In the second grade, how to write a composition about scenery?

The composition of the scenery, just like the order seen by our eyes, will have a front and a back, far and near, up and down inside and outside. Therefore, when students write landscapes, they should make the order clear, and it is better to write them in the order of eyelids, so the effect will be better. When writing landscapes, after describing distant landscapes, remember that we need to grab some named landscapes from these landscapes and make key or rough descriptions. Such as pavilions or lakes, ships, etc. One of the great benefits of landscape composition is that if you look closely, you will have different feelings. Therefore, when writing a composition, you must understand that you must be realistic, you must not scribble, and you must put your true feelings into the scenery. In the process of writing scenery, you should know that the scenery must be compared with the characters. For scenery and characters, people need to blend in with the scenery. Therefore, when writing landscapes, it is best to bring some living objects, people or animals. When writing a scene, there is another good way, that is, things must be written in the scene. Every scene should be supported by something, such as what happened in the scene, what emotions can set off the scene and so on. Scenery is actually prepared for people's emotions. In the process of writing scenery, there will be another one, that is, it is best to fully integrate your feelings into the scenery in this process. Especially your own feelings. If your true feelings can be added to the landscape, it will definitely make the landscape more charming. Of course, in general, the description of scenery also needs us to use some ancient poems to contrast and style. In fact, these ancient poems are a perfect summary, and if they can be applied to their own landscape articles, they will certainly add a lot of color.

How to write a landscape composition in grade two, just like the order we see with our eyes, will be back and forth, far and near, inside and out.

Therefore, when students write landscapes, they should make the order clear, and it is better to write them in the order of eyelids, so the effect will be better.

When writing landscapes, after describing distant landscapes, remember that we need to grab some named landscapes from these landscapes and make key or rough descriptions.

Such as pavilions or lakes, ships, etc.

One of the great benefits of landscape composition is that if you look closely, you will have different feelings.

Therefore, when writing a composition, you must understand that you must be realistic, you must not scribble, and you must put your true feelings into the scenery.

In the process of writing scenery, you should know that the scenery must be compared with the characters.

For scenery and characters, people need to blend in with the scenery.

Therefore, when writing landscapes, it is best to bring some living objects, people or animals.

When writing a scene, there is another good way, that is, things must be written in the scene.

Every scene should be supported by something, such as what happened in the scene, what emotions can set off the scene and so on.

Scenery is actually prepared for people's emotions.

In the process of writing scenery, there will be another one, that is, it is best to fully integrate your feelings into the scenery in this process.

Especially your own feelings.

If your true feelings can be added to the landscape, it will definitely make the landscape more charming.

Of course, in general, the description of scenery also needs us to use some ancient poems to contrast and style.

In fact, these ancient poems are a perfect summary, and if they can be applied to their own landscape articles, they will certainly add a lot of color.

The composition describing autumn in the second grade is not as beautiful and fragrant as spring; There are not so many small creatures singing in summer; Not as beautiful as winter.

However, it is the most beautiful in my heart.

Although autumn is not as gorgeous as spring, it has a unique color-red.

Maple leaves only blush in autumn. Seen from a distance, they are as red as the morning glow, and all the mountains are dyed red.

When the wind blows, maple leaves float down like red snow.

So people can enjoy it.

Although there are not so many small creatures in autumn as in summer, the scenery of fallen leaves in autumn is much better than them.

When the wind blows, the leaves fall with the wind, and there is always a sound, as if to tell everyone loudly: "Who said there are no butterflies in autumn?" Am I not? How about it? Beautiful! "Although there is no white clothes in winter in autumn, its orange clothes are also good! And it's much warmer than that white skirt in winter.

Autumn also has many unique features.

In autumn, plants seem to be rushing to the barber shop.

Some people may ask, "Why do they go to the barber shop?" Dye your hair, of course. They should also follow the fashion! In autumn, osmanthus trees are in full bloom, so that people far away can smell the intoxicating fragrance.

In autumn, it will make the farmers' uncles very happy, because the grain and fruit they have worked so hard to grow have been harvested.

Wow, the thought of my favorite green orange makes my mouth water.

Autumn is a season that I miss. The fallen leaves in the yard and my thoughts piled up in a thick pile, but the full rice made the world in my heart happier.

