There are many poetic and picturesque descriptions of scenery in "Luhuadang". Find them, appreciate them carefully, and briefly analyze their effects.

1． Perceive the old man's heroic character.

The old man’s heroic character is first manifested in his patriotic and anti-Japanese enthusiasm and his ever-growing spirit. The old man was nearly sixty years old. "There was not much meat in his body and he was as skinny as an old osprey." Ordinarily he should spend his remaining years in peace at the rear, but he was as energetic and fearless as a young man. Under the tight enemy blockade, he went out into the pond and became a heroic traffic officer with outstanding contributions. "The tanned face and short gray beard are particularly energetic, and the pair of deep-set eyes are particularly bright." This is the image of an old anti-Japanese hero. His patriotic enthusiasm was so high that "You can rely on me for everything" was his heroic saying. He was willing to do his best for the nation's war of resistance and was full of confidence. He was surprisingly brave. He traveled inside and outside, transported grain and grass, escorted cadres, and went in and out under the eyes of the enemy. He was "like a man who had nothing to do" and was in a leisurely mood, "making up things that would make him happy and others happy." This is not only because he is familiar with the geographical environment of Baiyangdian and has superb "water skills", but also because he has heroic spirit, despises the enemy and is fearless. The old man was able to break through the enemy's blockade and played an important role in the team's persistence in the struggle in Weitang.

The old man’s heroic character is also reflected in his strong feelings of love and hate. He was so affectionate towards his country, his compatriots, and the anti-Japanese troops, but he was full of hatred for the Japanese invaders. The old man loves his two children so much. This is his feeling for his compatriots. He said to Daling: "They injured you and shed so much blood. Tomorrow I will make ten of them bleed." He loved deeply and passionately, and hated so much that he gnashed his teeth. The blood debt must be repaid with blood, and he must ask the Japanese to use it. Ten times the blood to repay. In the old man's mind, we Chinese are the masters of Baiyangdian. He is full of affection for the hometown and full of hatred for the invaders.

The old man’s heroic character is also reflected in his overconfidence and self-esteem. He was confident that he was infallible. This time the girl was injured, and he felt "embarrassed" and "shameless in public". Such a need to save face contains a very strong sense of responsibility. He is so strict with himself that he is almost harsh. If he occasionally makes a mistake, he will be pierced by thousands of arrows in pain and feel ashamed of himself.

The old man’s heroic character is also reflected in his heroic behavior of both wisdom and courage. The old man used a penny to hit the heads of more than a dozen Japanese soldiers with his pennants. He had already tied sharp hooks to the dead wood piles, and placed a large bundle of fresh lotus pods on the bow of the boat to lure the Japanese into the water area of ??the dead wood piles, and let the hooks bite the Japanese so that they could not move and restrained them. After being beaten, the arrogant and arrogant Japanese became trapped animals one by one in front of him.

2． Going deeper, you can feel that the Chinese people are invincible and are a heroic people.

This novel mainly writes about an old hero. It also allows us to see the appearance of the heroic young man, and reminds us of the team that persisted in the resistance war in Weitang. From Weitang's singing, we can imagine that they are not afraid of hardships, are heroic and optimistic, and have high morale. Reading this novel, one can feel that in the anti-Japanese base areas behind enemy lines, men, women and children were mobilized. The heroic Chinese people are invincible.

3. Rich in character descriptions and environment descriptions.

The character description and environment description of this novel are very distinctive. The characters are vivid and somewhat legendary. For example, at the beginning of the article, the dangerous environment is described first, and then the old man’s achievements are written. At the end of the article, the old man’s determination is first written into unbelievable “big words”, and then his heroic behavior of unexpected victory is written. Stubborn personality, bizarre plot, and legendary taste.

The description of the environment is poetic and picturesque, full of the atmosphere of a water town, elegant and timeless. Two specific stories

The night before: The old man failed to send Daling and Erling into the reed pond.

At noon the next day: The old man used water skills to avenge Daling.

Problem Research

1. Difficult exploration of character traits: How to understand the word "too" in the sentence "The old man is overconfident and self-respecting"?

"Too" means very much. The old man has very strong self-confidence and self-esteem. On the other hand, it does mean going too far. The reason why the older girl was injured is related to his overconfidence and lack of caution. The little girl was washing her face, and the older girl was a little more wary, but the old man said, "Don't be afraid, just wash it." There was a sound when washing her face. The old man thought that the searchlight on the small steamer could not see them, but in fact the searchlight illuminated the faces of the two girls as white as snow. These are all manifestations of his overconfidence to the point of paralysis.

