A well-written dialogue description composition

1. Writing time for describing dialogue between characters: 65438+August 2 1, 0999.

Venue: Ji Xianlin's home in Peking University.

Ji Xianlin: Xin Wei, now that you are the interviewer and I am the interviewee, can you ask me and answer?

Xin Wei: OK.

Ji Xianlin: Then feel free to ask.

Xin Wei: Grandpa, when I was young, you said that when you were young, you were most interested in reading leisure books. You like reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and you can remember the names of fugitives. Grandpa, I'm just like you. I like reading leisure books best. Once in a math class, I looked down at the Water Margin, and while watching it, I recited a hundred seats for eight generals. The teacher found out. Dad hit me for the first time after knowing this. Although it didn't hurt at all, I haven't seen the Water Margin since.

Ji Xianlin: (Laughter) My parents were away when I was a child, and my uncle didn't care much about me, but I wasn't allowed to read casual books. What do we do? We don't go home after school, and we secretly hide in a place to read idle books. I read a lot of light books, including Gong Peng Case, Biography of the Duke of Ji, Shi Gong Case and Three Heroes and Five Righteousnesses. I advocate reading leisure books. Why? Tell me, Xin Wei, how can I write this article well?

Xin Wei: I think this should be something.

Ji Xianlin: That's right. Writer Lu Xun once said that the most reliable thing to write a good article is to read more books. I watched it with a sister when I was a child. There is a big barrel of white flour under the table at home. When my uncle came, I quickly hid the idle books in the vat. On the table, there are all classes. (Laughter)

Xin Wei: Grandpa, I like Chinese, but I'm not good at math.

Ji Xianlin: It's good to like Chinese, but Chinese is better and math is better. Young people in 2 1 century should be literate and rational. So, whether you like it or not, you must learn math well. Recently, a class was held in Tsinghua University, and all the students were excellent students. It is proposed to cultivate talents who are well versed in Chinese and western cultures, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign. In my opinion, these two links are not enough, and a link between arts and sciences should be added. Three links, this is the youth of 2 1 century.

Xin Wei: Chinese and western, ancient and modern, arts and sciences, I remember. Grandpa, someone told my mother to find me a good foreign language teacher as soon as possible. She said that it is never cold to learn a foreign language at the age of 12. Grandpa, you speak so many foreign languages. Do you think they are right?

Ji Xianlin: Not necessarily 12 years old. Of course, learning early is better than learning late. Learning the pronunciation of a foreign language has a lot to do with the mother tongue. People in some places have too strong accents to learn. Ancient prose is also very important. In my opinion, it is the minimum requirement for a child to write 200 poems and 50 ancient prose on horseback. A book was recently published to encourage children to recite poems. Let me make a suggestion. We should publish another collection of essays, select some from the viewpoints of China's ancient literature, and add some notes. I recited it when I was a child and I can't forget it.

Xin Wei: Recite 200 poems and 50 ancient prose!

Ji Xianlin: (Laughter) I don't want you to recite it all day.

2. The composition "Spring Festival" describing situational dialogue is a traditional festival of our Chinese nation.

At this time, every family will get together for a reunion dinner. Migrant workers are busy packing their bags, ready to go home, holding a year's salary, and their hearts are warm; We children who have achieved good results are in high spirits, waiting for their parents' praise ... Streets and alleys, community supermarkets, everywhere is a scene of jubilation and excitement.

Today is New Year's Eve. In the early morning, the golden sun shines all over the earth.

My mother and I went shopping happily, and the street seemed to change overnight. The streets are full of lanterns and colorful decorations, which are very lively. Every household posted "Daofu", couplets and red lanterns. People dressed in festive costumes, with smiles on their faces, went to various markets, some shopping, some watching, and there was a happy and detailed scene.

At 8 pm, the Spring Festival Gala begins. Our family sat in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala. The program of the party is wonderful: beautiful and moving songs, humorous sketches and funny cross talk. All kinds of programs dazzle me.

"Dangdang Dangdang ..." As the New Year bell rings, fireworks will ring together. My father and I took out the fireworks we had already prepared and lit the fireworks tube. We only heard a loud noise. A fireworks bomb rose into the air and exploded in an instant. The exploding fireworks look like a beautiful lotus with petals flying in the air. At this time, fireworks are ejected from the fireworks tube, flashing in the sky like countless bright and dazzling meteors ... There are other fireworks in the sky, some of them.

