Mountain Illustration —— Illustration of three ancient poems in the second volume of Grade Four. How to draw

The Significance of Mountain Illustration The Significance of Mountain Illustration

Illustration of "Mountain Walk": Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February.

As far away as Hanshan, the stone path is oblique, and people are in Bai Yunsheng. Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February flowers.

This poem is estimated to be clear to all primary school students, and the interpretation of the poem is clear to everyone. But that's not what Lao Jie said. It should be noted that there are several places that may be overlooked. Let me talk about my own understanding in turn. May be inaccurate, please correct me.

First, who is "far" in the first sentence

Far from Hanshan Mountain, the stone path is inclined. The first question of this poem is, who is the subject of the first sentence? "Far away, Hanshan stone path is inclined", who is far away?

It seems that the subject "I" has been omitted, and some notes show that the poet himself went to Hanshan and saw the slate road inclined. However, in the third sentence, there is "stop in the maple forest and sit late", so didn't the poet go up the mountain? Why did he stop again? Is it sitting on the hill in the car? Or is there a car on the mountain? It doesn't seem to make sense.

The subject of this sentence is not human. In fact, "the stone path is inclined to the cold mountain in the distance" is the post-subject, and the subject is the stone path, which is far from the cold mountain and looks winding. This is the poet's complicated sentence-making method.

This syntax can be found in Du Fu's Eight Poems of Autumn Prosperity:

It is said that if Chang 'an plays chess, the world will be sad for a hundred years. The houses of princes have all changed their owners, and the clothes of civil servants and military commanders are not the same as in the past.

Straight north Guanshan golden drum vibration, levy west chariots and horses feather book relaxation. The fish and dragons are lonely, and the autumn is cold, so the country is peaceful and thoughtful.

Among them, the third link: the mountain gold drum vibrates in the north, and the horse mane book relaxes in the west. The sentence structure of these two sentences is similar to that of Away from Cold Mountain. If it is clearer than the second couplet of Looking at Jiuhua Mountain written by the Tang Dynasty poet Lu:

Jiuhua is dark green, overlooking Chengjiang. It's lonely when it's not cloudy, and peaks appear when it's cold.

Sit and watch the snow sorrow, and Xiaoxing bid farewell to Lan Yan. It's a good idea to go back to the mountain early, but it's sincere at night.

The third triple "does not encounter haze and loneliness, just like the peak appears in a cold day." The syntax of these two sentences is exactly the same as that of Away from Cold Mountain and Stone Path. The rhythm of the sentence is 2-2-2- 1, and the subject is the words "solitary cave", "peaks" and "stone path" composed of the fifth and sixth words.

The same is true of Bai Juyi's Three Songs of Xunyang Spring. The usage and position of the subjects are exactly the same, and the subjects are Xiang Qi and Yue Che.

Jingu Tanhuaxiang rode in, Qujiang grinding straw stalk car.

It's a fragrant ride on flowers, a cart grinding grass, a stone road far up the cold mountain, a lonely cave that doesn't encounter haze, and a mountain peak in cold weather.

Illustration of Three Ancient Poems in the second volume of Grade Four. How to draw a piece of grass first, then draw branches of willows along it, and then draw branches and leaves swaying in the air one by one. You have to draw slowly and carefully, and then draw distant mountains and sparse trees, one or two. Finally, color the picture and write a poem, and this ancient poem will be painted.

Let's talk about the implementation of various knowledge points in the text and the drawing of the second, third and fourth branches in the first "mountain walk". Mountain Walk describes a winding path winding to the top of the mountain, where several families are floating in the white clouds. The author stopped to enjoy the scenery of the maple forest, and felt that the fiery maple leaves were redder than the flowers in February in Jiangnan. This is an ancient poem with bright colors and full of vitality. The whole poem praises the beautiful scenery of the mountains in late autumn and expresses the author's love for nature.

Feng Xuelin, the owner of Su Furong Mountain, this poem and his illustrations? The owner of Furong Mountain is in every snow.

[Tang] Liu Changqing

Comparison of original translation

The setting sun is far away, the weather is cold and the house is poor.

Chai Men heard dogs barking and went home on a snowy night.

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Twilight is boundless, and I feel the mountain road is far away. It's freezing in the cold, and I feel very poor to stay in someone else's house.

Suddenly, I heard a dog barking in Chai Men. It should be the owner's snowy night.

To annotate ...

Meet: meet.

Accommodation: accommodation; Stay overnight.

Master furong mountain: furong mountain, there are many people who are famous for furong mountain everywhere. This refers to Furong Mountain in Guiyang or Ningxiang, Hunan Province. The host, that is, the person who stays overnight. Through the scene of staying in the mountain village on a snowy night, this poem skillfully writes the scene of the mountain village and the life of the farmers.

Sunset: evening.

Cangshan is far away: Qingshan is far away in the twilight. Pale: cyan.

White house: a simple thatched house with no decoration. Generally refers to poor families.

