How to evaluate the book My Father-in-law?

Widowed Husband is an online novel, which first appeared at the starting point of 20 1 1. The author is angry banana, which is still serialized. This paper mainly tells a series of stories about the protagonist's return to ancient times from the identity of a modern financial giant and his entry into the body of the most insignificant son-in-law of a merchant family, which involves what's going on in the world at home. The background of the whole book is equivalent to the shaky end of the Wu Dynasty in the Southern Song Dynasty in the history of China. Because of the author's accurate description of history and exquisite writing style, coupled with the hero's sincere patriotic feelings, it is called a masterpiece by some readers. It means close to a famous book. Such praise is enough to show that "Widowed Husband" is well received by readers, and it also shows that the writing level of this book is not low. But if you really want to compare this book with a famous book, the gap is still obvious.

He didn't want to touch what was going on in the world at home and abroad, but he was born at the end of Wu. The years are eventful, the world is in chaos, Jin and Liao are against each other, and the situation is turbulent and humiliating for a hundred years. Finally, he saw the first light at the end, Emperor Tianzuo, Akuta, Wukimai, Genghis Khan, Temujin, Jamukha, Chilaowen, Muqali, and the black blind man.

The author's description of history in the book is in place, which perfectly shows the situation that the country was weak and had strong enemies outside in the last years of Wu. Moreover, the emotional description of the relationship between characters is very delicate, which gives readers a sense of substitution and picture. In particular, the hero Yining's patriotic feelings of taking responsibility are very real and touching, just like the hero in Wolf Warriors 2, but not as grandiose as other historical novels. It can be said that under the background of peers, widowed husbands belong to the highest level. The ability of setting scenes in this novel is excellent, there is a way to write cruel people, and some plots are wonderful. Others, such as characterization, structure and depth of thought, are still out of the question. ?

The depiction of female characters in the book is superficial and lacks authenticity. The protagonist's aura or feudal concept is written like a doll, so is yunzhu, and so is Su Taner. Their existence in the book is to appreciate, worship, feel distressed, be desperately good to the protagonist, and then cry from time to time. Both Liu Watermelon and Hong Ti are attracted by something, although most of the time they are quietly watching the protagonist. Su Tan 'er and yunzhu's books depict a strong woman, a woman who is proficient in music, has her own opinions and doesn't sell her own brothel, but she can't see that they have their own opinions and are doing things that are in line with their own positioning. Su Taner ran around doing business, strolling around here and there, and yunzhu set up a stall to open a restaurant, all of which were foil for their "xianggong". ?

Male characters lack charm, specifically male characters of the same age as the protagonist. Apart from Li Pin and Fan Chen, there are no normal male roles. Even if it is, it can't be said that it is a discerning eye. Jiangning gifted scholars, Fu Su's family members, officials, businessmen, and their own families are all in a mess, doing everything they can, and they despise and slander each time, secretly alienating each other, which is getting worse and worse, like a cycle.

Of course, the above two points are completely shortcomings for the net text, after all, it must look cool. But if you want to use masterpieces to build it, it will be fatal.