Primary school writing, dad writing reviews.

1. My father writes comments on the children's compositions. My father has a Chinese face. He is neither big nor fat. He is strict but he cares about me. My father writes 700 words. At first I thought my father didn't care about me, but later I realized.

It was very cold that day. I wait for my mother to pick me up at the school gate. It is getting dark, and fewer and fewer students are waiting for their parents at school. I sat on a cold glass bench and looked at the sky silently. Suddenly there was a flash of lightning on the horizon, followed by a continuous drizzle. No, the idea of rain flashed through my mind, and I immediately ran to the canopy next to the security room. It's raining harder and harder. I don't know how long it has been raining. I stood and almost fell asleep. In a daze, I seemed to hear my father's cry, XX, XX. As the sound approached, I listened carefully again. Outside the school gate, my father's cry came again. Yes, it is my father. I saw dad. Dad is facing the classroom with his back to me. What a big figure this is. But ... isn't dad sick? Why did you pick me up? With this question, I couldn't help sticking my head in front of the school and taking a closer look. It's really my dad. XX, XX's father seems to have seen me, too. I went back to get my schoolbag and walked out of the school gate. When my dad saw it, he gave me an open umbrella and turned and left. I followed my father and listened to a few coughs coming from the front. In order not to let me wait too long, my father came to pick me up despite my illness. I can't help crying when I think about it.

Unconsciously, we returned home. My father asked me to do my homework as soon as we got home. I said to my father, Dad, you are ill. Do you want me to buy some medicine? Dad waved impatiently and said, never mind, this is dad's business. Go and do your homework. I had to do my homework under my father's harsh language. After a while, I suddenly felt something covered me. When I looked back, it turned out that my father had put on my cotton-padded jacket. Dad said softly, be careful of catching cold. Say that finish and went out. Suddenly, I felt a gushing emotion, and I couldn't help crying. Dad doesn't care about his health, but he cares about me. At this time, I suddenly found that my father's back is so great.

Although it has been a long time, I still remember, especially the back of my father.

2. Write a father+comment to light the fire of fatherly love. Childhood is not eternal for everyone, because death is with you as soon as you are born, and every moment of life is dying, so we can only seize every moment of life.

Horace told us: "imagine every day that this is your last day, and tomorrow you don't expect will be more pleasant." This sentence is to let us cherish life and appreciate every day in life.

As everyone knows, life is disabled. Microscopically, life is short, only sixty or seventy years old, at most one hundred years old. If anything happens in the middle, I'm afraid I won't live that long. However, how many people really live for themselves? How many people have really found themselves? How many brains have you racked to climb up? How hard does it take to make big money? In fact, it is not so much that you earn a lot of money as that you are earned by money, because money takes away your youth, time, physical strength and life.

Only one life is the most precious wealth in life. Life is the most precious wealth in the world, because all wealth can be recovered, only life is only once; But many people would rather exchange it for those so-called wealth, but spend their whole lives on fame, power or money savings.

When they died, they were so regretful: "I just used my life, but I never cherished my life and enjoyed it." It's good to be alive! However, people cannot live forever. From the day of birth, life begins to die, and it begins to struggle with death.

So it's really not easy to live. In fact, we often don't know how much weight life can bear and how hard life is.

We are more aware of the fragility of life. Failure in exams, frustration in promotion, discord in neighborhoods, family conflicts, empathy of lovers, quarrels between children and brothers, etc. Even a lot of trivial things that can't lift chopsticks make people lose their rationality and lead to life crisis: suicide or murder.

Therefore, after summing up life in various forms, many profound philosophers lamented how fragile life is. There is a proverb in ancient boatmen, "Hell is under the planking."

Just separated by a board, life and death, we can know that the fragility of life will suffer disasters anytime and anywhere. With this awareness, we will have "now is the last moment of life" in our hearts, and we will not panic no matter what happens.

I always feel that childhood is a beautiful and unforgettable dream. Childhood is an important stage of life, leaving many people with good memories.

Childhood is a doomed stage in a person's life, so it is very important. I think childhood is like a blank sheet of paper. You should draw beautiful pictures yourself and create a bright future! Childhood is the best day in everyone's life, and it is also a day destined for this person's life, just like three years old is eighty years old.

