Answers and appreciation of the ancient poem "Night at the Mountain Temple"

Jiang Teng

The moon rose to the top of the rock and a smoke shone below.

The smoke was as white as a cloud and flowed to the front of the wild temple.

Open the door and cherish the night view, and pay attention to it in frosty days.

Seeing homeless people, no one can sleep alone in the mountains.

What are the characteristics of "smoke" in 1, 3 and 4 sentences? How does the poet describe it? (5 points)

2. Analyze the reason of the poet's "sleepless" by combining the whole poem. (6 points)

Reference answer

The word "smoke" in 1, 3 and 4 sentences has two characteristics: one is white, and the other is dynamic. In the third sentence, the poet describes Shan Lan's obscurity in the moonlight with figurative rhetoric. The development described by the word "Liu" in the fourth sentence is vivid.

First, the problem-solving ideas:

1, when answering questions, you should first pay attention to the range of three or four sentences, and never go beyond this range. Secondly, we should pay attention to the words describing cigarettes. In the third sentence, "the color is as white as a cloud" and in the fourth sentence, "Liu" and "in front of the temple" all show the characteristics of smoke. Finally, answer the second question through the words "such as" and "flow". )

2. There are two reasons for the poet's sleeplessness: first, he loves the night scene in the mountains, the first four sentences describe the beauty of the moonlit night in the mountains, and the fifth sentence "open the door and cherish the night scene", and the word "cherish" expresses the poet's love for the night scene in the mountains; The second is homesickness. The last two sentences "homelessness" and "independence" show the poet's loneliness and homesickness.

3. To analyze the causes of the poet's insomnia, we should analyze it from two aspects: scenery and emotion. The first four sentences of the poem describe the beautiful night scene of the mountain temple, and the word "cherish" in the fifth sentence points out the first reason for not sleeping-cherish the scenery. The last two sentences of the poem are relatively straightforward. Homelessness tells the second reason for sleepless nights-homesickness.

Second, appreciation:

Jiang Kun (18 18 ~ 1866) was a poet in Qing dynasty. When Xianfeng was a county student, he tried every time. He used to be an assistant or a teacher to make a living. Jiang Teng was separated from the troubled times and spent half his life in Fujian, Zhejiang and Jiangsu. His life course is closely related to his travel, and he devoted his life to completing a collection of poems. Travel poems account for more than 40% in the collection of poems. These poems are described and heard, with wandering and returning home as the core, radiating four emotional main lines of loneliness, deep sorrow, homesickness and returning home, and expressing a sad soul in troubled times in mountains and rivers.

This is a poem describing travel troubles. At that time, the author escaped from chaos and wandered in a foreign land, feeling lonely and sad. The author lives in a wild temple in the deep mountains, alone, homesick for the bright moon and feeling the ups and downs of life.

The first couplet, "The moon rises from the top of the rock and a wisp of smoke shines down", describes that the moon rises from the top of the high rock and the moonlight shines on the earth, laying a homesick atmosphere and tone for the whole poem. Then, the poem turned to describe a stream of fog in the moonlight. Because the moonlight is as clear and bright as water, the white clouds are cleaner and ethereal. The description of the first couplet conforms to the characteristics of the late scenery in the mountains, and the moonlight makes the scenery more beautiful.

The couplet follows the first couplet closely, and it is written that the water vapor on the stream is as white as a cloud in the moonlight, fluttering in front of the temple. On the surface, this is just a natural phenomenon, and there is no aesthetic feeling at all. But compared with the first couplet, it describes the dynamic beauty of water vapor flowing naturally. Moreover, the white water vapor is ethereal and light, which reminds the author of his wandering life. The description of this couplet is not only a metaphor for the characteristics of the author's exile life, but also a wonderful sad pen in the music world.

I can't sleep. I opened the temple gate and stood outside the temple to see the beautiful scenery. The author was deeply moved by the beautiful scenery in front of him and couldn't help feeling pity. This pity implies a deep sense of drift. The poet looks up at the sky, but feels that the frost is heavy and cold, and his heart is inevitably desolate and lonely. The word "frosty day" closely follows the artistic conception and indirectly expresses the lonely and cold mood of wandering outside, which is a vivid stroke.

William spoke frankly and wrote in the form of a question: Who has ever seen a homeless man who is homesick under the moon, sighing in the mountains and staying up alone? Rhetorical questions strengthen the lyrical effect, set off the previous scenery description, and write a highly infectious self-injury situation.

The whole poem borrows scenery to express emotion, captures the characteristic scenery to describe the loneliness and desolation of life, and writes sadness with music scenes, seeing more sadness; Laying a scene in the moonlight, there is no place that is not lonely and sad. This poem has the feeling of gloom and desolation in Du Fu's poems, but it has an extra lightness and tranquility, which is a masterpiece.

Attached:

(1) The color angle is white, and the state angle flows.

The third sentence uses metaphor to write the white smoke as a cloud in the bright moonlight; The fourth sentence uses analogy to write the dynamics of smoke before it floats to the mountain temple like running water. Create a quiet and sad atmosphere.

(2) One is Cherish the Night Scene, which ostensibly describes the beautiful moonlight night scene of love;

The second is to lament the "homeless" and lament that they are homesick and homeless and can't sleep at night.

Third, the examination ideas:

1, pay attention to the stem tips to determine the answer direction: "three or four sentences" clearly define the answer interval, and seek answers within this range; "What are the characteristics of cigarettes" tells us how to answer questions.

2. "How to describe" refers to writing techniques and angles.

3. The reason why poets stay awake is to examine their understanding of the theme of poetry.

When you ask the reason, you usually look for keywords from the text itself. So find the words that reflect the emotional tone. The last two sentences of the poem.

Open the door and cherish the night view, and pay attention to it in frosty days.

Seeing homeless people, no one can sleep alone in the mountains.

Combining the whole poem, it tells us to grasp it as a whole.

Fourth, a little thinking.

The answer to the reason why I can't sleep gives two main points: cherishing the night scene and being homeless.

The reference answer needs further consideration.

First of all, from the perspective of thinking, it is difficult for poets to fall asleep → open the door and go out → look down at the frosty sky → look down at the stream smoke. Therefore, "cherishing the night scene" is not the reason for "sleepless", it is just what the poet saw and felt after leaving home without sleep.

Secondly, it is difficult to combine the love of the beautiful "moonlight night scene" with the lament of "homesickness" and occupy the poet's emotional world at the same time. In other words, if the poet laments that he is homesick and homeless, he will not love the beautiful scenery in front of him and linger; If the poet loves the beautiful scenery in front of him and lingers, he will not be homesick or homeless.

Third, the moonlight night scene in the poem is beautiful at first glance; It's not so beautiful if you taste it carefully. First, smoke is like white clouds, floating around, quite like a poet's wandering; Secondly, the bright moon on the top of the stone and the smoke under the bright moon are shrouded in inexplicable sadness in silence and obviously deserted in the empty space. Therefore, the word "pity" in Cherish the Night Scene may also mean "regret and sadness".