Writing teaching and learning, 800 words.

The second unit of the text mainly focuses on the content of environmental protection, and arranges comprehensive learning activities in the study of the text so that students can search for relevant information. In the language garden, there are compositions related to the environment. In the teaching of this composition class, I mainly start with two questions: first, what are the problems or good methods of people's specific measures and practices in environmental protection in their hometown; Second, what are your thoughts and hopes for your future hometown environment? Based on this, we can guide students to understand and know some environmental protection knowledge on the basis of reality, so as to better spread the wings of imagination and build the scene of future hometown. With the theme of "Future Hometown", let students play their surreal creativity. After writing, I feel that the overall effect is mainly as follows: 1. Some students have detailed descriptions and beautiful sentences, but the article lacks imagination, and the future hometown is short of many vibrant and novel ideas, and the description is almost realistic. 2. As for the requirements of the article, the positioning is not accurate. There are quite a few students' compositions, such as the first unit describing the scenery of their hometown. The first unit is rewritten and there are deviations in the examination of the questions, which was unexpected before the composition. 3. The description of the future hometown scenery in the whole composition lacks a center and does not highlight the main characteristics of the hometown to be described. The introduction and description of the scenery is a bit messy. From the above problems, I think that in the future composition guidance, we should pay attention to the importance of students' examination of questions and the strengthening of composition revision. The so-called "three-point article and seven-point revision" can only make the article more exciting and perfect through self-revision, mutual revision and comment in different ways. Make the composition class more and more exciting and perfect.