A trip to Nanshan Forest Park

My hometown is Yunfu. In recent years, great changes have taken place here. Let me tell you about the biggest change, which is Nanshan Forest Park behind the new city government.

Today, my father and brother and I went to Nanshan Forest Park with great interest. At the entrance of Nanshan Forest Park, there is a fountain, and there is a dark green fengshui ball in the middle of the fountain. The fengshui ball keeps turning in the water, which is really interesting. We walked through the stone steps, and there was a ground paved with stone carvings in the middle of the road, just like waves on the lake. There are all kinds of stone names and samples beside the road, such as: Golden Century, Emperor Gold, Magic Rainbow, American White Hemp, resplendent and magnificent, and so on, which are really dazzling and varied. There are also various stone machinery beside the stone exhibits: granite circular saw, marble sand saw, edge trimmer and so on. There are also huge stone strips on both sides of the road, reflecting the majestic spirit of Yunfu people who cut mountains and cut stones and turn stones into gold.

At the end of the road, there is a small flower bed. In the middle of the small flower bed stands a big stone tablet engraved with the words "Nanshan Forest Park". Next to the small flower bed, there stands a tour schematic diagram and a brief introduction of Nanshan Forest Park, which reads: Guangdong Nanshan Forest Park has a planned total area of 11,935 mu, and is a provincial-level forest park with natural landscape as the main body, leisure and fitness, popular science entertainment as the focus, and ecological culture as the feature, integrating sightseeing, recreation and knowledge. The park is rich in resources, with verdant forests on the mountains, gurgling streams at the foot of the mountain, and the trickle merges into seven lakes. It can be said that the scenery is pleasant, the air is fresh, the scenery is beautiful, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant, and it is a good place for citizens and tourists to relax, keep fit and enjoy sightseeing.

We walked into a path paved with smooth pebbles, just like a carpet, and it was very comfortable to step on it. This path used to be a bumpy yellow mud road. The left side of the road used to grow vegetables, but now it has been built into a pavilion with a frustum of a cone and a stone chair. There are stone-pier-shaped horns in the grass by the roadside. At night, the staff use the horns to broadcast beautiful and soft music to please the tourists' body and mind.

We started to climb the mountain. We walked up the stone steps made of stones. Birds and flowers were singing in the forest, cicadas were singing in the trees, birds were singing in the branches, and butterflies were dancing around the flowers. It's really full of life here. We walked along the winding path to the spring eye, and the trickle in the spring eye happily flowed from the mountainside to the foot of the mountain. Many citizens came here to get the sweet water to drink at home.

We climbed the stairs to the tea forest, and the tea trees were covered with tea seeds, some of which were pink, some were blue and red, which was really various.

when we got to the mountain, our mood was suddenly enlightened. At first glance, I saw the rolling peaks, overlooking the opposite mountainside and foot, all of which were full of orange trees with heavy fruits. A breeze blew, and I suddenly felt relaxed and happy. I couldn't help shouting loudly, and there were echoes in the valley.

We went down the road to Songtao, Nanshan. The pine trees in Songtao are very green, just like rows of strong sentries standing on the mountain, standing proudly on Nanshan!

when we got to the foot of the mountain, there were fields on both sides of the road, and cacti and cauliflower were planted in the fields. We walked into a bridge, and both sides of the bridge were covered with azaleas, which were very beautiful. There is also a pond near the bridge. There are many lotus flowers planted in the pond. Lotus leaves are like handfuls of umbrellas, and lotus flowers are like slim girls. We walked out of the wooden bridge to the exit of the park, which is another entrance. There is a big stone on the side of Yingbin Hotel. The words "nanshan park" are engraved on the stone. It is said that these words were inscribed by Zheng Liping, the former party secretary.

I am really happy today, because I saw the changes in Nanshan Forest Park. I believe that Nanshan Forest Park will become more beautiful in the next few years. I love Nanshan Forest Park, and I love my hometown even more.

