Three Gorges commentary text

I believe that you will always come into contact with writing in your study and work, especially the widely used expository writing, which is a style of objectively explaining or clarifying things. Then the question is coming. How should the explanatory text be written? The following is my collection of three Gorges discourses. Welcome to read the collection.

Yichang is a beautiful city with pleasant scenery and numerous scenic spots. What I remember most is the Three Gorges family in 4A scenic spot!

As soon as I entered the scenic spot, I was attracted by the beautiful scenery in front of me: a tall and majestic green hill stood in front of me, and a clear and bright stream slowly flowed through the mountain stream. Green and clear jade bring out the best in each other, and there is an indescribable harmonious beauty. We sailed on the water, and the place we passed immediately rippled, slowly rippled away, and finally disappeared at the junction with the foot of the mountain.

About fifteen minutes later, we got off the boat, and I was shocked by what I saw: several boats were moored on the shore, and several retro buildings were sparsely arranged, while the mountains were still on the right-handsome green hills with water in the middle-gentle and elegant, crystal clear streams. Do we really come from there? !

After landing, we came to a small market without any noise and anxiety. The air is full of elegant hospitality, which makes people feel comfortable. Most of the products sold here are handmade, such as a bamboo basket, a pair of straw sandals and a straw hat ... the significance and value of nature suddenly become extremely great. Although it is just an ordinary thing, it reveals the wisdom of ethnic minorities and the wonders of nature.

After the market, there is another mountain in front, but there is a cable car in front. I was very excited after getting on the cable car and looked around the scenery. A tree is like being stepped on, as if people have grown a lot at once, and their hearts are suddenly enlightened. When I reached the highest point, I looked down at the green mountains and green waters, and I was very excited. "Ah-"I let out my feelings with a loud cry. "Ah-ah-"The echo came to my ears, flying and hovering in this faint valley, elegant and tactfully, and finally penetrating everything, diving and colliding in the bushes at will, making such a clear sound. Pieces of white clouds float by me, making people feel at your fingertips. Looking at the beautiful scenery of this paradise, I was intoxicated and relieved. All my troubles were dispersed with the wind, and I really felt the joy and freedom of embracing nature. ...

I marvel at the ingenuity of nature, I marvel at the beauty of the world, I marvel at the ingenious integration of man and nature in the Three Gorges family ... This is simply a paradise, where you can let go of your hands and feet and cheer and shout at will. This is the beautiful Three Gorges family!

From Chongqing to Wuhan by boat, I visited the world-famous Three Gorges of the Yangtze River.

The mountains of the Three Gorges are very strange. Kuimen is like a sword, straight and steep. The mountains are undulating and towering, and the clouds are lingering. Some are like mushrooms, some are like camels and some are like fairies. It is really a mountain peak!

The water in the Three Gorges is so urgent. The Yangtze River rushes like a wild horse, roaring and roaring. The river twists and turns in the mountains. It bit the cliff crack and beat the rock, and the sound of the waves was very loud.

The ships of the Three Gorges are so close. The river rolls, the vortex is connected with the vortex, and the waves push the waves. The ship is like a cradle and a bamboo leaf, drifting with the tide. Sometimes it seems to touch the mountain wall; Sometimes stones seem to fall. ...

Ah, the Three Gorges of Baili, the landscape painting of Baili!

I prefer goddess peak in the Three Gorges.

This is a slender rock standing upright at the top of the mountain. It looks like a fairy with a hair clasp on her head and a long green dress. Very beautiful! There is such a magical story circulating here:

Once upon a time, there was a fisherman fishing in the river. One day, it was dark and stormy, and the fisherman lost his way. Unfortunately, he was swept into the river by the waves. A kind girl stood at the top of the mountain, waiting for him to come home day and night. As the days passed, the fisherman didn't come back, but the girl turned into a stone. Since then, she has been a lighthouse for passing ships from morning till night, not afraid of rain or sun.