My childhood dreams often haunt me. On the drawing paper when I was a child, I often recorded one thing after another. Let's talk about an interesting story when I was a child! Once my cousin and I went to the mall. After going to the toilet in the mall, I accidentally looked at the house number. Who knows that my cousin and I both went to the men's room. From this mistake, we can already see that there are many interesting things in childhood.

3. How to write a composition collection of composition evaluation for primary school students?

1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.

2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.

Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.

Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?

5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!

4. Primary school composition evaluation Daquan composition evaluation has both evaluation and guidance functions.

Exquisite comments can often arouse students' interest in writing, ignite their enthusiasm for writing and activate their creative thinking. Therefore, when evaluating students' compositions, teachers must carefully write composition evaluation, so that composition evaluation has six "natures".

I. Accuracy When evaluating students' compositions, teachers should follow the age characteristics of primary school students in different periods and their understanding of the laws of things, be correct and objective, and don't belittle themselves at will, let alone seek perfection and blame. Comments should be specific and clear, grasp the main problems in students' exercises and comment, point out the direction for students, alert them and gain something.

For example, teachers find that students' writing style is unreasonable, so they can't write an unreasonable sentence casually. Instead, it is necessary to specifically point out the root of language barriers, what kind of mistakes they belong to, how to avoid them, and so on, and prescribe the "correct prescription" like Hua Tuo. Second, the emotional teacher should use emotions to infect people and discover his heart with his own heart.

You can call them by their first names, or you can kindly add a word "Xiao" to open your heart, like chatting at home, like catching up with relatives and friends, and gently touch the students' heartstrings. In this way, after reading the teacher's affectionate comments, students feel that the teacher is paying close attention to him, appreciating him with affection and discovering him with love, which can not only shorten the psychological distance between teachers and students, but also make the relationship between teachers and students harmonious and harmonious, greatly improving students' interest in reading comments.

I once taught a girl named Feng. This girl is all right, but she is always unhappy, as if she was born laughing. Is it really natural, or is there something else? Several tentative conversations were fruitless.

Later, in the article "My * *", she confided her regret. Because of her negligence, her brother unfortunately fell into the water and died, which was simple and touching. After reading it, I wrote this comment: "Between the lines, I miss my brother. Simple language and simple feelings make people cry.

"There are unexpected events in the sky, and people are doomed." What's more, you were only a five-year-old doll at that time. How can you predict good or bad? The teacher thinks it's not your fault. You can't always live in the shadows.

Although parents lost their children, having a sensible daughter like you is also the best compensation and will feel happy! Teachers, classmates and your parents are really looking forward to seeing your bright smiling face! "After reading this comment, the girl was very moved. From then on, a smile gradually appeared on her face. Third, the number of children over the age of ten is not as long as the prize. "

Composition is the result of students' labor. Teachers should be good at discovering the bright spots in students' compositions with a pair of discerning eyes. Even a vivid sentence, a vivid word, and even an accurate punctuation mark should be used to affirm their achievements with hopeful comments and enhance their confidence in unremitting efforts. For example, some students have a wide reading range, so they can make proper use of ancient poems and legends in their writing. Teachers might as well send a sentence in the comments: "You are really a master of writing! Apply folk stories skillfully to the description of scenery. "

There are also students whose compositions are full of literary talent, which are obviously better than those in the class. The teacher can annotate it like this: "It's my pleasure to read your article. Maybe your name will be a household name in a few years. " I think every child will be elated when he sees such a comment.

Another example is, "Congratulations, another excellent work has come out! Careful description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your composition, I seem to see the ice heart of 2 1 century! " Such comments not only affirmed the students' flexible use of composition skills, but also made them experience the pleasure and satisfaction of successful composition, making them feel that they are the masters of composition, thus stimulating the enthusiasm and initiative of writing and establishing the belief of writing for being a man in their hearts.

Fourth, enlightening. Teachers should give guidance to students' exercises that do not meet the writing requirements, or the phenomenon that the language in the text is not standardized-guide students to think independently and explore actively with enlightening comments, so as to find problems in their own compositions and improve their ability to analyze and solve problems. For example, a student in the article "I learned to swim" did not write down the process of learning to swim, but only wrote: "I couldn't swim at first."

