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A collection of 10 composition comments

In ordinary daily life, everyone has written compositions, and they must be familiar with all kinds of compositions. With the help of compositions, we can improve our language organization ability. What kind of compositions have you seen? The following is a collection of essay comments that I have compiled. Everyone is welcome to learn from and refer to it. I hope it will be helpful to everyone.

Collection of essay comments 1

1. This article adopts the first-person writing method, which has a great advantage and plays a good role in shaping the center of character expression. It reads in a friendly, natural and credible way. The thinking is clear and fast-paced.

2. The working process of this article is written in a clear and specific manner. The author added appropriate psychological description while narrating to fully express it.

3. Described with full passion.

4. The key points should be highlighted and the details should be appropriate and specific.

5. The metaphor is appropriate and vivid.

6. The language of the article is easy to understand and close to the reality of life, making it very cordial to read.

7. Telling us in a relaxed and pleasant tone is endlessly memorable.

8. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and the coherent center is prominent.

9. The descriptive language of the scenery is concise and accurate, and the association is a natural fusion of touching the scenery and evoking emotions.

10. Set off the character’s ideological quality by enriching the character’s language and actions.

11. The article is both narrative and lyrical.

12. Make full use of the writing method that combines movement and static, supplemented by metaphors, personification and other techniques.

13. The young author observes and narrates in an orderly manner.

14. The use of some exquisite words virtually adds a lot of interest to the article.

15. The article is clear, graceful, smooth and coherent, especially the characters’ language is humorous.

16. The imagination of the article is reasonable.

17. Through the description of vivid and vivid language, the readers feel as if they are in a dream.

18. The article has a clear clue and a prominent theme that revolves around...

19. The detailed description is quite original. Very knowledgeable.

20. The careful and delicate description of the characters’ language, demeanor, and actions is a major feature of this article.

Collection of Composition Comments 2

I can’t help but read it twice more, it’s so good!

You are awesome! I’ve learned so much recently!

I like your profound insights and your love of thinking!

Congratulations on getting 100 points every time!

Just keep doing this, kid!

I like your seriousness!

You work hard, you gain, you are diligent, you succeed!

I found that your grades have improved again!

You did a good job this time, if you work harder, it will be even better!

Child, you are working hard! I can feel it!

I have been studying very well during this period!

There is progress!

Child, I like your progress and am happy for you!

The handwriting is beautiful and the page is neat! Teacher is proud of you!

A lot of effort must have been put into such a correct homework!

There is a lot of homework, but you can still write so well, this is called persistence!

If you regress in your studies, I will pay attention to you!

You didn’t finish it seriously!

Relax your requirements...

Why are there always typos? I'm waiting for your answer!

This is not your level!

Have you written carefully? I loved your last assignment!

The back is not as serious as the front, "persistence"!

Don’t lower your requirements for yourself! Because you can do better!

The details are inappropriate!

You should summarize it more comprehensively! come on!

The language can be more lively!

In terms of innovation in composition, we can do more outstandingly!

The words should be written correctly and not out of style.

I think the time allocation for your homework may need to be adjusted, and we can discuss it.

See it with your eyes, your heart, your hands. You can do it!

Stay calm, read clearly, and write accurately! You can do it!

I have read this book many times. We can talk about it.

Your article inspired me a lot, thank you!

Learn from you!

Let’s work together and make progress together!

I like your focus on learning, it affects me!

From you, I learned to struggle in obscurity! Collection of essay comments 3

1. Able to use reasonable imagination and reflect meaningful philosophy...The writing is smooth and concise, giving full play to one's own imagination. It is a good...The article is elegant and smooth. Coherence, especially the humorous language of the characters, and the use of some exquisite words, invisibly add a lot of interest to the article.

2. You have read widely and accumulated a lot of words and sentences. Therefore, when describing the actions and expressions of characters, you can express them vividly with appropriate words. The teacher is happy to have students like you. As long as you continue to work hard, your The writer’s dream will surely come true.

3. Being able to write the inner activities of characters very vividly is indeed commendable and leaves a deep impression on people.

4. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is endless fun to read.

5. The article is narrated in children's language, which looks natural and simple. It is like a stream of clear water at the end, which plays a finishing touch.

6. As a casual reflection, your article is quick-witted and full of wishes. The richness of life experience and the delicacy of thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will continue your efforts and form a unique landscape of your own in your future writing!

7. By enriching the character's language and actions, the character's ideological quality is highlighted. The article's imagination is reasonable and reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

8. The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's personality and better explains the ins and outs of the character's personality formation process.

9. The description of the appearance is vivid, the character's face is realistic and the clothing is appropriate and suitable. It is like a mirror reflecting the character's personality. It is really the so-called "life depends on the relationship".