What a beautiful goddess peak! What a kind girl! Our big ship sailed safely down the river. It turned out that she was guiding our course!

Three Gorges Explanatory Note 3 (1): "The Wuxia Gorge in the Three Gorges of Badong is long, and the apes crow three times, with tears in their skirts." Although the monkey is gone now, I think the mountains and rivers in the Three Gorges are no different from those in the past. People who are used to life in the south of the Yangtze River don't know what amazing feelings they will have once they come to this place. Like myself, staring at the cliffs and roaring rivers cut by the sword, there is only admiration and terror. If a stone falls from the top of that mountain, or the boat hits the beach, won't it be over? In this place, no matter who you are, you can't help but feel that you are too small and nature is too magical.

(2) The ship set sail from Yichang, and in less than a quarter of an hour, the mountain rose and continued until Chongqing. In this long journey of more than 1000 miles, the situation of the Three Gorges is the most sinister. Among the Three Gorges, Wuxia Mountain is the highest, the river course is the most tortuous, the beach flow is the most urgent and the situation changes the most.

(3) Xiling Gorge, about 200 miles long, is divided into four sections. The first section is Huang Mao Gorge, which is high but not very dangerous. Although the river is swift, it is not very narrow.

④ The second section is Deng Yingxia. Although the mountains in Jiangbei are steep, they are all dry and tasteless. The mountains in the south of the Yangtze River are exquisite and beautiful, and the trees are lush and lovely. In this passage, I like Huangling Temple best. On a low hill on the south bank, there is a small ancient temple with a pillow river in front and hundreds of dense green trees on three sides. The most rare thing is that dozens of chic bamboos in the Three Gorges are never easy to see, and there are many purple flowers hanging upside down on the cliff. The color and style of the temple are in harmony with the landscape there, with a strong Jiangnan flavor. The lingering smoke and long bells seem to be in the West Lake or Yangzhou, and the previous nervous mood suddenly becomes very relaxed and leisurely. When the boat passed Huangling Temple, I had two poems on the spot: "Huangling Temple has the flavor of Jiangnan and weeping willows." However, this scene is very short. In less than two or three minutes, the ship sailed into the third section of Xiling Gorge.

⑤ The third section is Kongling Gorge. The mountain water suddenly becomes steep, especially the dried cow and the flying horse. The mountains on both sides, like swords, cross the river and enter a very tortuous and narrow door, from which the hull will turn slowly. On the cliff near the Hebei River as a gate, there are two stones hanging, one like a cow liver and the other like a horse lung. The beef liver is particularly rich today, and the horse lungs have been photographed by foreigners. Not far from cow liver and horse lung, there is a very dangerous Kong Ling beach. The water poured down from the high stone beach, and the situation was terrible. Water boats must be very careful here. Their boatmen have a proverb, "Green beach is not a beach, reclamation is a gate of hell", and the situation can be imagined. I really don't know how to cross that old wooden boat.

(6) The fourth section is Micang Gorge, also known as Baojian Gorge. Although the distance is not long and the water is not as steep as before, the cliff is higher. Out of the gorge, the mountain is flat and there is a small mouth, which is the famous place where Wang Zhaojun wears makeup, called Xiangxi. Zhaojun Village is more than forty miles away, in the northeast of Zigui County. Du Gongbu's poem "Wanzhongling Valley is near Jingmen, and Mrs. Guang was born in a village where she grew up" requires you to come here in person and appreciate the wonderful words used by predecessors. A word "walk" really makes the mountains there come alive. The peaks there are high and low, layered like countless horses running. The so-called "going to Jingmen" is not false at all.

