Comments on essays about what’s on your mind

1. The opening question of this article is, "What is a rumor? Once upon a time, a rumor was a scarf. Ruan Lingyu used it to hang herself; but I used it as a decoration." Next, use examples to demonstrate your point of view. The level of argumentation is clear and the structure is clear.

2. With keen insight, the author sees the importance of "psychological empathy" and then puts forward the argument that "we must learn to psychologically empathize, tolerate other people's mistakes, and understand their negligence". The value of an argumentative essay lies in its original point of view. This article is not only cutting-edge, but its analysis is also emotional and reasonable, and has internal logical power.

3. The author can write about "maturity" so vividly at a young age. The opening chapter uses reverse thinking to say that age is mainly a sign of physical maturity rather than a sign of psychological maturity, attracting readers' attention. The end points out the main idea of ??the article.

4. This is a poem that expresses an emotional experience. The author can use the form of poetry to write such a long piece without making any mistakes, which is a success in itself. The poems are sincere in emotion and the language is expressed clearly and fluently.

5. This article highlights a heart that is unwilling to be ordinary and longs to fly, and provides inspiration to people. Sincere feelings, write articles with your sincere heart, write articles with your true feelings, highlight the deep desire in your heart, and your feelings will be naturally revealed in the detailed description of the changing process of psychological activities. The full text is rigorously conceived, with subtitles leading up to the content of the paragraphs, making the writing clear. The concluding paragraph not only deepens the theme of the article, but also echoes the title, making the structure of the article complete. The language of the article is beautiful, and it also reflects the author's certain language skills.

6. Article? Life is a flower that always blooms and remains unbeaten? You are knowledgeable. This article can grasp the essentials and think dialectically? If these are regarded as setbacks one after another, then yes Frustration has created dazzling pearls and beautiful rainbows? It can be said to have excellent thinking quality.

7. This speech can be said to be short and concise. It can closely follow the theme of the motherland, highlight the greatness of the motherland, and select the details of the broad and profound culture of the motherland, which is very shocking. The language was impassioned, sincere and natural, infecting all the listeners present.

8. The argumentative essay puts forward the central argument straight to the point: Face shortcomings, don’t feel inferior, don’t face it pessimistically, but face it frankly and bravely. The middle two factual arguments are one foreign and one domestic. One is detailed and the other is brief, and the level of argumentation is clear.

9. This is an essay written by a first-year junior high school student. The article describes the author’s understanding of care. The emotions are sincere, the narrative is coherent and eloquent, arousing readers' interest in reading. Caring is a feeling that connects everyone. The writing is light but the feeling is strong.

10. Giving up persistence is a kind of adaptation. This article puts forward the point of view straight to the point. It then tells the story of a general, and at the same time tells the real life story of Armstrong, the first man to land on the moon, which is used appropriately. The language of this article is natural and plain.