Teaching Record of Five Points in Chinese Compulsory Course

1. Strengthen reading and experience the poet's feelings.

2. Experience the inner emotion and profound philosophy of poetry.

3. Experience the rigorous structure of poetry.

[Teaching process]

Teacher: Li Shangyin, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, has an untitled poem, which I believe everyone must be familiar with. It was a long time ago that I met her, but since we separated, the time has become longer, the east wind is blowing and a hundred flowers are blooming.

Health: (Becky) Spring silkworms will keep spinning until they die, and candles will drain the wick every night. In the morning, she saw her hair cloud changing in the mirror, but she bravely faced the cold of the moonlight with her evening song. Not far from her charming mountain, oh, bluebird, listen! -Give me what she said! .

Teacher: Spring will pass, flowers will wither, and the east wind that breeds flowers is weak. It is really unbearable to encounter the pain of friends leaving in this environment. This poem by Li Shangyin is full of sadness of parting. Jiang Yan, a writer in the Southern Dynasties, said: No one can mourn his soul. ? Throughout the ages, many literati shed tears because of parting and wrote poems because of sadness. So what kind of feelings does Feng Zhi's poem "Parting" express?

Before class, arrange students to log in to the school electronic library to find information about Feng Zhi. Let's share their learning achievements.

Sheng 1: Feng Zhi is a literary translator. His translated works include Selected Poems of Heine and Heine's long poems Germany and Winter Fairy Tales. Because of his outstanding achievements in studying Goethe and translating Heine's works, 1983 won the Goethe medal awarded by Goethe Theatre in Germany and Munich, and 1987 won the art prize of the international exchange center in that country.

Health 2: Feng Zhi is a modern writer. His novella Wu Zixu is not limited to historical stories and legends, but satirizes the present through imagination and fiction. He published essays such as Miscellanies of Eastern Europe, Biography of Du Fu and Scenery, and pursued an enlightening philosophy in describing beautiful mountains and rivers with beautiful and affectionate words, showing his artistic personality in prose creation.

Health 3: Feng Zhi is a scholar with a collection of poems and a legacy.

Health 4: Feng Zhi is a poet. His sonnets are solemn, simple and calm in overall style and relatively perfect in art, which makes them a unique existence in the literature of the 1940s and even the whole modern literature. On the other hand, the success of Feng Zhi's Sonnets is an important milestone, which shows that China modern new poets have enough ideological and artistic strength to digest foreign forms and use them to create China's own national new poems.

Health 5: Feng Zhi was also praised by Mr. Lu Xun? China's most outstanding lyric poet? .

Teacher: Mr. Lu Xun is frank and straightforward, and his writing is sharp, but he speaks highly of Feng Zhi's poems. Let's taste Feng Zhi's Parting. Not singing a song is not enough to feel the heart, and not reading a poem is not enough to satisfy the temperament. Please feel free to read this poem. (Students read aloud freely)

Teacher: How do students feel after reading this poem?

Health 6: I'm sorry, teacher. I don't understand a few words, and I always feel awkward. Maybe I'm not suitable for poetry! (classmates laugh)

Health 7: Teacher, life is like a disk, and different people leave different notes on the track. Different people have different ways of thinking, different life experiences and attitudes. Feng Zhi seems to be a deep and thoughtful person, so read his poems slowly? Product? , not? Bull drink? .

Health 8: I saw the following when I was looking up the information, and I feel that Feng Zhi is indeed a poet with profound thoughts:

(Student Projection) Feng Zhi's Sonnets is about the living conditions of individuals and human beings and the metaphysical experience and thinking of human life. It consists of 27 poems, which is the history of China's new poetry? The most concentrated and full expression of the theme of life is a collection of poems, a song of life meditators? This is the first time that China's modern poetry has been written? Metaphysical character? . It is easy to notice the relationship between the poet's experience and metaphysical thinking about human life and the western trend of thought from Goethe to existentialism? There are both influences and parallel thinking. On the other hand, the connection with traditional ideas is also obvious. For example, the poet's experience and thinking about his communication with everything is obvious. Heaven and man are one, things and me are one? Ideological factors. He chose? Sonnet style? Modern vernacular Chinese is completely used, and even related words are rarely used, but this foreign poetic form is freely used, achieving the harmonious unity of internal poetry, philosophical thinking and external forms. (Applause)