(7) After passing Zigui and Badong, the boat enters the most famous Wuxia Gorge, which is the most dangerous and beautiful landscape. The risk of river water is narrow, acute, tortuous and multi-beach. The beauty of mountains is not monotonous. This peak is very high, and that peak is higher. A row in front, a row in the back, and countless rows in the back, layer by layer. You surround me, I surround you, you bite me, I bite you. There is no road ahead, and there is no road behind. All directions were blocked by cliffs. The hull had to detour through a crack in the mountain. The mountains on both sides stand upright, as if cut by a sharp knife, so neat and steep. Looking up, you can see the peak with a blue sky in the middle. Occasionally I see a blackbird, flying desperately, flying desperately, and always feel that it is not easy to fly over the peak. The river surges on cliffs and stone beaches, making a fierce roar, sometimes rolling up waves a foot or two high.

Question 1: What are the landscape features of the Three Gorges? In paragraph (2), why only write about the martial arts of the Three Gorges? 2 points

Question 2: How does the author feel after seeing the landscape of the Three Gorges? In paragraph (4), the author wrote about his emotional changes after he entered Deng Ying Canyon. Excuse me, why is there such an emotional change? 3 points

Question 3: Taste the following sentences and talk about what rhetorical devices they use and what features the scenery captures. 2 points

(1) The mountains on both sides cross the river like swords, forming an extremely tortuous and narrow door, through which the hull can turn slowly.

(2) Their boatmen have a proverb, "Green Beach and Yetan are not beaches, but Kenling is the gate of hell", and the situation can be imagined.

Question 4: Paragraph (7) of the selected text mainly writes _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ in various situations.

Question 5: In paragraph (7), when writing about the steep mountain peak, I wrote, "I occasionally see a black bird flying desperately, and I always feel that it is not easy to fly over the peak." What is the function of this sentence? Please analyze it briefly.

Question 6: The word "go" in the poem "Wanzhongling Valley near Jingmen" quoted in the article is skillfully used, "The mountains there are really vivid". Please choose one of the following sentences, find out the vivid and clever words and tell us what is wonderful. 2 points

(1) The branches of red apricots are full of spring. (2) Moonlight, like running water, pours quietly on this leaf and flower.

Reference answer:

Question 1: sinister. Paragraph (2) only mentions Wuxia Gorge, because it is the most representative and prestigious in the Three Gorges. Therefore, when writing about the topography from Yichang to Chongqing, I specifically mentioned Wuxia, with the purpose of leaving readers with the sinister face of the Three Gorges landscape.

Question 2: When the author saw the Three Gorges landscape, his emotions were "admiration and horror" and he lamented that "he is too small and nature is too magical". The author was shocked by the grandeur of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, so he felt nervous. After seeing such beautiful scenery in Jiangnan, his mood became relaxed and carefree.

Question 3:( 1) Metaphor captures the characteristics of steep scenery. (2) Quote proverbs to emphasize the sinister water potential in Kong Ling Gorge.

Question 4: The sinister landscape of Wuxia Gorge highlights the preciseness of the mountain. The function is to lead the whole festival and summarize the characteristics of martial arts landscape.

Question 5: Set off the preciseness of Wuxia Mountain.

Question 6: Example (1) is "noisy", indicating that apricot flowers are in full bloom and spring is full. (2) "Xie", write the moonlight alive.

During the 11th holiday, my mother took me to visit the Three Gorges Dam, the largest water conservancy hub in the world.

We first came to Tanziling, the highest point to watch the Three Gorges Dam. I saw the Yangtze River in the mist like a long ribbon, and the Three Gorges Dam like a long sword, which split the Yangtze River in two. Although the Three Gorges Dam stands in the Yangtze River, it has not yet been completed. Look! At the top of the dam, there is a huge and burning crane moving slowly. They are building a ship lift. It allows ships under 3,000 tons to cross the Three Gorges Dam faster in half an hour. Ships of more than 3,000 tons climb slowly from the double-track five-level lock, and the first-level lock passes through the lock five times before crossing the dam. The tour guide said it was called "the big boat climbs the stairs and the small boat takes the elevator". The ship lift will not be put into use until 20xx.

Then, we came to the platform 185, overlooking the Three Gorges Dam. Why is it called 185 here? It turns out that185m is the elevation of the Three Gorges Dam. I couldn't hide my excitement and rushed to the platform.

