Ask for advice about the end of the article!

The ending is the natural result of the development of the content of the article and the total shrinkage of the full text. A good ending can deepen the central idea, which is thought-provoking and impressive.

The basic requirements of the ending are: close to the theme, naturally ending the full text, which can deepen the reader's impression and understanding, clean and neat, and not slow down.

Here are a few examples for reference.

1, a subtle and thought-provoking ending.

Through the litchi forest, I looked at the fields in the distance, where farmers were standing in rice fields.

In the garden, they worked hard to divide and transplant seedlings. They use their own labor to build their own lives. In fact, they are also brewing honey for themselves, others and future generations.

That night, I had a strange dream that I became a little bee.

-Yang Shuo's "litchi honey"

Such an ending can leave readers with rich imagination and form an artistic effect with endless aftertaste. )

2. Put forward hope or end the call.

For example, do you have the heart to let your door of wisdom close forever? Are you willing to blindly let others take you away forever? Would you like to be a bookcase with two legs forever? If your answer is no, then you must not forget to bring your key. You must be able to ask questions often.

-"The Spirit of Questioning"

This kind of ending is often used in argumentative writing, which can attract readers' attention, impress readers from the inner world and play a corresponding role. )

3. Collect the full text naturally.

When we come back, we will take a boat from San Marino to avoid meeting him again.

-Mo Bosang "My Uncle Yule"

That year, he was 42 years old. -"Do your best"

This article narrates the deeds of Comrade Jiao. At the end, the full text is condensed in only one sentence, which comes to an abrupt end and can arouse readers' infinite touch and reverence. )

4. Summarize the conclusion.

For example, Marx's life is a life of glorious fighting and hard study, and his spirit of hard study is always worth learning.

This ending can make the full text clearer, the key points more prominent, and the meaning to be expressed can also be clearly and intuitively presented to readers. )

5. The end of the lyrical discussion.

For example, I think: Hope is nothing, nothing. It's like a road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road.

-Lu Xun's hometown

So ending with an epigram is thought-provoking. Can make the finishing point, on the one hand, deepen the center of the article; On the other hand, it can highlight the significance of the article. )

6. End with a description of a person or a scene.

For example, "It's mine-"She shouted angrily and turned away. In the moonlight, I saw her eyes shining, and I also saw Bai Baihe's quilt on the bordeaux background, symbolizing pure feelings and covering the face of this ordinary young man dragging bamboo.

-RuZhiJuan "Lily"

7. The end of deduction and the beginning of echo.

For example, it snowed more than half a foot thick, and the world was foggy ... The ending was as follows:

The wind is getting stronger and stronger, and the snow is getting bigger and bigger. -"Walking in Lingguan Gorge at Night"

This ending makes the full text form an organic whole, echoing from beginning to end, making the article seamless and self-contained. )

8. Suspense tail. Leave the ending of the story to the reader to think about the continuation, so set suspense, arouse the lingering thoughts of the reader after reading, and delve into the emotional ripples, such as the end of the short story "The Question about Slippers":

"Wang Kechang can be elected? At the upcoming people's congress, we can see the results. " Is it a "choice" at one stroke? Or "back off"? It's hard for readers to tell!

9. Copy the tail. The ending, like the focal plane, reproduces the special identity, portrait, language and action of the characters in a specific environment, and deepens the reader's impression, such as the ending of The Back:

"I read here, in the glittering and translucent tears, and saw the fat, blue cotton gown, black jacket figure. Alas! I don't know when I can see him again. "

The reappearance of my father's back when he bought oranges can be described as tears streaming down his face, causing readers to scream.

10, reference tail. At the end of the narrative, famous sentences, lyrics and proverbs are quoted to "lead" the boat with the water to achieve the effect of killing three birds with one stone. For example, "Pear Blossom Blossom on the Postal Road" quotes Lu You's "Pear Blossom on the Postal Road Everywhere" as the conclusion, which makes the inscription echo from beginning to end, implicitly and vividly writing the theme that Lei Feng's spirit is constantly passed down, carried forward everywhere and sublimated everywhere, which is convenient for readers to remember.