Loud firecrackers, brilliant fireworks, flying in the sky, all kinds of colors, embellishing the sky into a flower, the night sky suddenly became dazzling. At this time, the scene was surrounded by the melody of laughter, firecrackers, shouts and music. It's really lively.

3. I closed the book gently, reminiscing about the contents of the book, recalling the inner elegance and the lively and lovely people. I suddenly feel happy for these two girls. They live in two warm families under the care of their parents. How happy they are. A breeze blew, I closed my eyes, enjoyed the cool, and remembered every word in the book. ...

I don't know how long it took. I opened my eyes and found myself in another world. I stood on the road, and several people were not far from me. Looking closer, I saw a couple dressed simply and a couple who looked noble and rich, with two girls beside them. Only one person looked angry, and the others froze. Suddenly I remembered the last scene in "Poor women are sweet and rich women are cute". Look at those people carefully. They are really alike. At this time, the girl with long shawl hair and beautiful clothes put away her dull expression and walked to the park alone. Four adults didn't respond, and the angry girl ignored her. I ran after him.

"Wait!" I stopped her! "Who are you?" The girl blinked her beautiful big eyes and said. "Excuse me, are you from Xinxiang?" I asked. "Yes!" "Great, Xinxiang, I want to ask you a question." "Please say it!" She smiled. "Are you angry with what Karen just said to you?" I asked eagerly. "How do you know so much?" Xin Xiang asked doubtfully. "Don't ask, just say it!" "All right!" She sighed meaningfully and said, "There's nothing to be angry about. If you think about it from another angle, Keren is a spoiled girl living in wealth. Poverty is very far away for her. Now, she lives in poverty, which is of course unacceptable. At this time, the first person she thought of must be me, because I exchanged everything with her, different lives and different parents. This is understandable by ordinary people! "

I was stunned by Xinxiang's words. I never dreamed that Xinxiang would be so generous. Xinxiang saw me standing there, smiled and patted me on the shoulder and said, "You have to understand that life is not as simple as you think. There is not only love, but also embarrassing things and inevitable misunderstandings. How to understand and overcome, have a broad mind, don't haggle over every ounce! " Say that finish, she left, I looked at her back, remembering her words, my mind was empty.

Suddenly, a gust of wind blew and a few grains of sand blew into my eyes. I rubbed my eyes and opened them to find that I had arrived home. At this time, I seem to know a lot, a lot. ...