"How big!" I can't help exclaiming. The total length of the Three Gorges Dam is 2309. 47 meters, I look around, no matter how I stretch my neck and stand on tiptoe, I can't see the end. The nearest thing to me is the ship lift still under construction; Further on, it is the hydroelectric generator room. The Three Gorges Dam has 26 generators! Their average annual power generation is as high as 84.7 billion kWh. It continuously sends electricity to all parts of the country, and even we in Shanghai use the electricity from the Three Gorges Dam! Hydropower uses green energy to generate electricity, which can reduce carbon dioxide emissions 1 a year. 654.38 billion tons, saving 57 million tons of coal.

Looking ahead, it is the middle of the dam-the flood discharge area. It always has 22 spillway outlets. If it is fully opened, it can discharge 1 10000 cubic meters of water per second. During flood control, it first puts the flood into its belly, and then releases it bit by bit until it returns to the normal water level 175 meters.

Looking ahead, the slender figure of the dam has been shrouded in mist and can't be seen.

This spectacular Three Gorges Dam is the main power source of China, the largest water conservancy project in the world and the pride of our Chinese nation!

Description of Three Gorges 5 ① The Three Gorges Project is a mega-project with "four beauties". ② Four beauties: flood control, power generation, shipping and South-to-North Water Transfer Project. ③ The biggest purpose of building the Three Gorges Project is flood control. (4) The weather is unpredictable. If 1860 and 1870 flood again, the industrial and agricultural production bases in Jianghan Plain will suffer huge losses, which may far exceed the cost of building the Three Gorges Project. ⑤ The flood control function of the Three Gorges Project is irreplaceable. ⑥ The second is power generation: the installed capacity of the Three Gorges Power Station is 17680 MW, and the annual power generation is 84 billion kWh (equivalent to 40 million tons of coal for thermal power). ⑦ According to the forecast, the construction cost per kilowatt of the Three Gorges Project is 1 1. Compared with the national 16 large hydropower stations, the flooded land is the ninth and the number of immigrants is the fifth, which should be said to be economical and reasonable. (8) Third, with the completion of the Three Gorges Project, the water level of the Yangtze River has risen by 600 kilometers, and most of the rapids in the river are submerged, and the rapids have become Pinghu, which is conducive to navigation; Due to the downstream reservoir regulation, the flow in dry season increases, which is also beneficial to shipping. Pet-name ruby so upstream shipping and downstream shipping are in their proper places. Attending according to the calculation of relevant departments, the freight can be reduced by about 30%. ⑾ Finally, the South-to-North Water Transfer Project. It is the wish of the people in this area to transfer the Yangtze River water to the arid North China Plain. (13) At present, there is drought all over the northwest, and water is being diverted from the Yellow River for irrigation, so the water flowing eastward from the Yellow River may gradually decrease. 3. The South-to-North Water Diversion Project of Three Gorges Project will bring immeasurable benefits.

1, the central sentence of this article is.

This paper is well organized, mainly due to the use of, for example,. The most suitable hierarchical division in this paper is.

a、①B、①C、①D、①②

②-⑤②②③-⑤③-⑤

⑥-⑦③-⑤⑥-⑦⑥-⑦

⑧-⑩⑥-⑦⑧-⑩

⑾-⒁⑧-⑩⑾-⒁

3. This paper specifically shows that the characteristics of "four beauties" are organized in the order of "four beauties", and this recognition is based on the word "equality".

4. Analyze underlined sentences and added words as needed:

① underlined sentences not only use the explanation method of examples, but also use. The function of using this interpretation method is.

(2) add the word "may" can't be deleted, because.

(3) adding the word "most" cannot be deleted because.

