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What writing technique was used in "The Story of Little Rock Pond", "Surrounded by bamboo trees, lonely and deserted, desolate and chilling, quiet and melancholy"?
Original text
Walking a hundred and twenty paces from Xiaoqiu to the west, across a bamboo field, he heard the sound of water, like a ring, and felt very happy. After cutting bamboo, we took the road and saw a small pool at the bottom. The water was particularly clear. The whole stone is used as the bottom. Close to the shore, roll up the bottom of the stone to get out. It's Di, it's Yu, it's Kai, it's rock. Green trees and green vines are covered with swaying winds, scattered and scattered.
There are hundreds of fish in the pond, but they all seem to be swimming in the air and have nothing to rely on. The sun is clear, and the shadows are spread on the rocks, but they don't move; they disappear far away; they come and go, as if they are enjoying themselves with tourists. Looking to the southwest of the pool, you can see the twists and turns of snakes, and the light and death can be seen. Its shores are so different from each other that its origin cannot be known.
Sitting on the pool, surrounded by bamboo trees, it is so lonely and desolate, I feel desolate and desolate. Because the place was too clear, I couldn't stay there for a long time, so I remembered it and left.
Fellow travelers: Wu Wuling, Gong Gu, Yu Di Zongxuan. Those who followed were Cui's Erxiaosheng: "Forgive yourself" and "Fengyi".
Notes
Huangzhu: Bamboo that grows into a forest.
Ruming Peihuan: It is like the sound made by the jade pendants and jade rings worn by people touching each other.
Qinglu: clear.
The whole stone is the bottom: (Tan) uses the whole stone as the bottom.
Near the shore, roll up the bottom of the stone to come out: Near the shore, some parts of the bottom of the stone roll over to expose the water.
For Di, for Yu, for Chan, for rock: into different shapes such as Di, Yu, Chan, and rock. Di, high ground in the water. Island, small island.偁, uneven rock.
Cuiman: green stems and vines.
Mengluo is swaying and draped unevenly: covering, entwining, shaking, connecting, uneven, and drifting in the wind.
Kebai Xutou: There are about a hundred.
They all seem to be swimming in the air with nothing to rely on.
The sunlight shines brightly, and the shadows are spread on the rocks: The sunlight reaches the bottom of the water, and the shadows of the fish are reflected on the rocks.
Still motionless: (fish shadow) motionless. Wei Ran, looking stunned.
俶er passed away: suddenly he swam away into the distance. Chuer, suddenly.
Come and fro: come and go briskly and quickly.
The fighting and twisting of snakes, the brightness and disappearance can be seen: (the stream) is twists and turns, (looking over) one part is visible, and the other part is invisible. Dippers, twists and turns like the Big Dipper. Snake, twist like a snake crawling. Ming and extinguishing, appearing or hiding.
Canine teeth: interlaced like a dog's teeth.
Desolate and desolate, chilling to the bones, melancholy and profound: I feel desolate, chilly to the bones, extremely quiet and profound. Quietly melancholy, so silent that it makes people feel sad. Profound, deep.
The environment is clear: desolate, desolate.
The people who followed were two young men named Cui.
Translation
Walking a hundred and twenty paces west from the hill, across a bamboo grove, you heard the sound of running water, like the sound of jade pendants and jade rings touching each other, My heart likes to hear this sound. Cut down the bamboo and create a path. Walking down, you will see a small pool with particularly clear water. The small pool uses a whole stone as the bottom. Close to the shore, some parts of the stone bottom roll up to expose the water, forming various shapes of dikes, islets, ridges and rocks. Green trees and green vines cover, twine, sway, and connect each other, unevenly, and drifting in the wind.
There are about a hundred fish in the pond. They all seem to be swimming in the air with nothing to rely on. The sun shines down to the bottom of the pool, and the shadow of the fish is reflected on the rocks at the bottom of the water. It stops there motionless; suddenly it swims away again, moving very quickly. It seems that they are amusing each other with tourists.
Looking to the southwest of Shitan, you can see a small stream that is as winding as the Big Dipper and as curved as a crawling snake. You can clearly see whether the stream body is visible or shadowy. The terrain on both sides of the stream is intertwined like a dog's teeth, and it is unknown where the source of the stream is.
