Unit 1 Composition, Book 2, Grade 8

In normal study, work or life, everyone is familiar with composition. Composition is a narrative way in which people express the relevant knowledge, experience and thoughts stored in memory in written form. There are many points for attention in composition. Are you sure you can write? The following is the composition I collected in Unit 1 10 in the second volume of Grade 8 for reference only. Let's have a look.

Teaching Design of Unit 1 Composition 1

In your life, there must be something that makes you excited and excited. Someone must have cared about you and helped you. These people will sometimes leave you good memories and cherish them in your heart. Recalling these past events, you will be excited again, excited again, encouraged again and gain strength. Now, pick up a pen and write down your cherished memories.

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1, choose one or several things that you have experienced personally and can't forget to write.

2, to write the ins and outs of things clearly, the narrative should be complete, to avoid straightforward narrative.

3. In the narrative process, it's best to intersperse appropriate lyricism or discussion around the central meaning and write your own inner feelings about this one or several things.

4. You can use "Treasured Memories" as the topic, or you can draw up another topic, but it must contain the meaning of "Treasured", not less than 600 words.

Writing instruction

This is a composition that recalls the past and expresses emotions. You must have experienced many exciting and exciting things in your life. Since it is a treasure, it shows that its impression is vivid, profound and unforgettable. This requires that the article must be a personal experience, and the narrative must have its own inner feelings and experiences. At the same time, "cherish" is always loaded with some feelings, or excitement, excitement, regret, regret, warmth, admiration … or both. These subtle feelings should not only be vented by the words and deeds of the characters and the rendering of the background, but also be directly strengthened by the essential lyricism or discussion to reveal the connotation, value and significance of "treasure". In content, the object of "treasure" can be people or things; It can also be some kind of experience, some kind of feeling ... In short, it should be a "treasure" with personality, which is only your experience, so that you can write a good article with true feelings.

"Chinese Curriculum Standards" has repeatedly stressed: "Writing should be sincere and strive to express your unique feelings and real experiences of nature, society and life." Writing is to see with your own eyes, hear with your own ears, think with your heart, and experience with your own words, so that sincere feelings can naturally flow out from the depths of your heart. Articles should come from nature, and only truth can be "good" and "beautiful". Nothing is difficult unless you experience it. Love is tasteless unless you feel it. Emotion is abstract, especially for junior high school students without rich experience. How to let the emotions in the article vent and be truly perceived and understood by readers? In this respect, the first text of this unit, "Reciting", is a model. This character is the epitome of a loving father image left in the author's memory; This figure is the shadow of a statue saturated with "I" to understand what my father did and express his respect, gratitude and yearning for "I"; This figure is a tearful figure.

If you want to express your sincere feelings, unique feelings and real experiences smoothly in your composition, you must also pay attention to your conception and writing skills, so that you can write a composition with a wave of your hand. In other words, you should learn to practice and train according to the procedure of "examining the topic (preparing the topic)-conceiving-selecting materials-fixing the body-writing" and gradually improve your writing ability.

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With "Treasured Memories" as the topic, the content that can be written is relatively extensive, and there are few frame restrictions, but it does not mean that there are no frame restrictions. Even if another topic is raised, it must be closely related to the word "treasure". Therefore, writing examination is the first priority. Examining questions is a process from shallow to deep. "Shallow" judgment explicit information; "Deep" judgment hides information. The explicit information is clear: the number of words, expression, title, conception and style all have certain requirements. Implicit information is to firmly grasp the connotation of "treasure". The so-called "treasure" refers to some things that have happened, including people or things related to things, which can be left in the heart, meaningful and worthy of "memory". Recalling these past events, writing about your feelings about these people or things, writing about your enjoyment of beautiful things, writing about your interests, writing about your feelings, and writing about your opinions are the key points of writing, which is the implicit requirement given to us by the title.