4. Write a dialogue composition (1) A foreigner travels to Tangshan and lives in a local farmhouse. I woke up in the morning and saw a cat in the yard, so I teased the cat. At this time, the old lady of this family came out and said, "What should I do if I mess up the cat?" When I came out, I thought it was "good morning" and said "good morning!" In the evening, grandma saw foreigners washing clothes again and said, "What about playing with clothes?" The foreigner quickly replied, "Good evening" is admirable in his heart. China people are so amazing that even the old lady can speak English so well! Late at night, the foreigner made a glass of milk and was ready to go to bed after drinking it. The old lady saw it again and asked the foreigner, "Where is the milk?" Foreigners can even say "good night" when they hear it, which makes them completely confused. (2) With the success of the Olympic bid and China's entry into WTO, one day, the chairman asked the board members to study English hard, and he took the first class himself. The chairman wrote a sentence on the blackboard: How are you? Then he looked at the members below and said, "Who will translate this sentence?" As a result, no one responded, and the chairman was a little unhappy. Don't even understand such a simple sentence? So the chairman named director Li to translate. After standing up, Director Li stammered, "I know all three words, but it's just ... they're not exactly" How are you? " Meaning? The chairman was very angry, but it was inconvenient to attack, so he had to say, "Try again!" " So a sentence was written on the blackboard: How old are you? Director Li replied, "How could it be-you?" (3) A big brother in Tianjin learned English. On the first day, he remembered to ask what the price was. The next day, he bought food in the market, thinking about showing off, and asked: Is it delicious? The vegetable seller is stupefied! I thought it was wrong, so I asked: Is it delicious? After thinking about it, no, ask: Is it delicious? Ji Xianlin: Xin Wei, now that you are the interviewer and I am the interviewee, can you ask me and answer? Xin Wei: OK. Ji Xianlin: Just ask. Xin Wei: Grandpa, when I was young, you said that when you were young, you were most interested in reading leisure books. You like reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and you remember the names of those fugitives. Grandpa, I'm just like you. I like reading leisure books best. Once. The teacher found out. Dad hit me for the first time after he knew about it. Although it didn't hurt at all, I haven't seen Water Margin since then. Ji Xianlin: (Laughter) My parents weren't around when I was a child, and my uncle didn't care much about me, but I wasn't allowed to read casual books. What should I do? Don't go home after school, secretly hide in a place to read idle books. Read a lot of idle books, Peng Gongan, Ji Gongchuan, Shi Gongan, three chivalrous men and five righteous men. I advocate reading casual books. Why? Tell me, Xin Wei, how can I write this article well? Xin Wei: I think it should be * * *. Ji Xianlin: That's right. Writer Lu Xun once said that the most reliable thing to write a good article is to read more books. I watched it with my sister when I was a child. At home, there is a big bucket of white flour under the table. When my uncle came, I quickly hid my leisure books in the vat. The books were all on the table. But Chinese is better and math is better. Young people in 2 1 century should be literate and rational. So, whether you like it or not, you must learn math well. Recently, a class was held in Tsinghua University to select talents, and it was proposed that talents should be trained to be well versed in Chinese and Western cultures and in ancient and modern times. I think it is not enough to have these two links, but we should also add a link between arts and sciences. Three links, this is 26544. I remember. Grandpa, someone told my mother to find me a good foreign language teacher as soon as possible. Some people say that it is never cold to learn a foreign language at the age of 12. Grandpa, you know so many foreign languages. Do you think they are right? Ji Xianlin: You don't have to be 12 years old. Of course, learning early is better than learning late. Learning the pronunciation of a foreign language has a lot to do with the mother tongue. People in some places have too strong accents to learn. Ancient prose is also very important. I think it's the minimum requirement for a child to get on a horse and recite 200 poems and 50 ancient prose. A book was recently published to encourage children to recite poems. Let me make a suggestion.

5. Write the language description of the dialogue. Original publisher: Kaiche 32 1

Several basic forms of character dialogue description Successful dialogue plays a very important role in revealing the identity, manners, emotions and inner world of characters and revealing their ideological quality. However, in many students' compositions, there is either no dialogue, and the articles are monotonous, so they can't afford to build distinctive characters; Either the dialogue between characters is featureless, and only the common format of "so-and-so says: ……" will be used. Therefore, we take four forms of dialogue description in Chinese textbooks as examples to analyze their characteristics and functions, so as to cultivate students' ability to master dialogue description. (1) Lead the sheep. Prompt before, reference after, reference with a colon. That is, explain who said it first (the explanation part), and then write what it said (the quotation part). Example (1), suddenly, she jumped up and patted * * * and said, "Let's switch first. My mother is a senior tailor. She can sew the seams of her trousers so that she can't see them at all. " (selected from the woodcarving of antelope) Example (2) Grandma suddenly said, "Forget it, it's not delicious." (From Woodcarving of Antelope) Write what someone said first, and then what he said. This kind of dialogue description can let readers know who said it first, and the relationship between characters is clear. (2), cart type. Quotes come first, hints come last, and hints come with a period. Write what you said first (the quotation is in the front), and then write what you said below (the explanatory text is in the back). Put the quotation in front of a certain place (add a period after a certain place) to emphasize what is said. Example (1) "Where is the carved antelope?" My mother suddenly asked me. "Didn't dad say it was for me?" I whispered. The first sentence (from The Carving of the Antelope) is preceded by a quotation, which the author emphasized her mother's questioning. The descriptive word "suddenly" not only shows that things happened unexpectedly, but also shows her mother's angry expression. "I" answered in a rhetorical tone, emphasizing

6. Why can a written dialogue enrich the character? Language description of characters plays an important role in writing, and dialogue description is an important form of language description. From the perspective of writing, learning to describe the dialogue between characters is an important means to describe characters, develop stories and express the theme of articles. Therefore, writing a good dialogue between characters has become a basic skill for us to write a good composition. There are many extremely vivid dialogues in the texts we have studied and the story books we have read. After reading it, you should extract it, chew it repeatedly, and carefully understand the form and writing of the dialogue. When learning to write dialogues, we should also pay attention to the lively and interesting dialogues of people around us and record them in time. People's language is the most abundant and vivid. Therefore, you should listen more and remember more at ordinary times, and the dialogue written by the characters will not be dry.

