Excellent composition in grade six

In our daily study, work and life, we will always come into contact with composition. Composition requires a complete text structure, and endless composition must be avoided. How to write a good composition? The following is the excellent essay model of grade six that I compiled. Welcome to share.

When it comes to the wonders of the world in China, everyone will think of the Great Wall, Terracotta Warriors and Horses and the Forbidden City. Speaking of important figures in Chinese history, people will think of kings who have done great things, such as Qin Shihuang, Liu Bei and Zhu Yuanzhang. When it comes to heroes in the history of China, everyone will think of Zheng He, Guan Yunchang and so on. I think Qin Shihuang is a respectable hero.

Someone asked, "He is a tyrant. What is a hero? " I said that the Great Wall and Terracotta Warriors are his masterpieces. Without his ambition and courage, the Chinese nation would not have ushered in the first great reunification. Without a unified and stable environment, where does technology come from? Where does progress come from? Where did it come from? Miracle?

Many people have heard the story: Lin Xiangru wants Wang to draw lots in fifteen cities, and Lin Xiangru pretends that there is something wrong with drawing lots because he finds that Wang doesn't want to change cities. So King Qin Zhao let Lin Xiangru go because he was afraid that the jade would be damaged.

This story just illustrates the quality of Qin's forbearance and freedom, and also enables Qin to destroy the six countries and unify the whole of China. After Qin Shihuang proclaimed himself emperor, he opened up a rocky land and made great contributions to resisting foreign invasion.

Some people say that heroes can do what they can, and Qin Shihuang is such a person. He was ambitious, occupying Guangxi, northern Guangdong and Vietnam, and expanding the territory of China. He also organized troops to build the Great Wall, which was lower than the internal and external invasion. He sent general Meng Tian to beat the Huns out of the water, which made great contributions to the development of our country. Isn't such a rare emperor a hero?

In 2 19, Qin Shihuang called 100 people to hold a meditation ceremony in Taishan. The last question, no one knows how to proceed. Qin Shihuang flew into a rage, held a Zen ceremony to worship heaven and earth according to his own ideas, erected a monument and left.

It can be seen that Qin Shihuang is an emperor with personality and innovative thinking. After his death, people still remember his deeds. He built "the eighth wonder of the world-the Mausoleum of the First Qin Emperor", which is the most magnificent mausoleum in the world.

Fan Wen 2 "whizzed" the wind outside the window and slowly sent dark clouds from the horizon. ...

I looked up at the window. After a few minutes, the whole city turned gray and the sky was overcast. "Boom-boom-"There was continuous thunder in the distance. Suddenly, a flash of lightning lit up the sky, like a sword piercing the sky, and like a snake flashing. In an instant, raindrops as big as beans were cut by lightning and fell from the sky.

Rain is like a naughty child, wishing to fall from the sky to play and wash his hair for people without umbrellas; Make slides on their noses; Play roller coasters on their ears; They also play bungee jumping on some people's umbrellas ... they are scattered on the ground like a string of broken pearls.

The rain beat on the glass window with the wind. Make a "beep" sound; Falling on the air conditioning box, making a "Dangdang" sound; Sprinkle it on flowers and trees and make a sound of "salad, salad"; Like a beautiful symphony in the rain.

Just as I was enjoying myself, unconsciously, the wind stopped and the rain gradually subsided. The air has become exceptionally fresh, and the windows have been washed very clean by the rain; Flowers and plants are full of water and swaying in singing; Small flowers are blooming one after another, and the grass is beautifully decorated; These trees look green as if they had been washed. The water drops on the eaves are ticking, and "ding dong ding dong" gathers into a stream on the ground; The ant got out from under the hiding leaves and continued to be busy.

Summer rain comes and goes quickly. Unlike the continuous spring rain, rustling autumn rain, the ground keeps going. I like the rain in summer.

Model essay on excellent composition with three emotions in grade six

The greatest love in the world, however, is the affection passed from bit by bit, which warms our hearts.

