Talking about the line in the water

There is something wrong with your poem. What did you wish for? The unwritten line and the line are the same action, and some are repeated. Actually, you used it very well, so you don't have to write your lines. Baidu paused, and the original words were "

Wei Wenhou and Guan Bai are very happy.

Nie Zhongyi

The sun and the moon look busy. They travel for a week at night.

Do grass and trees still have to be old to live a carefree life?

One drink will solve all the problems, and then one drink will break all the worries.

White hair deceives the poor and is not intoxicating.

I hope all the water in the East China Sea will flow into the cup.

Andrew Ruan, an infantryman, visited Zuixian's hometown together. "

This poem of yours is a modified Tibetan limerick, with an average level.

I hope the water in the East China Sea is drunk, and I can row leisurely in the water with abundant leaves. This is my affectionate hometown.

I don't know what this poem is trying to express. I probably want to hide my head to show that I like the person "Idle Wood", but I just put together four words.