Why can my mother keep my birthday in mind, but forget her own?

The structure of the teacher's commentary is concise and reasonable, and the full-text language is powerful. Although the story is ordinary, the feelings are sincere. Although maternal love is an old topic, the little author's words are vivid and full of life. It has played a very good role in expressing feelings.

My mother's fourth grade writing composition 4 If I had to "dictate" my mother, I would definitely say her hair first. Mother's hair is black and shiny and looks very beautiful. But now, I don't know why I started to lose my hair, and I have a few silvery white hairs.

After the hair is finished, I have to talk about my mother's eyes again! My mother's eyes are like "electronic eyes" staring at me anytime and anywhere. If you are not afraid, you have to be afraid. The more you are afraid, the more you are afraid. My mother's "electronic eyes" always monitor me, which is the guarantee for my healthy growth since childhood.

Mom's nose is neither too big nor too small, just sitting on her face. It looks very suitable and harmonious. Okay, I'd better not say it. Otherwise my mother knows, hum, I will be "miserable" again. Speaking of "miserable"! My mother is a very aggressive person, which happens every time I do something wrong.

We are now implementing a "nine to five" work and rest system, and we will get home at 5: 30 at the latest after school in the afternoon. Once, I was cleaning at school, and it was already 6: 10 when I got home. My mother was very angry and asked me, "why did you come home so late?" Did you play outside with other students again? " I forgot to wipe my sweat, so I quickly replied, "No, I'm cleaning at school, really." ! Do not believe you ask the teacher! " Mom picked up her cell phone and said, "Which teacher at school asked you to sweep the floor?" "Teacher Jiang." I will say it word for word. As soon as my mother heard this, she immediately dialed Teacher Jiang's mobile phone: "Hello, Teacher Jiang?" I'm Li's parents. Are they cleaning after school this afternoon? "I vaguely heard the conversation between Teacher Jiang and his mother. Finally, my mother said, "I'm relieved that she didn't lie." "I'm just afraid he'll lie. Thank you. Bye!"

My mother is also a warm-hearted person and likes to help others. Our family often holds weddings, full of laughter. Some time ago, when I came home from school, there was always a little sister who had started doing her homework at my house! It turned out to be the daughter of our downstairs neighbor Aunt Zhou. Because Aunt Zhou needs to work overtime, she has no time to take care of her. So please ask my mother to take care of it. My mother is a frank person, full of promises, and she wants me to accompany her to do her homework and play with her. If she has any problems, she will help her. Mother also cooked delicious food for us in different ways, such as braised, stewed and fried. Every meal was different. ...

Every weekend, several of my very, very good friends will come to my house to play. Sometimes, my mother will take us for an outing. We can go to many places, such as People's Park, Fuleshan Park, Xishan Park, nanshan park, Science City Park and Sanjiang Peninsula, as well as Laolongshan in Anxian, Hai Xian Scenic Area and Luofushan Hot Spring.

This is my mother. I love my mother very much.

Mom, you are amazing. You gave me life, you nurtured me, and you inspired me to learn knowledge and how to be a man. We are not only the closest mother and daughter, but also the closest friends.

My mother is short, with short hair, big eyes and a pair of glasses with high myopia. She looks fashionable and young.

My mother is particularly concerned about my study. Sometimes I can't do my homework. He always tells me patiently until I understand. My mother is very strict with my study, asking me to finish my homework on time and do the problems carefully, and never allowing me to be half-hearted when studying; I am required to get up early every day to study, saying that developing good reading habits is good for my life. My mother cares about me very much, loves me very much and takes care of me in every possible way. She knows that I love fruit, so she buys my favorite fruit every few days and keeps it for me. She knows I can't eat hot meals, and she wants me to sleep as much as possible in the morning. Every morning, she cooks and dries for me early. Wait a minute. Whether my mother is strict with me or loves me, it's all for my own good, and it's all a sign of loving me.

My mother has to go to work, do housework and take care of my life and study. It's really hard. Mother's Day is coming, and I want to give my mother a special gift. For several days in a row, after finishing my homework after school in the afternoon, I stayed in my room alone (for the sake of confidentiality, of course, I kept cutting stickers) and finally made a beautiful greeting card. A pair of rabbit stickers were cut on the greeting card, and the rabbit snuggled up to its mother. It looks very close, and the moral is: our mother and daughter are very close in the Year of the Rabbit. In the blank, I carefully wrote a congratulatory message: "Thank you, Mom, and I wish you a happy Mother's Day".