At noon today, I came to school with Niu Mohan and Zhang Chuhan. When we entered the hall, we saw an old man looking around. He wears a gray hat on his head. This ordinary dress and a pair of cloth shoes look very old. Grandpa still has a water bottle in his hand. Obviously, he came to bring water to his grandson. We don't care. We climbed the stairs talking and laughing. Inadvertently looked back. The old man walked behind us. His rough hands grasped the handrail of the stairs. He landed step by step, and every step seemed so weak. It's ugly When grandpa was climbing to the second floor, a boy came up to him and grabbed the water bottle hard. I think, great, grandpa won't have to go upstairs so tired, and his grandson will appreciate him. The sight before us shocked us. The little boy didn't thank his grandfather, but shouted to him, "It's too slow to go up the stairs. I'm dying of thirst." Then I ran back to the classroom with my classmates. Grandpa looked helpless and went downstairs slowly. Seeing this, my heart seems to have swallowed lead, and it is extremely uncomfortable.

Now I think of the scene during the day, and my heart is very uncomfortable. My grandfather's love for his grandson touched me. But that boy's behavior made me feel a lot. Grandson thinks grandpa is right to be kind to him. He is like a "little emperor" at home, and the whole family revolves around him. And he was unmoved in the environment of affection and care. As the saying goes, "I don't know how grateful my parents are if they don't raise a child." I don't think he wants his grandson to treat him like this when he becomes a grandfather! In fact, in our time, there are countless such situations. We should learn to be a man and start from small things.

Grandpa's affection for his grandson is a deep feeling of flesh and blood and a selfless dedication of love. We should repay their love with gratitude.

Dear Mom and Dad:

How are you guys?

Is dad busy at work recently? Are you still healthy? Although I am by your side every day, my son doesn't know you very well in his heart. Dad laughs every day, and his grades in this monthly exam are very poor. I thought you would give me a "K" and then "review" to serve me, but you said a lot of encouraging words to me and gave me confidence. You expect me to make great changes this semester. Dad, don't worry, son, I will never live up to your high hopes for me.

Mom, you have always been a kind and serious mother. Every time, when I make some small mistakes, you never tell me clearly, but use "heuristic" to let me find and correct them from a kind conversation. When I showed you the "terrible" report card, your face turned "sunny to cloudy" and was about to explode, but you put up with it again. At that time, I understood that you, my dear mother, are the people who love me the most in the world!

Mom and Dad, I once talked to my "buddy" about my parents' love. In my mind, I seem to remember only that abstruse poem: "Father loves mountains, mother loves rivers." Just two sentences and eight words, but in my young mind at that time, I didn't know what fatherly love was and what maternal love was. I think: the most beautiful things in the world are these two things: the love of parents. This is the wealth that God has given me, and I will taste them all my life.

Mom and dad, when I entered adolescence, I had a long fight with you and always made you angry. But, mom and dad, you have to understand that I love you! If there is an afterlife, I will still be your child!

The child is unfilial, so let's call it a day. Mom and Dad, I love you forever!

I am here to convey

welcome

Your son: * * *

Dear Mom and Dad:

Hello!

Parents' love is a cool wind, an umbrella to shelter from the wind and rain, a delicious chicken soup, a meticulous sentence, a beacon to illuminate your way forward when you fail, and a word to comfort you when you are lost!

Dad, you are a kind and kind person, but sometimes you have a bad temper. Dad, do you remember? That year, I was sick. Because of the emergency, you and your mother hugged me and ran away. On the way, I groaned in pain. You and your mother keep asking, "How am I? Are you better?"

That day, the weather was not very good, and it was raining cats and dogs. I always felt that my home was close to the hospital, but the road that day seemed very long and endless. There is no one on the road. The rain wet your face and your mother's clothes. Finally, when I arrived at the hospital, you helped me pay the hospitalization fee and rushed out to buy me food. You didn't rest that night, and you kept stroking my head. Finally, under the careful care of you and your mother, I am well. There is a smile on your face again. My illness has been cured, but you are overworked and have lost more than half of your body.

Mom, you have worked hard for thirteen years! For me, you have given everything and a beautiful youth. Mom, from today on, I don't want to be a little princess at home. I also want to learn to help you do housework, mop the floor, clean the table, wash dishes and cut vegetables, so that you can worry less about me, work less, be bored to death and become happy. Let the old people of the years stop turning your hair white and wrinkles on your face. Mom, I love you!

