I didn't expect the beginning and end of the composition (discussion plus narration)

Composition title: "My Father". First, the direct opening method My father is short, slightly hunched on his back, and walks like a cripple ... This is the most used opening method for students and the simplest one. This straightforward beginning often makes the article seem boring. Here are four vivid ways to open it. Second, start with a classic sentence 1 and a poem. "Don't be idle, you will lose your head." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary ... 2. There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a person who doesn't like to talk ... You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and so on. Third, the appearance description begins: Example 1: "My favorite little friend" I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows. There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face. You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu. Example 2: "My favorite person" My favorite person-mother. Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful. 1, description of appearance+characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: My grandma is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy. Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much. Example 2: "My Dad" My dad is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of special round eyes, which often shines with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous. He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit. Example 3: The lovely gardener-my teacher. She has bright eyes, a mouth that can teach us thousands of knowledge, and a motherly smile on her face. Who is she? She is our head teacher-Miss Liu. Example 4: "Little Musician" My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates! Example 5: "My grandfather" My grandfather is over sixty years old. At noon, he has a thin face and a tall nose. Although his temples are gray, he looks very energetic. He always has a smile on his face. My cousin and I both like to be naughty with him and tease us. I nicknamed him "the old urchin". 2, voice description+character characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: "My Good Partner" has not arrived at her home, she heard a crisp and melodious reading sound. I don't have to guess, I know it's her-my good friend and good partner who studies hard. 3. Describe the characteristics of the characters at the beginning: Example 1: "My companion" I have a good companion. She is a Chinese learning committee member in our class. She was told to be serious and responsible for her work and never be careless. The tasks assigned by the teacher are meticulously completed. The most special thing is that she cherishes the collective property. Ex. 2: After Grandma became the general manager, people called my grandma a strong woman. Although she has watched it for half a century, the bones are still hard. After she became the general manager of the supermarket, a few crow's feet climbed on her forehead, and there were many silver threads in her black hair. Usually, a pair of bright eyes are often bloodshot. And those who ask for help to send gifts, like running water, flock to my door one after another, to my exhausted grandmother. Fourth, direct narrative begins: Example 1: "Mom, you are doing something wrong." I was sitting at the dining table and soy soup spilled all over me. I cried sadly. Example 2: After My Mom was finished, I walked quickly on my way home, because I kept singing Empty City Strategy in my stomach. I walked happily, thinking: at the moment, maybe my mother is cooking something good for me! Thinking, thinking, I seem to smell the tempting fragrance of the food, and I can't help but speed up the pace. 5. Various voices start with 1 and start with songs. "Smile sweetly, you smile sweetly, just like flowers in full bloom in the spring breeze." It's almost eleven o'clock in the middle of the night, and my father is still singing online with a broken voice in front of the computer. I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't sleep. It's really annoying There will be a Chinese exam tomorrow ... 2. Start with a noise. "Pida, Pida." There are dull and lazy footsteps in the quiet stairs at night. Dad must have come back from playing mahjong. He may have lost badly this time ... You can also use dialogue, piano, wind, thunder and so on. Anything that can make a sound can be a start. Six, from one thing to another. Every time I go back to school after school, I think of my father when I see an old and permanent bike parked downstairs. It was this bike that he used to send me to kindergarten ... 7. Let's talk about the results first. My family is having dinner, and my father is watching TV while eating. He suddenly stood up and shouted, "Bingo, Bingo." It turned out that he won 5 million lottery tickets. The whole family danced, laughed and cried, and everyone was so happy that they didn't know where to put their hands and feet. My father's fascination with lottery began ten years ago ... these five methods can be derived from various methods. If these methods are used well, the beginning of the composition will become easy, and the composition will catch people and be vivid and colorful. Typical start: 1, flashback always begins. Explain the results first, and always start with the full text. Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master. The students gave a long sigh, and a hanging heart fell back to its original place like a stone. "Terrible Big Wolf Dog" Example 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school was actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of the school gave him an award. "Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. What a change this troublemaker has made! "Unexpectedly" 2, suspense. Ask questions to arouse the appetite of readers. Who is she? That skirt, that beautiful little face, looks so familiar. My cousin 3. Lyrics always start. I began to express my feelings through the scenery, and then I always started the full text. Example: childhood is like a river, rippling with joy in the morning sun. It's really interesting to catch cockroaches at the seaside in the crisp autumn season. "Fun by the Sea" 4. It will always be a portrait. Write a general sentence first, and then describe the appearance of the characters. Exodus: My brother is really cute. A pair of big eyes are embedded in a small round face, and when you smile, you will see two small dimples. My brother 5. Portraits always begin. Write a description of the characters' appearance first, and then quote the full text in the general sentence. Example: Open the photo album. In the photo, she has short black hair, rosy mouth, arch eyebrows and a naughty smile. She is a lovely and earnest Li Xiaohong. My classmate 6. The sound always begins. I began to write "songs, laughter, wind and rain ……" to put down the situation, and then I always wrote the full text. Example 1: "Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are precious." Whenever I listen to this song, my mother's shadow will emerge in front of my eyes. Unforgettable Mom 7. Contrast always begins. Compare many things with people and one of them or one thing, and highlight one of them. Exodus I have almost forgotten my childhood. Only one thing looks like a knife, and I will never forget it. "Unforgettable things" 8. Cut to the chase. Tell people and things directly. Example: On Saturday again, I braved the cold to go home and met my grandfather. The narrative of Grandpa's crutch has many endings, and here are just a few examples. 1, the summary ends at the end of the article, summarizing the performance and personality of the characters written. For example, at the end of my role model: This is Wang Xiaoping, my role model. He is so diligent and helpful, and now he has become the idol of his classmates! 2. Praise ending At the end, praise the characters with eulogizing sentences, highlight and point out the center. For example, at the end of My Teacher, Mr. Wang loves his students and is loyal to the lofty educational cause. She is diligent and dedicated, teaches and dispels doubts, and contributes selflessly, and is worthy of the glorious title of "excellent teacher"! 3. The lyrical ending is at the end, and you regret your praise, praise and admiration for the characters. For example, at the end of My Teacher: Ah, dear Miss Wang, you are like this, caring for us in every way like a loving mother; He is like a diligent gardener, nurturing us to grow up without regrets; Your loyalty and persistence in your career have deeply touched every one of us, and we are proud to have a good teacher like you! 4. At the end of the discussion, use the discussion sentences to explain your views and opinions on the characters written, and strengthen the center of the article. For example, the article "Selfless Devoter" ends: This is my teacher, a selfless devotee. Does she have any relatives or children? Doesn't she know how to work hard? Doesn't she need to enjoy a comfortable life? No, she knows everything. However, she regards teaching and educating people as her first life and selfless dedication as her greatest happiness. How can we not love and admire such a teacher? At the end of the article, this kind of ending is the most common and easy to master, just like the summary ending. It is mainly the "eye" in the title or the related topic written at last. For example, at the end of The Man Worth Learning, this is Wang Xiaogang, a man worth learning. His modesty, his frankness and his enthusiasm for others have set an example for me to move forward, which I admire. Above, the teacher gave guidance from the beginning and end of the two genres, just for students to learn and learn from. What remains to be done is that you will try and explore further in the future composition training process. Here, the teacher just plays a role in attracting jade. Classic ending 1, summative anaphora. This is the most commonly used ending. At the end of the paper, the full text is summarized, the center is pointed out, and the topic and the beginning are taken into account. Example 1: Please! The owner of the German shepherd must take good care of this terrible German shepherd. It was really scary. So far, I am often awakened by this terrible big German shepherd in my sleep ... Example 2: What a surprise! Yesterday's troublemaker, today's Feng Guangze won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school. Isn't this warm applause a heartfelt admiration for him? I didn't expect that. Example 3: Colorful childhood is full of fun, like a string of wind chimes leaving a crisp sound. Until now, catching cockroaches by the sea is still so tempting that I have endless aftertaste ... "Fun by the Sea" 2. Write your own inspiration by writing about people and things. Example: The teacher smiled and laughed happily. I have always realized that the best gift for students to give their teachers is to keep working hard and making progress! A gift 3. Natural style. End naturally with the result of things. Exodus: I learned to ride a bike and felt like honey. "I learned to ride a bike" 4, lyrical. Express your feelings in a lyrical way. Example: ah! Teachers are selfless candles, burning themselves and illuminating us; Ah! Teachers are ordinary bridges, sending off groups of students without complaint. "Teacher's praise" 5. Memory style. Write down the people or things you don't want to forget and keep them in your heart forever. As if it happened yesterday, my concern and love for my parents are unforgettable. Please take good care of your parents who are far away from home, and your children will not live up to your hopes. "Parents' Love" 6, Lenovo style. Think about the people and things you write and write your feelings. Exodus: Seeing this, I seem to see the innocent hearts of the old people, as if seeing the new wind of a harmonious society blowing all over the motherland. The narrative composition of an old man repairing an umbrella begins with 1 and "Rinrin Bell". The students rushed out of the classroom and went to the office to get math papers. 