My father patiently taught me a method, so I swam according to the method taught by my father, finally learned to swim, and I went home happily. "I wrote a comment next to this passage:" I am really happy for you. Your swimming skills have made great progress. Your father is so kind! I also hope to study, but after reading your article carefully, the teacher didn't find your father's tricks, which makes people feel sorry. "

Instead of directly pointing out the shortcomings of students' composition with "the content is not specific" and "the key points are not prominent", we can arouse students' thinking and realize the shortcomings in the article through inspiring language. After reading the comment on writing, the students immediately revise their compositions and write down their father's methods of teaching swimming.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is interesting. The famous Soviet educator Svetlov said: "The most important and first assistant of a teacher is humor." Lively pupils like to learn from lively and interesting language and understand the truth through laughter.

A profound and humorous comment can not only create a pleasant learning situation, but also achieve the effect of "laughing before thinking". For example, "full stop glared at round eyes, raised eyebrows with quotation marks, and burst into tears:' My master, how can you ignore my proper position in the text?" "This kind of comment is for students who use punctuation incorrectly, and teasing the composition to the end can prompt them to' set things right' immediately after laughing.

For another example, a student wrote such a detail in his composition: "I saw an old man coming from a distance with gray hair and wrinkles all over his face ..." I wrote him such an eyebrow criticism: "Are you clairvoyant or wearing binoculars?" As a result, the whole class circulated it, and such mistakes rarely appeared in students' exercises in the future. Sixth, discussing students' writing is to look at this colorful world with their own eyes and often express their unique understanding. Teachers can't modify it at will according to their own subjective ideas, so that the beautiful innocence and childlike interest in the article disappear in the modification.

Yes, in the students' homework.

5. How to write parents' comments on primary school students' compositions? Write like this: I am glad to see that you have been studying hard.

I hope to make persistent efforts and make further progress. You have great potential. Give full play to it.

You're great. We are proud to be your parents. You will definitely exceed our expectations.

Keep trying! Not ideal. Write like this: don't criticize. Say to the child: this must be accidental.

Probably caused by carelessness. You will do well.

Don't rush. Encourage and trust children to do well, and children themselves will do well.

Let children know that it is his responsibility to read good books, not the responsibility of parents. The future and life belong to the children themselves.

No matter how much parents love their children, they can't take the place of their children in their lives. Tell him that those who study well and those who don't study well will come to the social hierarchy.

Tell him you have 100% confidence in him. If he studies hard, he will get excellent grades. Don't rush him to make his own arrangements. If you rush him specifically, you are overreaching yourself.

Children will think zhidao is something you study. Even if he did it under your supervision, he thought he was studying for you, not for himself. Then once he loses your supervision, he won't study. Can you supervise him for life? Children must be encouraged to make progress and do better.

Children who grow up with encouragement are full of confidence and keep moving forward. We should learn to be parents who applaud our children.

6. Tell me about my dad's composition and complete his comments. If the world is a blue sky, everyone is a cloud in the sky. If the world is a trickle, then everyone

It is a clear spring in the stream; If the world is a crystal clear pond, then everyone is a free fish in the pond; If the world is a colorful flower, then everyone is a little pollen in the flower;

If the world is a clear water drop, then everyone is a never-ending water molecule in the water drop; If the world is a harmonious and beautiful home, then everyone is a close relative at home.

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Good morning, go to school! ""Oh, let's go. "I ran out with my schoolbag on my back before I came for breakfast." Here you are. "Xiao Lan, pass me a piece of candy." Thank you. "Even if I'm going to be late, I don't forget to worry and enjoy.

The bright sunshine in the morning makes me feel very comfortable. Just as I was enjoying the sunshine with relish, Xiaolan stopped. "What's the matter?" I turned my head and asked. "It's okay, I want to do one thing, you go first.

All right. ""but I'm going to be late soon. Is this really that important? " She didn't answer me and walked in the opposite direction without hesitation. I didn't leave, just stood quietly waiting. At the moment, I'm surprised.

Then she walked up to an old man. Driven by curiosity, I moved my steps slowly. She just stared at something silently, and I followed her eyes. I can't believe my eyes. He is an old man with yellow skin.

The skin and eyes are sunken in the face of the old man, which is covered with wrinkles like walnut shells. Cang Sang, who writes all the year round, has a little silver on his head, but he has no shelter. He only prayed for three meals a day, and his rough fingers kept busy.

