Write a letter to Li Longji —— Notes on the composition of "Yang Yuhuan in Xianshan" (II)

In the last section, I praised my essay topic, Xue Wenli and Ma Xiaoyan, and immediately took out their own beautiful essays to testify for Uncle harriman: Teacher, you asked us to write about Yang Yuhuan in the fairy mountain and recite the Song of Eternal Sorrow again. If you think about it, you should get into Yang Yuhuan's tearful eyes and wet Xue Tao's notes-help her write a letter to the ungrateful emperor. Express the lovesickness of parting, talk about the loneliness between people and immortals, talk about the sweetness of enjoying prosperity in the past, and complain about the pain of Ma Wei's separation.

Of course, high school students will never forget that a teacher is a teacher after all, and he always wants you to be taller, and he always wants you to sublimate the theme and then sublimate it. Well, I want to write about Yuhuan's resentment-after all, the man who turned his back on the world is the first man in the world, holding the power of the four seas, but in the most difficult time, he has to rely on his own woman to tide over the crisis. This is disgraceful. This is not decent. More importantly, the monarch, who can't save his only lover by hiding his face, has really covered up the precious love that emperors can't get for thousands of years into blood and tears between his fingers.

Here, these expressions are called "reflection". When teenagers write about Yang Guifei's resentment, it makes me return to Socrates again-a life without reflection is not worth living.

It is said that you should write about your own life in the essay topic. But teenagers stay in the classroom all day, except for textbooks and papers, and listening to your indoctrination except for drowsiness. Where do you live? Life lies in deducing those formulas and listening to those texts. Thinking about the text and experiencing the taste of life first from the language and characters may be the writing choice that high school students have to make today. In other words, every classic text can't be learned in vain. Aren't we trying to figure it out sentence by sentence? We are perceiving as a whole. We are looking for clues to the text. We savored the details. Every class is a real life we live. Why can't we read this text carefully as the material for our writing? I have doubts, and often write a composition topic related to the textbook for this purpose. In the margins of those classic texts, in the half words of literary masters, I found the composition topic I wanted. Now, the high school girls have perfected the topic of my composition, and they can't help but think of singing the heart song of Ms. Yang, who Bai Juyi didn't fully display her talents, and also think of the letter style, and let Yang Yuhuan use the oldest swan goose in China to send a letter to her lover.

I'm surprised that few students write letters in the college entrance examination. Letters are amazing things. Perhaps, you are indifferent to a serious composition topic, and you stammer when you take a pen, and you are out of breath. But what about writing a letter to a friend? When we wrote the letter, we were both stylists. "Friend, I want to say to you …", starting with such words, alas, I am full of words, my tongue is my own, and my tone is my breathing and heartbeat.

These two letters should be sent to the Tang Dynasty and Yingzhou for Yang Yuhuan to read by himself. I believe that the writing style of the girls in Class 14, Grade 2, Jiuquan Middle School will definitely make the first beauty in the Tang Dynasty, the luckiest and most unfortunate woman in the world, think, remember, feel pain, worry, love, hate, regret, sadness, worry ..., with mixed feelings and jade tears. I believe that human suffering is the same from generation to generation. I believe that for tens of thousands of years, human beings have sung nothing but rich emotions. I believe that classical Chinese, vernacular Chinese, Tang Yuefu, and the words and expressions of girls in Jiuquan Middle School are actually the eternal spirit of mankind. In this sense, we should follow Bai Juyi to go through the joys and sorrows, feel melancholy, grieve and linger, and express our long-term hatred. In fact, it is the most important thing to do in the Chinese class of reciting Tang poetry and Song poetry.

I wanted to comment on Xue Wenli's and Ma Xiaoyan's compositions here. However, the two high school students wrote so beautifully that I was afraid that my retelling would spoil your appetite. Just two compositions, read them yourself, officer.

Put your letter in

Time becomes a universal mailbox

Write your words out

Your pen is the king of freedom

Wash your sentences with ink

A word of your own

A transparent window

See your swan goose go to the far north

Swan Lake will receive it

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