Talk about water.

? Unfortunately, the trip to Xuzhou was brewing for several months, but it didn't happen. The children are so young that no one looks after them. My husband has many things to do and goes out regularly; I have been suffering from bronchitis for more than half a month. I really think, as your sister said, I can't arrange the present, and I don't want to talk about poetry and distance. I have no choice but to arrange it at home. Fortunately, a wetland teacher recorded your sister's composition class. Although I can't see my sister's expression, movements and appearance, I can't see the blackboard, but I can hear the sound. Although some places are not clear, I am grateful.

? This composition class is really unusual. Your sister is thinking about life, living in the world, teaching us the wisdom of life and understanding the true meaning of life! Such a class, the realm is definitely not comparable to the average person.

? At the beginning of the course, Jie Jun started with a word "positive energy" which appears very frequently in daily life, and then led to "negative energy". Each of us came into this world with tears, which is a question of "life" (of course, this is not the focus of your sister).

? Nine times out of ten things will go wrong in life, so negative energy is inevitable. Let the students talk about their troubles. Of course everyone has it, and nine times out of ten. But how to solve it?

? Writing.

Writing can be a good medicine to relieve negative emotions (this is to tell students how to "live", which is the focus of this lesson). Therefore, the teacher summed up four types of writing to vent negative emotions from students' compositions and online, namely: moaning and lamenting, accusing and venting, teasing and amusing, and passionate struggle. Ask the students to say what type they like. After listening to it, I was very impressed. Your sister can sum up these four words to express negative emotions. It's really nobody. I suddenly realized that when I had negative emotions, there could have been many kinds of words, but my words were obviously the first, and the realm was really not high. I have to learn the third and fourth.

? Unexpectedly, your sister asked students to guess which type they like, and summed up the advantages and disadvantages of these four types, but they are different stages of life growth. When I heard that, I really knelt down! What kind of compassion is this, how transparent this compassion is, and how to understand and care for life in order to have such an attitude towards life. I think this class has reached its peak.

? The truth is-not yet. Your sister came up with another story about how she changed from not wanting to live to wanting to live, and she lived wonderfully. One is through the film art (Brain Attack Team), and the other is under the guidance of a famous person (Su Shi). Let students and teachers understand the truth of life, face life more calmly, and tell them how to deal with life's unhappiness. I silently praised it while listening, which was really cute.

? The excitement continues. Sister Jun, let the students think about the problem of "death". And with the help of the movie "Fuck off, tumor jun", it is conveyed that "death" is the only ending for everyone. Although people will have so much nostalgia for "life" when they die, so much reluctance, etc., as long as they are alive, we should be optimistic, grateful and open-minded ... (This is talking about "death", and this class ends here) Finally.

The content of this lesson is really pork belly.

? Let's look at the problem involved in your sister's class: life-life-death, which basically reaches the ultimate problem of philosophy. This kind of question may be vague, not deep, or students don't know what to say. However, your sister's greatness lies in that she does not talk empty words, but simply explains how to deal with negative emotions, that is, how to live, from students and online articles, so that people can understand why to write, how to write and what kind of words to write. In a class, there is no pressure, no embarrassment, no debris, and excessive contact is as natural as running water. Your sister's technology is really soft and invincible, really good as water!

? Your sister's composition class really gave me another brainwave.

Jie Jun said at the beginning that this is actually not a composition class, but a bit like a lecture, because it does not involve composition techniques. She doesn't talk about the structure of a chapter, the general idea of a paragraph, the central idea, the beginning and the end, the deduction of the topic ... On the contrary, she lets students understand and feel from real examples. This kind of "teaching" is really the highest realm of martial arts! Sword in hand, no sword in heart. Picking leaves from flying flowers will hurt people. I think your sister will kill herself soon! Ha-ha laughter ..... "The avenue is silent", this silence, this infiltration, is definitely beyond the "device", beyond the "technique", but the realm of "Tao". As long as you get the Tao, how to do it will be handy and colorful.

? I still can't help but sigh that the Chinese language circle can make a composition class so wonderful, and there are only a handful of people who stop at the top of the mountain. I am even more amazed at ordinary people, looking at the ocean and sighing!

? Two years ago, I met your sister and was influenced by her. In my composition teaching in the past two years, I have also paid more attention to "Tao" (of course, my "Tao" is not "Tao" compared with your sister's). First, lead students to the road of writing, let them understand what writing is all about first, and let them fall in love with writing first. With this preparation, the students' articles are really amazing.

Thank you, sister! On the road of Chinese education and teaching, there are brothers and sisters, fortunately even! Learn to chant!