Key tips

The focus of the above training and examination is to analyze the explanatory ability of writing level. To analyze the level of explanatory writing, we must first understand the order of explanation and grasp the thinking of the article. If explained in chronological order, it can generally be hierarchical according to time period; If spatial order is used to explain it, it can generally be divided into levels according to the change of orientation; If interpreted in a logical order, it can generally be divided into a total (or: total-minute; Subtotal), principal-sub formula (or secondary principal), result-factor, representation-essence and other levels. In addition, words such as "first", "second", "first" and "second" are also good helpers for us to classify grades accurately and quickly. The need to cultivate and improve reading ability is also the need to try quality education.

Solution thinking

To solve the problem of 1, we need to understand the relationship between sentence ① and sentence ②, which is a concrete explanation of sentence ① and a supporting sentence.

To solve the second problem, we should pay attention to the functions of the words "second", "third" and "last" used to arrange the order. To solve the hierarchical division, we can consider the explanation of "organization" in this question in combination with the explanation of 1, and the answer is clear.

To answer the third question, we should pay attention to the meaning of "maximum", which means that the arrangement order is from primary to secondary.

As long as we pay attention to "much greater than", we will know that this is the result of comparing the economic loss of a flood with the construction cost of the Three Gorges Project. The explanation method of "comparison" can clearly and prominently explain the necessity of building the Three Gorges Project. Answer (2), it is necessary to understand that "possible" means speculation, which limits the result of this comparison to be inferred and cannot be completely determined, because it is impossible to determine what will happen if the hypothetical situation is evaluated. If you delete "may", it will become completely certain and inaccurate. Answer (3), it needs to be clear that it limits the number of submerged rapids, but not all. If "most" is deleted, it will become that all the dangerous beaches are flooded, which is unrealistic.

From Chongqing to Wuhan by boat, I visited the world-famous Three Gorges of the Yangtze River.

The mountains of the Three Gorges are curious! Kuimen is like a sword, straight and steep. The mountains are undulating and towering, and the clouds are lingering. Some are like mushrooms, some are like camels and some are like fairies. What a big mountain!

The water in the Three Gorges is so urgent! The Yangtze River roared like a runaway wild horse. The Yangtze River twists and turns in the mountains, and things rush. It bit the cliff crack and beat the demonstration, and the sound of the waves was deafening.

The ships of the Three Gorges are so close! The river is rolling, the vortex is connected with the vortex, and the spray is connected with the spray. The big ship is like a cradle and a homepage, drifting with the tide. Sometimes I have to touch the mountain wall; Sometimes stones seem to fall. ...

Ah! How beautiful Li Bai's landscape paintings are in the Three Gorges!

I prefer goddess peak in the Three Gorges. This is a slender demonstration standing on the top of the mountain. Looks like a little fairy, wearing a long green dress, beautiful! There is a magical story circulating here: once upon a time, there was a fisherman who refused to give it in the river every day. One day, it was dark and stormy. The fishermen lost their way and were unfortunately caught in the river by the waves. His beloved girl stood at the top of the mountain, waiting for him to come home day and night. As the days passed, the fisherman didn't come back, but the girl became a model. Since then, she has been a lighthouse for passing ships from morning till night, not afraid of rain or sun.

What a beautiful goddess peak! What a kind girl! Our big ship sailed safely down the river. It turns out that she is on the job, and we guide the course!

The Three Gorges is one of the scenic spots in China 10, ranking first among the top 40 tourist attractions in China. The Three Gorges of the Yangtze River is the general name of Qutang Gorge, Wuxia Gorge and Xiling Gorge. It starts from Baidicheng, Fengjie, Sichuan and ends at Nanjinguan, Yichang, Hubei, with a total length of 204 kilometers. Here, there are peaks on both sides of the river, narrow and tortuous rivers, scattered shoals and reefs, and fast-flowing water. "The mountains are full of majestic water and surrounded by water. Sometimes, the coast and gables stand like axes, and they seem to want to help each other. " Sometimes, dangerous cliffs stand upright and are blocked by water. There is no doubt that the harbor current blocks the road. Comrade Guo Moruo vividly described the magnificent scenery in the canyon area in his poem "Strange Road in Shu". In ancient China, there was a famous geographical work called Notes on Water Mirrors, which was written by Li Daoyuan in the Northern Wei Dynasty. There is a vivid narrative about the Three Gorges in the book: "Since the Three Gorges is 700 miles, the two sides of the Three Gorges are connected with mountains, and the yuan is slightly lacking. "The sky was covered by the sun, and there was no sunrise or moon until midnight.

