The fourth grade composition of primary school is 350 words: My washing machine.

Keywords: 350 words in the fourth grade of my primary school

Words: 350 words composition

This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is My Washing Machine. Everyone is welcome to contribute. A few days ago, our family bought a fully automatic washing machine, and my mother smiled because she saved time. It turns out that when the washing machine is dehydrated, it wobbles and hits the wall everywhere. The automatic washing machine is really convenient, and it is smooth and clean when dehydrated. Mom praised Dad for his good memory, because he reminded us when we went to the supermarket. I quickly chimed in and said, "I have the greatest credit, because I invited you." My mother quickly praised me for being smart, and my heart was sweeter than drinking honey. Teacher's comment: The little author's family bought a convenient and easy-to-use automatic washing machine, which made the whole family very happy, especially mom, "beaming". The little author's description seems to let the reader see the happy expression of his mother. Seeing my mother's happiness and praise for my father, "I" hurried to grab the credit. The composition not only shows the childishness of the young author, but also vividly shows the happy life of the young author's family to the readers. "Because he reminded us when we went to the supermarket" was changed to "Because he reminded us to buy a washing machine when we went to the supermarket". (Xue Le China: Teacher Rodina) 2009- 12-3 8:56:00