1 1, show your tail. That is to say, in the colorful main part of the article, a "mysterious face" is set up to buckle the reader's heart and let the characters "true colors" be revealed at the end. For example, in the article "Going to the Theatre", the author first splashed pen and ink on the heroine's light and agile pace, mellow voice, beautiful lyrics and far-reaching echo, which provoked readers to ask: "Who is the actor on the stage?" Then the pen stopped and the truth was finally revealed-"Who is our master of art? He is Comrade Mei Lanfang. " Let readers marvel and remember their names forever.

12, loop end. In real life, many things are repeated and staged in cycles. How to make appropriate arrangements at the end of the narrative to achieve the purpose of revealing the center? Look at the end of "three-five-door abuse":

"The next day, a group of open boats came here and broke down, and the town staged the same story." The story is repeated day by day, and the tragic fate of farmers in old China is getting stronger and stronger, with prominent themes.

13, the dialogue is over. Speak your mind, describe people with your voice, and smell their voices as if you saw them. Such as the end of the short story "shoes":

The soldier whispered to the cobbler, "No, his leg is already in the front-line hospital." ... he specially wrote to entrust me to give you the money, thank you! Say that finish, I strode. "

The "he" in the answer-the tall image of the "big man" soldier who the shoemaker is looking forward to picking up shoes day and night, is vividly on the paper in the tears of readers.

In addition to the above ending methods, there are the inference ending of jujube pit, the rhetoric ending of antelope woodcarving, the contrast ending of Mr. Wen Yiduo's words and deeds, the parallel ending of ordinary workers, the fable ending of Lian Sheng San Ji and the interpretation of This Is Not a Meteor.

In short, the beginning and end of a good article should not only achieve the above points, but also form a whole with the main body of the article, which not only echoes the main content of the article, but also complements each other, thus achieving a seamless and perfect expression effect.

Practice explanation:

[Fragment example] 1

The vast sea of people, vast world, strolling in this bustling world, enjoying the cradle of cultural knowledge, shuttling between fellow travelers, you wore a simple and generous sportswear and gave me a sincere smile when you looked back, so I knew that there was another friend in the crowd.

-selected from "I have you in this life" (beginning)

When watching TV, if the beginning of a movie is not attractive, many viewers will change channels with a bang. So, is this enough to prove the truth that "a good beginning is half the battle"? The same is true of writing articles. If the beginning is dull, artificial and blunt, people will not want to continue reading. Even if they bite the bullet and read on, their impression of the full text will be greatly reduced. So, how can we design a good beginning of the article? We say that at the beginning of a good article, we should not only put pen to paper to buckle the topic, but also form momentum to drive the following articles. Specifically, the following methods can receive voice effects:

First, set the scene to make the characters shine. Some articles that focus on remembering people or describing the relationship between characters have the problem of "appearance" of characters. If you sketch a scene of a character's life with concise pen and ink, and then match it with his personalized actions or language, then the character will have the opportunity to "sing a big drama on stage." For example, in "Examples of Fragments", on the big stage of "a vast sea of people, a vast world", the protagonist's dress and actions such as "looking back" and "smiling" are vividly presented to us like close-ups. Naturally, we should write about our communication and mutual sincerity.

Second, draw scenery and let feelings penetrate into your heart. "All scenery words are sentimental words", and our joys and sorrows can be pinned on the description of scenery (whether real or virtual). By creating an atmosphere of blending scenes, we can quickly enhance the appeal of the article. For example, the article "I am running in the sea of life" begins like this: "On the blue sea of Wang Yang, I don't know when a little guest came-a piece of duckweed. The life of duckweed can be imagined on the sea with strong winds and overcast clouds. Her body is suffering all the time, and her mind is suffering all the time. She is looking forward to it every day, hoping to float to a quiet harbor one day. The following story truly records the fate of such a duckweed. " The author originally wanted to describe his misfortune, but first he wrote the duckweed floating on the sea, and with the help of imaginary scenery, he rendered an uncertain life experience, which can be described as unique in creativity, vivid in writing and touching.

