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1. stone mother's reading answer (with 4 questions) 1. Ordinary stone, real cultural stone, original stone, mother stone.

There is no question, no source, and it is impossible to answer.

20. The sentence description with horizontal lines in the third paragraph of the article is very distinctive. Try to appreciate it. (3 points)

2 1. Please tell the mother's complicated inner feelings expressed by wavy lines in the fourth paragraph. (3 points)

22. In the article, why did the author say, "For a moment, I felt that I was the most unfilial son in the world"? (4 points)

23. Try to analyze the role of the fifth paragraph in the full text. (4 points)

24. The first paragraph of the article says that the mother stone is "an ordinary stone", and the second paragraph says that it is a real cultural stone. Read the whole article and tell me your understanding of these two statements. (4 points)

20. Through metaphor and personification, the shapes and colors of the red line and the silver needle are highlighted, and the shock brought by the mother stone to the author is expressed. (***3 points, each point 1 point. Just right)

2 1. At this moment, the mother's heart is full of emotional disappointment for her son who left home to study, and (1) care and worry about her son's independent life. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

22. My mother is nearly 80 years old, but I have to leave her to work in other places. (2 points) expressed his guilt and self-blame for his mother's failure to be filial. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

23.① Respond from beginning to end, summarize the full text and point out the center of the article; Deepen the theme of the article, while praising the greatness of maternal love, alert the children of the world to care more about their mothers. (2 points per point, ***4 points. )

24. The mother stone is "not high" and "not strange in shape", and its appearance is ordinary, so it is ordinary; (2 points) However, it is also an ornamental stone with deep feelings for the mother of Zong Kaba, the founder of the new sect. It was invited to the temple gate to accept the worship of believers and became the virgin stone. Ordinary stone has a strong cultural connotation, and it is of course a real cultural stone. (2 points)

2. Read the answer to "Mother Stone" 20. By means of metaphor and personification, the shape and color of the red line and the silver needle are highlighted to express the shock brought by the mother stone to the author. (***3 points, each point 1 point. Just right)

2 1. At this moment, the mother's heart is full of emotional disappointment for her son who left home to study, and (1) care and worry about her son's independent life. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

22. My mother is nearly 80 years old, but I have to leave her to work in other places. (2 points) expressed his guilt and self-blame for his mother's failure to be filial. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

23.① Respond from beginning to end, summarize the full text and point out the center of the article; Deepen the theme of the article, while praising the greatness of maternal love, alert the children of the world to care more about their mothers. (2 points per point, ***4 points. )

24. The mother stone is "not high" and "not strange in shape", and its appearance is ordinary, so it is ordinary; (2 points) However, it is also an ornamental stone with deep feelings for the mother of Zong Kaba, the founder of the new sect. It was invited to the temple gate to accept the worship of believers and became the virgin stone. Ordinary stone has a strong cultural connotation, and it is of course a real cultural stone. (2 points)

3. Original sketch of mother stone: ① I went to Ta 'er Temple in Qinghai that year and was deeply moved by an ordinary stone.

(2) This stone is not high, about half a meter; Its shape is not strange, slightly slender, flat and smooth. But it is a real cultural stone.

It was from this stone that Zong Kaba began to study Buddhism in Tibet. His mother goes to the foot of the mountain to fetch water every day and rests next to this stone, looking west at Lhasa and looking forward to the children.

Tears drop on the stone, sweat is wiped on the stone, and when resting on the stone, the body temperature is also transmitted to the stone. Later, Zong Kaba successfully founded a new sect, and Ta 'er Temple became a Buddhist shrine, so this stone was invited to the temple gate.

This is really a rough stone. Now whenever devout believers come to worship, they should use their own unique habits to express their worship of this stone.

Some put a layer of ghee on it, some sprinkle a handful of Ciba, some put a few red lines, and some put a silver needle. Over time, the original shape of this stone has long been difficult to identify, and it has been completely reshaped into a new look, truly becoming the mother stone.

Even Picasso and Michelangelo could not have created such a masterpiece. (3) I stopped by the stone for a long time, carefully reading the layers of red lines and shining silver needles swimming between translucent ghee.

The red line twists and turns like a mountain stream, and comes and goes like colorful clouds in the evening. And the scattered fine needles, emitting a faint light, slightly hurt the hearts of wanderers.

I suddenly thought of my mother. That year, I was transferred to Beijing. Before I left, I was sorting out documents and books at home when I suddenly heard the sound of bamboo sticks coming from downstairs.