Mom and Dad, I love you!

I wish you happiness every day and all the best!

Your daughter: Zhao Zhe.

20xx May 3 1

The new car in the dream can shuttle through the rocks like a cheetah without a trace; Can also soar in the sky like an eagle, forming a beautiful arc; Not only that, you can even swim freely in the boundless sea and explore the mysteries of the deep sea. .........................................................................................................................................................

The facilities and equipment in the car are fully functional, and under the command of satellite signals and electronics, it can reach scenic spots all over the world; And no matter where you go, you won't get lost. The brand-new navigation system will make you feel happy. There are also a new generation of supercomputers, DVDs, video games and exciting massage chairs in the car, which will make you feel a hundred times more comfortable. Of course, this car has more functions than that! There is also a voice function. Just say where you want to go, and it will do as you say. Let you have no worries and never have to worry about getting lost again. Seeing this, many people still have doubts: what should I do if there is no oil on the road? What if the autopilot hits someone? You don't have to worry about these problems. When there is no oil, it can collect sunlight as fuel. And it is impossible for this car to collide with other cars, because as long as there is a car nearby, it will automatically adjust its direction and keep you away from danger. Of course, you don't have to worry about hitting the wall because the wall is made of foam.

When the driver is tired, he can sleep because there is a warm and comfortable bed in the car. This bed is not an ordinary bed, it can be turned into an air cushion bed, a water bed, a straw bed and a swing bed. Cars can also be turned into ordinary houses where people can spend the night. There is also a kitchen in the house. Hungry can make smart kitchen utensils fry a lot of delicious food, and there are many more. ...

During the spring break at the end of April, under the organization of Niutong Society, more than 40 calves took part in this rooftop country tour.

At first, Niu Niu fell asleep in the car. However, when I arrived at my destination, I became energetic. Students I have never met seem to have become old friends for many years, which makes me relaxed without acquaintances.

The first stop is Tiantai village, and the surrounding environment is very different from Hangzhou. There is no smog in the air, and there is not so much discarded garbage on the ground of the city. On both sides of every road, there are lovely grasses listening to stories told by big trees. Look, they still nod from time to time! There are groups of koi fish in the nearby river, as if welcoming us.

After arranging the room, we began to visit and play together. Soon it was dark and the stars became bright, flashing, unlike in Hangzhou, where Sister Moon was always alone in the night sky.

In the moonlight, fish are more beautiful in the water, and red or golden figures swim in the silver waves. At this moment, even my heart seems to be rippling. The next day, my friends and I set out for Tiantai Mountain. As soon as we went up the mountain, we faced "the best in the world". While we were still thinking about what is the best in the world, we saw a suspension bridge and a magnificent waterfall spanning two mountains. Seeing the village at the top of the mountain and at the foot of the mountain is leisurely and natural reminds me of a poem: "The mountains are getting better every day, and the birds are getting closer every day."

After going down the mountain, we went to the graffiti village. Fortunately, we found a wall without works. Everyone smiled and picked up the brushes, leaving our colors. This is my first trip away from my parents. I'm not nervous or scared at all. I like this kind of activity. I hope I can often travel with calves in the future!

To make our campus more beautiful and comfortable, let's design our campus together.

Our campus is located at the foot of the beautiful Wenbi Tower, next to the beautiful Panlong Park, which is embraced by the winding Panlong River. The fence outside the campus is covered with lush wisteria. Before entering the school, physical education class students' reading, singing and whistling came from a distance.