"Overconfidence and self-esteem" are the core of the old man's character, and his merits and demerits all stem from this.

2． Research on the art of character description: How does this novel exaggerate the legendary color of the old hero?

The author uses strong contrast to exaggerate the legendary color of the old hero. On the one hand, the conditions were written. The enemy's surveillance and blockade were very tight. The old hero was nearly sixty years old, very thin, and did not carry a gun. On the other hand, write about the spirit and achievements of the old heroes. The spirit is so leisurely and contented, and extremely confident; the performance is to completely defeat the enemy's blockade and ensure that the team in the reed pond receives sufficient supplies. The huge contrast between the two aspects makes the old hero appear extraordinary and legendary.

The text focuses on a "heroic act", which is more legendary. The author mainly uses two methods to render it.

First, the girl’s suspicion is used as a contrast. There is a conversation description here. The old man said, "I will ask ten of them to bleed tomorrow," and later said, "Wait until dawn, and you will see." He was confident, but the girl repeatedly expressed doubts. At first, she did not answer, thinking that the old man was nothing Be ruthless, just talk, and then use the words of a little girl to express doubt: "How can you still fight at such an old age?" Writing doubt has a foil effect and shows the wonder of the old man's heroic behavior.

Again, in the narrative process, only the facts are written, not the reasons, so that readers can recall the reasons, making the legend more intense. The old hero set a trap for the Japanese to get into. He tied the hook in advance, figured out how to use lotus pods to lure the devils, and mastered the patterns of the devils' activities. The author doesn't write about this. He only writes about the Japanese taking a bath. He writes that the old man put a large bundle of lotus pods on the boat and just peeled off the lotus pods to eat. He also doesn't write about his intentions. He writes that the boat came towards the Japanese and then turned back in a circle. I don’t even mention why the old man’s boat rowed back and forth like this. In fact, it was to lure the Japanese into a trap. This meaning can only be understood after thinking about it. Entering the water with wooden piles, let’s not talk about the countless hooks on the piles. It is just that the boat is circling around the devils. The devils seem to be playing hide and seek. It is said below that the devils are spinning around like this, and every one of them is bitten by the hooks. When I finally understood it, the more I thought about it, the more legendary this heroic act became. A skinny old man, unarmed and alone, could play with a dozen Japs in the palm of his hand and kill them. He can really be said to be a legendary hero.

3. What is the function of the scene description in the first paragraph?

Point out the atmosphere of the environment, highlight the danger of the environment, explain the background, and pave the way for the subsequent description of human behavior. It highlights the old man's heroic behavior.

4. How to understand "In the lake, like a reed leaf, heading straight to the southeast."

Use metaphors to compare the boat to a reed leaf, highlighting the boat Characterized by briskness, the old man's proficiency in punting skills and his elusive whereabouts.

5. "Weizi is still so fiercely drilling into the sky" understanding

Weizi, who works hard to grow taller, vividly demonstrates the unyielding and tenacious people of Baiyangdian in the cruel war years. A posture of survival. It symbolizes the will and strength of the Baiyangdian people. "Hardhearted" expresses the hatred of the anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians towards the Japanese invaders. "Drill" expresses the firm belief and unyielding spirit of the anti-Japanese military and civilians.

6.3. What are the functions of the four paragraphs of portrait description?

There are descriptions of appearance and clothing, describing the characteristics of the old man who is smart, capable, sharp and witty, decisive, confident and self-respecting.

7. "The old man just told them to take a nap... We still have rice and fish to eat." Appreciation.

On the one hand, it reflects the old man's love and comfort for the children. On the other hand, it also reflects the characteristics of the old man's confidence.

8. Appreciation of "The environment in front of you seems to be a dream"

Comparing the environment in front of you to a dream vividly expresses the children's struggle to find the army after going through all kinds of hardships. Surprise and excitement.

9. Appreciation of "They marched on the road in their hometown... and grew up"

The growth of the girls is described with charm. The natural maturity of crops and the flight of wild geese from south to north are poetic metaphors for the passage of time. "Beidou" is not only the Big Dipper in the sky, but also a metaphor: the glorious guidance of the party.

A series of verbs such as "lay" in paragraphs 10 and 14 are reflected?

It fully illustrates the relaxed and happy psychology of the two girls who came to this beautiful place despite the tense environment of gunfire.

11. "Jun" reflected?