Looking for "good" things that others have discarded. I can't help feeling bitter. I saw Xiao Lan put his hand into his pocket, groped slowly, took out what little breakfast money was left, and went straight to the vicissitudes of the old man. Pick up the old ones

The tired man gave the money to the old man. I didn't say anything, because I knew why she did it, and I didn't complain that she delayed school time. He walked up to the old man with the sugar with body temperature in his hand:

"Grandma, I have some money here. If you don't mind, this candy is also for you. " This money is my pocket money for one month. The old man held my hand tightly and said, "thank you, children." You are all good children. " "milk

Milk, we have to go now, and we'll see you later. "Xiao Lan looked at me and turned around with a smile." I saw the old man's hand tightly holding the melting sugar, slowly peeling off the candy paper and putting it in his mouth. I saw the old man's eyes clearly.

The warmth on the track ...

I know that money is not everything, and caring needs social attention. So I have no regrets.

It is a kind of happiness to be concerned by others, and it is also a kind of happiness to care about others. Caring for each other fills the gaps in the soul and makes up for the regrets in life. Caring makes us feel the warmth of the world. Life is beautiful because of love, and the world is beautiful because of love. Let's hold up tomorrow's sun with love and welcome the arrival of the new century.

7. Pupils' comments on the composition of father worship "Father worship"

My father has a name that is easy to remember. His name is Wu Jiabao, and his colleagues often jokingly call him "priceless". My father is thirty-nine, of medium build, with a slightly chubby figure, a kind face and bright and intelligent eyes under heavy eyebrows.

I worship my father. Not because he is a young university professor, but because of his enthusiasm for life and a high sense of responsibility for his work. In my impression, my father has a vigorous energy every day. He is full of enthusiasm and warmth, and my mother and I are strongly infected.

Dad is very devoted to his work. One night last winter, my mother and I couldn't stand the cold "torture" and went to bed early. Dad said that he hasn't finished his work yet and will go to bed soon. At 1 o'clock in the morning, I suddenly had a stomachache and ran out to go to the toilet. I was surprised to find that the light in the study was still on. I took a closer look and found that my father was still working. Looking at my father's hands red with cold, I quickly poured a cup of boiling water and handed it to my father. When my father saw me coming, he touched my head and said softly, "I haven't finished my work yet. Go to sleep quickly." Don't catch cold. " Hearing this, I said sadly to my father, "Dad, it's morning 1. If you don't sleep, I won't sleep. At my request, my father finally ended. Dad often stays up late for work, even all night.

Dad, you are full of feelings about life and are so highly responsible for your work. When I grow up, I must be a person with high enthusiasm and high sense of responsibility like you.

Dad, you are the person I admire most and the priceless treasure in my heart.

8. Father's Love Writing Comments There is a lot of love in this world, including the love of relatives, the love of teachers and the love of classmates ... The most unforgettable thing for me is my father's love.

Father's love is the whistling wind that blows away all your troubles; Fatherly love is a soft quilt that makes you feel warm in loneliness; Father's love is still a pepper, which is extremely hot to criticize, but his love remains in your heart.

I remember last semester, the teacher asked us to hand in a composition. But I racked my brains and couldn't write it again and again. Suddenly I had an idea and copied an article from the Internet. So, I found an excellent model essay of grade four on the Internet, posted it on the document word by word, arranged and typeset it, and then printed it out as my homework.

In the evening, my father went home to check my homework. I am afraid that my father will see that this is not my composition. Just when I was nervous, I didn't expect my father to say kindly, "Yang Yang, your composition is really good!" ! However, this is printed by computer. I hope you can write it again accurately with a pen. So I can stick it in the office and enjoy it every day! "

In a flash, I knew that my father had caught my trick. Suddenly, my tears came out.

However, my father didn't leave me alone because I cried. He severely criticized me and made me stand in the corner to reflect. Twenty minutes later, I said to my father, "I shouldn't copy my composition." It is wrong. " Dad said to me seriously, "Yang Yang, if there is a pile of money on the ground, can you pick it up and keep it for yourself?" I shook my head hard. "Similarly, online articles are others'. What's the difference between your plagiarism and stealing? "