Autumn has finally come. I grew up in the south and have an unusual love and attachment for autumn in the south. In the south, summer is very long, so autumn always comes later than in the north. But the difference between autumn and summer in the south is obvious. Autumn is the season of alternating cold and summer. After a few days of autumn rain, there was no longer unbearable heat, and the raging autumn tiger suddenly disappeared. People can go out of their homes. In autumn, there is no scorching ultraviolet rays, the skin is hot, and the sunshine in autumn gives people a soft and charming feeling; The typhoon * * and the roaring rainstorm have gone away, and the autumn wind gives people a refreshing and pleasant feeling. There are many differences between autumn and summer, such as the contrast of colors between leaves. In autumn, the green leaves on the trees are not so bright, and gradually turn from green to yellow. With the deepening of autumn, most of the leaves of trees are golden and brilliant, and pieces of yellow leaves begin to fall in succession under the sweep of autumn wind. It's spectacular. On the country road, the smell of soil is getting stronger and stronger. When doing morning exercises and walking in the evening, a cool breeze blows gently. Autumn night, the moonlight is no longer hazy, the moonlight is bright, and the fragrance of wild flowers and weeds is overflowing. The nightingale's voice in the forest is crisp and beautiful; Between the trees and the flowers, the birds are chirping and pleasing to the ear. The sounds of nature accompanied by autumn are wonderful. Sporadic frogs and faint cicadas seem to convey the departure of summer. When the shower stops, birds sing to tell people that autumn has begun. Autumn is the season of ripe harvest. In the countryside, a wave of golden rice has been set off. On the hillside, oranges, oranges, persimmons and other fruits are everywhere; The melon shed is full of melons, vines, taro and ripe fruits, waiting for the sower to pick and harvest. I like autumn because it has no bacteria and pests. Because it has no storms and no lightning strikes; Because it has no purgatory in the hot sun and summer heat; Because it's neither cold nor cold. I like the crisp and fruitful autumn. Autumn gives me an impression, scene after scene, bright and clear ... I like autumn, appreciate autumn, miss autumn in my hometown, and look forward to the reunion with my distant relatives in my hometown every Mid-Autumn Festival. Charming autumn is blowing quietly in xia yang, and autumn rain falls gently. Autumn came to us unconsciously. Today, my mother took me in the footsteps of autumn, looking for the figure of autumn. I found autumn in the Woods. When the autumn wind blows, palm-like leaves fall one after another. It floated to us and said, "Goodbye." Then it fell into the arms of Mother Earth. Ginkgo Garden is like handfuls of golden fans. It is the most beautiful commemoration of autumn. As for the diamond poplars, it's like a welcome team lined up on both sides of the avenue. When the autumn wind blows, the leaves rustle, which is simply warm applause. The maple leaves turned red. Seen from a distance, it covers the whole mountain like a red tulle coat. Really beautiful! No wonder the ancients said, "Frost leaves are redder than February flowers"! I found autumn in the park. Chrysanthemums in the park are in full bloom, including red, white, yellow and crimson. They are really colorful, colorful. Some of them are in full bloom, trying to show people their beautiful posture. Some are like shy little girls. The breezy autumn wind is sending their fragrance to all directions, giving people a relaxed and pleasant enjoyment. Going home and passing by the market, there are big pomegranates everywhere. They squeezed each other in the box, laughing from ear to ear, revealing crystal pomegranate seeds and taking a bite. It's really sweet and sour! Ah! Autumn is around us, and its beautiful scenery is really intoxicating! Composition of autumn maple leaves: I like autumn, I like the beautiful scenery and crisp days in autumn. Every season, maple leaves are dressed in new clothes and bright red dresses. The wind is blowing cool breeze, traveling around with small maple leaves. In autumn, my father often takes my family to enjoy the maple leaves. Under the dam of Shimen Reservoir, you can see rows of maple trees in the distance. Like a lovely maple leaf girl welcoming us. I walked to the front of the maple tree, bent down, picked up a maple leaf, looked around and kept looking at its body. I suddenly found that the clothes of maple leaf are so special! It is fiery red, with thick ribbons tied on it and serrated lace on the edge. I came here with my father, mother and sister to enjoy the maple. Dad has been taking pictures with his camera, so have my mother and I. ...