Teacher: That's good. Think? It is a field in my heart. Feng Zhi worked hard on this land, sowing and harvesting. Let's enjoy this unique scenery together. Now, please draw sentences that are difficult to read and discuss with the students in the study group. (Students discuss) What questions do the students have? Let's discuss them together.

Health 9: Teacher? We waved goodbye and our world split in two? I don't understand this sentence.

Health 10: The wave before parting seems to split the world in two. The poet's strange imagination is based entirely on reality. Because we are all busy with work. Coupled with the distance, there are fewer opportunities to get together. Thought of here, a kind of sad mood can't help but come to mind, suddenly feel whole body chills.

1 1: This is a stereoscopic lens, which reminds me of Li Bai? We waved goodbye, and my horse hissed again and again? My appearance, leaving life is common, and I am a lonely passer-by in a short time!

Teacher: You are our class poet. Have you ever written a farewell poem?

Student 12: Teacher, there seems to be no poetic notes in my life recently, and I have been looking for them. But I like a farewell poem on the Internet very much. Let me recite it for you.

I waved and the past came back to me. /I turned around and stared into your stupid eyes. /I sang softly, in my hoarse voice. //I know it's a long way. /I believe you will wait in the wind and rain. /I'm leaving, not never looking back. I hope that when I come back, the scenery will remain the same. //a touch of sunset, with my wordless sadness,/wave again,/just leave,/not leave.

(Students applaud)

Teacher: What a real feeling. This poem reminds me of some parting words in Liu Yong's poems. Holding hands and looking at each other with tears in your eyes, are you speechless? .

Student 13: Teacher, but I don't think this poem by Feng Zhi contains any sadness. When I read. I feel very cold around, and suddenly my eyes are wide open like two newborn babies? When I read this sentence, I have an unspeakable feeling. Anyway, it won't make me cry!

Health 14: I think this poem is different too, but I don't know how to interpret it.

Teacher: Reading Feng Zhi's poems is like tasting tea. Naturally, you should taste slowly and choose your words carefully. What are the characteristics of newborn babies?

Health 15: Newborn babies are new from head to toe. When he opens his ignorant eyes, his eyes will be suddenly enlightened, the closed space will be suddenly enlightened, and the monotonous colors will suddenly become colorful.

Health 16: I see. What do poets use? Like two newborn babies? This strange metaphor expresses the feeling after leaving: the world in front of us suddenly becomes bright and fresh, and a brand-new feeling of life is gained. Parting is painful, but the poet is not immersed in melancholy, let alone pessimistic.

Teacher: What you said is very reasonable.

Student 17: Our group was very confused when discussing the second verse of this poem. I want to know? Turn cold into warm, turn life into maturity? What exactly does this sentence mean?

Teacher: Students will read the second part together, and then discuss the meaning of this sentence in the context.

Oh, parting, birth,

We are burdened with heavy work,

Turn cold into warm, turn life into maturity,

Everyone cultivates his own world.

(Students read aloud together and have a heated discussion)

Health 18: The second section is the poet's inheritance from the previous section. Born? As the beginning of a new life, we should start from scratch, devote ourselves to life and work hard. With hard work? Plow everyone's world? This can not only alleviate the pain of parting, but also make the friendship have a new development.

Health 19: That's good. Parting is painful, but pain is not the only way to express friendship. Those who sink in the pain of parting are cowards. Turning the pain of parting into the strength and courage to cultivate the world is the best way to give back to friendship.