Comprehensive Comments on Composition 4

Fully grasp the main points and paragraphs that are clear and desirable

The ideas and materials are novel and rich

The materials are appropriately relevant and the writing style is vivid and smooth

Fully mastered The main content is rich and substantial

Appropriate quotations of famous quotes and idioms

The sentences are smooth and the ideas are clear and the ending is powerful

The theme is correct and organized

Font writing Beautiful and neat, the content is rich and substantial

The scenery and writing are delicate and the writing is delicate and agile

The latest comments on environmental composition: the beginning is novel and vivid, and the ending echoes back and forth

The sentences are smooth and complete, echoing from beginning to end.

The content is clearly expressed and commendable

The sentences are fluent and vivid and the word choice is just right

The opinions are very correct and the paragraphs are clear and desirable

The content is consistent The topic paragraphs are well organized

It’s good to think positively about ideas

You need to know more about the essentials of paragraphing

You need to learn to use punctuation correctly

You can give more examples to enrich the content

Use idioms or rhetoric appropriately

Correct typos and never make them again

The beginning should lead people to think more positively

The thinking is not delicate enough and the words and sentences should avoid clichés

The content is slightly empty and the subject matter needs to be enriched

The article cannot be divided into paragraphs and it is somewhat unclear

The key points of paragraphs It is better to master more to avoid digressions

The content is less and not substantial enough to revise the sentences to make them smooth

The examples should be strengthened and the creativity can be boldly used

Use rhetoric more Rhetorical skills and appropriate citation of idioms

If the sentences are too plain, use more rhetorical skills

It is better to read more extracurricular books and use punctuation marks correctly

Try to be neat and tidy with typos. To avoid and revise

The meaning of the question is not fully grasped and the narrative lacks organization

There are many typos and the expression is not complete

The content is bland and it is better to use more ideas and creativity

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Observe carefully, reduce redactions of words and do not repeat them

Rich and vivid descriptions, beautiful and smooth words

Full of creative imagination and careful writing

Paragraphs are clear and layered Excellent use of idioms

Innovative and lofty ideas, enriched with life-like composition comments 5

1. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, and the emotions are rich and true. It is a pleasure to read. A large number of spoken words in daily life are used to make the article more natural. It ends with... to point out the end, which is implicit, meaningful and meaningful.

2. This composition uses novel materials and has a wonderful idea. , the language is lively and lively. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines.

3. The article describes the events of... in the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent and the levels are clear. From beginning to end It seems that it is enjoyable.

4. The article is full of respect and gratitude for... from beginning to end. It is deeply affectionate and touching. This is the shocking power of this article.

5 . The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of wit and fun, and it is hard to put it down.

6. The author is clever in conception, good at selecting points to expand, and the writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and bright, and the story is full of interest. Although the story is ordinary , the emotion is sincere, abundant, and touching. The ending of the article is unconventional, giving people a feeling of wanting to stop.

7. The examples are described vividly and concretely, and the words and deeds of the characters are consistent with their respective identities. It can be seen that you are a living person. A thoughtful person. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable

8. The language of the full text is smooth, the writing is relaxed and natural.

Take off, can be regarded as a more successful work.

9. The full text is hearty and smooth, containing joy and expectation, sincere and touching. The beginning is extraordinary

10 . The article has a strong sense of reality, a strong sense of three-dimensionality, strong readability, and strong interest. With keen social insight, it uses fairy tales to reflect the dark side of reality, and uses vivid language to depict scenes of greedy sentient beings, which can be regarded as penetrating. . Collection of essay comments 6

The young author uses rich imagination and extremely innovative ideas. It introduces us to the shape and function of future motorcycles, hinting at the importance of technological innovation. It is hoped that with the efforts of the young author, future motorcycles can be applied to real life as soon as possible.

This is an imaginary article. The young author gave full play to his imagination and described Xiao Yudian Lele's adventures in the city in detail. The vivid and delicate brushwork and childlike language have greatly aroused readers' interest in reading. It is a recommended work!

The young author has rich imagination and very innovative ideas. It describes to us the unfortunate experience of the lake, satirizes the behavior of tourists littering and the indifferent attitude of the staff, praises the actions of the sanitation workers, and calls on everyone to protect the environment at the end of the article.

Bold and strange imagination, full of innocence and childlike interest are the characteristics of this exercise. At the same time, the writing is quite organized from "function" to "appearance". For example: "Let's talk about its function first" and "Let's talk about its appearance" in the article.

The young author uses rich imagination and extremely innovative ideas. Use action description, sentence description, psychological description, etc. to present the entire process of the bear's adventure on paper. The writing ideas are clear and worthy of learning and reference by other students.

The author of this article tells us in the form of a fairy tale that three good friends "scissors", "rock" and "paper" disagreed because of the comparison of "who is the most powerful". Finally, under the adjustment of the teacher The story of getting back together tells us the truth that "everyone has his or her own strengths."

The author of this article has a novel concept and unique structure. He opens each paragraph with "What if..." and imagines himself as a "flower bone", "willow", and "fire", which not only expresses It also highlights the little girl's excellent quality of caring for others. Collection of essay comments 7

The ending is implicit and points out the theme.