As soon as we enter the school gate, we can see a row of green Ficus microcarpa and rubber trees planted on the right. They provide us with plenty of oxygen, and like loyal guards, they block the bright summer sunshine and bring us waves of coolness. Directly opposite is our majestic school spirit, which reads "Hold up the future" in powerful Chinese characters. Behind the school spirit is our spacious, bright, clean and tidy teaching building. There are small daisies, Chinese roses, roses, red lanterns, hollyhocks and chlorophytum in the flower beds around the teaching building. Colorful flowers decorated our beautiful campus. Orchids are placed on the walkways of each floor, and the students in the classroom are decorated with Tucki. We are tired of reading, and when we look up at these lovely little succulents, our mood instantly becomes comfortable and our eyes are not tired. On the left of the teaching building is the library, which is my favorite place. There are all kinds of books neatly placed inside, the tables and chairs are spotless, and there are some green plants in the library. Beautiful environment, very suitable for quiet reading and learning. On the left of the school gate is the playground, on which green grass is planted. It's comfortable to step on it. Whenever the bell rings, we will run to the playground to play, some skipping rope, some kicking shuttlecock, some playing basketball … to relax our nervous brains. There are table tennis tables, parallel bars, horizontal bars, ladders and other sports equipment next to the playground, where students can exercise.

The campus is immersed in the flowers and classmates' laughter every day. We study and grow happily on campus. This is our green and beautiful campus.

Many people see the word "survival", which is easy to do. There is nothing to worry about living a carefree life under the care of parents and relatives. But many people have never thought about how to survive without their parents. We must learn to survive.

I have read a story that there are many kinds of tigers. After the cubs are born, they are only fed for a few months, and then the cubs are driven out of the nest, and they are not allowed to continue living in the nest, so that they can hunt outside and survive on their own; Some cubs don't want to go out of the tiger's den, but the mother tiger will bite the cubs and force them out of the tiger's den. In the animal kingdom, it is not surprising that there are many such things. Mothers can do this for their children. What about us? Will our mother do this?

I don't think the sentence "home is our forever safe haven" is correct. When there is danger, we should not hide at home, but go out and overcome it. Performing and competing in Hong Kong taught me a painful lesson.

In the summer vacation of 20xx, our Children's Palace Wind Orchestra is going to perform in Hong Kong, and our parents can't accompany us. Before leaving, I felt that a person would not be in danger and it was no big deal. When I arrived in Hong Kong, I found that the reality was not as simple as I thought: because the weather was too hot, I had to change clothes every day. For me, washing clothes is a "very painful thing"; I'm always hungry because of the performance outside. I was afraid to cook when I got back to the hotel, so I had to go hungry. Every night. My roommate's teacher is away during the day and will come back at two or three in the evening. My roommate and I wait to doze off and chew an ice cube every day. When I was in Disneyland. The teacher told us to spread out and play. Walking, I got separated from my roommate. I'm anxious like an ant on hot bricks, and I'm more at a loss. I have to wait where I am. About ten minutes later, my roommate found me, and my hanging heart finally fell down.

It is not easy to live independently. Only when we learn to live independently now will we not experience more hardships on the road of life and be knocked down and crushed by the "storm" on the road of life.

Excellent composition model essay in grade six10 C.

On Friday, the school organized a spring outing, and we were all very happy. Early in the morning, we drove straight to our destination, Polar Ocean World.

When we arrived at Sea World, we got off the bus excitedly and saw a building like a whale. There are several penguin statues waving at the door, as if welcoming us. Entering the sea world, I first went to the small aquarium and saw all kinds of small fish, some with stripes, some with spots and some with golden body. It is really colorful and gorgeous.

There are beautiful jellyfish, lovely doctor shrimp, mysterious shark eggs and many other magical marine life here. Walking, we came to the polar zoo again. Looking to the right, you can see polar bears and arctic wolves. Polar bears are fat, but they can swim flexibly. The arctic wolf seems to want to jump out, because it is fierce and will attack humans. On the left is my favorite little penguin. They look like gentlemen in evening dresses. Walking around is fun!

Then, we came to the underwater world. Turtles, manta rays and small fish swam around our heads in pairs, as if we had really reached the bottom of the sea, talked to small fish and made friends with turtles. Playing and playing, I heard the teacher say: the animal show is coming, this is the most wonderful program in the sea world!

We can't wait to go to the animal theatre. Soon, the performance began. The clever sea lion appeared, played basketball and kissed the audience! Then the star dolphin appeared, only to see it fly from the water, jump out of the water, and suddenly it was full. The most amazing program is that dolphins do math problems. The addition and subtraction questions given by several students immediately gave me the correct answer, which surprised me and made me dumbfounded.

How time flies! Our trip is over. Sitting on the bus home, everyone's heart is still in the sea world. This is really an unforgettable spring outing!