Dog barks: Dogs bark.

Night returner: One who returns at night.

This poem, with an extremely concise pen, depicts a picture of a cold mountain staying, a tourist staying at dusk and a snowman as the material. Poetry is written in chronological order. The first sentence is about the feeling of tourists traveling on the mountain road at dusk, the second sentence is about what they saw at the boarding house, and the last two sentences are about what they heard at the boarding house after nightfall. Each poem constitutes an independent picture and is interrelated. There are pictures in the poem, but the feelings are seen outside.

At the beginning of the poem, the words "the setting sun is far away" are used to outline a picture of the twilight and the long mountain road. There are no characters in the poem, which is lyrical, but the feelings emerge on the paper. Here, it is a word "far" that gives a vivid picture and expresses a poetic scene. From this word, we can infer the lonely and tired traveling situation and the desire to stay when travelers travel on the mountain road at dusk. Next, the second sentence of the poem asks the reader to follow the pedestrian's line of sight, along this mountain road, and invest in the home for the night. "Cold weather and poor house" is a portrayal of this family; And the word "poor" should be the impression formed after seeing the hut from a distance to knocking at the door. Writing "sunset" before the previous sentence "Cangshan is far away" and writing "cold weather" before this sentence "Baijia is poor" are all ways to increase the level and weight of the poem. The long mountain road has made people feel that the road is far away, and it is even farther to see the sunset; The humble hut has made people feel poor, and it is even poorer in winter. Judging from the context, the word "cold weather" in this sentence has its connecting link. Inheritance is to further render the color of sunset road; Revelation is the foreshadowing of a snowstorm at night.

Illustration of "Snow House Lotus Mountain Master"

Illustration of "Snow House Lotus Mountain Master"

These first two poems, which add up to only ten words, have already written the scenes of hiking and house. The last two poems, "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and the snow returns to people at night", were written after spending the night in the mountain. In terms of words, "Chai Men" is connected with "White House", "snow" is connected with "cold" and "night" is connected with "sunset". In this way, from the perspective of the whole poem, although the second half of the poem has opened up another poetic realm, it is closely connected with the first half. But here, the cause has made a leap. It seems that "smelling dogs barking" is at night, and most travelers who are tired of hiking have already slept; From dusk to night arrival, from cold invasion to snowstorm, from entering the hut to going to bed, there should be some descriptions in the middle, but the poem skips this paragraph and omits some plots, making the cause more compact. The poet thought carefully between his choices. If this effort is not made, perhaps the second half of the poem should further describe the depression of people living in houses, write about the desolation of mountain houses and the silence of the environment, or write about the coming of snow at night. Otherwise, you can also write about your own travel and your thoughts after staying overnight. But the poet put these things aside and didn't write. Unexpectedly, he saw a noisy dog barking in the silence. This shows the change of scale, giving people the feeling that a strange peak suddenly appeared on the flat ground.

As far as writing is concerned, the first half of a poem is written according to what you see and hear, and the second half is written according to what you hear and hear. Because, since the night has come and people have gone to bed, it is impossible to write what they have seen and heard, but only what they have heard and heard. The sentence "Chai Men" should be written about what I heard in the hospital on the sofa in the dark: the sentence "snowstorm" should not be seen, but heard, because I heard all kinds of voices and knew that someone had come back in the snowstorm. I only wrote "Smell the dog barking" here, probably because it was the first sound to break the still night, and it was also the first one I heard, but what I actually heard was not only the dog barking, but also the sound of Melissa Zhou, knocking at the door, the sound of Chai Men's switch, the sound of family members' response, and so on. These sounds are intertwined. Although the person who spent the night was not in the hospital and had never seen it, it was enough to conceive the picture of returning from the snowstorm from this noisy sound.

The whole poem adopts pure line drawing technique, with unpretentious language and elegant and quiet style, but it has a distant artistic conception and endless charm. [ 1]_

Folding appreciation divergence

There are three main differences in the interpretation of the poem: whether Cangshan in the first sentence "Sunset Cangshan is far away" refers specifically or generally, and whether "far" is still far away or seems farther away; The second sentence, whether the "white house" is a simple house or a snow-covered house, whether the "poor" is rare or feel poor; In the third sentence, "Chai Men smells dogs barking", in which "smell" is a poet's smell, please ask someone to smell it.

The difference in thoughts and feelings is that one opinion holds that the poem expresses "the author's sympathy for the poor family": and the poem "people go home at night in the snow" should be interpreted as "the master works hard outside and goes home at night." ; Another point of view is that "going home on a snowy night" should be interpreted as: "Pedestrians finally found a place to stay on a snowy night, and were warmly received by their owners, feeling like they are home." Ancient poems express the author's gratitude to the host of Furong Mountain and praise the host's hospitality and convenience. The key is where the poet stands. In the former, the poet is outside the "White House" and on his way to the snow; In the latter, the poet is in the "white room", or the first two sentences are outside the house and the last two sentences are inside the house. [