I learned many stories about spring, both happy and lost. Because I have experienced many things, some things have been forgotten. What I haven't forgotten is the story of spring. Spring is the best season of the year, isn't it? Flowers are blooming; The grass gradually straightened up and the water in the river gradually melted. Everything is green. In spring, someone gives his seat to the old man on the bus. When crossing the road, someone helps the old man and the blind man cross the road. Even the flowers and plants in the park know how to cherish. One thing happened to me this spring, which made me feel that spring is not only full of vitality, but also more human. I'm glad to be ready to go home. On my way home from Ma Lukou, I saw a blind man. He seems to want to cross the road, too. It was still raining hard, so I helped him cross the road. Later, I wanted to take him home. It's raining hard. He didn't bring an umbrella. So he and I used an umbrella to send him home. When we were going to walk to his house. When I walked by, he asked me why I let you go. I told him. As soon as I finished speaking, he immediately turned and walked to the well. When he reached the well, he touched the manhole cover with his hand. I went there, too. I was supposed to help him. But he didn't agree. He said he was afraid of getting my hands dirty. He touched the manhole cover himself. He moved the heavy manhole cover by hand. So I moved the heavy manhole cover with him. At this time, it rained even harder. When the manhole cover was repaired, we walked to his house together. He gave me a handkerchief and said that I should wash my hands. On the way, he also said that in case it is night, some people don't know if it is good. I was moved by his spirit. As a blind person, I can always think of others. This is the story of that spring. This spring is not only good, but also better.

The scenery of spring in the second grade of primary school, the spring girl is coming. She makes the earth beautiful with a magic pen.

Miss Chun waved her pen and blew the spring breeze.

She blew the willow tree green and the peach tree red ... the spring breeze was great.

The little frog was released in spring. It barks with a big horn, as if to tell the animals that "spring is coming".

Swallows are cutting in the air. They are so cute.

How beautiful spring is! I like spring.

A cool autumn wind blows in autumn scenery, which makes people feel very comfortable.

Yes, autumn is charming.

On the field, it seems to be covered with a beautiful blanket. It's golden here and green there, which makes a charming picture.

Look! Golden ears of rice are like golden waves, fluctuating with the wind.

The breeze blew, as if a girl was dancing.

Uncle farmer is harvesting rice! By the river, beans and seedlings shook their heads hand in hand against the autumn wind.

On the hillside over there, there is a sweet potato vine. It is estimated that there is a big sweet potato growing below! They grow in the soil, like shy fat dolls hiding, and don't want to be seen by others.

At this time, I seem to smell the aroma of baked sweet potatoes, floating from a distance.

I came to the park, where the smell was good.

Look at the osmanthus here. Its petals are like rice grains, emitting a strong fragrance.

This osmanthus can also make tea! That chrysanthemum is as red as fire, as white as snow, as pink as chardonnay, as big as a colored ball and as small as a delicate lantern ... so cute in different colors and shapes! Especially this blooming "waterfall chrysanthemum".

Charming petals, beautiful colors, green leaves and straight stems make up a silent but fragrant waterfall.

Although the fragrance of chrysanthemum is not as rich as osmanthus, it can also make people intoxicated. The leaves of buttonwood withered like palm trees.

Some maple leaves are "dyed" red, while others are "dyed" yellow. From a distance, they are like burning flames.

At this time, I remembered a poem written by Du Mu: "Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are redder than the February flowers."

"Autumn is both a beautiful season and a harvest season.

Ah! Charming autumn, I love you!

The 500-word composition about scenery in the fifth grade basically defines a narrative, which usually refers to an article focusing on scenery. The composition about scenery expresses the author's praise for some scenery and his own feelings through the use of description, narration and lyric, and is one of the main types of composition studied in primary school.

Therefore, writing landscape compositions in primary and secondary schools is mainly divided into two categories. One is travel narrative, which often highlights the characteristics of the scenery itself and some physical and mental experiences it brings through the description of the scenery itself and tourists (writing about tourists mainly plays a role in setting off); The other kind is the narrative based on borrowing scenery and expressing emotion. It tends to be lyrical prose. When writing, it is often not limited to a specific scene, but by choosing different scenery, it focuses on expressing some emotions. In the process of arranging the content, it often produces the artistic effect of scene blending and scene interaction.

To write a narrative with the theme of scenery, we must first choose the starting point of narration, whether to describe the scenery directly or to introduce the origin and background of the object of description first. According to the different needs of description and expression, the starting point of description and description should be determined, and then expressed in a certain order.

The order here can be: 1, written in the order of orientation (for example, from far and near, from outside to inside, from top to bottom, from front to back, etc. ); 2. Write according to the relationship between the whole and the part (write the panorama first and then describe the part and then write the panorama); 3. Write in chronological order (it can be different changes in spring, summer, autumn and winter, or it can be an introduction to the scene formation process). In addition to the above three narrative orders, there is also a "disorderly order", which is mainly common in lyric prose. The scenery described often changes with the author's ideas. Some styles, like "stream of consciousness" novels, are often not limited to expressing the scenery itself, but the author.