Model essay 1 1 When my grandfather's dog was covered with grass clippings, I knew that spring was back. I took the dog out to play early in the morning.

As soon as I walked out of the yard, my eyes were green. Grandpa's little tree began to sprout branches. Three old trees on the right side of the yard take care of four young trees like kind old people. Old trees use green leaves to shelter young trees from the wind and snow, and then give young trees sunshine. The gaps between the leaves reflect patches of light, which accelerates the melting of snow blocks still stained with grass on the ground.

As soon as the dog was released, it ran away. Originally attracted by squirrels. The squirrel threw away a bunch of berries in his mouth and flew up the tree. The dog jumped down and its bark was scratched.

I ignored the dog. It knew to go home. I walked to the river, and the ice floes on the water surface were washed away by the river, which was very clear. At first glance, several slender fish swam in the water, and the fine sand and pebbles on the riverbed were clearly visible. Suddenly, my grandfather's white dog gave up the squirrel for some reason and plopped into the river. However, before the frozen river warmed up, the white dog whimpered and ran away, shaking off the water droplets and shivering with cold. Make me laugh.

White dog and I walked on, and soon we reached the flower field. This lawn is called a flower field because it is full of flowers every spring and is very beautiful. This year is no exception. Red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and other colors of flowers and plants compete for beauty.

I used to be a flower thief. I picked beautiful flowers and a bunch. After that, I lay in the flowers, listening to the flowing water, birds singing and spring breeze, and felt that I was also a member of nature and spring.

Suddenly, the dog barked. It turned out to be hitting a bee. I quickly pulled it away. If stung and swollen, the dog's face will be miserable. A butterfly landed on the dog's nose. He yawned and patted the dog on the nose. It made me laugh again and kept wagging my tail.

Spring, brilliant in my heart!

Everyone has his own dream to be a policeman, a doctor and a writer, and my dream is to be a painter.

Many people will find painting very tiring, but I think it is right to be tired. Because painting is an art, I hope my painting can make people intoxicated with different artistic charm. Even if I can't, I will try to make people's lives more entertaining and happier.

Being a painter is more than just talking. The first thing is to have a good thinking mind, be good at observing life and think more about problems. Not only that, but also good arm strength and wrist strength. When painting, it's all about the arms and wrists. If you don't have good arm strength and wrist strength, your hand will draw for a while and have a rest. So I exercise my arm and wrist strength at home every day. Wash dishes and mop the floor at home every day, and lift dumbbells 200 times a day. Although it is difficult, I will continue to train to realize my dream.

Secondly, painting is an art, which requires strong professional skills, such as positioning, theme, coloring and so on. () So from now on, I will study every art class more seriously and master painting skills. At the same time, I have to practice for an hour every day to improve my painting skills. In addition, I will consult professionals in fine arts, read more books on fine arts, enrich my knowledge in this field, and strive to realize my dream of becoming a painter in the future.

If I become a painter in the future, I won't be proud. I will continue to work hard to spread my artistic charm to the whole world, make the artistic atmosphere stronger, deeper and more unique, and let people feel my artistic creation. If I become a painter, I will create more works to share with others, so that people all over the world can feel the happiness brought by art. If I become a painter, I will create more artistic miracles and spread them all over the world, so that my artistic skills will be carried forward forever!

Two years ago, my aunt raised a fish pond and caught some small turtles. My aunt gave me one and I have a new "companion" since then.

The little turtle is very cute. There is a heavy and hard shell on his back, and there is a map on the top of the shell to help him not get lost. The shell is supported by four pillars, just like the real version of "Hal's moving castle"! There are sharp and long claws on four feet, as sharp as cat's claws, which are probably used to shred delicious meat; Its nose is particularly interesting, tilting forward like two fountain eyes; Its sense of smell is very sensitive and it can distinguish various smells. Once it finds the smell of people, it will immediately shrink back into the shell. If it smells food, it will immediately jump on it and bite.