The simple, fresh earthy smell reflects the identity of the old man.

12. Where does the old man’s confidence come from?

Familiarity with the environment, superb water skills, and fearless heroism.

What is the function of the verb in paragraph 13.26?

The old man is very responsive and has rich experience with Di Dongzheng.

What is the role of scene description in paragraph 14.38?

It highlights the old man’s self-blame and deep sorrow for the girl’s injury. The rustling wind was just like the old man's restless heart.

What is the role of language description in paragraph 15.39?

Failed to successfully complete the mission, failed to guarantee the troops, and was embarrassed to see the troops. Corresponds to "too much self-esteem and self-confidence".

16. What is the performance of "Serial Arrow"?

Metaphor. The old man felt guilty and painful. Feeling ashamed and ashamed.

What is the role of psychological description in paragraph 17.47?

The feelings of regret, guilt, and self-blame for not completing the task satisfactorily show the love for the little sisters and the hatred of the enemy, laying the foundation for revenge against the enemy later.

18. Appreciation of "Stubborn Old Corn".

The old man's ruthlessness towards his enemies is vividly described, and he will make them pay a heavy debt of blood. "Smashing" the "stubborn old corn" also reflects the author's distinct attitude and vivid emotions.

19. Is it reckless for the old man not to carry a gun?

No. Because he has love for the people and hatred for the enemy, with his familiarity with Baiyangdian, superb water skills, and the strength to fight against the enemy - oars and fish hooks, he can fight with ease in the fight. This is at a high level. confidence.

Text theme

This is a poetic and exciting novel. The novel mainly describes an old hero, and also allows us to see the appearance of the heroic young man, and reminds us of the team that persisted in the resistance war in Weitang. From Weitang's singing, we can imagine that they are not afraid of hardships, are heroic and optimistic, and have high morale. Reading this novel, one can feel that in the anti-Japanese base areas behind enemy lines, men, women and children were mobilized. The heroic Chinese people are invincible and the War of Resistance Against Japan will be won.

Exercise instructions

1. Read the full text, retell the plot, and discuss the following two questions.

1. The enemy closely monitors the reed pond, but "every evening, the singing in the reed pond is still so loud." What associations and imagination does this loud singing evoke in you? Can you think of other battle songs in literary and artistic works?

2. What content in the text shows the old man's "overconfidence and self-esteem" character? What role does this sentence play in the whole text?

This question requires an overall grasp of the text content through interpretation and retelling. In the first question, grasp a sentence, expand your imagination and association, and understand the meaning of the sentence. The second question grasps the core of the old man's thought and character and makes a detailed analysis. This question includes reading training, oral training, content discussion, imagination and association training.

1. Tip: You can use singing to imagine the emotions of soldiers, and imagine all aspects of soldiers and troops. Specifically, there are old heroes who continue to send firewood, rice, oil and salt, which provides strong support and sufficient supplies. The soldiers are strong and confident.

When they rested in the evening, the soldiers sang loudly. The song is a heavy blow to the enemy.

Associate the battle songs in other literary and artistic works, and recall the literary and artistic works you have read in and outside of class. The answers are not necessarily consistent.

2. The old man's "overconfidence and self-esteem" character runs throughout the text. He said to the responsible comrade in Weitang: "You rely on me for everything, and I rely on your ability on the water. Everything is safe." This sentence fully demonstrated his "overconfidence and self-esteem."

It is very dangerous to pass through the enemy's blockade, but the old man "every night, on the water tightly blocked by the enemy, is like a man who has nothing to do. He goes out early in the morning and comes back late to fish and cast the net in a leisurely mood." He is sitting on the boat and planning things that will make him happy and others happy." Such leisurely contentment also fully reflects his "overconfidence and self-esteem."

Sending the two girls into the reed pond, the old man thought everything was safe and nothing would happen, so he could sleep peacefully. The little girl washed her face, and the old man asked her to do so. Even when the Japanese's small steamer searchlight came, he was still "not afraid", thinking that he "couldn't see us." When the Japanese fired machine guns, he was still "not afraid" and thought "he couldn't hit us." It has to be said that he was a little careless and overconfident. The older girl was injured and bleeding. This time the mission was not completed. He felt embarrassed and embarrassed to see others. He was too embarrassed to go see the troops. He was too proud.

The old man was determined to recover the blood debt for the eldest girl, so he guaranteed it for the two girls. He played with the devil between his palms and buttocks, luring the devil to take the bait, and then used his pole to beat the devil hard. He smashed his head and gave the Japanese a bloody blow, recovering his blood debt and regaining his self-esteem. This heroic act showed that he was always very confident and self-respecting.