Health 20: The world is always so dialectical, but the other side of pain and sadness is happiness and joy. I think of Ba Jin's prose Friends. Ba Jin's first half of his life has almost no fixed place, and he can only spend it safely with the help of his friends. He left again and again, crying again and again. Ba Jin said he would pay it back for life? Emotional debt? But all he can do is write hard, plough out the mountains separated by time and space between friends with his own pen, and repay the sincere friendship of friends with his own sweat and wisdom. Feng Zhi spoke the truth that only thinkers can see.

Teacher: You are a good student who is good at thinking and diligent in reading.

Health 2 1: Oh, I see! I didn't understand the meaning of the third section just now, but now I understand. In the third section, the poet wrote that friendship has new development and new connotation because of separation. The poet must think that as long as there is friendship, mutual encouragement and mutual support, the cold can become warm, the strangeness can become familiar, the pain of parting can also be turned into the driving force for progress, so that every reunion has the freshness of meeting for the first time, and the previous experience becomes an unforgettable memory because of the distance, and friendship will never age.

In order to meet again, it seems like meeting for the first time.

Thinking about the past with gratitude,

Just like when I first met, I suddenly felt like I was in my last life. (can't help reciting)

Health 22: Especially? There are several spring and winter in our life, and we only feel the rotation of the order, but we don't feel the age stipulated by the world. This sentence, but I don't know why I like it Do I like to the highest level that I can't say?

(Student laughs)

Teacher: The deepest thing between heaven and earth is the universe, and the deepest thing in the world is emotion. All languages are pale and powerless in the face of sincere feelings. But we can't always say that Lao She's love for Peiping is beyond words, but he still wrote an unforgettable Thought of Peiping. We like a poem, and we may not be able to tell the feeling of undercurrent for the time being, but with the passage of time and the increase of experience, maybe we will have it at some time. Looking back suddenly, that person was in the dim light? Epiphany, a good work should be a lifetime classic.

Health 23: Our group just discussed the understanding of these words. We believe that these three poems are the sublimation of the poet's thoughts on parting: our life seems to be composed of parting and gathering again and again, which are both integrated and independent. As long as we remain young mentally, we will feel that we are not old enough. Can't feel the age stipulated by the world? . Friendship lasts forever, but life is not old.

Teacher: Do you agree with them? (Students nod their heads in agreement) Please read Feng Zhi's Parting in chorus and think a little. (Students read together) Please tell us briefly what the meaning of friendship is expressed in this poem.

Health 24: This poem eulogizes sincere and beautiful friendship, pointing out that friendship is the encouragement and support of friends, friendship is the driving force of life, and reveals the value of friendship.

Teacher: The summary is very accurate. This poem was written in 194 1, which was a special year. The Japanese imperialists ravaged the land of China crazily. In order to avoid the Japanese bombing, the poet Feng Zhi bid farewell to his friends and came to a deep mountain in the suburbs from Kunming. He did not express the pain of wandering in troubled times, nor lamented the desolation of not being able to get together with his bosom friends, but rationally thought about the value of friendship. So, what are the characteristics of this poem in writing? Everyone chooses at least one angle to think.

(Students think in silence? )

Health 25: Generally speaking, China's farewell poems focus on lyricism and narration. This poem is based on abstract thinking and has no specific scenes. There is no specific separation object, and there is no specific departure time and place. Lin Yuling of Liu Yong said:? Cold and sad. Yes, Changting is late. The shower began to stop. All the accounts are not in the mood. I miss places and Lanzhou to urge me to send them. Holding hands and looking at each other, tears swirled in my eyes until there were no words at last, and a thousand words stuck in my throat and I couldn't say it. Thinking about thinking, thousands of miles of smoke, dusk, chutiankuo. ? The poet suddenly showed a specific farewell scene, and the time, place, people and events were clear.

Health 26: Another great feature of China's traditional poetry is that he expresses his feelings through the rendering of the environment and repeated chanting. I like a farewell poem by modern and contemporary poet Wu Benxing. This poem is called Farewell.