The little turtle is very greedy. Once, I caught some tadpoles in the park and kept them with the little turtle, hoping to become good friends. The next morning, I got up to see the little turtle. Unexpectedly, there were only three or five groups of tadpoles yesterday, but today there are none. Oh, it turns out that the little turtle was hungry and ate up the tadpoles as delicious food. On another occasion, the little turtle may be very hungry and sent a special signal, knocking the fish tank properly with its sharp claws and making a straight sound. I couldn't figure out what it wanted, so I gave it a shrimp to eat. Yeah, right? I saw it pouncing on it like crazy, biting the shrimp with its big mouth open, tearing its two claws constantly, and soon it was "smashed to pieces" and eaten up.

Unfortunately, a few months ago, the little turtle left me secretly. Perhaps it is because it idles in the fish tank, perhaps it yearns for the vast nature, and it has made an escape plan. That afternoon, I don't know if it was because I just woke up and had strength, or because I ate a few shrimps, and I was refreshed. It stared at its feet continuously and forcefully and jumped out. I quickly held it down and sent it back to the "prison". But in the middle of the night, the little turtle "escaped" while I was asleep and hid in a hidden place. I have not seen it since that day.

Little turtle, come back quickly! How I hope you will come back safely and healthily and play with me again! !

My mother is an amiable person, a careful person, a person who always cares about me and takes care of me. In my deep memory, it has been shining, reminding me of my mother.

It was late autumn, and the golden maple leaves were falling one after another, accompanying me into the campus. As soon as I entered the classroom, I heard the math teacher shout loudly, "Stop homework, stop homework, and hand it in quickly!" " I opened my schoolbag and began to look for my exercise book. I searched everywhere, but there was no one there. Once again, I still can't find it. I began to worry, thinking: this is terrible, this is terrible! You would have been scolded for not bringing your homework! I went to the math teacher's office in fear and trembling. As soon as I opened the office door, I was stunned by what I saw.

It's mom! It's really mom! Her clothes are wet, and there are still a few drops of rain on her cuffs. Her hair was wet and stuck together, and she was holding a blue book in her arms-my math exercise book! I was very surprised and deeply moved. I deeply felt my mother's deep love for me for the first time. It warmed my heart like a warm current, sowed seeds full of hope for me, and caressed me as young as a sapling like a pair of invisible wings.

Mom, you know, in the hot summer, I would like to turn into a breeze to bring you coolness.

Mom, do you know that in the snowy winter, I would like to turn into a string of fire and send you bursts of warm current.

Mom, you know, in the colorful spring, I would like to turn into a flower and give you a little fragrance.

Excellent essay model essay in grade six 15. Looking around, there are green forests everywhere. In the blue sky, birds are flying freely; In the crystal clear stream, all kinds of fish are playing, how harmonious it is! How refreshing! But it didn't last long. On a cool morning, the gorgeous flower girls are still asleep, and the hardworking brother bee is coming to this "paradise". However, a group of aggressive people came here early, and the sound of "Sasha Vujacic" broke the peace of the past.

They used all kinds of quick tools to ruthlessly cut off our body that absorbed nutrients all the year round and thrived, and watched the grandfathers of the trees fall down one by one, but we could only stand by and cry away the grandfathers who loved us at ordinary times. I don't know how long it took to hear "sasha vujacic …" stop. They carried away a tree grandpa, and we saw the messy scene here, and our hearts were full of hatred.

After a while, Brother Bee came, saw the chaos and asked me what was going on. I told them the sad experience sadly. After listening to this, the brother bees all said angrily, "Those hateful human beings are really inhuman! Come on, let's fix them. " Say that finish, then hurriedly flew away. I suddenly felt a glimmer of hope rising from my heart. After a long time, several groups of seriously injured brother bees flew back.

The afternoon sun is particularly warm, but the little bee lying in the arms of the earth looks very tired. A little bee suddenly said, "Sister Tree, don't those damn humans know that Grandpa Tree is very useful to them?" Grandpa Tree can make oxygen for humans, so humans really don't know? "After listening, I was speechless and could only say with concern," Have a good rest! " "

Our heartfelt suggestion: let human beings protect the big forest! Never let the forest cry silently again. Let our home be more beautiful! Only a pair of powerful "wings" can "fly" freely in the air without falling. Let our home be beautiful, healthy and full of vitality forever!

Don't let the forest cry silently again!