Third, highlight the doubts and let the sparks break out from the beginning. Or, deliberately put forward the opposite view in view of the universally recognized view; Or deliberately ask a question to cause thinking; Or form contradictions and conflicts, cause suspense, stimulate questions in readers' minds, and try to find out the reasons. The beginning of such an article is exciting. For example, the article "Another Exam" begins: "After some efforts, all the courses are finally finished, and the students are relieved. But the head teacher suddenly announced that there would be an exam in the afternoon and asked us to arrive at school before two o'clock in the afternoon. Well, what happened to the teacher? " Well, after reading this, are you anxious to know what to take and how to take it? In this way, the readability of the article is strong.

Fourth, show your feelings and let philosophical thinking show its wonders. Use vivid language forms, such as parallelism, metaphor, contrast and quotation. To express your thoughts on life, you can achieve the dual effects of performance center and outstanding literary talent. When you read at the beginning of the article, "Beauty rises with the sunrise and shines with the moon; When beauty dances with snowflakes in the far north and sings with the breeze in the south, does your heart move for it? Do you have a new understanding of "beauty"? It seems that starting with a philosophical sentence is really a good way to move people's hearts.

[Fragment example] 2

"When you grow up, you should exercise your self-care ability more!" The words that my mother often said to me rang in my ears again. I suddenly understood: excessive care, holding the child in the palm of your hand, and the child can't get exercise is actually a kind of harm to the child. My mother's "letting go" and "reassuring" let me learn to take care of myself, learn to stand on my own feet, and keep me away from harm.

-from "Stay away from harm" (end)

In ancient China, the ending of a wonderful article was compared to "leopard tail" and "ringing a bell", which meant that the ending should be concise and powerful, with endless aftertaste. Writing practice tells us that to write an excellent article, we must have a happy ending.

First of all, show your opinion: win by depth.

After the foreshadowing and preparation in front of the article, at the end, the author's refined epigram (this sentence is best drawn up before the author starts writing, so as to lead the writing of the full text) is fully exposed, full of warning and thought-provoking. Taking Away from Harm as an example, the article simply wrote that my mother refused to send me to the exam, and wrote in detail that "I" saw that "a girl about my age" was concerned by the whole family, but I was embarrassed, and then made the above remarks. This way of ending shows the author's rational thinking about life, which has a good effect of deepening the theme and enlightening people.

Second, open your heart: win with love

It is precisely because of "touching, not worrying about feelings first" (Bai Juyi's language) that excellent writers are always good at touching readers' heartstrings with deep feelings, triggering readers' myriad thoughts and stimulating readers' rich emotional experience. Especially at the end, because of the emotional savings ahead, we should seize the last opportunity to show rich emotions and let readers feel the tension of art in a rich emotional atmosphere. I saw you cross the generation gap, which is a masterpiece. After describing my misunderstanding of my father's love, I wrote down in detail the details of "my father worked hard to move the table for me"-this is the natural expression of a man's love for his son, and the author is full of affection and touching. Then, at the end, it wrote:

Maybe you haven't felt my awakening yet. Maybe in your eyes, I am still the little boy who is indifferent to you. But you know, as long as the kinship remains the same and the blood is connected, I will definitely realize the greatness of fatherly love. Feelings may be alienated, but no matter how wide the generation gap is, I will eventually see you!

Here, you can express your emotions and feelings, and let people feel deeply understanding and passionate affection for their father's love, which is moving.