(2) Conception

Clear the meaning of the problem, we should consider the problem of opening our minds and determining our intentions. The topic of composition provides us with a broad space for daydreaming. How can we think about a colorful situation? Since childhood, we must have experienced many things, met many people or things, enjoyed the fun and gained a lot of insights. For example, looking back on colorful and cheerful childhood, describing visiting beautiful natural scenery, recalling two or three things raised by parents, describing unforgettable junior high school life, describing the friendship melted in youth or tracing back the regret experience of regret and guilt, and so on. This topic covers a wide range. You can talk about your childhood, your parents, your friends, your classmates, the environment and nature, and even the bits and pieces you have experienced. You can write yours or his, but you must stick to the topic of "treasure" and reflect the value of "treasure" by recalling the past and remembering people or things. Feel the life of all beings, enjoy the beautiful things, experience the fun, talk about your own feelings and unique opinions. In the face of numerous materials, we should have a unique vision and choose those that are deeply felt and interesting. Starting from a small place, "there is not much gratifying spring scenery, only a little red in the evergreen." Choose good materials, stand high, see far and dig deep. The thinking should be not only clear, but also novel and profound. For example, most students may get their own "treasure" from the narrative of one or several things, but we can't cover everything. We might as well change our perspective and find another way. Just like the idea in the second text of this unit, Eternal Regret-"My Eternal Regret: I shouldn't have left my hometown and my mother", the beauty lies in regret.

(3), material selection

People's feelings and emotions are always influenced by the objective environment, only by accidental events. Excitement and excitement are like this for people. Knowing this, when we write a composition with "cherished memories" as the main topic, we should first mobilize the accumulation of life, recall the people or things, feelings or scenes that once made us excited, excited and inspired, and choose materials with rich connotations that are worth chewing and pondering repeatedly. Writing such a composition can of course be lyrical or argumentative, but the main framework for organizing the above materials into articles is lyrical and argumentative on the basis of narration and description. Otherwise, the feelings expressed and the theories discussed will become passive water and trees without roots, which will not only infect readers, but also make them bored and stay away. This is a place that must be paid attention to when writing a composition on this topic. When it comes to people or things, feelings or scenes that remind you of excitement, excitement and inspiration, you are by no means making them up. When writing this kind of article, you must take the memorable things in your life as the material and express them in simple and frank words. Naturally, how to arrange and use materials in an article can vary from article to article. It is a writing method to write the material as the main body of the article, and then trigger the necessary lyricism or discussion. According to the needs of writing, it is also a writing method to sort out the materials and intersperse them in all parts of the article to write prose with "loose form and condensed spirit"; Even if there is only narrative, no lyric, no discussion, it is not bad to integrate feelings into narrative and express their feelings implicitly, so that readers can figure it out and play with it themselves. There is no certain method for writing. As long as the content of the article can focus on the topic, explain the deep connotation of "treasure" and show a positive value orientation, it should be said that it meets the requirements of the topic.

(4), fixed body

The style of this composition has been delineated in the narrative category. You can only choose the style that suits the general narrative or narrative prose you want to express. On the basis of narration and description, narrative composition can make proper use of argumentative and lyrical expressions to enhance its appeal and appreciation. You can't do whatever you want. To realize your writing, you must have a clear definition. What you wrote must be what you wrote, and what you wrote must be what you wrote, and you can't write it as a "hodgepodge". As far as this exercise is concerned, you can describe your experience of feeling beauty, discuss the connotation and significance of appreciation, and express your feelings about beautiful things.

In short, to write a good composition, feelings must be sincere. Without any affectation, it is the embodiment of sincere feelings. To write a good composition, the content must be substantial. The so-called enrichment does not lie in the length of the text, but in the highly concentrated content, not rambling and not escaping. To write a good composition, you must think clearly. The structure of the article is in the author's mind.

My mother, with a white face, has a pair of big watery eyes under her curved eyebrows. My mother always likes to look at me quietly, and her gentle and kind eyes are shining with love. Sometimes, she likes to reach out and gently touch the hair on my forehead, and the soft and slender fingertips are full of love.

I remember once when I was doing my homework, I looked at the extracurricular books on the side and my heart was ready to move. "No, it's bad to be found!" I was shocked by the thoughts in my heart and quickly reminded myself. My heart is like two little people fighting fiercely. Finally, I pretended to do my homework while holding the pen, while tilting my head and savoring the twists and turns in the book.

I was studying hard when the door creaked open. As a thief, I suddenly turned around and saw that familiar face. The difference is that my mother's face is more surprised, disappointed and angry.

Shame and remorse filled my heart, and I rushed to my mother's side and said falteringly, "Mom, I'm sorry." Somehow, when the words came out, my mother's face seemed a little more gratified and tolerant. Mother held me in her arms and patted me on the back. Her silent language deeply touched me, and her gentle eyes soothed my pounding heart.

Back at my desk, I put the extra-curricular books away and made up my mind silently: I will never read extra-curricular books when I am doing my homework again! Looking back at my mother's expectant eyes, I straightened up and did my homework practically. ...

Unconsciously, a plate of fruit caught my eye. I looked up, oh, it's mom! My mother looked at me meticulously, and finally raised her mouth and showed a sweet smile.