2. There will be an exam again. When the teachers of all subjects announced the test dates, the students' faces appeared melancholy. Late at night, I was awakened by my father's hoarse dry cough. I glanced at the window with my eyes half open. According to my intuition, it's about 3 am. I vaguely heard my parents talking. I looked at the desk calendar on the desk, and only the last one was torn. The long-awaited New Year's Day is coming. 2. Once, I said to my mother, "I'm no longer young, so I need to learn more housework." My mother agreed to my request and asked me to learn to wash rice at night. I'm glad I can deal with water. Third, the prompt topic begins with 1 Life is like a tortuous movie, and wonderful little shots make up a colorful life. I love life, I love that little lens, which has educated and inspired me. Now, whenever I encounter setbacks, I will think of that unforgettable little lens in my life. 2. Children who babble are always learning to walk for the first time; After all, there are many firsts when you enter youth. In the early morning, a harmonious symphony sounded at home as usual. 4. The bedding type begins with 1. As soon as the bell rang, the teacher took the bottom roll away. After checking with my classmates, I made a mistake in calculating and filling in the blanks. Suddenly, I beat the eggplant like frost-it faded. 2, self-study class-make a scene in heaven. It's time for us to show our talents! The bell rang in the self-study class, and the students were "radiant" one by one. Because, finally can get rid of the teacher's harsh eyes. Just finished cleaning, I don't know which "evil ghost" threw a mass of waste paper in the corridor of grade four. 5. At the beginning of 1, the campus in early winter is cool. The class is very quiet. Different from usual, the students are sitting in the classroom with a sad face, waiting for the farewell party to begin. 2. The fireball-like sun moxibustion bakes the earth, the trees hang their heads and the roads are almost melted by the sun. I asked some students to play football in the square in the scorching sun. 3. "Happy birthday to you, I wish you …" A touching song sounded in the classroom of Class 4 (6), which is our birthday congratulations to XX students. The sun is scorching in April and July. On several big trees in front of our village, there was a cry of "cicada, cicada ……" and a lively concert was held. How I want to catch some cicadas! 5. "Boom" With a dull thunder, thousands of raindrops as big as soybeans jumped, rotated, danced and fell from the clouds. 6. One rainy afternoon, my mother asked me to go shopping, and I left with an umbrella. Along the way, the branches were rattled and wobbled by the wind. I walked carefully on the muddy road. The umbrella was blown by the wind, and the rain kept hitting me, and the lower part of my pants were soaked. The classic narrative composition begins with 1. There are many things in my mind, many of which are blurred by the running time, but one thing I can't forget. In my memory, there is a funny thing, that is, I cooked hot and sour fish for the first time. There is one thing that I will never forget when I grow up. In the long river of my memory, there are happy things and sad things, but the most unforgettable thing is what happened on the bus. I have experienced many things, the most unforgettable thing is that physical education class turned over after studying. When I was in the third grade, something happened, which has been deeply imprinted in my mind and can't be forgotten so far. Last summer vacation, I did something wrong, which impressed me deeply and made me sad to think of it. The ending of the narrative is 1, and it ends naturally. This ending is very easy. The story is finished, the result comes out, and the article ends. This is the natural ending. For example, at the end of "You Bijia Mountain", we were all a little tired at sunset, so we took a bus together and set foot on the road home with the joy of playing in Bijia Mountain ... 2. At the end of the summary, we finished the narrative, summarized the harvest, and often used progressive complex sentences to talk about our gains or feelings. For example, the end of an interesting eggshell experiment: this eggshell experiment is really interesting! Not only did I exercise my hands-on ability, but I also learned the truth of "centralization and decentralization of power". What a great harvest! So I like this experiment! 3. Heuristic ending (also known as "savvy") This ending is to write out the enlightenment and clear truth obtained after something, which plays a central role. For example, the end of a small matter: for a long time, but I can't forget it. Although this incident is very small, it inspires me a lot, because it makes me understand the truth that no matter what people have done wrong, as long as they realize their mistakes and dare to admit and correct them, they will definitely make a new start and make progress. The end of the question (also called rhetorical question) is over. In order to emphasize the truth or enlightenment he understands, the author deliberately ends with a question or rhetorical question, which not only expresses his wishes, but also stimulates the readers' thinking and plays a role in strengthening the center. For example, in the end, we finally made up. Through this incident, we learned that sincere treatment and tolerance and understanding are the basis of friendship. What do you think, friend? The last sentence can also be said, "friend, don't you think so?" 5. Dream ending This ending belongs to imagination and sustenance. It is the result that you don't write things directly, and this result may not be a situation, so you express your will or result by "dreaming". This fantastic style is very interesting and intriguing. For example, at the end of the article "Looking for Mom", the boy had a sweet dream that the little girl found her mother and was snuggling in her arms. Birds also fly back to their nests and sing happily with their mothers! 