How to write a key scene in Zhangjiajie

1. Almost all the scenic spots in Zhangjiajie are "wild". This mountain is desolate. The mountain in Yuanjiajie is a thrilling beauty: take the Bailong ladder and go straight into the sky. In the blink of an eye, I reached an altitude of several thousand meters, and when I got off the ladder, I found that there were cliffs all around. What is even more daunting is that there are flat peach-like stones on the cliff that will shake. The front garden and the back garden are actually the most beautiful and steep places in the Yuan family. The mountain in Yuanjiajie is a refreshing beauty: the beautiful rock peak does not add any burden. The mountains in Yuanjiajie are wild beauty: "Shili Gallery" and "Jin Bianxi", whose names make people feel extraordinary. The two old people are relatively dependent on each other, just like talking about "yellow people falling in love." This mouse, with its back to the sky, was named "golden mouse looking up to the sky". Water is wild. The water in Jin Bianxi is pleasant and beautiful: it always runs around like a wild child. It runs around Panshan Mountain, and it runs with Panshan Highway. The water in Jin Bianxi is wonderful: Look! The yellow tributaries and the white tributaries are wonderfully merged and magically separated. The water in Jin Bianxi is a naughty beauty: it hits rocks and splashes. Animals are wild. That mountain macaque is not afraid of people. If you have a snack in your hand, it will rush to it regardless. When you leave the food and run away, it will have a nice bite of the trophy! In Shan Ye, wild animals are wild, so are we: we cross the river by feeling the stones. Our teachers seem to be talking and laughing all over the mountains, rejuvenating and returning to nature in the pushing and shoving of streams. Teacher's comment: The little author used "wild" to summarize the characteristics of Zhangjiajie, which is really a novel word. The composition describes the mountains, water and animals in Zhangjiajie from the perspective of "wild" and vividly shows the beauty of "wild" in Zhangjiajie. For example, write a mountain, "that mouse is on its back, so it is called' golden mouse looking up to the sky'"; Write water, "water will never be stable and will always run around like a wild child"; Write animals, "That mountain macaque is not afraid of people. If you have a snack in your hand, it will rush to it, making readers feel the wildness of Zhangjiajie and taking care of the theme. The composition is clear, novel and consistent with the topic. The little author not only observes carefully, summarizes vividly, but also has a high writing level. In "it will rush up regardless of everything", change "get" to "land".

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Zhangjiajie silhouette

Stepping into Zhangjiajie is like being in ink painting. At the entrance of the scenic spot, a mountain peak stands on the wall, like a knife cutting an axe, and the cliff body is multi-colored, 100 meters away. Up and down the peak, in the twilight, a few white clouds are swaying like gauze, like silver practice. Miss Shi, the accompanying tour guide, said that there were 2,000 such peaks in the scenic spot. Its height and shape are different, but most of them are unsupported, rising from the ground and stabbing the blue sky like a giant sword.

Zhangjiajie has A Jin Bian Xi, with a total length of more than 40 miles, with strange peaks and rocks on both sides, which is the main access to the mountains. The golden whip rock by the stream is the king of the peaks. I saw this giant peak more than 300 meters high, with steep cliffs and towering rocks. The top of the mountain is foggy, and several pine trees stand in the wind, with occasional red leaves. Looking up for a while, I felt that the world was moving, dizzy and almost wobbly. Walking slowly along the ancient road of Jin Bianxi, all the way is full of springs and waterfalls, with deep shade, birds singing in the canyon and monkeys in the forest. On the shady cliff, a long and narrow sky is exposed, stretching for several miles, revealing a winding light belt to the ground, which is beyond words.

Huangshizhai Village, which is composed of several giant peaks climbed by Jin Bianxi, has a panoramic view of Zhangjiajie, and the mountains are undulating and magnificent. This mountain with an altitude of 1 100 meters is surrounded by dozens of scenic spots. You can enjoy the competition of Qianfeng from different angles. One after another, wonderful and realistic pictures are panoramic: looking at Lang Feng, three sisters, a solitary monkey in a single mountain, a scarab in a foggy sea, a boy worshiping Guanyin and forty-eight generals. Every image is vivid and has a legend. It's touching to read the story of Lang Feng. It is said that many years ago, there was a Mei who could cut paper flowers. She fell in love with Wa Baoyuan, who had been herding sheep together since childhood. Zhang Gang, a local hooligan, coveted Mei Zheng's appearance and framed Baoyuan as a rebellious descendant. Baoyuan was arrested by officers and men to serve in the border. In order to avoid the arrogance of Master Zhang, he hid in the mountains. Every morning before dawn, she stood at the mountain pass, looking far away from Baoyuan, looking, looking ... I don't know how many years passed, and through a hole in the opposite rock, she herself became a stone man. The local Tujia and Han people still sing a folk song: "Ma Sangshu, how many stones do you have to cross to set up a lampstand?" Don't call me back for three years, not for ten years. If you don't see Lang, you won't come out of the mountain. If you don't meet the spring rain, you won't blossom ... "XB-` \ &；;