This smile is like a warm sun that can melt the ice and snow all winter; This smile seems to be a spring breeze that can blow away the thick smog. My heart is full of happiness at the moment.

This is the most beautiful mother in my eyes.

The first volume of Grade 8 Unit 1 Composition 3 White clouds are floating in the blue sky. I want to fly to the sky, quietly take off this white cloud and give it to my mother as her scarf. Xue Mei blooms on Xue Meifeng. I am not afraid of the road or the wind, but I also want to take it off and dedicate it to my great mother.

Birds are chirping on the twigs, and spring flowers are everywhere. Mother always makes a plan for herself before the Spring Festival. This year, she will open up a Gua Tian in that acre of land. Or plant some sorghum and corn on the ridge, so that children can eat sweet sorghum molasses and delicious corncob at festivals. Mother always wants us to eat delicious food and never says what she wants to eat.

Mother is always busy with family reunion, and always seems to have endless energy. The children told their mother to have a rest, but her mother was opinionated and never tired of it. My mother has white hair and bright eyes. Every time after dinner, we get together and ask questions about school, life and interpersonal relationships. When we made progress, my mother smiled and praised us gently; When we are depressed, my mother will inculcate and persuade us, just like the rain and dew in spring, nourishing our hearts.

The child is going to travel far away. In the dim light, the mother is sewing clothes for her child carefully with a needle and thread in her hand. Her eyes are not good, and she always loses one stitch after two stitches. Her gentle sigh floated into my heart, and I always wet my pillow with tears.

Thousands of miles away from home, every time I look far away, I seem to see my mother standing on the hillside, putting up the arbor with both hands, looking for, staring at and expecting the return of her children. I always dream in my dreams that my mother opens her arms, calling me and coming to me. I jumped out of bed and rushed to my mother. ...

Mother gave us a strong will and enterprising spirit. Our mother is the best mother in the world.

Unit 1 Composition 4, Volume 2, Grade 8 My mother loves me very much. She took good care of me since childhood, which made me feel very happy. Today, I express my gratitude to my mother.

I remember one time my mother came to pick me up from school by battery car. On the way, it began to rain. I only brought a raincoat when I got off the bus. My mother put it on me and she rode me home in the rain. When I got home, my mother was all wet, and then I caught a cold. But mom said, "It doesn't matter, as long as you're okay."

Another time, after finishing my homework, it was very late, so I washed and went to bed. When I woke up, I saw my mother carefully checking my homework under the lamp. I think it's really hard to be a mother. I must let my mother do her homework so as not to worry you.

In fact, I understand that my mother loves me deeply, so I think what can I do for my mother? Let's start with the little things. On this day, I made a cup of tea for my mother as soon as she got off work. My mother smiled, and I found her smile really beautiful. Then, I brought hot water and said to my mother, "Mom, I'll help you wash your feet." Mother was surprised at first, and then nodded happily. Just as I was rubbing my mother's feet with my hand, my mother touched my head and said, "My son has grown up and is beginning to understand." Hearing this, my heart warmed up.

Yes, everyone's mother loves her children, so we should also be grateful to our parents and make them warm, so that we can be happy.

Eight-grade composition, five volumes and one unit, gently opened my memory box, silently counted the sparkling pearls inside, and didn't pick it up until I saw the most dazzling one. I saw that it was a transparent and purest pearl, which was unforgettable. ...

The name of that pearl is mother. Motherly love is like spring breeze, which soothes my soul when I am sad. Like a drop of rain, it moistened my heart when I was impetuous, and now it condenses into this small and exquisite pearl swimming in my palm.

A baby is born, a student studies hard, and an adult lives happily. In this process, there will definitely be encouragement and bitterness from her mother ... We must remember that her mother is the one who has been silently supporting us behind her back.

Nowadays, many advertisements take "gratitude" as the theme. A child is washing his mother's feet, and her mother looks at the child kindly, and her eyes are full of joy. At school, teachers also ask us to honor our parents, but how many people can really wash their mothers' feet? How many people can honor their mothers? , and how many people let mother fuck broken heart?

When I was a child, my mother often took my hand for a walk in the park. Now I always throw off my mother's hand in disgust and go back to my room, leaving my mother standing there alone. I know my mother was sad at that time, but my heart won't allow me to ask my mother's forgiveness at once. I didn't. Now that I think about it, I really failed my mother. I'm sorry about my mother. Since childhood, my mother has been silently with me. How much did she endure and suffer?