The ending was a bit sudden and exaggerated.

The ending is concise and touching.

The ending is equally interesting.

The ending echoes the beginning, and the structure is complete.

The scenery creates emotions, and the ending is natural.

The metaphor is vivid and appropriate, and the wonderful ending is the finishing touch.

The ending seems to be unfinished and should echo the beginning. The observations are meticulous and the descriptions are vivid.

The ending echoes the title of the article and highlights the center.

The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the mood of the characters, which is very artistic. It is complex but not cluttered, and can be detailed and focused. The ending just right highlights the center, the language is simple yet profound, and thought-provoking.

Start with feelings and end with feelings. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the article's theme loop around and have a strong appeal.

With full passion, it describes..., the beginning is concise, the key points are highlighted, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific.

The article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of... and depicts the focus of the article delicately and vividly. The intention is high and impressive.

…It is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read.

…The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.

This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.

The case description is vivid, specific, interesting, and consistent with the previous metaphor...

Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching.

The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading. Collection of essay comments 8

Niuniu is our lovely puppy. It was a gift from my grandfather's friend. It is said that its ancestor is the Japanese silver fox, which is one of the world's famous dogs.

It has a round head, two triangular ears standing upright, a pair of bright big eyes like glass balls embedded in the melon face, a long nose and mouth integrated into one, and the nose is always It was damp, as if it had been coated with a thin layer of black polish. It often opens its mouth, revealing its white and sharp teeth, and its long, blood-red tongue sticks out from time to time. It is covered in snow-white wrinkled fur, its back is like silver thread, and its belly is like white velvet. It has a very charming tail curled up on its buttocks, like a blooming silver-white chrysanthemum. It has well-developed limbs and a strong body. It is always jumping around and going crazy all day long.

Niuniu is very smart. She will sit down, lie down, stand, shake hands and salute according to our instructions. Every time it sees me, it pesters me, volunteering to be my little guard.

Niuniu is greedy and playful. Eat a big bowl with every meal, more than I eat. Every time he sees me eating, he always jumps and wants me to give him something to eat. When he is bored, he either chews wood or chews on toys. It always looks for opportunities to squeeze into homes through cracks in doors when no one is paying attention.

Although Niuniu is naughty and active, she is a very responsible housekeeper and always screams to call the police when strangers come. But sometimes it doesn't recognize its relatives, and it screams when we come back at night, which makes people laugh and cry.

Niuniu is a smart, cute and naughty little guy. Her arrival has added some troubles to life, but she has also brought a lot of joy to our family. Collection of essay comments 9

1. The spring described in the writing is rich and beautiful: red flowers, green grass, green mountains, blue sky...

2. Careful observation, According to the method of summarizing first and then dividing, write clearly the characteristics of " ". The language is accurate and the images are concrete, giving us an immersive experience.

3. When describing the scenery, write down your own experience and express your inner feelings. For example, the surprise when you find the first grass sprouting, the excitement when you see the swallows nesting under the eaves of your house, the admiration when you smell the fragrance of peach blossoms, the joy when you hear the teacher announcing spring outings... these They are all inner feelings. While describing the scenery, appropriately expressing inner feelings and even associations will make the work more vivid and real, and will also move others.

4. Write down all the beautiful things about spring that you see, hear, smell, and feel into your exercises, so that your exercises will be as vivid and beautiful as spring!

5. Kite flying is children’s favorite activity, and the fun is self-evident. Through detailed description, the colorful flying scenes of kites in the sky are shown.

6. Reading your exercises, let us see how lovely and crystal-clear a childlike innocence is.

7. Grasp the different characteristics of spring grass, trees, flowers, etc., and follow the order of " " to depict the vibrant scene of spring and reflect your sincere joy.

8. The scene of happy play of " " is vividly written, the language is vivid, the description is specific, and the beauty of " " is written using vivid metaphors.

9. " "; coupled with the breeze, willows, and the fragrance of flowers, the spring in the pen is like a poem, so beautiful!

10. The description of " " and " " is very It is unique, quite childlike, and refreshing. The ancient poem " " is also quoted appropriately, which enhances the expressive effect of the article. A collection of 10 essay comments

1. The ending just points out the center, and the language is simple but profound and thought-provoking.

2. Switch on and off with feelings and end with feelings.

This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the article's theme loop around and have a strong appeal.

3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

4. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking.

5. Concentrate on expressing emotions at the end, which not only reflects the beginning but also summarizes the whole text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.

6. The vivid portrayal of details can effectively reveal the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article.

7. The article ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless.

8. The sentence at the end of the article that reveals the central point is really a clear and concise sentence, which is short and powerful.

9. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words have been exhausted but the meaning is still unfinished.

10. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to put it down.

11. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable point-of-view at the end better highlights () the theme of the article.

12. Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere, abundant and touching.

13. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people the feeling of wanting to stop.

14. The ending ends with... to point out the end, which is implicit and meaningful;