Finally, correct the shortcomings of the composition.

0 1, standing on the coast of history, wandering in the ditch of history: Dr. Chu hesitated by the Zehe River and did not regret it for nine times; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming is carefree in Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... They choose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

●02. Balzac said, "Misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism water of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak".

After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet.

In this world, a star falls, the starry sky cannot be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring cannot be deserted.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter.

Only when we set out will we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.

●04. Although you are still a seedling. However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky.

●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing seeds at any time, blooming at any time, decorating this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians who wear branches and brush leaves do not feel pain and tears, but they do not feel sad."

●06. Pessimists are defeated by themselves first, and then by life; An optimist conquers himself first, then life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future; An optimistic person has gone through many hardships and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible; In the eyes of optimists, the impossible becomes possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From extraordinary people, it is easy for us to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows.

Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success.

●08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings.

●09. The Himalayas go straight into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on it; The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it.

● 10. Gone days are like withered leaves and petals. What disappears is the innocence and romance of youth. I don't remember how much rain is floating on my chest and the wind is ringing in my ears. I only know that vicissitudes of life have already penetrated my heart and climbed up my face. A person and the pursuit of peers, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions.

● 1 1, full moon or full moon, people have joys and sorrows, life changes, there are four seasons in a year, through the long night, you can see the dawn, experience a lot, you can have happiness, endure the cold winter, you don't have to be dormant, you can look forward to the new year.

● 12, without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own place, our own light source and our own voice.

● 13, perhaps the misfortune of fate is doomed to crush his colorful dreams; Perhaps it is the ruthlessness of heaven and earth that finally releases our day-to-day efforts to nothing, or it may be that many incomprehensible but real obstacles and setbacks have already turned our energetic struggle and indomitable front into sadness and loneliness, so please reflect on yourself in suffering!

14, "A successful flower, people only marvel at its present brilliance; The initial buds were soaked with tears of struggle and full of blood and rain of sacrifice. " Each of us is eager for success, so when we are just starting, we should use our own unrepentant efforts to water the budding seeds.

● 15, every drop of water reflects a colorful world, every pair of eyes are embedded in a colorful world, and every melodious stream shines with beautiful lights. Don't sigh the world's helplessness, look at the world's prosperity and colorful with a good mood, and savor the beauty everywhere!

16, maybe you are just a small seedling, but as long as you persevere. Will eventually become a towering tree; Maybe you are just a trickle, but as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Maybe you are just a young eagle, but as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually fly in the blue sky.

● 17. When the young eagle is still waiting for feeding in the nest and looking at the blue sky and white clouds, it has a dream, that is, flapping its wings, fighting with the blue sky and dancing with the white clouds; When the fine horse rested in the fence and held its head high and hissed, it also had a dream, that is, it bravely hoofed the wild and galloped the world.

● 18, when it is covered with snow and ice, we need a fire to keep warm; When the night is boundless, we need a little starlight to keep warm; When the future is boundless, we need a navigation light to keep warm ... In the four seasons, what we can't filter out is worry and sadness, and what we can't get rid of is hardship and pain. In cold weather, what can we use to warm ourselves and stand in the wind? Leave some sincerity to keep yourself warm!

● 19, the sea has lost its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand; If life loses its true direction, it loses its meaning.

●20, a secluded path, twists and turns will always arouse the yearning for relaxation; Huge waves can make a thrilling sound when the tide rises and falls; A story, but there is sadness in sadness; A kind of life, ups and downs, China shows a shocking grandeur.

Supplement: 1, natural ending.

This ending is very easy. The story is finished, the result comes out, and the article ends. This is the natural ending. For example, at the end of the tour of Bijia Mountain:

At sunset, we were all a little tired, so we took a bus together and embarked on the way home with the joy of playing in Bijia Mountain. ...

Step 2 end

When things are done, sum up your gains, and often use compound sentences with progressive relationships to talk about your gains or feelings. For example, at the end of an interesting eggshell experiment:

This eggshell experiment is really interesting! Not only did I exercise my hands-on ability, but I also learned the truth of "centralization and decentralization of power". What a great harvest! So I like this experiment!

3. Heuristic ending (also known as "wise")

This ending is to write out the enlightenment and clear truth obtained after something, which plays the role of pointing out the center. For example, at the end of a small matter:

It has been a long time, but I can't forget it. Although this incident is very small, it inspires me a lot, because it makes me understand the truth that no matter what people have done wrong, as long as they realize their mistakes and dare to admit and correct them, they will definitely make a new start and make progress.

4. Question ending (also called "rhetorical question")

It's over. In order to emphasize the truth or enlightenment he understands, the author deliberately ends with a question or rhetorical question, which not only expresses his wishes, but also stimulates the readers' thinking and plays a role in strengthening the center. For example, at the end of true friendship:

We finally made up. Through this incident, we learned that frankness, tolerance and understanding are the basis of friendship. What do you think, friend?

The last sentence can also be said, "friend, don't you think so?"