I wrote a fantasy novel named Jun Yu at the beginning. I wrote more than ten thousand words. Why didn't anyone click to read? No one commented. Write it down.

I go to the starting point to read your novels, and rarely order them. As an author, it is really a sad thing.

As an old reader, I'd like to express my opinion. I hope the landlord doesn't mind. The landlord's problems are mainly two points: 1 lack of words, and 2) the selling point is not prominent.

1. The starting point novel has a very bad phenomenon. No matter what style of writing it is, you can't do it without words. Of course, if you want to be outstanding in writing, naturally some people are willing to collect it until there are more words. But ten thousand words is indispensable, that is, less than five minutes of reading time.

The writing style of the landlord is a little immature, but it is not a big problem. This thing is naturally mature. The main problem now is that more than 10000 words have passed, and there has not been any conflict or suspense or climax. How many words does the selling point of a starting novel need to embody? The answer is within 100 words. In other words, you should tell the readers at the beginning what is special about my hero and what he may achieve in the future, so that people can continue to read.

I suggest the landlord write more chapters, which will look better. Furthermore, we should change the beginning and highlight the protagonist while there are not many words.

As an author, you should be able to bear loneliness. Take the biography of mortal cultivation as an example. Although I don't like this book, I admire the author very much. Spent more than 500 thousand words on VIP, and then attracted much attention.

Finally, I wish the landlord's novel a good result.