In the bird's eye view area of Huangshizhai, Huangshan's famous "four wonders"-Qifeng, Kistler, Kistler and Haiyun are also available here. The difference is that the stone peaks in Zhangjiajie are more dense, varied and beautiful. /kloc-more than 0/00 mu of Gu Song is connected into a piece of Wang Yang sea, with dozens of meters of trees, two people camp, pines and waves, blue waves emptying, magnificent. Standing in Huangshizhai, I saw milky white clouds between the peaks, flickering, high and low. At present, the sky is a color, and everything has disappeared. At the same time, there are peaks and mountains everywhere, resplendent and magnificent. When the top of a peak protrudes above the clouds, it is like a lonely sail in a foggy sea, and it comes slowly like something from outer space. A touch of sunshine twists and turns from the mountain, passes through the clouds, and immediately flashes golden light. The clouds are steaming and beautiful.

Up and down the Huangshizhai Village, the mountain and dangerous road are narrow, and there are often fish ridge corridors. The cliffs on both sides are steep and abyss, which is chilling. Fortunately, there is a guide, Miss Shi, who reminds me from time to time. Miss Shi graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Hunan University and is very interested in the development of tourism. She recommended herself as a tour guide here. She speaks pure Mandarin, not only telling vivid stories, but also singing Xiangxi folk songs to help us relieve fatigue. On the stone wall of a dangerous place, we saw a poem written by tourists in the 1980s: "The Five Mountains have been heroes in the world since ancient times, and no one cares about the ancient cliff. I use blue sky flying crayons to express my grievances to this mountain. " The artistic conception of his poems, though not elegant, expresses the sympathy of tourists. In the world, Qian Qian's thousands of grievances actually fell on this scenic spot. I really don't understand why Qu Yuan, a doctor who has experienced swimming in the Lijiang River and left immortal poems such as "Orchid, I don't think my son dares to speak", turned a deaf ear to the source and the thousands of peaks and rocks on both sides; I really don't understand that an ancient cave of Qin people written by Tao Yuanming attracted poets and writers of all ages and wrote beautiful chapters. Facing Zhangjiajie, which is only more than 200 miles away from Taohuayuan, it is regarded as a timid road and will never set foot on it! Throughout Zhangjiajie, I can't see an inscription, a stone carving left by a poet and a monk, or a little historical relic left by a monk. In this regard, Miss Shi told me that after checking all the written records, only Xia Ziyun, a poet of the Ming Dynasty, visited Zhangjiajie, and there was a poem "Moss marks stop in the valley, and Jinsong hangs on the wall for a thousand years". Other than that, there are no words.

However, Zhangjiajie's first-class rock scenery has actually lived in Sri Lanka for thousands of years, tens of thousands of years ... It has not lost its beauty because there are no elegant people chanting, nor has it restrained its majestic posture because there are no tourists' footprints. It does not need to listen to exquisite poems and songs, nor does it need to accept the worship of good men and women. It is close to the stars and the moon, accompanied by the beautiful sea, silently listening to the joys and sorrows of the world, accepting the baptism of wind and rain, and adorning the corner of China with its original beauty.

Going up and down the mountain, the peaks turn around, there are wonders everywhere, and there are good places everywhere. I found that there were no pavilions, waterside pavilions and galleries in the whole scenic area, and there were no artificial carvings except the upper mountain stone level built by forest protection workers. Then, I remembered the famous painter Wu Guanzhong's praise for Zhangjiajie's "robust beauty of girls in barefoot mountain villages". It is true that Zhangjiajie is not graceful and graceful, but a barefoot mountain aunt with a touch of arrogance and roughness in her beauty-a Xiangxi woman who reveals the beauty of simplicity, wildness and nature. 9$8

Prosperous king's landing. In the spring of reform and opening up, Zhangjiajie, isolated from the world, finally lifted its veil and walked out of the boudoir. With the trend of "coming from behind", the reputation has risen and become famous all over the world! !

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