6. The quotation ends with "quote" and "quotation". According to the content and center of the matter, choose an appropriate old saying or one or two lyrics as the end of the article, which is full of encouragement, guidance and encouragement. For example, at the end of the article "Cherish Every Minute": Only by cherishing every minute can we not waste the shadow of light and do what we should do, which is the greatest inspiration to me after this incident. Friend, "don't be idle, you will lose your head!" " "The way to end the composition is 1. Point at the end of the topic and the topic at the end of the article. For example, several years have passed now, but the majestic Daqingshan, which stretches for thousands of miles, and the rolling mountain streams that have been flowing for thousands of years will always remain in my memory, because there are a group of people who are closest to nature and have lofty qualities and firm beliefs. When I was growing up, they were like dazzling stars, guiding my life. (Zhang Hui "Star") 2. The purpose of showing the future is at the end of the article or a bright future. For example, when we walked out of the school gate, melodious electronic piano sounds floated behind us, and children sang in childish voices: "Our hometown is in the field of hope …" Yes, Pear Town is a land full of hope. I looked up at the transport vehicles shuttling back and forth on the main road in the village, and I felt an unprecedented passion in my chest: "Fly hard, Pear Town, and fly towards a better tomorrow!" (Zhou Hongyi, "I like to see the new changes in Pear Town") 3. To stop abruptly means to stop suddenly when the article is closed, so as to obtain a straightforward and crisp expression effect. He arrived at school. The teacher was surprised that the top students didn't report. Suddenly I saw a student standing at the door in blue homespun clothes and trousers. "Come on in! "said the teacher. He silently put down the basket, took out fifty yuan and put it on the red cloth. The teacher opened the red cloth in surprise-ah! ? A basket of scrambled eggs! The teacher took his report card and looked at the dozens of dollars and a basket of eggs-stunned! (Guo Hao "Untitled") 4. Unexpected refers to the method of ending with unreasonable language, behavior and scene. For example, in the bookstore manager's office, Mr. Fang patted a check for 20 thousand yuan on the public table and said to the lady who received him, "Would you like to make a big deal with me?" The young lady said, "Of course. But we don't have any big business here, only books. Please feel free to choose. "Mr. Fang threw the check in front of the young lady and said," I'm too lazy to choose. Please. "At two o'clock in the afternoon, I will pick up the goods." The young lady stared at the man with deep pockets in front of her in surprise, not knowing how to deal with it. Mr. Fang was about to turn around when she woke up and asked, "What do you want?" "As long as it is a book, as long as it is famous." Mr. Fang said without looking back. At two o'clock in the afternoon, we drove to the bookstore. The lady returned the check to Mr. Fang and said, "Sorry, our manager doesn't want to accept this business." Mr. Fang froze again. He growled, "where's your manager? Let him come out to see me. " "No need." The young lady smiled and said, "Our manager read the check and knew who you were." He asked me to tell you that there is not a scrap book that can be put on the shelves in this bookstore. Every book is a life with a soul and has a special liking. In the end, it belongs to it forever. "(Xu Shengao" I want to ask for a book ") 5. Taking care of the beginning refers to the method of ending with the words that begin with the echo. For example, I watched you go away in the light rain after collecting flowers, and suddenly remembered that I had not paid for this branch of Chinese milk vetch, so I called out to you. You turned around, smiled and said loudly, "The flowers are for you, big brother. Come in, it's raining hard. "I stood for a long time, watching you go far-a small bamboo basket, a small umbrella, a pair of feet. Selling flowers, selling flowers ... (Cheng Yahong's "Red Flower") and the beginning of the article is like this: I dreamed of you, Honghua, I dreamed of you, a flower girl in a water town in the south of the Yangtze River. A small flower umbrella, a small bamboo basket, and the cry of peddling wet by light rain … 6. Full of philosophy refers to the method of using philosophical language as the conclusion of the article. Example of paragraph: For example, the text "Take one step, take another step" 7. The end of quotation refers to the method of quoting famous sayings or proverbs as the conclusion of an article. For example: Finally, I leave a motto of Douglas to encourage everyone: "If you can't build a road, you can build a road;" "If you can't be the sun, be a star." (Zhao Junfeng's "Be the Best Yourself") In addition, some methods at the beginning can also be used at the end, such as lyricism, scenery writing and metaphor.