Miao Kexin's composition incident, I killed him with a stick, yes, but where is your fragrant jujube?

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Miao Kexin's composition is full of mistakes? But ignoring common sense mistakes, is the teacher really serious? Is the teacher really not responsible?

The incident of Miao Kexin, a primary school student, triggered a heated discussion among netizens. Although there is no direct evidence to prove that the teacher is related to this matter, from the direct fuse? After reading Miu Miu's thoughts, we can find some clues. It is said that teachers really have no responsibility at all. My children really don't believe that the teacher is not atmospheric enough, and the level really needs to be improved! Why do you say that?

Let's review my previous article first. Pupils lack words, teachers have complicated thoughts and misunderstand students and parents? . This article is also about teachers' comments on primary school students' compositions. Because the student's composition is missing a word, it is directly misunderstood by the teacher, and both students and parents are impure.

In the composition of primary school students? You have many wrinkles on your face, too? Write one less? Face? Words, although the joke is big, but the teacher's comments are too incompetent, and even said that parents can't show everything to their children, but also let parents sign. Is this hitting parents and students in the face? But I was beaten in the face by my parents in the end.

Such an obvious mistake can be easily seen by ordinary people. As a teacher who teaches and educates people, it is so misunderstood. What a surprise! I feel that the teacher's level really needs to be improved, and his thoughts are too impure. You should know that the students she commented on are primary school students! Are pupils' thoughts so impure in the eyes of teachers?

Miao Kexin, a primary school student, actually has similar problems in her composition. An essay by Miao Kexin, a pupil, was blown beyond recognition by the teacher. She not only made many crosses, but also deleted many details. I don't know if I'm not good enough or something. Is it really necessary to delete these deleted details? I really don't understand. I feel that the teacher is a little picky.

Next, use my poor Chinese writing level to analyze:

Miao Kexin wrote:? The four of them came to Baihuling. Everyone was tired and thirsty. ? What's the use for four people who have come all the way? Tired and thirsty? To describe, there should be no problem!

What about white? It is said that eating the flesh of Tang Priest can make you live forever, just like catching Tang Priest. ? There seems nothing wrong with this sentence. It explains the cause and effect, and the causal relationship is very clear. If you put? I heard that eating Tang seng meat can make you live forever? This sentence has been deleted, but I don't know why Bai wants to eat Tang monk meat. Is it because everyone knows that monsters eat people and don't need to explain? Or do you think that everyone knows that eating Tang seng meat can live forever, so I won't go into details? In that case, it is estimated that no one has seen the scene of Monkey King Thrice Defeats the Skeleton Demon. The introduction in this article can be deleted, because it is too familiar, and it goes without saying that everyone knows it!

This paper describes the illusory village girl in Bai's works. Beautiful? To describe it, it seems that there is no problem! The lecherous Pig Bajie saw the village girl, and the direct appearance of a pig brother is the best evidence. There are many such insignificant deletions in the text, so I won't list them one by one.

Should parents reflect?

Looking at Miao Kexin's deleted composition, some people may think that the teacher is very serious and read the composition word by word. Afterwards, parents actually supported the teacher, so that those who supported Mr. Yuan thought the teacher was right. The result was also very unexpected, and there was a lot of praise behind it.

I really don't know what these people think. Are they all flatterers? Everything about the teacher is right. Does the teacher's fart smell good? Or are you afraid that you don't like being put on little shoes by the teacher? Shouldn't everyone reflect on it?

After all, a fresh little life has just passed away. Is it necessary to cry foul for the teacher here? They are parents of students, why can't they take care of the families of the deceased? Is this really good?

Serious teacher, why ignore common sense mistakes?

Let's talk about Miao Kexin's composition again. The teacher found so many problems, it can be said that there are many bones, but even a common-sense mistake was not found.

In the composition, Miao Kexin mistyped The Journey to the West's author as Luo Guanzhong, while Luo Guanzhong's famous work was Romance of the Three Kingdoms, while The Journey to the West's author was actually Wu Cheng'en. Such a common-sense mistake has not been discovered by the teacher. I really doubt whether the teacher is seriously revising the composition. After all, more insignificant mistakes have been circled. This mistake, in the teacher's mind, is it small? Bones? What?

Teacher, hit a stick, but where are your sweet dates?

Although there is nothing wrong with teachers' serious comments on students' compositions, Miao Kexin's compositions reveal the dark side of human nature, and it is also true that comments are not positive enough, but teachers all know that compositions should publicize positive energy information. Then why can't the teacher be more active when correcting the composition? If we have to find fault with students' problems, shouldn't we look at their advantages? As we all know, if you hit a stick, you have to give a sweet jujube. I want to ask, teacher, where are your sweet dates?

As a teacher, although it is necessary to find out the problems of children, isn't it more important for teachers to find out the advantages of children? This is the way to teach students in accordance with their aptitude, isn't it?

to tell the truth

Regardless of children's psychological endurance, teachers should have a larger pattern and discover some advantages of children, instead of criticizing children blindly, because we think it is good for them. As a teacher of students, no matter whether they are directly related or not, they all need to bear certain responsibilities.

After all, children are simple and write everything directly on their faces. As a teacher or a student criticized by a teacher, shouldn't we pay more attention? If you really care more about your students, maybe such a tragedy can be avoided. But it's too late to say anything now. What we can do is to constantly reflect, hoping that there will be no next time!

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