How to write a good landscape composition in editing this paragraph 1, highlight the key points and handle the details properly, often does not depend on how many scenes you list in the article, nor does it depend on whether each scene you choose can arouse readers' interest.

However, no matter how many scenes you write, one must be the focus of the article. It can be described in descriptive language, and the characteristics of the scenery can also be outlined by line drawing, which leaves a deep impression on people.

There are three mistakes in writing landscape composition. First, write a "running account", just like some travel notes, which seem to write a lot of scenic spots, but each scenic spot is left aside, and one of them is not well selected for specific description; Second, although the scenery written has a background introduction or detailed description, it looks a bit like a dragonfly, and it will go around after touching it; Third, the details of the article are unreasonable. The introduction of the cause at the beginning is too long, but the middle part of the article is not well developed. 300 words have been written in the 600-word article, and the key points have not been written yet.

2. Highlight the specific features or characteristics of the scene. This refers to the characteristics of the scene and the difference between writing this thing and other things.

Only in this way can we leave a deep impression on readers, but there is still a premise here, that is, after grasping the characteristics of the scenery, we should make a specific description and not treat it lightly.

In the process of description, we should make full use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification.

Accurately and accurately using rhetorical devices is helpful to write the scenery more vividly, truly and touching.

3. Scenery blending, lyrical scenery description, and no matter how beautiful the scenery is, it can't infect the readers and leave them with beautiful psychological enjoyment. Therefore, while writing the scenery, the author should integrate his real feelings, so that readers can not only "see" the beautiful scenery in the article, but also feel the feelings and thoughts that the author wants to express.

A single composition of scenery writing for the sake of scenery writing can't be a good article that makes readers feel emotional, which requires us to integrate our emotions naturally when writing articles and scenery writing, and express our emotions with the help of the description of scenery.

4. In the description of scenery, the activities of people or animals should be written in. If the scenery in a landscape composition is "static", then an excellent landscape composition can not be separated from "movement". The "moving" here includes the activities, frolicking, frolicking, running, foraging and jumping of animals corresponding to the scenery. When landscape composition combines the activities of people and animals with the description of the landscape,

Therefore, when students describe the scenery, they can appropriately choose the activities of people and animals as a foil, and the article will become more readable.

The composition of grade two describes the scenery. Madam, what lush scenery is there in Dafang Shexiang Park? I think everyone should be familiar with it. Mrs. Shexiang is the first Yi heroine in Chinese history. She has made great achievements in safeguarding national unity and the integrity of the motherland.

So there are Shexiang Garden and Shexiang Tomb, as well as the statue of Lady Shexiang.

Today, let's take a look at the magnificent scenery of She Xiang Park.

In the evening, my aunt and my aunt's daughter went to She Xiang Park to play with us. My father drove a BMW for a long time.

We got out of the car happily and walked forward happily hand in hand. Under the guidance of adults, we walked into this seemingly ordinary but actually secret place.

Wow, this Shexiang Park is really beautiful. Palace style, music fountain, court style "zigzag bridge" ... today I will introduce music fountain to open your eyes.

The water in the fountain has many colors, sometimes it is red, sometimes it is green, sometimes it is purple, sometimes it is blue ... Very beautiful.

In fact, it is not really possible to spray different colors of water, but because there are many lamps with different shapes under the fountain, from which water is sprayed. Some of these lights are peach-shaped, some are round, some are heart-shaped ... The water sprayed is spectacular.

Music fountain, I love you, because you set Shexiang Garden off more beautifully. I also love this beautiful Shexiang Park, but I love my hometown even more! Fourth grade: Wu Shasha.

My hometown, my hometown, is a beautiful city, and the whole city is full of green breath.

In the green belt in the middle of the long road, the trees with lush green leaves look so vibrant that they stand solemnly like soldiers.

The green branches and leaves are shining in the sun, so fresh and dazzling.

The breeze blows through the leaves and makes green waves, which is very beautiful.

Flowers, bees and butterflies near the trees gather together like a market, forming a beautiful scenery in Cixi.

In spring, the river in front of the house is crystal clear and sparkling, like a mirror.

Lively and lovely little fish are playing in the water, as if playing hide-and-seek with them.

The grass on the side is green, covered with green leaves.

The trees in the sky stand upright behind the house and stand there proudly like a soldier.