I think, in this world, I can't find a word to describe maternal love, nor can I find a word to describe our great mother. In my impression, my mother is a short and chubby woman, but she is very tolerant. My mother used to discuss topics with me and give me advice. Now my knowledge exceeds my mother's. I will let my mother go away on the grounds that it will hinder my homework. I think it's ridiculous. I used to show it to my mother, but now … so my mother says "people can change".

In my mother's eyes, I will always be a little girl. Urge again and again, exhort again and again, check my homework again and again ... these voices linger in my mind, and these actions are engraved in my mind. My mother is always worried about me, because I have been a sick child since I was a child, and I have been ill for more than ten days, so my parents always get up in the middle of the night and take me to see a doctor. I keep all these in mind.

In fact, what I want to say to my mother most when I grow up is nothing more than "Mom, I love you" and "Mom is sorry". These two sentences condense everything. "Mom, I love you" is to thank my mother for everything she has done for me in 13 years. "I'm sorry, mom" just wants my mom to forgive me 13 years of willfulness and naughty, which has brought her troubles and worries.

We should learn to be grateful, not all our efforts are taken for granted. We want to thank our mother who brought us into this world.

Unit 1, Volume 2, Grade 8 Composition 6 Mom, this person is very important to us. He has taken care of us and helped us since childhood. When we are bullied, mom will help us get justice. This person will always be with us for a long time. This person is the mother, and the power of maternal love is very great.

When you open your eyes every morning, who is the mother? After washing, you will see steaming food, which is especially delicious, that is, the dishes cooked by mom. How great my mother is to get up in the morning and make breakfast for us after finishing work every night without a long rest! I have done a lot for us without asking for anything in return. My mother can do anything for us.

At school, my mother will tell us to stay away from school, not to walk in the middle of the road, not to talk to strangers, and to study hard when we get to school. I don't know how many times I have to hear this sentence a year, but this sentence is out of my mother's concern.

When we got home, my mother had cooked for a long time and was looking forward to our return. However, every time we let my mother worry about going home later and going to school after eating her meal. In the evening, after school, we always play basketball at school or go to our classmates' home for a while. Maybe we will stay up after playing, so that mom can leave work and come to us for a long time. But after a while, you will go home to find her.

In short, mom is very important in our hearts. We should be filial to our parents, help them well, and be filial to our parents when we can.

Unit 7, Volume 2, Grade 8 Composition "Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are like treasures. If you throw it into your mother's arms, you won't enjoy happiness ... "Every time I sing this song, I can't help crying. Because my mother has done a lot for me, I can't repay her kindness to me all my life.

It happened yesterday. Yesterday at noon, my mother kindly asked me, "Yusi, what do you want to eat at noon today?" I'll do it for you. "I replied without hesitation:" I want to eat potato stew! " Mom said, "All right! I went out to buy it. "I think the weather outside is so bad that my mother went out and bought potato stew for me to eat. I thought to myself: What should I do if my mother is in trouble? What should mom do if she catches a cold for me? If something happens to my mother for me, I will feel guilty. The more I think about it, the more nervous I get.

After a while, my mother went home. When she got home, her hands trembled with cold. My mother said to me, "It's so cold outside that there are no stalls for vegetable sellers." . So I searched one by one and finally found one! "I said to my mother," Mom, are you okay? "Nothing," mom said. I said to my mother, "Mom, stew a potato for me quickly! "! I am greedy! "Mom said," OK, I'll do it right away! " "

After a while, there was a delicious smell, and I left my saliva behind. I said impatiently to my mother, "Mom smells good! I'm dying, are you ready! " Mom said, "it's almost ready, but it needs to be stewed for a while, otherwise it won't taste good." I just sat on the sofa and waited quietly. But I really can't help myself. I went to the kitchen to get chopsticks and grabbed a piece of meat to eat. "wow! Delicious! " I said, my mother smiled and said "greedy cat", and I smiled, too.

When the food was served, I thought: Now I can eat delicious food!

This is the unique good mother in my heart!

There is a sentence in Unit 1, Book 2, Grade 8: "The greatest love in the world is maternal love, and the greatest person in the world is mother." Indeed, mother gave us life and great maternal love; Mother, when we were young, gave us meticulous care and taught us how to be a man and how to do things when we grow up; Mother, selfless pay for us, dedication. ...

I remember always pestering my mother to tell me stories when I was a child. I heard her tenderness in the story. In the story, I know what is true, good and beautiful, what is false, evil and ugly; In the story, I heard the warmth of home ... The story accumulated bit by bit, and I grew up bit by bit.