The phrase "overconfidence and self-esteem" points to the core of the old hero's character. This sentence means both being very confident and self-respecting, and it also means being overconfident and having too much self-esteem. The entire plot of the story and all the merits and demerits of the old hero are derived from this point.

2. There is a passage in the text that wonderfully describes the old man’s frustration, guilt, and self-blame for not completing the task satisfactorily. Please find this passage and understand it carefully, and then put the second part into the text. Tian'e'er'er Erling's psychological activities when he witnessed the old man's heroic act were supplemented.

This question guides students to read two excerpts, appreciate them carefully during reading, and expand their imagination during reading.

A passage describing the old man’s psychological activities is: “One sound after another is like a chain of arrows, piercing the old man’s heart. He cannot explain: how many rivers and seas have passed, why this mission, there is no Finished? I have no children. These two children are so cute! I usually boast, but this time I brought someone with a flower hanging in my mouth. How can I open my mouth to speak? Such an old face!" The old man is very confident and self-respecting. He has a very strong sense of responsibility and believes that he has fulfilled his responsibility only if he completes the task 100%. Listening to the injured older girl groaning in pain, and listening to the little girl's words, the old man was in extreme pain, "each sound was like a string of arrows, shooting through the old man's heart." He placed all the blame for the eldest girl's injury and bleeding on himself. He was extremely sad and guilty. He loved these two children so much. The children were injured and bleeding, and his heart was also injured and bleeding. He blamed himself strongly. He felt that the promise he made to the troops was in vain. He felt that his fault had brought great shame and humiliation to himself, making him embarrassed and shameless to see the troops. His strong self-esteem made him feel ashamed.

Erling witnessed the old man's heroic behavior. She thought that what the old comrade said yesterday was not a cannon shot. She had really underestimated the old comrade. Even though he was so old, he was really an old hero! You Look at him, facing more than a dozen Japanese, he is not afraid. Unexpectedly, he was very resourceful. It turned out that he put a large bundle of lotus pods on the bow of the boat and peeled the lotus pods to eat with pleasure, in order to lure the Japanese. His ability to sail a boat was amazing, as if he was leading the enemy by the nose. How could the Japanese dare not move while they were spinning around in the water? Why are there streams of blood coming out? Why did the Japanese bleed before the old comrades took action? There must be some mechanism set up underwater, he really has an idea.

It turns out that he is really capable. Without a gun, he can deal with more than a dozen Japs by himself. The Japs can only be beaten and have no power to fight back. The old hero hit them well, hit them hard! Their heads were broken and bloody. Daling's revenge has been avenged. Go back and tell Daling, let her know the story of this hero, let her recover from her injuries as soon as possible, learn from the old heroes, and defeat the Japanese devils.

3. There are many picturesque descriptions of scenery in the text, such as "On a bright moonlit night...like a reed leaf, running to the southeast" and "The drooping moon, "Floating in the water-like sky" and so on, find and copy them down, appreciate them carefully, and then imitate a few sentences to describe the scenery of your hometown.

This question is about describing scenery. Sun Li's description of scenery is very distinctive. You can excerpt it and ponder it carefully. You can understand the brilliance of this description and improve your descriptive ability.

① At night, the enemy stared at the eerie and dark large reed pond from the small window of the turret. The stars in the sky seemed to be immersed in water and about to drip down. Only late at night like this can the sound of waterbirds flying and singing can be heard in the reed pond. During the day, they hid tightly in their nests to avoid gunfire. Wei Zi still drilled upwards so hard, the target seemed to be the sky.

·② But if it is a night with bright moon and clear wind, and people’s eyes are sharper, they can see a small boat stretched out from the reed pond, like a reed leaf in the pond, running towards the southeast. Went.

③The curved and drooping moon floats in the water-like sky.

④The yellow light is still shining in all directions, sometimes shining on the water, and sometimes shining into the forest in the distance.

⑤The next day, it was very hot at noon. On a red sun day, there was a layer of smoke floating on the water.

⑥There was not a single figure in the lake, only a group of white silk-like waterfowl, which also flew north away from the Japanese and landed under a big lotus leaf to rest.

⑦The water here is as flat as a mirror, as clear as the blue sky, and elongated water plants float gently on the bottom.

⑧There, fresh reed flowers and a spread of purple velvet are blowing in the wind.