Teacher: (a little excited) He is an old poet I admire. He had a rough life, but a noble personality. Cang Kejia said he? Is the figure work at its peak? . His old man keeps saying that he wants to see me alive, but I have never seen him because I can't produce any decent works. I was shocked to hear the news of his death more than a year ago. I am really at a loss and feel that I owe him too much! Let's recite this poem together, shall we? (The teacher choked)

Health 26: Good!

(Teachers and students recite Mr. Wu Benxing's Farewell)

You left/left no address/only a bunch of smiles/in the sunset: you left/didn't tell anyone/only a bunch of smiles/in the dew: you left/didn't say where you were going/only a bunch of shadows/in the river: you left/the smile melted in the sunset/your eyes wavered in the dew/the shadows swayed in the river. Sunset is everywhere/dew is everywhere/rivers are everywhere/you left, leaving you intact.

Health 26: This poem has no specific plot, but there is a movie? Montage? Picture type,? What about you? Your smile melts in the sunset, your eyes fluctuate in the dew, and your shadow shakes in the river, so? You left, left the whole of you? This sentence is not difficult to understand.

Health 27: Now I understand why I didn't understand Feng Zhi's "parting". We always like to look for specific events and pictures, because it is exciting. China literature seems to have more plots than thoughts. As a translator, Feng Zhi has absorbed western philosophical thoughts, so his thinking is more intense. Although? Radish and vegetables have their own tastes? But because we are in the stage of learning and accumulation, we still have to. Look in all directions, listen in all directions? Yes As long as we realize that the focus of this poem is not to tell the truth, but to portray inner feelings and express profound philosophy, we can taste this poem? The combination of thought and poetry? what's up Meditation poem? Charm.

Teacher: Where does this poem come from? Wave? The concrete description begins with abstract feelings and ends with abstract feelings. There is no description of traditional poetry in the middle, but more philosophical thinking of western poetry.

Health 28: I think this writing is inevitable? Art for art's sake? In my opinion, China's poems have the disadvantages of piling up rhetoric, listing phenomena and imposing emotions. We should draw lessons from western poetry appropriately and explore the depth of thought in many ways.

Teacher: (Applause) You can read poetry without listening to other people's suggestions and have your own opinions. Family talk? Pointed out the direction for China's poetry creation! (Students smile)

Students, Feng Zhi's Parting is a song? Sonnets? , its rhythm often includes? Layers of ups and downs, gradually thickening and gradually dissolving, as well as its intricacy and neatness, its rhyme interspersed? Characteristics, good at expressing the state of meditation, singing more eternal themes. Feng Zhi himself said:? It (Sonnet) never restricted my active thoughts, but just took over my thoughts. Give a proper arrangement? Sublimate the subjective life experience into objective rationality, which contains deep feelings? , fully express the experience of life and feelings of friendship. So, how does the poet arrange the structure of this poem?

(Students think in silence? )

Health 29: The structure of this poem is very compact. The first section highlights the emotional impact of parting. The second section writes that after parting, we silently undertake and live seriously. The third section writes that friendship has made new progress because of separation. The fourth section emphasizes the need to accept the ups and downs of life and face the passage of time and the changes of the world.

Health 30: I think it can be used? Up? Cheng? Turn? Close? Four words to summarize the structure of this poem, paragraph by paragraph, sentence by sentence, or broken or connected, express poetic connection or turning point, and convey the rational experience of friendship and life in twists and turns. It can be called an exquisite poem.

Teacher: The students talked deeply just now. In the face of old times and the parting of friends, we can't always wander in pain. Friendship is not only mutual support when we get together, but also mutual encouragement after parting. We don't need it? Here, you must leave me and drift away for hundreds of miles like loose grass? Don't you need loneliness and melancholy? The setting sun sets in the Tianshan Mountains, looking at the horizon? Obsessive waiting type, open-minded and cheerful type, Why are you wandering at the fork in the road, with children holding towels? You know, as long as the hearts are connected, the friendship will last forever. Even at the end of the world, your two hearts are still the same? If you are next door? . Read this poem again. (Students read together) Class is over.