How to write a composition according to the poem at the beginning?

1. A composition that begins with a poem is full of flowers and flying all over the sky. Soft and fragrant mountains, falling catkins touch the curtain.

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Hearing rumors and then confirming the death of "Daiyu", I can't help but feel chilling. I can't calm down when I turn on the TV and see the once lively and beautiful "Daiyu". Sad, sad. Xiao Xu, you just left? Why did you leave in such a hurry? Just like "Daiyu", you are sad, you are sentimental and you are beautiful.

Xiaoxu, a woman like smoke and water, has been off the screen for 20 years. Hua Lin thanked Chunhong, who waited for her image every night. The people who cry and laugh with her have already woken up from their dreams. We thought we had forgotten it, and suddenly turned around and found that everything was clear yesterday. When Sister Lin first entered the Grand View Garden, it was like flowers blooming and falling, delicious, fragrant with maple dew and tea, and the skirt dragged the Xiangjiang River water. Lengxiang smiled.

I've seen you before, Xiao Xu. From the early morning to the thin curtain, you are a glass of wine in the spring breeze, a platform under the bodhi tree, a butterfly dream in tears and a full moon in the wind, all of which are gradually blurred in our memory.

You have been out of sight for a long time, and you are still hurting countless people.

No matter how lively the Red Chamber draft is now, the candidates are all mediocre and vulgar. How can they spend their lives like you for a role?

You did it-in the first half, you were colorful, and in the second half, you were white and pure.

Lanzedo is a fragrant grass, and you are the only hibiscus.

Let's see the setting sun in spring, that is, when the beauty dies of old age. There is no sad song for me, I don't know what happened.

2. According to the poem, write a composition 0 1 and love life.

Love is the wind. "It is good for the poor to hear the wind." Love is rain, "Love peony contains spring tears". Love is soil, you can dig it out by bending down. Which soil has no blood and sweat of ancestors and no green dream of future people? Love is a cloud. When you look up, you can see one. Which cloud has not seen the yearning of children and the memory of old people?

Because of love, we are grateful, because of love, we are full of grief and indignation; Because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to wear boots to meet them. A life of humiliation, life is love; Deserve the righteousness above family, death is love; Clear and refreshing, live seriously, living is not love!

I want to be such a person.

In the Wenchuan earthquake, there were many touching stories and many heroes, such as Hu, Liu Ning and ... Among them, teacher Tan Qianqiu impressed me the most.

When the earth shook, he did not flinch or panic, but responded at the first time: "The students should be evacuated immediately after the earthquake." So he immediately stood on the table and shouted at the students, "The earthquake is coming, run!" " "He immediately stood at the door, gesturing to evacuate. When he saw that there were still four slow students in the classroom who had not evacuated, he rushed into the teaching building that was about to collapse. He lay on the desk with open arms, protecting the four students under him.

At 22: 00 13, rescuers dragged out the body of Tan Qianqiu, the teaching director of Deyang Dong Qi Middle School. I saw him lying on the desk, with open arms, guarding the four children under the desk. The children survived, but their teacher Tan went to "heaven" forever ... "Without the protection of Teacher Tan, all four children could not survive."

The uncle of the rescued girl Liu Hongli said with tears. "Among the teachers in our school, Mr. Tan is one of the most distressed students. When he was walking on campus, he saw a small stone on the ground and went over to pick it up, for fear that the students would accidentally fall. " Teacher Xia Kaixiu said. Liu Hongli's uncle sighed in the sky: "Teacher Tan, a great man, a great hero!" "Ah-"

Although he is gone, his gesture of protecting students with open arms will always be fixed in the Wenchuan earthquake, engraved in the hearts of the world, becoming an epic statue of a heroic teacher and inspiring generations of heroic deeds, which will be forever celebrated. Teacher Tan left, leaving behind a posture, a posture with open arms forever, and a posture of sacrificing oneself to save others. It is the most heroic and tragic gesture in the world.

I want to be such a person, become an excellent people's teacher, and care for my students with my love and life.

A Bright Color in Life —— Comment on Titanic

Misfortune tests the sincerity of friends. Only after I saw the debris of the sunken ship did I feel deeply.

The story is about Ruth and Jack meeting in prison. I didn't expect the Titanic to sink on the glacier. The captain ordered the women and children to get on the lifeboat first, and the crew and men who dared to get on first asked the first mate to shoot him. No one dares to disobey his orders. Jack held Ruth's hand tightly when the hull split in two. After the Titanic sank, Jack left Ruth lying on the boat, but he was immersed in the cold sea water. They were exhausted by fatigue and cold at sea. But when Ruth woke up, Jack had already passed away. She shouted: "Come back, come back, come back ..." Her faint call was accompanied by firm eyes, showing incomparable determination and infinite desire for life. She struggled desperately on the edge of despair and fought tenaciously with death. Trembling, she swam to a dead sailor, took the whistle he hung, and blew it with all her strength, blowing her love for life, blowing her nostalgia for all things in the world, and blowing her nostalgia for all beautiful things. God heard her sincere prayer, and the lifeboat turned around and headed for the place where the whistle sounded. ...