7. How to write a dialogue and its format? The dialogue in the exercise has a "coup". Zhang Xiaoling's dialogue is a dialogue between two or more characters, which reveals the true feelings of the inner world of the characters. Students seldom write dialogues of characters in their usual exercises. Even if they write the language, the expression is simple. The form is monotonous and lifeless. In order to better guide students to express their lives and write good dialogues, we should pay attention to the following "coup": First, write a good speech. When describing the dialogue between characters, we should be good at choosing and refining, and write succinctly and clearly, avoiding verbosity and responsibility, so that people can feel clear and carefree when reading. For example, my brother makes a face and takes off his hat. As soon as breakfast was finished, he put on his hat and said, "goodbye!" " "Where are you going?" My mother asked, "Go to the moon." My little brother replied, "Oh, I see." Mother smiled and said, "OK, goodbye. I wish you a very interesting time on the moon." First, write a reminder. 1, and the reminder should be rich. First of all, to make the reminder vivid, we must avoid the problem that everyone speaks at the end. In fact, everyone should use it according to the mood and tone of the characters at that time. Secondly, it is necessary to add the movements, expressions and expressions of the characters in the tips, so as to make the characters more lively and make the characters smile. As mentioned above, the little brother and mother did this. The images of lively and lovely little brother and amiable mother come to mind. 2. The prompt should be changed. The position of the prompt should be changed. Some are behind the language and some are in the middle. When describing a conversation, you should use it flexibly and write hints from different positions to avoid simplification. Read the above dialogue carefully and look at the location of the hints. You are sure to have a new experience. Third, use accurate punctuation. Punctuation marks in the dialogue should be used reasonably according to the position of the prompt. The prompt is "…" for the first time and "…" for the second time. Generally separated by "……" and "……". For example, the little boy fiddled with it for a long time and said, "Everything is ready." "It will definitely fly back." "yes." The little boy stood up and bowed. "Please let me in!" Fourth, reasonable subdivision. The paragraphs of the article are naturally divided into sections with the changes of the text. So in the description of the dialogue, we can make one person's words into a paragraph and another person's words into a paragraph. This will make readers feel comfortable and relaxed, and their eyes are not tired. Students, as long as you master these four tricks, you will be able to write a wonderful dialogue.

8. Character dialogue describes composition dialogue

More and more people are watching, and everyone is admiring and discussing. The only one who didn't respond was himself. He doesn't seem to hear anything.

An old man with white hair said admiringly, "This young man paints really well! This painting skill can't be practiced in three years and five years! " "Hey, the goldfish swam to his paper!" A lively little girl cried in surprise. Hearing this, the old people doing morning exercises in the park, the cleaners in the park, the people drinking tea in the teahouse next to them, and the lively and lovely children all gathered here. He was immediately surrounded by people, and it was surrounded by three layers inside and three layers outside. "Look, son, how well that uncle paints!" "Mom, if I can concentrate like Uncle Oak, I can draw a good picture." "This kind of painting is really rare." A businessman-like man said seriously, "Young man, you paint so well, can you sell it to me?" A foreign friend with yellow hair and a high nose said enviously, "You paint really well, as if you were alive." A student carrying a schoolbag praised him: "Uncle, you draw really well. Can you teach me? " The young man didn't respond.

It was getting dark and the bustling crowd gradually dispersed. Only that young man is still drawing.

Chapter Two: Character Dialogue

In the evening, my parents and I are having tea. While relaxing, I won't miss the opportunity to learn.

"Mom!" I asked, "What are the benefits of drinking tea?"

"Drinking tea can refresh your mind and calm your mood in the fragrance of tea!" Mother said slowly.

"By the way, is it possible to play some music similar to guzheng?" composition

Dad answered me: "Yes! Look at some ancient poems and savor them. Very enjoyable. "

"What ingredients does this tea contain?" I asked curiously. composition

"The main ingredient of tea is tea. ..