Third, hanging questions to solve problems: winning by doubt

At the end of the article, an unsolved problem or situation is deliberately set, leaving a blank, giving readers a broad imagination space, stimulating their reading emotions, and letting them think and taste in endless imagination. This is a good way to end. The exercise "Rooster Being an Official" describes the experience of a rooster being an official: a chicken who is not used to laying eggs and likes to entertain himself. The year-end assessment was actually reported in black and white. I didn't expect the host to make such a decision:

A few days later, Xiao Bai and I were invited to our host, and our hearts were filled with joy. Why, master has a knife in his hand? Why? I've only been an official for a year, and I don't want to die!

Smart, can you tell me why?

At the end of the article, the author didn't comment, but intentionally put forward realistic and urgent questions to readers, which can make people think deeply and alert.

Fourth, stop the sharp turn: surprise victory

Don't arrange the ending according to the usual logic of the story, and introduce an unexpected ending at the end. At this time, stop suddenly and immediately rein in. This abrupt turn and abrupt ending can give readers a sense of freshness and thus gain aesthetic enjoyment. The masterpiece Knowing a Son as a Father praises his son's ideal of being a policeman and the natural materials of being a policeman: strong, agile and sociable. The two endings read:

Yo, someone is knocking at the door. Excuse me. Oh, speak of the devil. Two police brothers, is it urgent? What's the matter? Go to your house? What are you doing here? Just say a few words here. Everyone is not an outsider.

What? My son chopped a man into a disability and is still squatting at your place?

In front of the article, most of them are fathers' emotional praise and excuses for their son's wrong behavior. At the end, there is a sharp twist, pointing directly at his son's criminal behavior and tragic end, which shows a strong irony compared with his father's complacent mentality.

Exercise:

1. Read the following article and write an ending for it.

Junior three in reality

In the third grade, I lost the cool and heroic attitude on the basketball court, forgot the laughter and laughter in the Woods, bid farewell to the beautiful songs and birds outside the classroom, gave up the cheerful expression of looking up at the sky on a moonlit night, and lost the ecstasy after thinking hard before the horses and chariots.

I once wanted to pick up the dusty basketball again, once wanted to hum Eason Chan's ten years, once wanted to be a teenager in Nicky Wu's mouth, and once wanted to buy a box of albums by Hong Kong and Taiwan stars. I once wanted to enjoy the star concert on chahhel(v) again ... but now. ...

Yes, by the third grade, teachers' eyes became eager and cold, parents' eyes became anxious and anxious, friends and relatives' eyes were full of expectation and hope, while students' eyes became dull and dull.

In the third grade, the papers full of painstaking efforts have been hooked into thoughtful questions, and with the vision of life, they have melted into longing and struggle. The round face turned pale, and now it looks more like a "monkey spirit". Those who have always had good grades are afraid of being teased by fate, but they are unwilling to lose. Some who have poor grades still love the suffering of the years, and they are depressed in "looking at flowers in the fog and looking at the moon in the water".

As time goes by, the days are submerged day by day. Looking at the trees dancing in the sun outside the window, June 20 is even more frightening. Less than four months left!

"Don't fight at this time, when will you fight?" This is the teacher's instruction. "Son, that's not funny. After this level, it is not too late to be happy. " This is the mother's obedience. Come on, grow up and win glory for your family. Grandpa speaks more simply. This expectation makes the already lead-filled heart even heavier. It seems that I am not studying for myself now, but for the expectations of my parents and teachers.

Every day, when the sun is still sleeping under the horizon, we are already fighting on the front line of the Anti-Japanese War with an alarm clock. The catchy English in the morning replaced the morning exercises that lasted for several years. The former Duke of Zhou was angry because I didn't accompany him for a long time. Gu Long and Jin Yong have lost friends for many days. I wonder if we can make up in the future?

By the third grade, there are more counseling materials, and parents who used to be penniless are not afraid to spend money. Today they will buy a set of simulated test papers, and tomorrow they will buy a set of English listening comprehension. I don't know when the whole day will end. In this way, the night cycles through the day, and the sunrise cycles through the sunset.

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