Although Xiaoshitan is not well-known, it still took a little trouble to see it: I saw the bamboo bushes and heard the sound of water, but there was no sign of Xiaoshitan. Although the appearance of the small stone pool cannot be called a thousand calls, it can still be said to be as wonderful as holding a pipa and half covering the face. It was only when we were "cutting bamboo to take the road" that we saw the small stone pond. It is really a winding path leading to a quiet place, and the scenery is indeed extraordinary. This "extraordinary" appears in the form of "strange". The strange thing is that the bottom of the pool is "all stone", and the stones exposed in the pool are all in such strange postures, "they are dikes, islets, and kansas." "As a rock", coupled with the coverage of ancient trees and green vines, the panoramic view of Xiaoshitan is full of tranquility, as if it is not a small world on earth, but a piece of pure land in the legendary Buddhist kingdom. Then, the tip of the pen turns, from stillness to movement, to the small fish in the pond. This is the best part of this article. The fish in this pond are also extremely weird: firstly, there are countless fish, with about "hundred heads"; secondly, their "shadows are spread on the rocks", and their expressions are "still and still". This is a continuation of stillness, which not only highlights the tranquility of the small stone pool, but also outlines the clarity of the water in the small stone pool. This turned into writing. In fact, the foreshadowing has already been made when writing about tranquility. The fish in the water cannot stay still. The stillness of the fish is just like the freeze frame in the movie is just a display of a certain moment. After this freeze-frame, we can see that the fish in the pond "disappear far away, coming and going, seeming to be enjoying themselves with the tourists." Fish is so humane, which touched the author's feelings. Here, the word "乐" is worth noting. Due to the setback of the reform, the author was demoted to a distant place. His mental burden was heavy and he was in extreme trouble and depression. Why can we be "happy"? It's because I left the troubled officialdom, a place of right and wrong, and found such a quiet place here. Seeing the fish swimming in contentment, my soul was purified and restored. The clarity of the water and the joy of the fish finally brought a moment of joy to this broken-hearted essayist. Quiet Kagura is the main theme of the first half of this essay. The reality is grim. In this environment "surrounded by bamboo trees, lonely and desolate, desolate and melancholy," the author felt that "the environment is too pure to live in for a long time." After all, happiness is temporary, while sadness is eternal. Facing this primitive scene of melancholy may make the author feel more uncomfortable, or may arouse the author's desolate associations, thus forming a substantial decline in emotion from "joyful" to "sad". The symptoms of this landslide are also immediate. I feel that this place cannot be stayed for a long time and I leave quickly. I feel desolate, cold and creepy. This prose has always been praised as a masterpiece. The reason why it can become a masterpiece can be summarized as follows: first, the author dares to choose the nameless small stone pool among the piles of rocks as the object of travel notes, which shows that the author has extraordinary artistic courage; second, the author is writing about the scenery of the small stone pool. He is able to freely integrate his own feelings at all times, and the scenery changes with the mood, naturally forming a sad artistic realm. This is a manifestation of the author's superb artistic wisdom and artistic skills. Admittedly, in the final analysis, there is still one thing. For a person like the author, he happened to encounter such a piece of pure land, hit it off and became one. It was really a blessing from God and a blessing from the scenery.
Study text
1. In what order does this prose describe the scenery? What specific scenes were written about?
Described in the order of tours. First, write the general scene on the pond, then the nearby scene in the pond, then the distant view of the stream source, and finally the atmosphere on the pond. Detailed descriptions of stone pools, pools of water, swimming fish and streams.
2. What is the overall picture of Xiaoshitan? What are the characteristics of the fish swimming in the pond and the water in the pond?
The whole stone is the bottom, close to the shore, roll up the bottom of the stone to come out... unevenly. There are hundreds of fish in the pond... seeming to be enjoying themselves with the tourists.
3. What is there on the pool?
Surrounded by bamboo trees on all sides, it is lonely and deserted, desolate and desolate.
4. Based on the content of the text, tell us what the author’s mood was like when watching fish? How did you feel at the end of the tour?
The author's description of the swimming fish "seems to be enjoying themselves with the tourists" is in a happy mood, while the description of "loneliness and no one, desolate souls and bones" reveals a desolate and sad mood.
5. In the first paragraph of this article, what techniques are used to describe the general appearance of Xiaoshitan; in the second paragraph, what techniques are used to describe the pond water and swimming fish; in the third paragraph, the source and shore conditions of the pond are described , what words do you have?
6. (1) The sentence that describes the clear and sweet sound of water in the article:
(2) The sentence that describes the clear and transparent water in the article:
(3) A sentence that describes the movements of the fish swimming in the pond, flexible and interesting sentences:
(4) A sentence that describes the twists and turns of the stream:
7. Why did the author name this unknown small pool "Little Rock Pool" "?
(analyze the author’s state of mind when he was demoted, and compare it with the content of the article)
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