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Please talk about the beauty of the author's happy topic in combination with the specific content of the article.
From the content, it reveals the main idea of the article: only by sowing the seeds of happiness in the deep heart can we really reap the joy. (2 points)
From the formal point of view, it is novel and unique to use "as you sow". Use the word "cordial" to attract readers and enhance reading interest. (2 points)
Original title:
A little overjoyed
It was a sunny autumn day, and the sun filled the whole yard. Many children are playing slides, swinging or chasing each other in the yard. The crisp laughter was mixed with vague words. A girl in a cotton floral skirt squatted under a osmanthus tree and stared at the ground as if all the noise around her had nothing to do with her.
This is a language rehabilitation center for deaf children. Looking at that small, lonely figure, I feel a sense of sadness in my heart.
Busy with life every day, but also with the adolescent daughter "tricks." For a while, my mood was very low. I saw "volunteer with me" in a forum! After searching for the key to happiness, I followed the volunteers to this special school one weekend.
I walked up to the girl and said, "How old are you? Where do you live? " But she ignored it. She is like living on an island, and the noise is like a flood. When she passed by, she had to make a detour. She lowered her head and scribbled on the ground with branches, which bored me.
Can't she hear me? I asked the teacher with doubts, and he explained the reason.
The girl has received pre-school language rehabilitation training. She is clever and diligent. She has recovered quickly in all aspects and can communicate with people normally. Later, she went to an ordinary primary school to study, and she could follow the progress of her studies at work. But after entering junior high school, she became sensitive and fragile. A casual word from others, or a mocking look, will set off a huge wave in her heart. Her mood became very agitated and she didn't want to communicate with others, so her grades naturally plummeted. Her parents had to suspend her from school and send her here for psychological counseling.
There seems to be a wall between me and her. What can I do to get into her heart? It suddenly occurred to me that there was a walkman in my bag, which contained songs that my daughter downloaded from the Internet. Afraid of affecting her study, I also criticized her for this matter.
I turned up the volume of the walkman. That's the blue lotus, with a clear tune. Driven by curiosity, she turned around slowly. I am secretly happy. I handed her the walkman and taught her how to choose a song. We sat opposite each other, listening to one song after another, with a smile in her black eyes.
I have been there twice since then, and I will download some nice songs before each visit. She still won't talk to me, but she will take the initiative to sit next to me and listen quietly with me to make her look closer.
In the following days, I was caught up in some trivial matters, so I couldn't spare the time and didn't take part in activities for a long time.
One day after half a year, I walked into the classroom of the rehabilitation center and saw her lying on the table. She thought for a moment, cupped her chin, bowed her head and quickly wrote a few words on the paper. Her expression was serious and solemn, and she didn't notice me behind her. A girl with short hair stood at the door and waved to her. She put down her pen and ran out of the classroom like a gust of wind.
I sat down in her original position, eyes swept the notebook on the table, see lines of neat and comely words:
My mother came to see me and gave me a sweet kiss. She also told me that every little progress you made was something that made my mother happy and proud. I am so happy after listening to my mother's words!
At noon, we ate celery dumplings, which is my favorite. It's delicious. I remember when I was at home, my mother often cooked jiaozi for me. I hope I can get better soon so that I can be reunited with my family.
The teacher said that everyone's heart is a field. What you sow is what you reap. I want to plant happiness, because I want to be a happy person and bring happiness to others.
……
Just then, the girl ran back to the classroom and saw me with a surprised smile on her face. "Aunt, I miss you!" She said slowly. It's my turn to be surprised This is the first time I have listened to her since I knew her. Everything she said is like a pearl falling on a plate, which sounds so sweet.
I am very pleased with her change and feel guilty at the same time. I have had many complaints and dissatisfaction. I was angry because my daughter accidentally knocked over the milk tea. I loudly accused her of doing her homework too slowly … but turned a blind eye to her merits. I can try my best to be patient with someone I don't know, but I am stingy with the praise of my relatives around me.
I don't know when my heart turned into a deserted garden. From now on, I will sow the seeds of happiness in my heart and reap the joy in my heart. I never thought of going home so soon as this moment, giving my daughter a deep hug and sincerely saying to her, "Son, you are really great."
(Author Gu has been deleted)
Question 1:
12. "I" changed my mind many times in the communication with the little girl. According to the prompt, find the relevant words from the text and fill in the following lines. (4 points)
Boredom →→→→→→ gratitude and guilt
13. Try to find the following sentences in the context and answer the questions. (4 points)
"I am very pleased with her change, but also a little embarrassed."
What changes make me happy? Why does "I" feel guilty?
A:
14. Combine the context and taste the following sentences from the perspective of rhetoric. (3 points)
"Everything she said is like a pearl falling on a plate, and it sounds so sweet."
A:
15. The author said: "I can try my best to be tolerant and patient to an unfamiliar person, but I am stingy with praise to my relatives around me." Sometimes we lack tolerance and patience with the people around us (family, classmates, teachers, etc.). ) and stingy praise. Give an example of what this article has inspired you. (6 points)
A:
Reference answer:
12. exultation; Surprised; (Rating: **4 points, 2 points for each blank)
13. She changed from sensitive, fragile, irritable and unwilling to communicate with others to lively, cheerful, talkative and willing to communicate with others. These changes make me feel gratified. I feel guilty at the thought that I have turned a blind eye to my daughter's advantages, complained too much about some unintentional losses, and lacked tolerance and patience. (Rating: **4 points, 2 points for each question)
14. The sentence uses figurative rhetoric to connect the voice of the little girl with the voice of the pearl falling on the plate, and vividly describes the sweet voice of the little girl with the intuitive impression and experience brought by the latter, reflecting my happy mood at that time. (score: 3 points, judgment technique 1 point, taste analysis 2 points)
15. Example omitted. (Rating: * * * * 6 points, 3 points for clear narration, 3 points for analysis based on examples and reading articles)
Question 2:
14. Combine the context and taste the following sentences from the perspective of rhetoric. (5 points)
"Everything she said is like a pearl falling on a plate, and it sounds so sweet."
A:
15. Why does the author take "a kind of happiness is happiness" as the topic? Please analyze it from two angles: content and form. (4 points)
A:
16. The author said: "I can try my best to be tolerant and patient to an unfamiliar person, but I am stingy with praise to my relatives around me." Sometimes we lack tolerance and patience with the people around us (family, classmates, teachers, etc.). ) and stingy praise. Give an example of what this article has inspired you. (6 points)
A:
Reference answer:
14.(5 points)
Metaphor (compare every word the little girl says to a pearl, and describe the joy of the little girl's speech with the sound of the pearl falling off the plate). ( 1)
It is precious (rare) for a little girl to speak. (2 points)
The first time I heard the little girl speak, I felt extremely happy (excited, happy). (2 points)
15.(4 points) (meaning right)
From the content, it reveals the main idea of the article: only by sowing the seeds of happiness in the deep heart can we really reap the joy. (2 points)
From the formal point of view, it is novel and unique to use "as you sow". Use the word "cordial" to attract readers and enhance reading interest. (2 points)
16.(6 points) (Example: 3 points, Revelation: 3 points)
Example: Omission
Revelation: ① Discover the advantages of others and praise them sincerely. (2) Give tolerance and patience. Three kinds of happiness are happiness.
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