Now my mother seems to be particularly talkative, not even as good as the Tang Priest in A Chinese Odyssey, who is always nagging in my ear.

All day, without interruption. Start in the morning: "Have you got all the books? Listen carefully in class and pay attention to safety on the road. " When I came back from school in the evening, the broadcast began again: "Did you listen carefully at school? Eat quickly and finish your homework quickly. Pay attention to your posture when writing! " Wait, I'm sorry.

It happened that my mother was not at home. I was very excited at first, but gradually, I found that this spacious room looked empty and deserted without my mother's nagging, and it was a little uncomfortable for a while.

I know, maybe I have adapted to my mother's nagging; I also understand, in fact, wrapped in those nagging, is it not the greatest maternal love in the world?

I still remember that we liked to snuggle up in our mother's arms. Once upon a time, we began to try to get rid of our mother's arms, but it was always after we were injured that we realized that mother's arms were the warmest "safe haven". I still remember that we always liked to listen to my mother's stories. Once upon a time, we began to hate our mother's nagging, and we didn't mean to alienate our mother, but we always waited until we didn't know that everything she said was good.

The wind chimes in the wind seem to be playing a song of gratitude. Let's learn to be grateful to our mothers and repay them with practical actions!

Unit 1 Composition Article 9 in Volume 2 of Grade 8 I recently read an article "Song for Mother". After reading it, I can't be calm for a long time, which makes me feel that maternal love is so great!

This article describes the author's love for his mother. The author says that mother's love is like the rain and dew in spring, which moistens her heart. It is her mother's behavior that makes her strong and enterprising, so she should praise her mother.

When I read: "Mom always wants us to eat delicious food and never says what she wants to eat." At that time, I couldn't help thinking of my mother. My mother, like the mother in the article, always takes pains to cook some delicious meals that I like to eat in order to increase nutrition. When did my mother go to the supermarket and didn't buy a few bags of my favorite food? When did mom put down her stomach and have a big meal? When did my mother buy designer clothes? Another year, my mother washed my dirty cotton-padded clothes and didn't wash the bloody chilblains on my hands? ! My conscience tells me in despair: no!

I remember it was a cold winter and my mother was washing my dirty cotton-padded clothes by the pool. I feel cold tap water stabbing my mother's hand like a sharp steel needle. I saw my mother blowing into her hand while washing her hands. I walked over and gently took my mother's hand. Oh, my God! Mother's hands washed out bloody frostbite. Suddenly, my heart seems to have been severely stabbed by a knife, which is very painful. Looking at my mother's hand, I couldn't stop crying like a string of pearls with broken lines. What a great maternal love! What a deep maternal love! Maternal love is as clear as running water, and I feel the greatness of maternal love in running water.

There are many songs dedicated to my mother in the world. I want to sing the most beautiful song for my dear mother.

Unit 1 Composition 10 Mom, do you know? From the moment you brought me to this colorful world, I knew I was the luckiest and happiest person in the world. Because God let me come to this world safely and gave my parents love and care. Isn't this very happy?

Life is colorful. In this journey, it was your mother who accompanied me and let me spend it safely and smoothly. Thank you very much, my dear mother.

Recalling my childhood, after dinner, we children are always around you, twittering and crowing like chickens. But every time you just hold me in your arms and tell me about the revolutionary war, the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, and how you lived as a child ... Mom, I remember everything you said. In my mother's days, I was poor. The tuition fee for going to school is only one or two yuan, which is very small for us now, but for my mother's time, they simply could not afford such expensive tuition fees! Also, I only eat two meals a day, and it's porridge. Patched rags and trousers are everywhere in winter. Oh, at this moment, tears have been spinning in my eyes. Mom, how did you get through it? If I can, I hope to share this pain with you!

In the bright moonlight, mom, you seem to be shining.

You always tell me, tell me your life, tell me your dribs and drabs; Tell me that you love me, I am very moved and grateful.

Mom, can you listen to me, too

I know God loves me very much, because he gave me a priceless treasure, and that "treasure" is you. Mom, you said you loved me. Should I say something? "I love you, too, Mom!" Thank you for taking care of me in the past fifteen years. You take good care of me. How can I repay your kindness to me? The so-called "but how affectionate is the inch of grass?"

When I was a child, I always wandered around you. Perhaps there was a dependence that kept me inseparable from you! Suddenly I had a naive idea, "Mom, can I stay with you forever?"

All dialects in the world can't express my love for you. The only simple sentence-mom, I love you.