The children are playing under a century-old tree.

The farmer's uncle is busy transplanting rice seedlings to prepare for the autumn harvest.

In summer, pomegranate flowers on the roadside and lotus flowers in the pond are also competing to open.

When the fiery red sun rises, lotus and dew are reflected as fiery red.

A gust of wind blew, and the farmer's uncle showed a smile on his face.

In autumn, farmers' uncles gathered in pieces of hard-working rice, golden, and farmers' uncles were happily harvesting rice.

The mountain is more lively, look! Apple Orchard, the apple orchard is full of fire. Passing through the apple orchard, we come to the orange orchard. The golden oranges, red dates and grapes ... are a scene of bumper harvest.

In winter, the wind is biting.

The earth is covered with layers of snow, but my hometown is still beautiful.

Snowflakes are still falling, and I can't help thinking, "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows the petals of ten thousand pear trees.

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Talking before the composition class of the second grade in primary school: First, the teacher introduces himself. Second, I play a game with my children: "Lucky 52" has gestures. Show a picture, let a classmate describe it, and guess with his back to the picture.

Teaching process: first, stimulate interest.

1. What small animals do you like? Why? (White rabbit, parrot, kitten, puppy, tortoise) 2. Show photos of a group of small animals (with vivid music and animal calls).

3. What do you want to say after reading it? The puppy is so cute, the parrot is just like mine, the crab is very powerful, and the white rabbit is carved from jade.

1. The little white rabbit warmly welcomes the kind appearance of the little white rabbit.

(Showing a real white rabbit), you say hello to it.

..... Give it a name ... (You speak very well, shake hands with it) What do you like best about the rabbit when you see that your classmates like it so much? Ruby eyes, naughty personality, white fur) 2. The favorite part should be described in vivid words.

If you write well, cher will remember you.

3. Look at the fragment you wrote.

(The teacher writes on the blackboard: Observe carefully and grasp the characteristics; Vivid imagination) 4. I just wrote eyes. What's the difference? (Ears: the little white rabbit is weak, but it has two sensitive big ears), (Feather: what to change-fluff-ok, feel what you can add) (Mouth: Kiss, what's the smell? There are two left (hold up the white rabbit and the children will laugh) 5. You will tell your parents when you get home today. How to introduce it? (in a certain order) 6. Who wants to introduce the rabbit to its mother?

7. If you were a white rabbit, how would you introduce yourself? I have ruby eyes, ears as sensitive as two antennas, and powerful limbs. 8. The little white rabbit misses its mother very much. What did you say?/Sorry? (Show: Mother Rabbit) 9. Imagine: what will mother rabbit say when she sees the little white rabbit? How did you run so far? You miss your mother.

10. Mother rabbit comes from far away. She must be hungry. Who will feed them? 1 1. Play the video (the rabbit eats carrots). Let's talk about it first How does the white rabbit eat carrots? 12. Performance: You are a rabbit.

A classmate was a little shy, and the teacher said, "This is a docile rabbit." When I mentioned the performance of another classmate, I really put it down.

) 13. Tell the rabbit again.

(Thanks) Third, writing.

1. What do you want to write? (Mouse, parrot, pig, white rabbit, tortoise) 2. Requirements: If you were this kind of animal, what name would you take and put yourself in it? (I am -) 3. Writing (playing light music).

Refers to students watching exercises by themselves.

What else do you suggest? )

The long and hot summer has finally passed, and the cool and pleasant autumn has arrived.

Autumn comes, the autumn wind blows, leaves fall and fly freely in the air, which brings a lot of interest to autumn.

Autumn is coming, the breeze is blowing gently and the rain is raining.

After a while, it began to rain, and the rain dripped on people's faces, which was cool.

Lovely little swallows fly south in droves.

Winter goes and summer comes, grass grows and warblers fly. They are going to fly back to a warm home and spend the winter comfortably.

The fruit in the orchard is ripe, fragrant and refreshing.

In the morning, water drops roll on the dense leaves, and the sun shines on the crystal dew, shining like pearls.

The red apple, bending the branches, seems to nod and smile at people: we are mature, let's pick it! Golden ears of grain and red sorghum in rice fields are waiting for people to harvest.

Farmers who are busy with the autumn harvest are laughing happily from time to time.

They said: "It is really 70% management of farming, and people are not lazy! This year is another bumper harvest year! " Autumn symbolizes maturity and means harvest.

Autumn is beautiful! I love autumn! I love natural reference! ! ...

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