Lao She is a master of language, and he is very particular about the use of language. Please try to figure out the exquisite sentence taste of Jinan in winter.

The winter in Jinan is very beautiful, and the winter in Jinan written by Lao She is even more beautiful. Mountains, water, sunshine and snow all give people a beautiful enjoyment. In particular, the rich feelings soaked in the picturesque scenery make the works have a unique charm and a long aftertaste. There are many things worth pondering in this article. Here are the following points:

The layout of this article is very organized. In the first paragraph, write about the winter weather in Jinan. Based on the author's own personal experience, and by comparing with Peiping, London and tropical areas, the author wrote the "miracle" and "strange thing" that Jinan is windless, foggy and nontoxic in winter, highlighting its "warmth" and praising it as a "treasure land". This is the main thread that runs through the whole paper, and the unique beauty of Jinan in winter is related to this. At the beginning of the second paragraph, "it's not surprising if there is only sunshine" is an important turning point, and it turns to describe the winter scenery. Before writing landscapes, we should give people a general feeling of Jinan, and set off an "ideal realm" of "warmth and comfort" with anthropomorphic brushwork. The author closely follows this point, describing mountain scenery, watercolor and emotion in the scenery, which not only shows the beauty of Jinan's winter landscape, but also expresses his sincere love for the motherland's rivers and mountains. The article uses three paragraphs to write the mountain scenery in winter, first the mountain under the bright sunshine, then the mountain covered by Bo Xue, and then the distant mountain outside the city, thus sketching an elegant ink painting. The fifth paragraph describes the water color in winter. The author writes about the green color of algae to set off the clarity and transparency of water. It also expands the imagination, blends the sky light and water color, and depicts the bright and beautiful colors of Quancheng. Finally, end with a concise, powerful and meaningful sentence. The full text is orderly, clear in context, closely linked, and promotes nature.

The article uses metaphor and personification, which are not only similar in shape, but also similar in spirit and vivid and appropriate. A prominent example of metaphor, such as comparing Jinan to a "small cradle"; Compare the snow scene of the small village on the hillside to "small ink painting"; Comparing Jinan in the whole winter to a "blue crystal" is small and beautiful, and comparing the low mountains and winter in Jinan to a "blue crystal" is just right. There are many personified sentences, and the individualization is obvious. For example, the old city of Jinan is said to be "warm and comfortable to sleep, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up"; Write a circle of hills around Jinan with warmth. "They whispered,' Don't worry, it will be warm here.' "The mottled colors on the hillside are described as' putting a waterline on the mountain', which is beautiful and moving; Compare pink Bo Xue under the setting sun to a shy girl, she is charming; Anthropomorphize algae, water and weeping willows, saying, "Take out all the green stored all the year round", "With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze" and "The weeping willows have to take a picture in the water! "These all show the infinite vitality of Jinan in winter and the hazy spring scenery in winter.

Scenery fusion is another feature of this writing. When describing the winter scenery in Jinan, the article reveals the author's praise everywhere, which can be written from several aspects: First, express feelings directly. For example, at the beginning, I wrote "to a person who is used to life in Beiping" and "to a person who has just returned from London". By comparison, I came to the conclusion that "Jinan is really a treasure", which not only wrote my own unique feelings, but also appeared sincere. There is also "this circle of hills is particularly lovely in winter" and "those hills are so exquisite!" The last sentence contains the affection of "I love Jinan in winter, I love Jinan in winter". The second is to create artistic conception and show deep affection. For example, "Please close your eyes and think about it: an ancient city ... is this the ideal state?" "The best thing is that it snowed a little!" This is a small ink painting. Express the true feelings praised by the author in a beautiful artistic conception. The third is the combination of reality and reality, expanding imagination and expressing love. For example, "there is a bun of white flowers on the top of the tree, like a Japanese wet nurse", "the top of the mountain is all white, and the blue sky is inlaid with a silver edge", which not only writes the shape of the scenery, but also is full of love.

Mr. Lao She is a master of language, and he pays great attention to the choice of words. For example, "An ancient city, with mountains and water, is bathed in the sunshine of the whole world, sleeping warmly and comfortably, just waiting for the spring breeze to wake them up." "When the sun is about to set, the yellowish sunshine shines obliquely on the hillside, and that wave of snow seems to suddenly blush and slightly redden." ..... the choice of words and sentences is very subtle. And the use of related words is also very appropriate. For example, "The clearer the sky, the greener the algae. With these green spirits, the water can't bear to freeze, and those weeping willows with long branches should also be photographed in the water! " "In addition", further state the reasons, or supplement and add new reasons; "Return" refers to the expansion, benefit or supplement of the scope. Here, the conjunction "except ..." Huan "and adverbs play a related role together, and properly combine the meanings to be expressed.

The title of the article is "Winter in Jinan", which shows that the winter in Jinan is different from that in other places. The last "This is Jinan in winter" is the conclusion of the full text, which expresses the author's overall impression of Jinan in this special season of "winter". Meaning: This world of blue crystals, warm as spring and picturesque as Ming Che, is Jinan in winter! This ending not only echoes the beginning "Jinan is really a treasure", but also points out the topic, expresses the author's praise and gives people room for aftertaste.