The captain, Jack and Ruth all left a deep impression on me and made me understand the greatness and importance of love. The captain let the elderly, women and children go first, which reflected the captain's care for the passengers. Jack always comforts Ruth, which shows her boyfriend's love for his girlfriend. Ruth survived strongly, reflecting her girlfriend's love for her boyfriend. This love is noble, and I think this love has been sublimated into a responsibility. Everyone knows that people can't live without love. A person, without the love of his parents, will feel very depressed; A family, without mutual love between old and young, will not have happiness and beauty; Without mutual love, there would be no group cohesion and social civilization. Love is the force for the survival and development of human society. Without love, people can't live. I think love is mutual. You give others love, and others will give you the most sincere love. By then, the world will become a beautiful world.

3. How to write a composition at the beginning of the composition? The ancients said "crested leopard tail", that is to say, the beginning should be graceful and colorful. Just like the head of a phoenix, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of beginning. Similarly, a good beginning is also of great significance to the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.

So, what kind of beginning is good? There is no fixed method for writing, and there is no fixed format at the beginning. There is only one standard to measure the quality, that is, whether it is an organic part of the article, whether it can serve the content and center of the article, and whether it can attract readers to read.

Due to the limitation of time and space, the beginning of the composition in the examination room is concise, vivid and beautiful. The following methods can be considered.

1, cut to the chase. The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to a straightforward way of writing articles. For example, "Talking about backbone" shows the point at the beginning: "We China people have backbone." "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This method is widely used in writing all kinds of articles, accounting for a large proportion. Its expression angle can be the direct narration at the beginning or the point of writing; You can reveal the main idea from the beginning, or you can come straight to the point and tell the enemy directly. And so on. Because this kind of writing is crisp and neat, it should be the first choice at the beginning of the composition in the examination room.

2. The background is gradient. Natural science tells us that the universe is a big system, and social science tells us that human society is a big system. A tree is in a forest system and a leaf belongs to this tree system. A person belongs to the social system and a finger belongs to this person's system. Therefore, any single thing, any phenomenon, can not be separated from the system to which it belongs, that is, the social background or natural background on which it depends. For example, "Kong Ji Ji Ji" begins: "The big square counter in the street ... can warm wine at any time". "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain" begins: "June 15, it's crazy!" These beginnings explain the time, place, festival, climate or the background and environment of the topic. Writing in the examination room, some topics at first glance seem abrupt and unpredictable, but if you think about the background carefully, it will suddenly become clear. For example, the topic of 1999' s college entrance examination composition is "If memory can be transplanted". With the development of science and technology in recent years, cloning technology has come out, genes can be transplanted, and space technology has advanced by leaps and bounds. In recent years, China has sustained economic development and made outstanding achievements in economic construction. Contact these backgrounds, the content of the article can be written, and association and imagination will have a foothold.

3. Ask questions. Flashback the result of things first, set suspense, or set questions to break the theme first and cause explanation or discussion. For example, "Jujube Stone" begins: "Before leaving for America, ... but this is very strange." Another example is the beginning of Colorful Flowers: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Of course, this open form should be skillfully used to avoid single or formal curiosity.

(In fact, this opening form is very rich, such as:

(1) First, an open question is raised.

(2) intercept a wonderful event first.

(3) first explain an object that plays a clue role.

(4) First, arrange a scene that triggers the story.

⑤ Introduce the characters closely related to the story first. )

4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center. Echo, for example, begins with a poem by Ai Qing. Cheng Yi's words are quoted at the beginning of Yi Xue: "Scholars must doubt first" and so on. This opening method is also an easy method for general candidates to master and use. Imagine, which candidate can't even remember a few ancient poems, aphorisms and famous sayings? The composition in the examination room varies from topic to topic, and the lens is quoted. Why not? The well-known epigram opening can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, eventful and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors.

5, incisive metaphor. Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained. For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse." Taking the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor, this paper leads to the central argument, and incisive metaphors are often used at the beginning of argumentative papers, which can make the articles unique and enhance their attraction and expression effect. Since it is a metaphor, we have to pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this question, and we can't be far-fetched

In addition, there are some ways to open, such as lyrical discussion, characterization and so on, so I won't elaborate here.

In short, how to start writing in the examination room determines the content of the examination questions, the nature of the article and the unique ideas of the candidates. After you get the topic, you must think twice before you act, and don't act rashly.