Qutang Gorge is one of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, starting from Bai Di, fengjie county in the west and ending in Daxi Town, Wushan County in the east, with a total length of eight kilometers. It is the shortest one in the Three Gorges, but it is the most majestic and steep one. No wonder ancient poets praised "the mountains on both sides of Qutang are difficult to write, although the pen is exquisite". The swift river broke into Kuimen and roared in the tight canyon. When the ship sails in the gorge, it really feels like "the peaks and mountains are connected with the sky, and the boat is out of the hole".

Wuxia starts from Daning estuary in the east of Wushan County in the west and reaches Guandukou in Badong County in the east, stretching for more than 40 kilometers, including Yinjiaxia in the Golden Chamber and Twelve Peaks in Wushan. The canyon is particularly deep and tortuous, which was formed by the Yangtze River crossing the Wushan main vein anticline. Martial arts, also known as heroes, are famous for their deep beauty. The whole gorge area is the most impressive section of the Three Gorges, with abrupt peaks, rugged rocks and cliffs. It is like a winding gallery full of poems and love letters. It can be said that there are scenery everywhere, and the scenery is connected. In particular, there are twelve peaks in Wushan with different shapes, among which goddess peak is the highest. Goddess peak is like a young girl, standing in the mist, appearing and disappearing, leaving many magical legends to the world. The scenery on both sides of the strait is beautiful, and great poets such as Qu Yuan, Li Bai, Du Fu, Su Dongpo and Lu You have traveled here and left their poems.

Xiling Gorge starts from Xiangxikou in the east and ends at Nanjinguan in the west, with a total length of about 70 kilometers. It is the longest in the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River and is famous for its numerous beaches and fast-flowing water. The whole gorge area consists of alpine canyons and shoal reefs, with a gorge in the gorge and a big gorge nested with a small gorge; The beach has a beach, and the big beach includes a small beach. From west to east, there are four gorge areas: Baojian Gorge, Niuganmafei Gorge, Kongling Gorge and Dengying Gorge, as well as dangerous beaches such as Qingtan, Xietan, Kongling Gorge and Yaocha River. After liberation, after years of regulation, the waterway has been greatly improved, thus ending the history of "the Three Gorges does not sail at night".

The Three Gorges Dam Hydropower Station, which is about to be completed, is located in the spacious middle of Xiling Gorge. At present, the project is progressing rapidly. Sailing at night in Xiling Gorge, the two sides are brightly lit and busy, and the construction scene is spectacular.

Down to Nanjinguan, the river suddenly becomes clear, which is the outlet of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. The North Shore is a scenic spot of Sanyou Cave in Yichang, which integrates human landscape and natural landscape. It is adjacent to the majestic Gezhouba Hydropower Project on the Yangtze River, and together with Pinghu Scenic Area around the dam, Yichang, as the starting point or destination city of the Three Gorges tourism on the Yangtze River, has more practical significance.

In this magnificent mountain and river, the glory of Daxi culture once shone, and the great patriotic poet Qu Yuan and talented woman Zhao Jun were born. During the Three Kingdoms period, it was once the battlefield of the struggle between Wu and Shu. Since the Tang and Song Dynasties, many poets and writers, such as Li Bai, Du Fu, Bai Juyi, Liu Yuxi, Fan Chengda, Su Shi and Lu You, have written many poems that have been told for generations. Our ancestors created a rich culture here and left many places of interest. Today, our outstanding people will use creative labor to develop and build the Three Gorges and decorate it more beautifully!