On the morning of Mother's Day, I put the greeting card in a box, tied a ribbon and secretly put it in my mother's pocket. I spent the morning imagining my mother's surprise when she found it. My mother finally came home from work. I hid behind the door and heard my mother call me: Where's Niu Niu? Come out and see what I bought for you. I ran out as fast as I could. Mother said, "Niu Niu is really a big boy." The greeting card she made is so beautiful that it is my most precious gift. As a reward, see what this is? " Ah, it's the 100,000 Why series I've always wanted, as well as my favorite small tomatoes, chicken nuggets and a lively big carp. I quickly said, "Today is your festival. You rest first and I'll help you cook. "

"Mom", a word we are most familiar with, is the first word we will say. Mom, giving birth to me and raising me is the harbor of my life. Mom, I love you forever.

Dear mom and dad, I spent a lot of courage to write this composition, because my literary talent is not good and I can't use beautiful language, but doing homework is my favorite, so I will only tell it in simple words.

Mom and dad, I never said happy birthday to you, and I won't know until you say when it is. You broke my heart for me and always supported me. I know you are doing me good, but I can't control my emotions. I always think that if you quarrel, things will be settled. When I am alone in the middle of the night, I always let tears run across my cheeks. I often ask myself why I can't learn to be considerate and understand you, or whether I can't do it myself or don't want to do it, until I see that your hair has traces like snow, and your face has lost its youthful luster and wrinkles. At that moment, my heart hardened together, and I tried to swallow my tears. I realized that the person who loves me the most in this world.

I followed the footsteps of youth to junior high school. At first, I stood on the platform envied by everyone. Now stand under the podium and appreciate others, and the senior high school entrance examination is coming soon. Glory and success are nouns to me, and you have been running around looking for a high school that suits me, but I have been living in a daze during this time. I'm really ashamed. I failed to live up to your cultivation, and I scolded myself countless times for being useless.

5. 12 mother's day, mom, I don't have the courage to say "Happy Mother's Day" to you. 6. 16 Father's Day, Dad, I don't think I have the courage to say "Happy Father's Day, Dad" to you. I know you want to hear more or less from me. I've thought it over. How much time do we spend together and how many birthdays and parents' days are there? If I satisfy your desires, can I add a little happiness to this family? I think I should. Today is Mother's Day. Mom, I will definitely say Happy Mother's Day to you. I will also say to my father on Father's Day, because I love you.

Mom and Dad, no matter where I am in the future, I will never forget your love. Thank you. I don't know how to repay your love, so I decided to work in an orphanage in the future. I think you will support me. I will turn your love for me into sunshine and make the children feel warm. This is also a return to society. I will always try my best to make you proud of me.

My mother has long black hair and often wears a ponytail. She has two big eyes like black grapes on her round face. Under her eyes is a high nose and a small mouth. He looks a little fat, like a "big fat bear".

"Big Fat Bear" is very cheerful, never haggle over every ounce, and never get angry over trifles. "Big Fat Bear" is also very playful and looks like a child who hasn't grown up.

"Fat Bear" has many hobbies, especially sports. Tai Ji Chuan and badminton are her strong points, and mountaineering is her strong point. She used to practice taekwondo with me!

The food made by "Fat Bear" is very delicious. Every day when I come home from school, I will see "Fat Bear" cooking food for us seriously in the kitchen.

"Fat Bear" is also hardworking. Before I was sensible, my father worked in a factory. She raised me silently, and she worked hard to wash diapers and so on.

Today is May 13, Mother's Day, and I'm here to return the "Fat Bear". I decided to help my mother soak her feet once. In the evening, I brought a pot of hot water and added milk to it. To make mom more comfortable. My mother's face lit up when she saw me soaking her feet with water. Don't mention how happy you are!

Mom's speech:

Since I joined the group to learn reading, analysis and writing from the teacher, I have always wanted to teach my children these composition skills learned from the teacher to make his composition more interesting. But the boy in our family was praised too much by my teacher and me when he was a child, and he was a little "arrogant", or because he was worried that my long-winded teaching methods would waste his little free time, or maybe he heard too much criticism from me ... Many factors made the communication between mother and son in improving composition not smooth, and the progress was not as obvious as that of other children in the group. But I am not discouraged. I always seize the opportunity to instill in him very teacher's writing skills. From the initial "six roots and six dusts", "symmetry", "head, body, feet, hat, clothes and shoes" to the later "contrast", "borrowing sound and meaning", I was greedy at first, and I scratched my eyebrows and beard. The effect was not obvious later. Later, I chatted bit by bit and slowly penetrated. I thought about it. Unexpectedly, when he showed me this week's weekly diary today, I read all his weekly diaries in front of me. When I saw this, I used the method of "borrowing sound and meaning" that I taught him the other day. Moreover, the children's sense of head, body, feet and paragraphs in the composition is also quite good. Some red wavy lines of the teacher can reach the first two stars, which inspired me a lot, so I moved the idea of drying.