Extended reading

Writing is the "half of the country" that determines the result of Chinese examination, so the success or failure of writing often determines the success or failure of the whole Chinese examination. So how do you get high marks in the exam composition? I think the following points must be noted.

1. Topics and Intentions. All exam compositions must be examined because candidates should compete fairly in the same environment. Examining the questions is to make a comprehensive and accurate reading and understanding of all the contents displayed in the questions, read out the intentions of the proposer, examine the various limitations of the questions clearly, and make clear what I should write, how to write it, and to what extent, so as to truly understand it comprehensively, grasp it profoundly, and write the composition without bias or omission. The composition evaluation of the college entrance examination clearly stipulates that the final score of any test paper with problems in the examination is generally not more than the lowest score of the second type of paper. It can be seen that the accuracy of the examination is the key factor in the success or failure of the composition. The idea is to ask the author to stand at the height of the times, observe and understand life, refine the theme, make the theme reflect the spirit of the times, reflect the times, act on the times, beat the pulse of the times and promote the progress of the times. The "meaning" of the article is actually a kind of thought gradually nurtured by the author in the experience of life, and it is the product of the collision between the author's subjective understanding and objective reality. It reflects the author's ideological level, cognitive level and the world outlook, outlook on life and values formed in social life. In recent two years, the composition teaching reform advocates students to be true to life and true to themselves. Some students ignore the grasp of the ideological tendency of the article, see the problem incompletely, and have extreme views. What's more, they doubt the party's leadership and policies because of corruption. Although today's China is politically clear and free of speech, if you make a mistake, you won't pursue any political issues, but as a builder of the future society, you should still have a correct view of right and wrong. This must be noted.

2. Titles and paragraph titles are the eyes of the article, and also the first impression of the marking teacher on the article, especially the writing of self-made topics. The marking teacher attaches great importance to the titles drawn up by candidates. As the saying goes, "half the grain is planted well, and half the text is written well", which shows the importance of the topic. Some candidates write the text first and then draw up the title. After the article is written, they may not have time to write the title, or they may forget to make up the title. Although the score stipulates that 2 points will be deducted if there is no title, the actual result is far from 2 points. Someone has done such an experiment, and asked two groups of teachers to mark several well-written compositions respectively according to the two types of retaining titles and hiding titles, and the difference in scores was generally above 5 points. This is because the marking teacher has a psychological distance from the untitled composition and unconsciously lowers the grade. As for how to draw up the title, I think we should do the following: ① be exact. It means to conform to the content of the article, and it also means to choose words and make sentences in accordance with the norms. ② Refinement. The number of words in the index question is appropriate. 3 vivid. Refers to the topic can reflect a kind of vitality, readability and interest. 4 novel. Refers to having a new perspective, new ideas and new insights, which can give people a sense of freshness. (5) meaningful. Refers to the inherent meaning. There are various ways to propose a topic, such as using rhetoric, quoting common sayings, using ancient sayings, borrowing idioms, applying buzzwords, skillfully using formulas or symbols from other disciplines, etc. Candidates can use it flexibly according to their own situation. Paragraph: the structure of the first, abdomen and tail paragraphs is the most taboo in exam composition. It is better to divide the article into several paragraphs. For a composition of less than 1, words, I think it is enough to divide it into 5-8 natural paragraphs. Because the more natural the natural section is, the more mature and sophisticated you are. In addition, write the first sentence of each paragraph well. The first sentence of each paragraph is like a person's eyebrows. Write the first sentence well, "with fine eyes", and the whole paragraph is remarkable in spirit.

3. Style and content There are two types of requirements for style in the composition questions of the college entrance examination: one is to stipulate that a certain style must be written, such as "writing an argumentative essay"; The other is to exclude writing a certain style, such as "any other style except poetry". Candidates must write according to the prescribed style. In recent years, there is no limit to the style in the composition questions of the college entrance examination, so that candidates can freely choose the style. Here, special attention should be paid to the fact that the style is not limited.