I quickly pushed open the door and my old mother appeared on the stairs. The backlight of the window reflects her white hair and chubby figure. My mother's house is a few miles away from where I live, and the streets are full of traffic. I don't know how she got here with a stick.

I hurried to help her. She looked at me for a few seconds and then said, "Can you not go?" The voice is a little shaky.

My nose hurts. My father's education level is not low, and my mother is basically illiterate. She has been a typical wife and mother all her life.

Every day after school, the first thing my mother asks when she comes in is, "Are you hungry?" The food has been fried and the water on the stove has been boiled twice. After graduating from college, I worked in other places first, and then moved back to my parents' home to live, without a house.

After work, it's still the same sentence: "Hungry. I'll be right down. "

I remember the first time I left my mother. I was a boy of 17 that year. I graduated from high school and was admitted to a school in Beijing.

My father and brother took me to the railway station in the evening. After we went out, my mother looked at the empty room alone and didn't know what to do, so she fetched a basin of water to wash her feet.

But it was not until my father sent me back a few hours later that she looked at the window and put her feet on the edge of the waterless basin. This is what my father told me when I came home during the winter vacation.

Now, she is nearly 80 years old, but she is leaving her youngest son. I stepped forward to help my mother and suddenly felt that I was the most unfilial son in the world.

I also remember a friend telling his story. He went back to his hometown on business. When he was busy in the city, he went back to the village to see his old mother and said that he would disappear before leaving tomorrow.

However, when he arrived at the airport the next day, he saw his old mother sitting on crutches at the door of the terminal in the distance. Poor people carry on the family line, and their children's return to them is less than one tenth of what they care about their children.

⑤ I know there are many Wangshi stones along the southeast coast, but there is such a tender Wangsi stone in the desolate northwest, a great virgin stone. It is a mirror, reflecting the love of all loving mothers and the shame of all children.

(Selected from Youth Expo 20 10, No.4) 20. The sentence description with horizontal lines in paragraph 3 of the article is very characteristic, so try to appreciate it. (3 points) 2 1. Please say the complicated inner feelings of mother expressed in the fourth paragraph with wavy lines.

(3 points) 22. In the article, why did the author say "for a moment, I felt that I was the most unfilial son in the world"? (4 points) 23. Try to analyze the role of the fifth paragraph in the full text. (4 points) 24. The first paragraph of the article says that the mother stone is "an ordinary stone", and the second paragraph says "but it is a real cultural stone". Read the whole article and tell me your understanding of these two statements.

(4 points) Supplementary questions: 20. The underlined sentence is: I stopped by the stone for a long time, carefully reading the layers of red lines and shining silver needles swimming between translucent ghee. The red line twists and turns like a mountain stream, and comes and goes like colorful clouds in the evening.

And the scattered fine needles, emitting a faint light, slightly hurt the hearts of wanderers. 2 1. Sentence with wavy lines: After we went out, my mother was alone in the empty room and didn't know what to do, so she fetched a basin of water to wash her feet.

But it was not until my father sent me back a few hours later that she looked at the window and put her feet on the edge of the waterless basin. Answer: 20. Through metaphor and personification, the shapes and colors of the red line and the silver needle are highlighted, and the shock brought by the mother stone to the author is expressed.

(***3 points, each point 1 point. 2 1. At this moment, the mother is full of emotional disappointment for her son who left home to study, and (1 minute) is concerned and worried about her son's independent life.

(2 points) (The meaning is correct. ) 22. My mother is nearly 80 years old, but I have to leave her to work in other places. (2 points) Expressed his guilt and self-blame for not being filial to his mother.

(2 points) (The meaning is correct. ) 23.① Respond from beginning to end, summarize the full text and point out the center of the article; Deepen the theme of the article, while praising the greatness of maternal love, alert the children of the world to care more about their mothers.

(2 points per point, ***4 points. 24. The mother stone is "not high" and "not strange in shape", and its appearance is ordinary, so it is ordinary; (2 points) However, it is also an ornamental stone with deep feelings for the mother of Zong Kaba, the founder of the new sect. It was invited to the temple gate to accept the worship of believers and became the virgin stone. Ordinary stone has a strong cultural connotation, and it is of course a real cultural stone.

(2 points).

4. The sentences with horizontal lines in the third paragraph of the article are described by 1. The sentences with horizontal lines in the third paragraph of the article are very characteristic. Try to appreciate them.

2. Please tell the mother's complicated inner feelings expressed in the wavy line sentence in the fourth paragraph.

3. In the article, why did the author say, "For a moment, I felt that I was the most unfilial son in the world"?

4. Try to analyze the role of paragraph ⑤ in the full text.

The first paragraph of the article says that the mother stone is "an ordinary stone", and the second paragraph says that it is a real cultural stone. Read the whole article and tell me your understanding of these two statements.

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Reference answer:

1. Through metaphor and personification, the shapes and colors of the red line and the silver needle are highlighted, and the shock brought by the mother stone to the author is expressed.

2. At this moment, the mother is full of emotional reluctance to her son who left home to study, and worries about her son's independent life.

My mother is nearly 80 years old, but I have to leave her to work in other places to express my guilt and self-blame for her failure to be filial.

4.① Respond from beginning to end, summarize the full text and point out the center of the article; Deepen the theme of the article, while praising the greatness of maternal love, alert the children of the world to care more about their mothers.

5. The mother stone is "not high" and "not strange in shape", and its appearance is ordinary, so it is ordinary; However, it is also a kind of appearance stone, which embodies the desire and feelings of the mother of Zong Kaba, the founder of the new Sect. He was invited to the front of the temple to be worshipped by believers and become the virgin stone. Ordinary stones are endowed with strong cultural connotations, and of course they are real cultural stones.

5. Liang Heng's Prose —— Thoughts after reading Mother's Stone for 20 years. Through metaphor and personification, the shapes and colors of the red line and the silver needle are highlighted, and the shock brought by the mother stone to the author is expressed. (***3 points, each point 1 point. Just right)

2 1. At this moment, the mother's heart is full of emotional disappointment for her son who left home to study, and (1) care and worry about her son's independent life. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

22. My mother is nearly 80 years old, but I have to leave her to work in other places. (2 points) expressed his guilt and self-blame for his mother's failure to be filial. (2 points) (The meaning is correct. )

23.① Respond from beginning to end, summarize the full text and point out the center of the article; Deepen the theme of the article, while praising the greatness of maternal love, alert the children of the world to care more about their mothers. (2 points per point, ***4 points. )

24. The mother stone is "not high" and "not strange in shape", and its appearance is ordinary, so it is ordinary; (2 points) However, it is also an ornamental stone with deep feelings for the mother of Zong Kaba, the founder of the new sect. It was invited to the temple gate to accept the worship of believers and became the virgin stone. Ordinary stone has a strong cultural connotation, and it is of course a real cultural stone. (2 points)

6. Who has the reading answer of "Stone Mom" 15? Facing the mother stone in front of Ta 'er Temple, what does the author recall about "mother"? How does the author express his feelings for his mother? Please make a brief summary. (4 points)

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16. After recalling his mother, the author wrote about his friend's mother. What is the author's intention? (3 points)

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17. Combined with the content of the article, talk about how the author expresses his feelings for his mother incisively and vividly. (No more than 120 words, 7 points)

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Reference answer:

15.① Before I transferred to Beijing, my mother made a special trip to my residence and asked me if I could work in Beijing (1 min).

② When I left home for the first time, my mother looked at the window for a long time and forgot to wash her feet (1).

③ A friend's mother went to the airport to see her son off (1).

④ Guilt and remorse (1)

Scoring: **4 points, each point 1 point.

16. Write about a friend's mother seeing her son off at the airport, which shows that on the one hand, the mother cares about her son far more than the child cares about her parents (1); On the other hand, it also shows parents' selfless love for their children, and children's guilt for their parents is a common phenomenon in society (or, as the author wrote, it shows the love of all loving mothers and the shame of all children) (2 points).

Score: **3 points

17.(5 points) Reference example

(1) Write several typical life segments in the form of memories, showing the greatness of maternal love, and then expressing the guilt of wanderers.

(2) The delicate and selfless maternal love sets off the inner world of the wanderer's remorse and guilt through meticulous description (the greatness of maternal love sets off the wanderer's shame and smallness).

(3) Express your ideas directly in plain language. Such as "stabbing a wanderer has a slight pain in his heart." My nose is sore. " "The wind of passing on the family line is poor, and the children's return to them is less than one tenth of what they care about their children." (guilty) "I think I am the most unfilial son in the world." The author's sense of guilt and self-blame for his mother is directly expressed in simple language.